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For All The Wrong Reasons: A Pride and Prejudice Re-imagining

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For All the Wrong Reasons - A Novella - Pemberley, the Darcy estate, is entailed away from the female line. When Fitzwilliam Darcy learns that Peter Grayson, the prospective heir, is to marry Caroline Bingley, he realizes that he must quickly find a wife so that he might have a son. But will Elizabeth Bennet agree to a loveless marriage, and if so, will she marry for all the wrong reasons? This novella explores Darcy and Elizabeth's path to a happily-ever-after ending.

Revised October 2012 with new cover

132 pages, Paperback

First published March 31, 2011

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Mary Lydon Simonsen

46 books181 followers
I am the authors of several Pride & Prejudice and Persuasion re-imaginings. I have also written a modern love story, The Second Date, Love Italian-American Style, and three British mysteries, Three's A Crowd, A Killing in Kensington, A Death in Hampden, Dying to Write, and Murder by Moonlighting.

I am a wife, mother, grandmother, volunteer, reader, writer, serious recycler.

When I read for relaxation, I read mysteries. My greatest love is history. When I am doing the research for a new book, I love digging for historical nuggets.

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Profile Image for Sheila Majczan.
2,665 reviews198 followers
January 20, 2017
3.5 stars

This tale it another instance of a marriage of convenience: Caroline Bingley is the driving force this time. When Darcy is so cool towards her in her pursuit of him she learns that his estate is entailed and since his heir is unattached she sees a way to kill two birds with one stone. She gains a rich husband BUT she also gains the status of standing to become the Mistress of Pemberley by marrying Darcy's heir...if Darcy continues in his bachelor ways!

But Darcy is not a man to leave fate to mischance so he looks about him, checks gossip sheets and makes lists and determines the perfect candidate to provide him with an heir. Elizabeth Bennet is surprised with the letter she receives through her father, but in her own reaction takes a calm look and has her own list of questions and matters to be addressed before she gives him an answer.

Both Elizabeth and William are not being completely open with where they stand in their feelings...even prior to vows being said and it is a vicar who sets the stage for the reasons they married to be those of all the right reasons.
Profile Image for James S.
1,419 reviews
November 9, 2021
Darcy must have a heir

A relative of Darcy’s wants Pemberley so is looking for a wife to give him a son which would be the heir. But not until Darcy is dead which could be arranged. Darcy decides to marry and sire a heir which will stop the plot. But would it. If you’re willing to kill Darcy why wouldn’t you kill Darcy and the heir? The real problem here seem to be the relative but the story seems to be about getting his own heir. Very confusing.

Well anyway, lots of angst because Lizzy isn’t very happy about being the chosen baby mama. Lots of misunderstandings. Lots of Darcy acting as if he’s never had any social experiences.

Then there is a HEA the problem seems to be over since Darcy has a wife. I went back looking for what I had missed but didn’t find it but it might have been something subtle.

I enjoyed the story when I decided to just watch irate Lizzy. Becoming less and less irate. Maybe 🤔 it was suppose to make no sense and it was a romp or satire? Oh well.
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1,736 reviews132 followers
June 19, 2016
Heir needed…apply here: 3-stars

There were several reasons why I read this, first I loved the cover of the book, and second I thought the concept was pretty cool. And third I wanted to see what was up with Caroline Bingley as she attempted to marry the heir to Pemberley. That would be just like her to do that. The only reason she wanted to marry Mr. Darcy was to be Mistress of Pemberley and enjoy its wealth and prestige. So, if she couldn’t have Mr. Darcy, she would have to go about it another way.

I was familiar with Ms. Simonsen’s writing style as I have read several of her short stories. As cute as this was, I enjoyed her other work better. The marriage prospect between Darcy and Elizabeth was for all the wrong reasons, and it was about as sterile as a surgeon’s operating room.

Each chapter was short and to the point. There was no elaboration or romance. I suppose that was the point and set the tone for the book. We were to see the evolution of their story through their eyes, as they thought things were, but in the process I think it changed their characters from canon. It was painful and just awful trying to get them to simply talk to each other.

Perhaps if I read it again, my perspective will be different. I can tell you I will skip the first chapters and jump to the end chapters where things improve. Otherwise it is like walking through mud. I really became tired of Darcy and Elizabeth having to explain to everyone why they were agreeing to marry.

I was stunned and surprised the most at the reactions of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet to the announcement that Elizabeth would marry Mr. Darcy. I could understand Mr. Bennet, but who was this woman and what did they do with the Mrs. Bennet from canon. It was such a total change in character that I did not like her. Who knew? I was appalled and horrified at her explanation of reasons for her wanting Lizzy to marry Mr. Collins. I am sorry; it did not ring true and I did not buy it. I do not feel you can absolve her of her actions in canon by rewriting her emotions and feelings in such a way. It went too far.

Georgiana, in this version, is the girl we wish was in all JAFF variations. She was quirky, funny, inquisitive, and didn’t hang her head when someone looked at her. She had grown up and moved on from her disastrous experience. There was no appearance of Wickham. He was only mentioned because Georgiana indicated that she was over it and had learned her lesson. She was preparing for and looking forward to her first season in London. She was busy going about her morning visits in order to keep abreast of any gossip regarding her brother and their cousin the heir.

***SPOILER***NO Epilogue? Can I cry foul? Dang! That is not cool. The whole purpose of this story was that Mr. Darcy needed a male heir and we were denied that information.
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2,911 reviews1 follower
July 1, 2016
In this engrossing Pride and Prejudice what if Pemberley is entailed so Georgiana can't inherit so a Darcy cousin is the next inline. When Darcy learns the cousin is to marry; he suggests that this cousin may not be interested in women, he realizes his plans to have Georgiana marry first are for naught and heads for Hertfordshire. Neither Darcy nor Elizabeth seem to love each other, can that change?

What makes this awesome is that Mrs. Bennet's reasoning for wanting Lizzy to marry Collins is explained and Caroline isn't psycho and Georgiana is developed and strong.

This is a very good, mostly clean some reference to marital relations but no detail.What makes it lacking is that it ends suddenly and leaves you wanting more.

Re-read 6/30/16
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November 3, 2017
For All the Wrong Reasons is a novella that imagines what might have happened in Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice had Pemberley been entailed away from the female line and Mr. Darcy was forced to marry and produce an heir to protect his sister in the event of his demise. The next in line to inherit Pemberley is Darcy’s cousin, Peter Grayson, with whom he’s had a falling out. When Darcy learns that Grayson is engaged to a spiteful Caroline Bingley, he is furious and determined to prevent them from gracing the halls of his beloved home. Darcy and his friend, Charles Bingley, pour over lists of eligible women to find him a suitable match, but the only woman he can imagine marrying is Elizabeth Bennet, the sister of Charles’ wife, Jane.

Elizabeth has no idea Darcy’s opinion of her has changed so dramatically since his biting comments at the Meryton assembly, and even though her father can’t stand the thought that she would sacrifice herself for the financial security of her family, she is willing to entertain Darcy’s marriage offer. There seems to be more to him than meets the eye — which she learns after befriending his sister and touring his grand estate — and it’s not like there are men lining up to marry a woman with strong opinions and a meager dowry.

Mary Lydon Simonsen never fails to charm me with her romantic retellings of Pride and Prejudice. For All the Wrong Reasons is a sweet tale of two people oblivious to the feelings of the other and worried about the prospect of happiness in a marriage built on necessity, rather than love. It certainly is a different take on Austen’s beloved couple, given that their ability and desire to marry for love has been stripped away, which was the unfortunate reality for many people in Austen’s time. Even though I know Darcy and Elizabeth are always going to misunderstand and misinterpret the actions of the other, their anguish still touched me.

For All the Wrong Reasons is an enjoyable novella, but because it is so short and only retells a part of the original novel, it may leave some readers wanting more. I wish Simonsen had actually shown Grayson interact with Darcy, rather than paint his portrait through Darcy’s thoughts and conversations with others, to really give a sense of urgency to Darcy’s need to marry. I also had a hard time believing that Elizabeth would consent to marry a man she didn’t love for the sake of her family, given that she turns down both Darcy and Mr. Collins in the original novel for that very reason (among others). Even so, I thought it was an interesting premise, and readers looking to spend a few hours with their favorite Austen characters won’t be disappointed.

Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
Profile Image for Megan.
1,576 reviews55 followers
April 18, 2017
A short story P&P variation. This story takes place after Jane and Bingley are married. In this version Darcy never convinced Bingley that Jane didn't love him and take him away to London and there is no George Wickham (Elizabeth simply dislikes Darcy because of his pride). Instead of Wickham, this story's antagonist is the heir to Pemberley, which is entailed away to Peter Grayson unless of course Darcy can marry and produce a male heir. Grayson marries thus Darcy must marry and produce an heir immediately. He chooses a woman he can't forget, although he doesn't claim to love her yet, Elizabeth Bennett. Elizabeth is much more agreeable to marriage in this version, probably because he doesn't separate Jane or "wrong" Wickham. She agrees even though she doesn't love him. They must learn to love each other while already married.

Mrs. Bennett is much more sensible in this re-telling and Georgiana has a major hand in reassuring Elizabeth.
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227 reviews9 followers
November 19, 2015
Glad it was short. I have read several of her other books and thoroughly enjoyed them this was an utter disappointment. None of the characters seemed similar to Austen's and the whole problem was resolved in 1 conversation that Austen's true characters would have had long before. Lizzy not speaking her mind & Darcy to scared of rejection to speak the utter truth in the beginning - Never. There were also many holes in the story that were never filled. We know Jane & Bingley are married but have no idea how it came to be about. As it is obvious that Darcy never proposed at Hunsford (actually appears the Lizzy never went to Hunsford but we are left totally unsure on that point). No mention of Wickham although Ramsgate is mentioned. Lydia is still at home and unmarried... so many unanswered questions about how we got to where we started.
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Author 5 books394 followers
June 18, 2011
Well written fun novella giving another option for the Darcy and Elizabeth story. It would probably not be a good choice for an Austen enthusiast. Story plot is that Darcy's cousin is the heir apparent to Pemberley. Darcy discovers that Caroline Bingley and her husband are engaged and he now feels the need to marry and get an heir. He likes Elizabeth and makes her an offer for a convenient marriage. Will this develop into something more?
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Author 8 books13 followers
July 18, 2011
This is fanfic. Plain and simple. The setting is wildly AU, with not much to explain the reasons why, and the characters are totally ooc. The writing is mediocre at best and the plot leaves much to be desired. But, hey, I only paid about a buck for it on my Kindle, so I can't really complain.
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474 reviews
June 14, 2011
This short story was delightful. I Thought it was light fun and had a little angst thrown in. Darcy comes up with a reason to marry Lizzy without professing his love, so in this story there is misunderstanding on both there parts. As usual all thing must work out. Worth reading as a short story
Profile Image for Jessica (BookRockGoddess) Bolton.
1,080 reviews37 followers
July 24, 2013
I enjoyed this short retelling of Pride and Prejudice. I would have liked it to be longer but I felt it didn't lack in storyline. I feel that this will be a story for many of those Austenites who just want a good what if story.
Profile Image for Tamara.
29 reviews10 followers
September 13, 2014
Originally posted on My Kids led Me Back to Pride & Prejudice

This book might be entitled' For all the Wrong Reasons' but when it comes to Elizabeth & Darcy, surely it can only be for all the right reasons!!!

After reading A Pemberley Medley by Abigail Reynolds and Simonsen’s own collection of short stories A walk in Rosings Park, I have been been won over on short stories. The idea of a short story is no longer abhorrent to me and I believe that if they are told well they can be just as satisfying as a full length novel. Although I would class this as a novella, it is what I consider a short story.

The premise for this story falls into my favourite P&P 'what if’ category, Elizabeth being married to Darcy and then discovering what a great man he is. You would think poor Elizabeth being married to someone she does not love very cruel indeed, but there is a twist to the usual premise and the path to love is quick and sweet!!!!

Bingley and Jane are happily married, which leaves 132 pages of Darcy and Elizabeth. The Pemberley estate is entailed away from the female line and Darcy’s cousin David Greyson is next in line to inherit. Darcy has fallen out with Greyson over plans to build cotton factories which boarder some of Darcy’s estate and Darcy is concerned the surrounding lakes would become polluted and rightly so!!
A disgruntled Caroline, on realising her hopes in securing Darcy are fading, is now engaged to Greyson. With Darcy's two least favourite people due to inherit Pemberley, he is doubtful that Georgiana would continue to have a home at Pemberley should anything happen to him. Darcy concludes that the answer lies with an heir, a son of his own and who better to help him in that quest than the lady he once mentioned, much to the vexation of Miss Bingley, had very fine eyes,

The search to find a wife begins, but in all honesty we all know Darcy has somebody in mind. Writing to Mr Bennet and Elizabeth, Darcy explains why he is in need of an heir and that he would like to marry Elizabeth. Oh dear Darcy's formal and business like manner is conventional yet unromantic. Keeping his feelings close to his chest, Elizabeth has no idea that the man who is propositioning marriage is deeply in love with her.

“Will, please tell me all you know about Miss Elizabeth Bennet,” Georgiana asked, ignoring her brother’s comment. Although Darcy had been almost legalistic in listing the details of his offer, he had said very little about the lady, an omission Georgiana insisted he correct. “It is my understanding that the education of the two eldest Bennet daughters was undertaken by their grandmother, the wife of a solicitor, and that Elizabeth does speak passable French. Although she does not play the pianoforte as well as you do, she plays a lively tune and has a fine singing voice.” “Are you planning to marry the lady or to exhibit her?” Georgiana asked with a frown. This was not what she wanted to hear. “What does she look like?” - M.L.Simonsen

Elizabeth having had no further offers of marriage since Mr Collins, is dreading the life of a spinster. Since Jane's marriage to Bingley, she has observed that Mr Darcy is a decent and honourable man and considering Elizabeth's aunt has pointed out that no man will offer for a lady “who favours her own opinion” – Simonsen.
Elizabeth is secure in the knowledge that Darcy knows enough of her character to be certain she is not shy in voicing her opinion!

I liked this Elizabeth, so sensible in her reasoning, believing that her marriage would be a loveless one and no different to the many such arranged marriages that take place, she takes the rational approach. Elizabeth, as sensible as ever wants to meet Georgiana and see Pemberley before she makes her decision. After all, Georgiana and the staff at Pemeberly will be affected by her decision if she decides to marry Darcy, is she not the most loveliest and considerate person?

She viewed the painting of the handsome elder Mr. Darcy and admired a full-length portrait of his son, the current master of Pemberley, which, to Lizzy’s mind, failed to capture the essence of the man. Instead of being the head of an ancient tribe, he could just as well have been standing outside Covent Garden waiting for a hackney. Because the portrait was nearly ten years old, perhaps it was time for a new one, and Lizzy laughed at the thought that she was already spending Mr. Darcy’s money. - M.L. Simonsen

Georgiana is delightful, clever and has grown into a wonderful young lady. Accompanying Elizabeth to Pemberley she is determined to do everything in her power to get Elizabeth to give a favourable answer to her brother. It is thanks to her and Mrs Reynolds that Elizabeth gets to see who the real Mr Darcy is. Reverend Paul Kenner the vicar of St Michael's in Lambton, is the saviour of the day as both Darcy and Elizabeth seek his counsel throughout the book. In regards to his advice to Darcy, well all I shall say is that it was very interesting advice indeed! Especially coming from a clergyman and I am most certain Mr Collins would not have approved!!

Darcy is very witty, not overly flowery or swoonworthy, but a realistic Darcy. A man of his times, specifically some of the bedroom scenes (nothing that will have you running and screaming from the bedroom, it is a clean read) yet a kind and trustworthy man you can rely on.

Unfortunately I cannot continue as I am very close to telling the whole. I will conclude that Simonsen’s writing as per usual does not disappoint and if pushed for some objectivity, I would say that when they realised their feelings for one another it was a little too quick, however at 132 pages what did I expect! It was succinct enough to get to a HEA by teatime yet I could not help wishing that Simonsen would have expanded on this story, is wanting more a valid reason? I suspect not, considering it was meant to be a short read!
Profile Image for Warmisunqu Austen.
130 reviews5 followers
August 6, 2016
3.5 Austen.

Una historia de 'volver a imaginar' Orgullo y prejuicio, esto implica una amplia apertura para modificar la versión original y en este caso Simonsen ha tomado bastante libertad en ello.

Su finalidad ha sido pensar en Pemberley implicado como lo está Longbourn, a partir de allí, Fitzwlliam Darcy está desesperado por buscar una esposa, ante el peligro de dejar desamparados a todos los que dependen de Pemberley, ya que el siguiente en sucesión, no era digno para llevar ese peso con mucha responsabilidad sobre sus hombros, y más con la esposa que tenía en mente tomar.

A partir de allí es interesante cómo la mente de Darcy analiza su situación y de todos los hechos para tomar una esposa. Aunque busca entre las de su rango, su mente y corazón ya tiene candidata ¿cómo plantear el asunto? él sabe que ella no lo ama y que no le aceptará.
En este 'volver a imaginar' existe Wickham pero no en Meryton, no suceden los hechos de Hunsford, ni la separación de Bingley y Jane, por lo tanto los prejuicios de Elizabeth no están tan arraigados, a excepción, que ella no era lo suficientemente tolerable para tentarlo a bailar con él.

Ante esa realidad, fue ingenioso cómo la autora imagina que Elizabeth va reaccionar y actuar, no solo ella, sino también el señor Bennet y Georgiana.

Por otro lado, se eché en falta más profundización en el personaje de Peter Grayson, sucesor y primo de los Darcy, aunque entiendo la brevedad de la historia, nos deja con varias incógnitas sobre el descenlace de la historia.

Este 'volver a imaginar' de Orgullo y prejuicio es para verlo como tal y no como una variación, porque entonces veréis que faltan varios personajes, y se ha cambiado mucho el sentido de la historia. Los personajes, en sus carácteres, sí son fieles al original.

Un prólogo hubiera sido ideal para redondear el final de los personajes ya que la idea de esta historia era dar un heredero a Pemberley. Nos quedamos con la duda de eso.

A pesar de la poca profundización en general de la historia, hubo muchos momentos bien encajados, entretenidos y con ese estilo tan característico de Simonsen que sabe impregnarle a sus historias.
Profile Image for Katherine.
453 reviews38 followers
December 12, 2011
The one thing that was out of place for me was that Lizzy would never marry Mr Darcy if she wasn't in love with him especially since Jane was already married to Bingley and there was no reason to fear for her and her families situation should her father die and the estate become entailed away to Collins. It was a "cute" story seeing how Darcy and Elizabeth finally tell each other they love each other (touching moment) and there are moments of laughter but it lacked the depth that I would have loved to read about in their relationship. I viewed this as a short story versus a novel and if you view it as a short story you won't be disappointed in each quick turn of events and lack of depth. Cute read if you have an hour or so to spare :)
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403 reviews15 followers
January 22, 2012
This is the second short story of Mary Simonsen's that I've read, and so far she is definitely batting 1.000 with them. I wish I wasn't so short on time and backed up with books; I still haven't read A Wife for Mr. Darcy or The Perfect Bride for Mr. Darcy, and her other short stories are waiting on my Kindle as well. I much prefer to read her P&P variations, although her other work is good as well.
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116 reviews7 followers
September 6, 2012
A nice little change to show that Lizzy and Darcy are always meant to be, but no real conflict or unexpected surprises. A quick read, and an enjoyable book.

Some of the wording doesn't quite fit with the era, which tends to stand out for me. I found the confessions of love to be ill-timed and a forced, but I suppose it to be because it's a short book.

Still a nice addition to the digital bookshelf.
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519 reviews7 followers
January 27, 2013
A very short little story, I found that the was no real issues between Darcy and Elizabeth, but that there was a lot of inspired issues from those around them.

I found that the affection developed between them happened very quickly, and it came to a quick conclusion. I wish there was a bit more information about Caroline, Elizabeth and the servants as well as their futures.
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29 reviews
April 21, 2015
A different retelling to Pride and Prejudice

A very short though not very good read. The plot, that being Darcy needs to get married in order to site an heir and thus chooses Elizabeth for this purpose, would be more believable if better written, though the author does get credit for trying.
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15 reviews7 followers
January 8, 2013
Predicable misunderstandings between our favorite characters, but fun. The author made some good choices on what parts of the classic to focus on and what parts were best to put aside to keep her book in a good flow.
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116 reviews16 followers
July 7, 2015
This one had some potential, but was de-railed by an Elizabeth who did NOT speak her mind ), rather was in constant fear of offending Darcy (hence, not Elizabeth at all, IMHO). Took all the fun and delight out of that character for me.
Profile Image for Sandra Gebhard.
92 reviews
April 17, 2020
Not bad

This could be fleshed out into a much better story. I'd like more time with entailed Pemberly's heir and the spare enfant terrible. The author needs to SERIOUSLY edit the last chapters as whole bits of sentences are missing
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330 reviews
April 17, 2013
Another great, quick read by Mary Lydon Simonsen. Love those variations!
133 reviews
April 9, 2016
I thought the story started with great potential but then ended rather abruptly, most likely to keep to the short length. So much more could have been done with the Peter Grayson/Caroline plotline.
387 reviews5 followers
July 11, 2011
This is a quick read and a satisfying story.
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170 reviews12 followers
April 29, 2017
I read this a day ago and I can barely remember it. The concept was intriguing, the writing was okay, but overall it wasn't particularly interesting. I felt like it was only just getting into the plot when I was shocked to realise I was near the end of the novel. It could have used more depth in terms of characterisation and the development of Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship. Will probably not read again.
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