Oh Dylan, Dylan, Dylan my good dude why.
Where do I start? The character development is piss poor. Our good MC, named Mitch Rapp (wtf is this name? it sounds so dumb??) lost both his father to a heart attack and his highschool sweetheart to a terrorist attack so he's super familiar with death (ok?) and his heart is bursting with REVENGE. Coincidentally he's personally picked out by Langlsey which is like, a branch of the CIA (sure), even thought he didn't do anything to get noticed (ok??) and he's sent off to a six-months training of the death where he excells at everything and learns super fast because he's an athlete yknow, he was super good at lacrosse in highschool, he can run at the speed of the light (ok????) and then wooish he's flown off to Beirut to do his first kill (ok???????).
Really.
Though it has to be noted that the book actually follows 4 POVs : the Russians', switching between Ivankov and his subaltern, the Libyans' with Sayyed (who's the most developped I think, the character was gimmicky but not outrigh cliché), and two Americans : Mitch Rapp's- pfffrh that name- and Hursley's. The latter is the most dumb and grossly written character of the book, but at least he's entertaining (like, at the end of his very first chapter, we learn that he pisses in the bush of his very cool estate. ok? I don't give a damn? I guess that makes him..."cool" or "real"...? I don't know what that adds to the story.). I think it says a lot that I thought Mitch Rapp's -honhonhon- POV was the most boring of all.
There's one thing the book does right I think : a lot of the usually faceless muslims villains are actually named, and we do follow them a good chunk of the book. So if the upcoming film (why did you think I read this book in the first place) follows the same pace and storylines, maybe we'll have actors with names and talent playing them, and they'll have screentime, and wouldn't that be a nice change ?
Thought I read somewhere they cast a turkish actress I think, and I have no idea what her role will be, since the only two named female characters of this book are both white and blonde.
The writing isn't that great either, I did spot typos and a lot of weird phrasing like "you’d expect from someone who was expected to". This book wasn't edited properly. Also I could have started a new drinking game where you take a shot every time the words "trained/training" appear (spoiler : a lot). There were a lot of gimmicky phrases such as "million years of survival instincts embedded into the human brain like gene".
Annnnd the two main things I didn't like about it : this book was very, and I mean very, Black & White, Bad Guys vs. Good Guys (there's even a character saying this exact phrase "well, let's just say I believe in good guys and bad guys" wow). The second point is : the author's opinions is always interfering in the book, like "he saw communism for the sham it was" or a phrase about stupid people covering their women with sheets (funny reading that in a book where the word "pussy" is written a least 6 times, talk about sexism ahahah).
Now, i haven't read a lot of books of this genre. Maybe it's the norm, it's suppposed to make the americans readers feel like the baddest mofo in the planet. As an europpean one though, it felt laughable and super cliché, we always make fun of this type of movies where the white dude is super badass and kill everything. That's why I giggled in the more ridiculous parts.
I won't mention the plotholes because, welp, but I will add that there weren't even that much of action scenes. I expected to feel at least some tension, but I wasn't pumped up in the slightest.
So yeah, Dylan, I hope the script is better than this, I keep imagining something à la "The Raid" like the whole film is about the rescue mission (but it's only like ~20pages in the book). I don't understand why you'd sign another franchise, but you know, good luck my dude, have fun.