It’s another one of these books where the author has no idea whether they’re writing in past or present tense and constantly switches between, seemingly at random. The comma usage is atrocious, and the typos are constant. Punctuation, apostrophes, homophones, capitalization—you name it, it’s all a mess.
The plot isn’t much better. The characters are morons who make appalling decisions, such as taking a first date out to the woods on the back of a motorcycle with no escape, having sex without a condom on the first date, and doing so at MMC’s parents’ house without even giving the FMC a heads up not to go downstairs in her underwear.
The MMC’s family is just as bad, going whole-hog on “HEY IT’S THE HUMAN MATE! You know all about mating right? That’s weird, no claiming bite! Could it be because she’s a human and y’all just met 2 days ago? Nah, jk, we are not the type to ask such stupid questions, we’ll set up the mating ceremony for next week, kbye!”
I shouldn’t have bothered reading to the end, but I did, and I promise you, it ain’t worth it.