Wow. So, Meyer wasn't kidding around with that "Dark Reflections" business. There's dark. There's definitely dark. And ye gods are there reflections. "Mirror" hardly looks like a word to me anymore.
Thinking positive, the world is still awesome. Great critters and magic and stuff, and I kind of like that the rise of various great civilizations is due to their catching Summer and harnessing her power. And there are some neat little scenes, like the whole chapter where the world is recovering from the Egyptian rule.
Also, Russians!
Page 68: I CAN has Russians!
Page 157: You killed. My Russians.
Keep in mind that half of the intervening pages are spent following Serafin's party, which is continents away. Oh, and that's right, the rest of the time, Merle is like, "Let's ditch the characters who are awesome and go with Junipa to Hell."
So yeah. There are four Russians, one of whom gets a name, and they are only actually present for about eight pages, and get maybe that many lines. Otherwise, they:
- are awesome for one page
- give our heroes soup
- die
Oh and guess what guess what: that is not the only death I want to talk about in this book.
First, one I thought was done well: Amenophis. Sure, it's a tad strange that Seth lets the Pharaoh monologue for so long before whacking him, but this is one of those scenes that's all the more powerful and surprising for going exactly as planned. I like that Junipa realizes that there isn't going to be a big battle: she's just brought an angry man with magic, a sword, and a grudge, to take out an unguarded and unarmed sickly thirteen-year-old. And he does.
Now, the big one. What. Were. They. Thinking.
First off, let me say that I love the creeepy moment when Merle realizes:
1. She will die when the Flowing Queen leaves her to reanimate her old body
2. The Queen knew this all along
The best part is when Merle is trying to be philosophical about it and says, "Perhaps I even suspected it." And the Queen, who's been living in her head all this time and can see her thoughts, goes, "Noyadin't."
But.
Okay, let's say you're with a small group of people, one of whom is going to have to sacrifice his/her life to save the universe. And let's just say that one of your party is kept alive only by evil magic, which struggles constantly - and sometimes successfully - to make her attack or betray her friends. Let's also say she's really really annoying. WHY IS THIS A QUESTION?
But even though Junipa herself brings up all of these points, do they do the smart thing and tell her she's an awfully good sport and take her up on her offer? No.
Also, kind of weirdly, Lalapeya never offers. Merle is the default for the sacrifice, since she's already got the Flowing Queen inside her, but they quickly establish that someone else - SAY, JUNIPA - could take the Queen and do it. I kind of assumed Vermithrax couldn't make the sacrifice for some reason, and maybe they figure Lalapeya can't either, but I don't see why not. And she's Merle's mother. It's sort of expected that she'll at least make a token "take me not her" plea. It's interesting: I can kind of see that Lalapeya being a sphinx could make her reluctant to do this, as sphinxes are now kind of the ultimate endangered species, and Lalapeya should have thousands more years to live, whereas Merle seems to be just a human. On the other hand, Lalapeya was easily willing to risk sacrificing both her hands for Merle earlier. You'd think she'd do her motherly duty here.
But of course, this isn't what happens. Because none of these characters would be able to steal the Queen - and take Merle's place - via a dramatic long-awaited kiss. Serafin's like, "Wait! I just realized the plot makes it super-appropriate to do this!"
Remember, too, that Serafin can only do this with the Queen's permission. What the heck does the Queen think she's doing? Merle has accepted her fate, and has expressly refused Junipa and Serafin's offers. She DOES NOT WANT them to sacrifice themselves for her. And she's the one who's put up with the Queen all this time, and who has resigned herself to this. Then, at the last moment, the Queen's like, "Hey, I decided your boyfriend's offer was so courageous that I'd go with it, so I'm just gonna kill him." She actually says, "In the end, the decision was mine alone." Why should it be?
To be fair, after she returns to her old body, the Flowing Queen/Sekhmet becomes about ten thousand percent more awesome. I love how she defeats the Son of the Mother.
Oh, also: what is up with that one line where it says that time can pass unevenly while you're traveling through the mirror world, so years could go by outside while you're inside? This doesn't work well with the plot. When Junipa and Merle take their little jaunt to Hell and then back to the Iron Eye, I think everyone is counting on time running exactly the same. The uneven time flow would be an interesting touch, if it didn't clash with the way the mirror world actually seems to work in the books.
So in the end, Merle goes off exploring with Creepy McKnowitall Junipa. Woo. But the scene of Venice beginning to rebuild is pretty cool, and the fact that the new City Council claims to be advised by the Flowing Queen is a nice little cynical touch.