The Plan

by J.J. Westendarp

Eric had the perfect plan for the evening. Now it was up to Charlene to follow along...

A Short Story of roughly 3300 words.

11 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 26, 2011

About the author

J. J. Westendarp lives in the Western New York area with his wife, two kids, and basset hound (appropriately named Buffy). He is an unapologetic Dallas Cowboys fan, loves to play games (video and board) when he gets a chance, and has an unhealthy obsession with Star Wars.

Reviews

[Evie · Rating 3 out of 5]

I thought this was rather good, actually. I never expected the twist at the end, didn't see it coming;the way the story went didn't lead me to believe that something else altogether would happen. But when she accepted his proposal, I just knew something was up yet would've never thought about the drastic turn of events.

[J.A. Marlow · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ah, romance. This story starts out great, with the ultimate romantic evening planned. And the lady of his affections is more than willing to go along with it. But not all is as it seems.

Error free, no typos, well formatted, the ebook was a pleasure to read. I loved the twist at the end, turning the perfect evening upside down.