Strong, independent woman who has the strength and intelligence to stand against the social mores and live her own life... Sounds pretty damn good doesn't it.
Turns out this is like one of those real estate ads that tell you...
'it's a renovators delight' translation 'it's a dump you're going to have to rebuild from the ground up'
'Has character' translation 'it's hideous and extremely dated'
'Close to airport or train' translates to 'you are directly in a flight path or on top of a train line... and will never be able to sleep for the noise'
In this case, our super girl translates to 'whiny, tantrum prone toddler, who is fairly self absorbed and has no self esteem, she had a bad experience and has tarred the world with the same brush.' Seriously, she quite the bitch half the time, but granted, she's been 'kindly' shit on by her entire family from a young age that she's fat, so she has nothing to offer the world except a dowry... which they keep upping, and really, it's a miracle that she wasn't kidnapped and raped/married years ago, but there's enough of a question in the characters to wonder if that would have truly been a bad thing in their minds, if it meant she was finally married off. And her twin brother is exactly the same... he storms into a crowded room - bring the ton gossips with him no less - and starts shouting at her for having public sex. This is just a day before she's to be married, and he has only overheard a few words (of lies) from a known asshole before he runs home and 'ruins' her and tars the family with her besmirched shame. Also, damages her future marriage which will ever be gossiped about if it goes ahead. Seriously, these two are supposed to be 30yrs old! WTF
I didn't mind the H too much, but I totally get how the reviews are calling him a milksop. And really, I get he was worried about her brothers causing a scene if they found out about the bet, but he's simply leaving her uninformed and unsafe.
It's beyond me how bad this book turned out to be. There was just this cycle of 'down, up, dumb, down, up, dumb' repeating itself. There was some fairly strict 'HR cultural mores rules' through out, mixed with blatant, 'that would be too annoying for me to write, so we'll skip that rule in this scene.' So yes, it's mind boggling that a single woman would be allowed to go on a picnic in the park with a man, but this man is a fortune hunter to boot. Where exactly was her maid or escort?
I really wanted to like this one, but I just couldn't. There was obliviously my issues with character and story, but there was also a great download of characters and info in the start of the book, and everyone being called by multiple names that were just too hard to follow. I only finally pegged the twin because he was such an irritating assholic idiot. There's more, and worse. It did have potential, but the characters just had no brains.