DG’s still a PHENOMENAL writer, her talent has never been in question, but I do question her sanity after reading the last word of this hefty 814-page HC. These are just my random thoughts & somewhat-friendly reminders to myself as future reference, in case I need to refresh my poor memory. This is 1 helluva busy book, jammed w/ innumerable constantly-shifting plots & POVs but the resulting end wasn’t a thrilling ride as the previous ones. I really hope to hell this was simply a failed experiment & that the next 1 will unfold more smoothly than this. I was left dazed & confused @ times in trying to follow the zig-zag tracks, or perhaps it was due to lack of sleep & long hours of OT hahahaa…. I wish I’d read this during my Dec staycation. I’ve read 21 books in-between AEITB so it wasn’t a v. good sign ‘cuz I used to devour DG’s books as if there’s no tomorrow. I’ll prolly not gonna reread =^2
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WTF moments :
- The noticeable imbalance in pacing throughout the book. The stop-and-start, going-into-multiple-directions formula could only go so far.
- Claire boinked Lord John after Jamie’s death & the subsequent MOC. < Scratches wig > For real ? Why not just have her commit suicide as she tried to but didn’t ? Or have Claire take a mental vacay from reality for as long as she believed Jamie was 6-FT under ? Good grief. What’s the purpose of this plot device aka her momentary insanity ? Just to add more dwamatic flavor into the BOILING cauldron ? Jamie’s not even cold in his grave yet. Ick. How could she even think, let alone do Lord John ? Is this a potentially awkward luv triangle since he has feelings for Jamie too ? What a tangled web.
- What’s up w/ Jamie’s mild reaction when Lord John fessed up that he had carnal knowledge of Claire ? Oh wait, I forgot, this book only serves as a stepping stone for the next installment
- Was DG sprinting to meet the deadline ? Was she watching Quentin Tarantino’s Kill Bill Vol 1 & 2 when she wrote this epic saga ? As if we’re not poor enough w/ the econ in the dumpster as it is. If I’d forked over big bucks outta my own negative piggy bank, I’d have demanded a half-refund. Good thing I used a library card, not a CC.
- Buccleigh = Another TT victim. So the portals have become a revolving door now. Who’s next ?
- The mystery of Roger’s dad. As if we didn’t have enough intrigue. Maybe he’ll meet his da in another time, amidst his search for Jem ?
- Li’l Jem got kidnapped & took a train to “destination : unknown.” Roger left Bree & Mandy behind, taking Buccleigh w/ him. Will they succeed ? Buck’s supposed to die @ 38 y/o, his current age. Yikes.
- Do we really need another lesson in human disease, anatomy & physiology ? Haven’t I seen Claire stitch up Jamie before ? Ok so this time she’s severing a full digit & trying to leave him w/ a working hand. I don’t think my poor fragile heart can take any more abuse than this. How many more lives does Jamie have left ? Have mercy.
- When Willie met Jamie. If that’s all there is to it, I don’t think it’s worth waiting for. It’s supposed to build up like a crescendo ‘till the moment of truth hits him in the face. It got swallowed up by the impending troops. I expected a so much more electrifying reunion.
- Can Lord John & Willie’s storylines be any more boring ? Wish their tedious episodes coulda been condensed into merely 1 – 2 chapters. Or @ least, keep them in separate sections instead of sneaking them in-between Jamie, Ian, Claire, Rog & Bree’s perilous adventures. It’s too crowded. If U wanna include ‘em, @ least give us more substance to root for. My head’s still spinning from the subplot overload. Wonder why my short-span attention drifted to other books. I thought I could recharge my interest but it didn’t work =^B
- I didn’t care much for Rog & Bree’s modern life in the 1980’s either, hence the 2 stars I dinged on. Just get over it. Their kids were way more riveting & if it weren’t for Mandy’s acute sense of loss, Rog & Bree wouldn’t have known Jem was missing. No wonder they say kids have a 6th sense. For a moment there I felt like in a twilight zone.
- The letters that Bree & Roger read, actually made my eyes kinda glaze over. They’re small & in italics, plus my eyesight is failing, the letters made me drowsy. I was torn between skipping them & not wanting to miss anything pertaining to Jaime & Claire’s adventures.
- Lotsa v. dull sea voyage scenes. Here I am, a fan of swashbuckling pirate romance, I wanted them to get off the ship & land somewhere.
- The diminishing # of Jamie-ism. @ my rapidly-advancing age, I need more to sustain me thru’ the next 4 yrs. He still said the most luvly, aaawww-worthy lines to Claire but they’re too far & few between =^D
Fav (some gut-wrenching) moments :
- Claire, like a loose cannon, gave Jamie a delish dressing-down after seeing his injury-decorated self. Almost had a cardiac arrest when the scavenger duo were gonna kill him. @$$-kicking heroine that she is, Claire got the biggest b@ll$ when it comes to protecting Jamie.
- Jamie’s death-defying, gritty battle scenes. I prayed – and this is coming from an unbeliever – that Jamie would not get blown away to splinters like his comrades. In the scene where Claire found him later on, he bared his soul to her ‘bout his motives & principles in joining the revolution. Fell in luv w/ him all over again, what an amazing guy.
- Ian’s bloody slow death of consumption was heart-breaking. Luved that poignant scene where Jamie offered his severed finger to Ian. He’ll always keep a part of Jamie w/ him to next life. Now that’s what U’d call a true BFF.
- Young Ian got to see his da & family. He spent quality time w/ da & revealed that he’s in luv. Ian can go peacefully, knowing that his son got another shot @ HEA.
- Jenny & Claire butted heads again, as expected. Their volatile relationship might keep things interesting in the next 1.
- Jamie & Claire took matters in their own hands, literally. His sweaty, outraged reaction to Claire’s request to “luv thyself” was comical =P Why didn’t we get more lovey-dovey scenes ? The freakin-hawt chemistry was still alive & kicking. Instead, we’re treated to various symptoms of fatigue, exhaustion, vomiting, thirst, starvation etc. Granted, it’s wartime & they gotta conserve their energy, but the romance dept woulda benefited w/ more J & C’s inspiring luv scenes.
- Jamie & Laoghaire’s long-overdue explosive reunion. @ least they got to settle it once & for all. Laoghaire found happiness in an unlikely man, who needed her more than Jamie ever did. Li’l Joanie was all grown-up now & made an overture to Jamie to pave her way to the convent. Claire had the upper hand when she made a bargain w/ Laoghaire, who needed her medical skills for Marsali’s kid. 1 dilemma’s solved.
- Young Ian had a secret son, fell head over heels in luv w/ a Quaker. It’s kinda confusing reading Rachel & Denny Hunters’ weird lingo.
- Denny & Dottie, Ian & Rachel = I liked their sweet 2ndary romance.
- Ian’s devotion to his mutt, Rollo. I’m a sucka for heroes who adore dogs. Ian has become my 2nd fav character in the ginormous clan. He felt so anguished over the accidental killing of Arch Bug’s wife. @ last he showed fine mettle, esp when Jamie’s being blackmailed by a scumbag & also in the final confrontation to save Rachel. I wouldn’t mind seeing more of their conflicts in the next installment. It’ll be fascinating to see the adjustments on both ends.
- Jamie saw Simon, his 2nd cousin, from the opposing end. Didn’t wanna kill his kinsman but ended up almost shooting his own son Willie in the head. Jamie met his other cousin, Hamish, it’s a small world indeed. I wonder how many more cousins Jamie’ll encounter.
- Liked Fergus & his mysterious lineage plot. I wouldn’t have minded @ all if DG had included more of his scenes w/ Jamie than the dull Lord John & Willie’s encounters.
- Tom Christie returned, much to Claire’s discomfort ‘cuz he still carried a flaming torch for her.
- DG’s wonderful dialogues. Just can’t get enuff of ‘em.
If her editor hadn’t fallen asleep, methinks the book coulda been more condensed into 500 pages. Get rid of the yawn-inducing segments like LJ & Willie, they should be relegated to the farthest corner of the storyboard. Same w/ Rog & Bree, they should be placed in the back burner, tho’ I still wanna know whatever happened to li’l Jem & how Cameron will succeed in making Bree show him the much-coveted treasure, I’m more keen on reading J & C, plus young Ian & Rachel. I want more crunchy moments between Jamie & Willie, as everyone w/ eyes can see their striking resemblance. I still luved her characters’ dynamics but I preferred a tighter pacing & more resolutions to dangling threads than just the daily occurrences. 4 years is helluva long time to wait.