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A Wet & Wild Night
A short, quick (9,800 words) and sweet erotic tale, perfect to read before bed (even better if it's raining...)
A yearly retreat with his friends to a rustic cabin in the woods doesn't go as planned when the rain sets in. Chris knows the river will be too high to cross so it looks like he'll be stuck re-reading his book a few more times until he can walk out. The unexpected appearance of a gorgeous woman trying to reach her own cabin, changes the outcome somewhat.
Melody never intended to cross a flooded river but the rope strung across made it seem so much closer. All she really wanted to do is reach her cabin and enjoy a quiet weekend. The crossing doesn't go as planned though and she's left screaming for help while clutching a rock for dear life. Help comes in the form of a Greek god lookalike called Chris and her weekend takes a turn she never expected.
A yearly retreat with his friends to a rustic cabin in the woods doesn't go as planned when the rain sets in. Chris knows the river will be too high to cross so it looks like he'll be stuck re-reading his book a few more times until he can walk out. The unexpected appearance of a gorgeous woman trying to reach her own cabin, changes the outcome somewhat.
Melody never intended to cross a flooded river but the rope strung across made it seem so much closer. All she really wanted to do is reach her cabin and enjoy a quiet weekend. The crossing doesn't go as planned though and she's left screaming for help while clutching a rock for dear life. Help comes in the form of a Greek god lookalike called Chris and her weekend takes a turn she never expected.
27 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2011
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About the author
Nicole MacDonald
11 books168 followersNicole MacDonald is a thirty something year old Kiwi who loves to read and moonlights as a novelist. An avid reader from a young age, writing only occurred to her a few years ago after reading a book that didn’t quite hit the spot.
Daily scribbles eventuated into the BirthRight Trilogy, an Epic Fantasy Romance with women who know how to wield a sword, AND swing a punch. A literary journey that included six months of long sword training, as well as ju-jitsu lessons, and self defence lessons for Nicole.
When not writing Nicole loves to watch all manner of documentaries, escape to her family's cabin in the woods, and spend time with her other half and their fur critters.
You can keep up with her writing at www.nicolemacdonald-author.com or on the BirthRight Trilogy's facebook page.
Daily scribbles eventuated into the BirthRight Trilogy, an Epic Fantasy Romance with women who know how to wield a sword, AND swing a punch. A literary journey that included six months of long sword training, as well as ju-jitsu lessons, and self defence lessons for Nicole.
When not writing Nicole loves to watch all manner of documentaries, escape to her family's cabin in the woods, and spend time with her other half and their fur critters.
You can keep up with her writing at www.nicolemacdonald-author.com or on the BirthRight Trilogy's facebook page.
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December 15, 2011
I'm not even sure where to begin. What do I think of this piece of drivel? Well, for starters, going the self-publishing route was all wrong for this "author". This story is riddled with grammatical errors, and words used wrongly.
Something an editor would have been able to weed out. An editor would also have done something about the "chuckling" going on all the time. It's as if it's all Chris ever does. The editor would also have advised against all the point of view (POV) hopping. The POV actually changes in every single paragraph in some places. It's enough to make my head spin. Really.
What really ticked me off was the line "An extremely drunk, obese, twenty-something female..." as a turn off for Chris. You take one hunky hero that any woman would want, and he hates fat women, and this is used several times throughout the story. Way to exclude most of your readers. I don't care that the "author" hates fat people. I really don't. That's her issue. But it's not something you put in a book. Especially not if you want to keep those readers and have them come back for more.
All the blushingBella Melody was doing, you'd think you were reading a porntastic version of Twilight. Yes. Really. And the "intense waves of arousal" were not arousing. Also, all that weird bantering? It was just awkward at best.
When you're writing erotica, please, use appropriate words. "Heck" isn't one of them. "Hell" or "fuck" fits with the genre much better. And I doubt men get turned on by hipbones sticking out. They're more inclined to look at ass and boobs.
Now, I'm all for anal play in erotica books. I find it sexy. But not when you shove a finger all the way in without any kind of lube. Much less three fingers, still without lube. That is some painful shit, and would no doubt bring tears to a woman's eyes. You might as well shove the whole fist up there while you're at it, the pain would be the same.
The ass isn't self lubricant, you need lube. Period. And a man who is out to turn his woman on, would not go from one finger straight to three without some kind of preparing. Not if he wants a repeat performance. The whole thing makes me think of rape. Yes, rape.
All the biting and hickey-making is beyond ridiculous, and the fact that his dick is so huge she's one of very few women who can take him all the way in comfortably is laughable. Sure, we all love our heroes in our books to be well endowed, but this is so over the top, you just end up rolling your eyes.
I'm going to round off with how I don't understand the lack of condoms in this story. Not only is there no usage of lube, but shit, they didn't even bother with any condoms. First of all, there's the risk of pregnancy. But the biggest risk, is STD and HIV. We actually live in a world where STD and HIV is out of hand. Writing a story where the H/h are going sans condom with a stranger is sending all the wrong signals.
This story could have been hot. It held the promise for something really sexy. But this story is as flat as a deflated dick.
Something an editor would have been able to weed out. An editor would also have done something about the "chuckling" going on all the time. It's as if it's all Chris ever does. The editor would also have advised against all the point of view (POV) hopping. The POV actually changes in every single paragraph in some places. It's enough to make my head spin. Really.
What really ticked me off was the line "An extremely drunk, obese, twenty-something female..." as a turn off for Chris. You take one hunky hero that any woman would want, and he hates fat women, and this is used several times throughout the story. Way to exclude most of your readers. I don't care that the "author" hates fat people. I really don't. That's her issue. But it's not something you put in a book. Especially not if you want to keep those readers and have them come back for more.
All the blushing
When you're writing erotica, please, use appropriate words. "Heck" isn't one of them. "Hell" or "fuck" fits with the genre much better. And I doubt men get turned on by hipbones sticking out. They're more inclined to look at ass and boobs.
Now, I'm all for anal play in erotica books. I find it sexy. But not when you shove a finger all the way in without any kind of lube. Much less three fingers, still without lube. That is some painful shit, and would no doubt bring tears to a woman's eyes. You might as well shove the whole fist up there while you're at it, the pain would be the same.
The ass isn't self lubricant, you need lube. Period. And a man who is out to turn his woman on, would not go from one finger straight to three without some kind of preparing. Not if he wants a repeat performance. The whole thing makes me think of rape. Yes, rape.
All the biting and hickey-making is beyond ridiculous, and the fact that his dick is so huge she's one of very few women who can take him all the way in comfortably is laughable. Sure, we all love our heroes in our books to be well endowed, but this is so over the top, you just end up rolling your eyes.
I'm going to round off with how I don't understand the lack of condoms in this story. Not only is there no usage of lube, but shit, they didn't even bother with any condoms. First of all, there's the risk of pregnancy. But the biggest risk, is STD and HIV. We actually live in a world where STD and HIV is out of hand. Writing a story where the H/h are going sans condom with a stranger is sending all the wrong signals.
This story could have been hot. It held the promise for something really sexy. But this story is as flat as a deflated dick.
July 16, 2012
Ok again I wrote it ;p It is exactly as stated - short, sweet and erotic. Nothing too kinky just a guy and a gal having some fun *grin* It is explicit so not for the faint hearted or prudish. And I am considering a sequel if it's popular enough. May have been inspired by true events.. (which if written frankly could make for a good comedy..)
May 22, 2011
A short, steamy, hot little read. I really liked the characters and for a short story it had an ending that was fitting and wasn't abrupt. It didn't feel like you were missing out on anything if it had been a full-length novel, short but sweet. A great read.
August 24, 2011
Hmmm...it was ok. Well written but the heroine bugged me. Shame really, because there was something compelling about this idea but she was blushing furiously one minute and then a temptress the next...no.
Birth control anyone???
Birth control anyone???
June 17, 2020
Honestly, it seems like this was written by a man. The sex was hot but the Hero had to think about a drunk, overweight twenty-something woman to keep himself under control. After almost dying and having an instant connection
December 11, 2012
I enjoyed this short story. I liked both characters well enough to continue reading, and the erotic scenes were well-written without being overly done, in my opinion. (Although, I see the majority of readers on here feel differently.)
Chris is supposed to meet his friends for a yearly retreat in a cabin, but bad weather forces his friends to cancel, and he ends up stranded. While he’s enjoying the outdoors, he hears a woman’s cries for help and bolts toward the source of the commotion.
Melody is stuck on a boulder after attempting to cross the river, and with the raging waters threatening to swallow her whole, she knows it’s only a matter of time before she succumbs to the river’s grip. Luckily, her guardian angel arrives in human form.
Chris can’t deny he finds Melody attractive, and Melody feels the same way. With nothing to do but each other, they’ll just have to weather the storm.
Overall, if you’re looking for an erotic quickie, read this book. ;)
Chris is supposed to meet his friends for a yearly retreat in a cabin, but bad weather forces his friends to cancel, and he ends up stranded. While he’s enjoying the outdoors, he hears a woman’s cries for help and bolts toward the source of the commotion.
Melody is stuck on a boulder after attempting to cross the river, and with the raging waters threatening to swallow her whole, she knows it’s only a matter of time before she succumbs to the river’s grip. Luckily, her guardian angel arrives in human form.
Chris can’t deny he finds Melody attractive, and Melody feels the same way. With nothing to do but each other, they’ll just have to weather the storm.
Overall, if you’re looking for an erotic quickie, read this book. ;)
July 7, 2011
Having never read erotic fiction before (and being mildly prudish) i was somewhat concerned with what i was going to find inside this book. I need not have worried. Yes it certainly does contain some very adult language and actions however i spent my evening laughing, giggling all the way through. The plot was great (yes it does have one...) and i enjoyed the writing style.
A great short story that brightened up my evening. Certainly worth adding to the bookshelf for a quiet moment, possibly a glass of wine in hand and curled up in bed. That was what i was going while reading it!
Thanks,
Sarah
A great short story that brightened up my evening. Certainly worth adding to the bookshelf for a quiet moment, possibly a glass of wine in hand and curled up in bed. That was what i was going while reading it!
Thanks,
Sarah
November 13, 2011
This was a short freebie, and it was super steamy hotness. A guy has gone to a vacation cabin and he thinks his friends are going to meet him, but then it's raining. A lot. He's sure they won't come. And then he hears a scream down by the river and goes to investigate. He finds a woman who has fallen in and is having trouble fighting the current. He saves her, brings her back to the cabin, at which point she goes unconscious. She's frozen from the water and the weather, so he strips them both and gets into a sleeping bag with her to warm her up. Nothing happens at that point, but ultimately, they enjoy each other and their circumstances to the fullest. Very smexy.
September 17, 2013
This is definitely a short, steamy little piece of Erotic fiction. I really liked the set up and the characters flirtatious banter. It had a well-rounded ending, not too lengthy and not too abrupt. The sex was hot and fun. If you are stuck in a situation like that why not let your hair down a little! What I didn’t particularly care for was the POV switching and the lack of condom or discussion of protection. Overall this was a good quick little read that is definitely worth a shot.
August 25, 2016
While I understand that romance novels aren't always the most realistic genre out there, this book was so completely unrealistic that I couldn't even enjoy the story. Maybe this would have been an OK first chapter if it had then been followed up with some character development, a storyline/plot/something.
May 14, 2011
Kinky, but not the point I wanted to become a born again virgin, and with enough of a connection between the characters to make the sex less random and cheap. I liked it. Made 30 minutes of my life a bit naughtier.
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November 22, 2015
I really wasn't in the mood to read an erotica but it was a short story so I figured why not. It wasn't bad for the story size. There were some funny parts that made me laugh so that made it worth it to me but it was definitely written for the sex scenes and not the over all story.
November 21, 2011
Really short sexy romance. Interesting idea though would like to see it expanded.
December 11, 2011
It isn't really a story, but just two people and some steamy action.
January 19, 2012
POV flopping every few paragraph was confusing ...
There was a few things that umm...
Let's just say I didn't care for it... Ok short story...
There was a few things that umm...
Let's just say I didn't care for it... Ok short story...
February 21, 2012
Erotic novella and a very quick read; good sex scenes and decent setup, but seemed to be in too much of a hurry. All over with far too quickly.
June 13, 2012
decent, for a short story. An enjoyable read, well-written sex scene. A nice surprise for a free book!
April 1, 2013
Short little book packed full of steaminess...I liked it :D
August 15, 2013
I enjoyed it. It might have a bit cheesy but I found it a good short and sexy hot read.
July 23, 2013
A new take on the "damsel in distress" topic... but very sexy. I enjoyed it!
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