In terms of writing, this is by far the worst Jack W. Thomas book I've so far read.
Unlike every other Jack W. Thomas female protagonist, Randy is an idealized teen. Beautiful, independent, athletic, an honor roll student, etc. She's a "trophy daughter" to her sleazy, hedonistic father, owner of a fitness club in San Fernando Valley. She gets pregnant on her 13th birthday by an equally wholesome teen boy--it was the "first time" for both of them. Her dad--thoroughly disgusted and entirely unsympathetic to her plight--furiously demands that she get an abortion. Intent on having the baby, Randy runs away to Hollywood and moves into a garage with a young, cocky, aimless, affable black teen boy named Banger. They sort of act as husband and wife, although there are no romantic feelings between them. Meanwhile, a couple of pimps are intent on capturing and prostituting Randy. Banger and Randy are watched over by Mr. Kirschner, a hard boiled middle-aged retired NYC cop who has taken Banger under his wing. Also, Banger has his own aspirations of becoming a pimp, but he doesn't have much of an idea as to how to make that happen.
I must say that I'm surprised that this has become the most infamous and well remembered of all of Jack W. Thomas's works. By his standards, it is on the tamer side. It's nowhere near as salacious and dark as his earlier works like Turn Me On! (1969) and Reds (1970). The worst thing Randy does as a runaway is eat too much junk food. Its weakness however lies in its lack of focus, and the weak characterization of Randy. She's an upstanding young woman with a good head on her shoulders. Albeit one who made the mistake of having premarital sex and smoking pot one time. And that's about it. In fact, Thomas does not seem particularly interested in writing about her at all. His focus primarily wavers between whatever Banger is doing, Kirschner's internal monologues about the sorry state of the world, and the two pimps warring over prostituting Randy. Randy is never fleshed out beyond her myriad admirable qualities. Thomas does not take the time to tell us what she thinks or feels or believes in any significant way beyond the fact that she is determined to have her child.
There are a few terrifying scenes where Randy is pursued and almost captured by these pimps. However, it must be noted that this is not a book about a teen being prostituted while being visibly pregnant, as other reviews seem to suggest. If I could say that it is about anything in particular, it might be the unlikely friendship between Randy and Banger. There is really not any depth here either, though. It amounts mostly to She's A Clean & Tidy Health Nut, He's A Messy Junk Food Addict-but they kind of like each other anyway.
The ending is plenty tragic, though.