My sister said: Don't waste your time with the Warcraft Novels! They are poorly written fan-fiction of a game... No game novels are worth reading. Including Assassin's Creed!
I am well aware of that. I know they are poorly written, but here's the thing. If I do not start now to read them, I will never... ever start. I've been meaning to for the past 3 years and just couldn't find the method to. And by method I mean the thoughtful pondering of the fact that I have to read 20 novels and a lot of short stories and comic books to get the full picture... The thought of that makes my head spin.
Well of Eternity, part I of The War of the Ancients Trilogy by Richard A. Knaak - review by Maddalina Iuliana Mocanu
!Spoilers ahead! Since I know you guys can't stand spoilers *sassy voice*
Theoretically, Dawn of the Aspects should be the actual start of the Warcraft lore in novel format, but most people prefer to start here, when thinking of reading the novels in chronological order. And so did I, but I was well aware the entire War of the Ancients is more so a setting for some detective investigations on the part of two "modern" lore characters: the red dragon Krasus in his elven form and Rhonin the red haired mage that's stuck in an endless loop in Dalaran.
The investigations I am referring to is an anomaly in time and space that is forwarded to Krasus by the Aspect of Time, Nozdormu of the Bronze Dragonflight. He calls on to the task the soon to be father Rhonin who wishes nothing more than to be with his wife, Veressa and see his children be born. They go to... I think it's Deadwind Pass and encounter this anomaly that sucks them in its midsts along side the orc warrior Broxigar sent by Thrall and the elder shamans to investigate as well (why couldn't they have sent someone more attuned to magic, like a SHAMAN! or warlocks - are there warlocks in Thrall's Horde? - is beyond me >.>)
And thus we have the framing for the story of the novel: the first week before and after the invasion of the Burning Legion in old Kalimdor, 10000 years before the events at the beginning of the novel.
The story is pretty complex for a first novel and by that I mean there are a lot of contrivances that make the entirety of the novel either halt and take a right turn towards yawnsville or just skip a beat and have the events forward in time as much as the characters constantly seem to be knocked out or unconscious. It's ridiculous how many times this happens though. It's like I am reading Eldest, the original version xD The book should have been called Rhonin Sleeps'alot.
But skimming through that complexity of PACING, the story is very sluggish and barely anything happens in the span of the book. There are about 3-4 points of view in the novel:
1. Krasus' joining the dragonflight in warning them of the coming of the Burning Legion
2. Malfurion and Tyrende's struggles to keep Brox safe from both Illidan and Lord Ravencrest (seriously love the dude!)
3. Lord Xavius' attempts at bringing the Burning Legion into the night elf capital of Zin-Azshari.
Rhonin doesn't even count here since his time is spent captured in a glade and asleep most of the times xD HIS story intersects with the other's, not the other way around.
Of all the plot lines, Malfurion's and Tyrande's seemed the most genuine and palpable, Krasus and the dragons were a bit too formal for my tastes (they did not speak like characters - I wanted to say people xD) and I despised lord Xavius' points of view because I did not like that character. He was clearly mad and evil, and no one, really? no one noticed?! C'mon! Even a baby can notice something like that!
In my reviews of Jane Eyre and Pride and Prejudice I elaborated in the story and showed the various plot points, but here there aren't any. There's just a slow... painfully slow buildup towards the thing everyone knows will happen: the entrance in the world of Azeroth of the Burning Legion.
In regards to the writing... oh GOD! Where to start? Put this into perspective: If the book was shortened to 60 % its actual length, nothing would have been missed from the story, plot or description. Mister Knaak doesn't have a knack (xD) for writing concisely. He repeats himself far too much expecially regarding notions that the reader has picked up a long long time ago. His style is very long winded. His descriptions want to be thorough and methodical but simply end up as filler that the reader easily skimms through, because they know they will be reminded the exact same thing when the matter appears again. Xavius has artificial eyes, chapter 2, Xavius has artificial eyes, chapter 7, did I mention his eyes are artificial? chapter 21.
Because of this repetitive and sluggish writing style his characters are very dull and lack personality, the words spent for their characterization instead going into describing their aspects, feelings (SHOW DON'T TELL, DAMN IT!) and their inner turmoil for the 1000th begilionth time! Yeah, we know Tyrende is conflicted in her decision to chose between Malfurion and Illidan. You don't have to remind us once every 30 pages, man!
The characters suffer. The story suffers. What could have been a novel of suspense and pay off is instead a novel of tediousness and horrible pacing and characters we mostly care nothing for. And since this is Warcraft we are talking about you just know there are at least 7 of the named characters that have plot armour as they appear in the lore further down the line: Malfurion, Tyrende, Illidan, Rhonin, Krasus, Brox and Cenarius.
Now, let us move on to the characters. Out of all the cast in this novel, the most well rounded character is Illidan. For the short time he is in the novel, his screen time being less than that of Tyrende who is in the long run inconsequential to the overarching story, we get to see more aspects of him than any other character. He is not the brooding badass we know him from Warcraft 3, but a cocky, reckless youngster wishing in all his might to prove himself capable. I can relate :P
The next character on the list of more well rounded characters is Krasus. While being very rigid and formal, like every other dragon in Warcraft lore - except Chromie *O* - his character was interesting and conflicted, the numerous decisions and things he knew putting him in such spots where you actually felt the weight of his dilemmas. Meddle with the timeline? Not meddle? Expose Neltharion and Malygos' futures? Not expose? His frustration was almost palpable as if you too felt helpless along side him (does not account for the various "saved by the bell" moments that happen just as you think he is about to spill the beans) That being said, his sequences with the dragonflights, particularly those featuring his consort Alextrasza and his younger self Korialstraz were very boring.
And seriously! His solution to helping Malfurion in his dream trance is to call upon the powers of the ones around him that cared for him? Sailor Moon season 1 much? Way to go wise dragon that's lived for more than 10000 years! The power of love has softened you Krasus!
Speaking of Malfurion, his character is quite different from what I know of him from the Warcraft 3 RPG and World of Warcraft. Instead of being sagey and wise, the dude is actually quite reckless... not Illidan reckless, but he knows he might very well be the first druid in existence and that knowledge makes him believe the world of himself and his powers, putting him in harm's way and in avoidable situations far more than I would want someone as established like him to be. He was relatable nonetheless and his interactions with the other characters, especially Illidan felt more genuine than all the other human/drakonid characters.
Tyrende is the third of the ancient night elf trio that I haven't talked about and unlike her Warcraft 3 persona, this version of her is less cynical and bitter towards the world. She is the one to help Brox and Malfurion escape from Suramar, she is well respected by the common folk for proving to be blessed by the goddess Elune and in that sense she is a bit... sue-ish, but not to the point I wanna punch her in her face! She is more reactive than proactive and when it comes to the plot she contributes far less as opposed to Malfurion or Illidan. I found her a pretty presence that does little to solidify the story.
Speaking of night elves I have to also mention the antagonists: Lord Xavius - ppl in WoW know him as a satyr lord, and queen Aszhara - though technically she does not display villain like qualities in the novel as more or less she is a pawn and awe struck narcissist with little regard towards her people a.k.a. she's not a villain. I despised Lord Xavius' plot points not because he is an antagonist or his acts are heinous, golly geez, but because he was painted so clearly as a villain that you feel his actions and demeanour and interactions have nothing redeeming in them. He does not have dry wit or humour, he doesn't have a relatable background, he doesn't have anything to make himself liked. He is clearly evil and manipulative that I find it hard that anyone would even do what he says, let alone follow him. It's just mind boggling how unsympathetic he is.
Aszhara on the other hand has an excuse, if a bit of a flimsy one. She is trapped in a dream world she created for herself where everything is peachy keen! when in fact everyone else around her is DYING! It's pretty sad actually. She is stuck up and all important, materialistic and vain, but all these combined make you realize it's just her nature that gets in the way of her realizing that Sargeras and his lackeys are evil, which makes her character kinnof tragic. She wants to be a great ruler, adored by all and worshipped like goddess but doesn't realize she soon will not have anyone to rule over and she herself will most likely die :/
Moving on I have 2 other characters to talk about, but honourable mention to Cenarius as this is the first interpretation of him I see where he displays his power and love for the world and everything in it. He actually does seem like a wise, ancient being that has first and foremost the protection of the living world on his mind. Counter-kuddos for mentioning his physique every time he appears on-page. >.>
The penultimate character I want to talk about is a minor character in the long run, but he is my favorite one in the entire series. The no fucks given, badass Lord Ravencrest. Throughout the novel he shows himself as the character with the most common sense and duty and his ability to lead his troops of soldiers make him a competent leader, things that shine through in the climax where he leads the first defence against the Burning Legion, managing to push them back. I loved his quips and nonchalant way of handing things and speaking. More of him please!
And lastly: Rhonin... Ah, Rhonin. I liked you in the beginning of the novel, but as you progressed I realized you're as useless as Tyrende, even more so. You have consistency in your actions which is trying out a spell then getting knocked out or left unconscious as a result of that spell. It was nice to see yourself beaten to a pulp by Moon Guard soldiers, but seriously, you do not contribute at all to the bulk of the plot. Only at the end you seem to have found yourself SOME meaning as Illidan's interdimensional mentor in sorcery. But still... Why couldn't you just be more awake! Dammit!
There's also some Burning Legion characters somewhere around there, but they are so bland and one-dimensional you can just add them to the section called "setting" and it wouldn't be any different.
All in all, the novel is a tedious read for such a short book and the writing style does little to world build thoroughly or create characterization for the various characters or convey a story worth remembering. There is potential in this book - and I presume in the books to come - let down by the writing ESPECIALLY! But I will not deny having enjoyed it as a study into how established characters of the Warcraft games were in the past. If for that alone it's worth reading. Curiosity ftw!
Onward to THE DEMON SOUL! I bet it will have to do with Deathwing's corruption! I guarantee it!