Good god, this book is bad. If it were a movie, the Mystery Science Theater 3000 crew would be all over it. Here is some sample dialogue from the female protagonist, Dana Steele, who has been nursing the recently blinded millionaire Gannon van der Vere, back to relative health: “Don’t you even know that I only go through the motions of living without you?” It reminded me of the “Hold me again, like you did at the lake on Naboo” scene in which everyone suddenly realized that George Lucas is incapable of writing decent dialogue.
And here’s another sample, again from Dana: “Because all I know of love I learned from you.” Please note, readers, that she says this after Gannon has insulted her, forced her to kiss him, fired her, and then told her to leave while he goes off for a weekend with his ex-fiancee. Why would any woman, especially one who is intelligent enough to complete a nursing degree, stand for this type of behavior and allow herself to be treated like dirt? In the beginning, they trade barbs but Dana’s feisty personality wilts once she admits she loves Gannon. True love makes one a better person, not a doormat.
The book is set in Georgia, but the descriptions are flat and boring; apparently, the author consulted an encyclopedia prior to writing and simply copied what she’d read there into her novel. This is not a first novel, so why does it read like one?
The book is ostensibly a Christian or inspirational romance, but this is a misleading description. The characters are boring and lack any spiritual dimension. God is only mentioned when Gannon takes his name in vain. If you are on a deserted island with nothing to do but read, and this book is available, then I would recommend burning it for warmth.