Second book in the Red Sonja novel series, I was curious to read it after reading the first installment, _Ring of Ikribu_, I wanted to know if some of the positives of the first volume (a decent supporting cast, at least one other strong female character, Red Sonja not being sexualized, decent monsters, and decent combat scenes) continued and if some of the negatives (Red Sonja not actually essential to her own story) were remedied.
The positives continued (if anything Sonja was even less sexualized, not that she was viewed that way much at all in the first novel) but the negatives? Eh a bit, maybe.
The story got going a lot faster than _Ring of Ikribu_, pretty much jumping right into the action. Sonja is accused of murdering a commander of a fort in Zamora, a Captain Vos (who we never see or meet, as he is already dead before the book begins). Sonja has to flee in the middle of the night in the first few pages of the novel. Sonja suspects that Vos was killed by the now new commander of the frontier fort, Keldum, and makes her way east of the fort, onto the steppe, hoping to avoid being captured and killed.
Keldum won’t let Red Sonja get away and pursues her with a large number of soldiers (two hundred I believe), most of whom are faceless and nameless save two, Keldum’s second in command, Gevem (who is an important figure in the book) and Peth, a strange, perhaps not evil mercenary who can roll the bones to perform divinations.
Continuing for a few tense pages, scenes of Sonja and the soldiers chasing each other across the wide, open steppe, both wary of resting but not wanting to kill their mounts, things look grim for Sonja until she finds an unexpected city in the grassland, one where she can at least get some food, fodder for her horse, and maybe rest under shelter.
However, she understandably hesitates, for outside the city are six young women, dead, hanging outside and beaten and drained of blood. More angry than fearful over this discovery, Sonja decides she has little choice and makes her way into the city (the city of Elkad) because she does need rest and supplies (though she resolves to bring up the disgusting loss of life any chance she gets).
To say much more is spoiler territory, but it involves intrigue within the city, including the city’s two rulers (Hefei, a heavyset female ruler and Mophis, a high priest, “tall, cadaverous, pale as the wind”), a younger priest who seems good in nature (by the name of Sost), his semi-forbidden friend, a temple virgin and potential one day sacrifice (Tiamu; the two are obviously in love with one another and though their sect allows them to talk forbids a relationships aside from a casual friendship), and later a sorcerer/god just outside the city who may or may not be good (or his idea of good might in fact be either outright evil or at the very least rather cavalier on the idea of friendly fire and collateral casualties), oh and a prophecy that may involved a red-haired warrior (could it be a woman people ask in astonishment) and, maybe, perhaps Tiamu (spoiler, it does).
Oh and also the plot (and the prophecy) gets tied up in defeating a vague threat called the Earth-folk, unseen, evil, bloodthirsty beings the sacrifices were intended for and everyone in the city lives in fear of, giving the area a vague sense of evil that everyone, including Sonja, can feel. Can the Earth-folk be defeated? What are they exactly? Are they the real threat, or is the priesthood (or both)?
Some good combat scenes, a lot less monsters than the first volume in the series (and sorry if this is spoiler, but the Earth-folk are largely kept vague, faces in glowing red mist sort of spiritual creatures that surprisingly don’t figure into most of the novel). Lots of back and forth inside and outside the city as various characters go back and forth almost in a revolving door. Sometimes motivations could be strange (when Gevem casually murders one of the palace guards in Elkad but most of all Keldum’s Captain Ahab-esque obsession with capturing Red Sonja, an obsession that leads him to abandon his fort, see his men whittled down, pass up on riches along the way, to obtain a woman who clearly does not want him, though to be fair his obsession may be wrapped up in the prophecy involving defeat of the Earth-folk).
However, just like _Ring of Ikribu_, Sonja doesn’t kill all of the villains this time around (arguably there are more than the two of the last book, but she only kills one of them in this novel and again the defeat of one of them is completely off camera and not “seen” by the reader). If anything, Sonja once again acts as a catalyst to propel another female character to growth (in _Ring of Ikribu_ it was Tias, this time Tiamu, with Tiamu a much more fleshed out and sympathetic character, looking almost like the writers are honing their craft a bit or getting a better feel of what they want to do). Absolutely nothing wrong with advancing the growth and destiny of a secondary female character, I just find it remarkable.
I continue to find the setting sort of fantasy generic, very thin, as I struggle to remember the name of a place and to get any sense of place or local color (say in comparison to Gondor, the Shire, Waterdeep, or any of the places in Peter Brett’s Demon Cycle saga or the world of Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time series). Every place might vary in what horrible thing is bedeviling it, but all seem cut of the same cloth as far as arms, armor, architecture, etc. though both novels did give some sense of the natural history of the place:
“Turning, she saw one of the scrawny steppe-birds sitting on a nearby shrub, and was astonished. Those birds were so lean and bedraggled that they appeared half dead, and never had Sonja heard one sing. Yet this one was trilling a song that seemed born of true joy.”
Maybe not quite the thrush Bilbo Baggins and the Dwarves encountered on Lonely Mountain, but it is a start. I would like more details like this, more of a feel that the world Red Sonja carves her way through is real and a place. That more than anything has been my main problem with the Hyborian stories I have read in comics and in novel form, that the world doesn’t feel as vivid and alive as it could be, though perhaps this is a necessary side effect of avoiding the trappings and tropes of epic high fantasy with its continent-spanning adventures and grand destinies that span whole series of books (with these Hyborian stories more akin to gunslinger Westerns; a stranger like Red Sonja riding into town, dealing with the local evil, and off to another episodic adventure, probably involving killing a sorcerer, his monster buddies, and a few treacherous swordsmen while she helps good local people).