The book starts off fairly interesting, with little Malora living in the Settlement with her family, wanting to raise horses like her father and being shunned by the other people for a variety of reasons. Malora is an outsider for all that she is a child, loves her parents who love her back, and it was pretty nice at first to read YA where the heroine 1) HAS parents who 2) actually care about her.
The book blurb is misleading and made for a weirdly-paced initial reading experience since there is a Leatherwings attack right away, but it doesn't totally devstate the Settlement and leave Malora the last living human the way the blurb makes you think. No, it takes several more chapters and several more Leatherwings attacks before that happens.
From then on, there's a timejump of three summarized years of Malora living alone on the plains with an increasing herd of rescued and incestuous horses. I say incestuous because her stallion Sky mates with a mare and produces twin offspring, and thereafter it seems like the horses are all breeding with each other and...er, yeah. Great.
And then Malora meets the centaurs and everything in this book goes downhill, and downhill, and ever on downhill, the downiest downhill that can ever boringly be downhill in the history of downhilliness.
The centaurs all largely sound the same--okay, flighty young Zephele talks more than the others (god she won't shut up with her inane chatter that literally fills pages), but they all speak in the same formal pseudo-educated slightly-formal style, and none of them have any distinct character except for shallow things like Zephele being flighty or Orion being nicer than the other centaurs to Malora at first.
So the centaurs are boring. The worldbuilding around them is sub-par and kind of weird--apparently they're all living in this city that they stole from humans after massacring them or something, and there are the Highlanders (nobles) and the Flatlanders (peasants) but I'm unclear exactly as to the politics between them except that they don't like each other because they are nobles VS peasants. The Highlanders adhere to the Edicts, which are 14 centaur laws that I didn't know were helpfully all listed in the very back of the book, which would have made things easier since they're never all spelled out in the text and they're just referred to as the First Edict or the Seventh Edict and I'd have no idea what that meant except for vague context--
Ahem. Even weirder is the fact that the centaurs openly admit that they don't like their horse halves and carry around scented cloths to hold to their noses specifically because they don't like the smell of horse. Okay, fine, that's probably the centaur equivalent of BO, but really? They don't like their horse halves...why? ALL centaurs are like this?
It also seems a tad odd to me that they go around racing horses when they themselves are half horse, but this is never mentioned or brought up as an issue.
That's right, the centaurs want horses because there's an annual race that the Flatlanders have always won past years and the current centaur Highlander leader wants to win really really badly. Which is where Malora and her herd of horses come in, and where the story was ruined for me because Malora's actions and thoughts make no sense whatsoever from this point onward.
Basically Malora's entire herd of horses, that she has raised since birth and rescued from certain death and cared for three years running, her sole companions, are brutally trapped by the centaurs and some of them are killed in the process while a few others escape. Malora herself is snatched off the back of one of the horses and the centaurs view her with open horror and talk right in front of her about killing her since she's a human.
Malora's thoughts at this moment are: OOOOH HORSE PEOPLE, THE PERFECT MELDING OF HORSE AND HUMAN, BE-YOU-TEE-FULLLLLL!
Fine, I thought. She's in shock, I thought. She was trapped in a dead-end canyon with her horses and there was a flash flood that drowned a bunch of them and nearly her and she got rescued by centaurs she didn't even know existed.
But no, Malora is just stupidly, badly written, or extremely shallow and emotionally weird. Her next thought is, Oh no! Sky! I don't see him anywhere, so that means he's either dead or escaped!
And then she decides that she's uninterested in the rest of the herd because Sky isn't there anymore. Seriously. She's just kind of depressed that he's gone (and that's all, vaguely depressed, not torn by grief or worry or anything) and oh well, she doesn't want to lead the herd anymore if he's not there. Hey these centaurs have silk clothes and fancy tents and weird cat-people servants! Life with them might be okay, even though they treat her like an animal and are thinking about killing her!
And thus the book continues, with Malora totally dismissing every thought of her horses for 75% of the rest of the book except for token mentions about her being concerned about them, when the "plot" demanded it. "Plot" gets quotation marks because there is no plot. The rest of the book is one mass infodump of various centaurs explaining to Malora bits of their society that are really not that interesting and hardly pertain to what's going on.
I don't really care that centaurs "jubilate" instead of dance or that they are forbidden from drinking spirits, or that they choose a vocation when they are twelve and train for a few years under a master, or that they are vegetarians by choice, or etc. etc. I don't mind knowing these tidbits in the interest of worldbuilding, but I don't need to read 5 pages dedicated to Malora being led around by Zephele or Orion and having them explain to her these things in minute detail.
The last quarter of the book is suddenly re-devoted to the horses and the horse race, as if the author realized that she was running out of pages and oh yeah, there ought to be some kind of climax! So suddenly, for no apparent reason, the centaurs that have mistrusted and feared Malora decide to trust her and be nice to her and give her all the help she needs with the vague plotty things that happen. Mind you, this is after hundreds of pages and Malora totally ignoring/forgetting the existence of her horses that were stolen from her by centaurs and being left in the care of somebody Malora didn't like or trust.
But the whole general setup of Malora-with-the-centaurs reeks of self-gratified Mary Sue. Malora is great and suddenly everyone realizes it! Malora is so awesome she can wield a sledgehammer with ease and strike the same place on an anvil ten times in a row and impress the crusty old centaur blacksmith! Malora can lasso a running ostrich at fifty paces on horseback! Malora learns to read and write and memorize poetry within a couple of months!
All this is interspersed with more infodumps and random inconsequential plot tangents that never go anywhere in this book but will probably pop up in book 2, like how Orion's older brother is missing (presumed dead, presumed eaten by a hippo, I'm not kidding), and there are rumors of wild centaurs running amok in the legendary nearby Port City of Kahiro that we never get to see, and Malora has a random dream about some hot silver-haired guy named Lume.
Oh yeah, about that. The book didn't go into centaur/human romance, which I half feared and half anticipated as at least something interesting in this otherwise boring stupid book. But nope. They're all either big-brother figures, vague not-really-antagonists, or BFFs. Not a hint of romance anywhere. Also, Orion's tutor is a faun named Honus.
Which begs the question: Are there other fauns? Where did Honus come from? There are talk of other peoples with weird-sounding names, who apparently are not human, but are they centaurs? And there's some Empress or Emperor somewhere who wants an alliance with the centaurs for some vague reason? What is going on? DOES ANY OF THIS MATTER?
Nope.
The book also ends on what is supposed to be a rousing note of jubilation and triumph but it falls totally flat since there's no logical reason for this to happen because there was no setup and somehow I doubt everyone involved is going to be accepting of the proposal put forth. The end! Read book two if you want any resolution to anything whatsoever! The Leatherwings never make another appearance again, by the way, they were solely a plot device to get this story started.
Nope. Not touching book 2 with a ten-foot pole. I have better ways to spend my time.