First Impression

by Sara Winters

When Damon Carter locks eyes with this fan, instinct tells him there's more in store than a boring encounter with an eager groupie.

This story is available as a free download.

Genres: M M Romance, Contemporary, Short Stories, Erotic Romance

7 pages, ebook

First published May 1, 2011

About the author

I read. I write. I talk too much and don't blog nearly as much as I should. And my muse consists of several voices in my head with a moody ringleader. Don't be scared of the voices. They mean well (most of the time).

I write romance, erotic romance, fantasy, mainstream fiction and the rare spiritual fiction.

You can find me at my website, facebook (profile)/ page, and twitter.


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How I rate books:

5 stars - Loved. With a passion. These are books I probably stayed up all night to finish. They made me cry, laugh, stop breathing or a combination of the three.

4 stars - Liked a great deal, but something (maybe something small) kept me from giving it another star. Still amazing books.

3 stars - Some of these I like well enough, but don't love. Some I have mixed feelings about, but don't want to give 2 stars.

2 stars - I tried to like it. I may have forced myself to finish it. Major issues with plot, characters, editing or all of the above kept me from rating higher.

1 star - I'm trying to stay away from giving these out, but these are for books I felt wasted my time and/or money. There may be a few I didn't finish, but those are rare. Mostly these are books that not only didn't resonate with me, but I hated them after a certain point for multiple reasons.

Unrated - I wrote it.

Or, the book was unusual in some way (characters or plot). I don't want to give it a low star rating because the writing wasn't bad, it just didn't appeal to my particular tastes.

Reviews

[Nancy]

I like short stories. Sometimes I just don’t have the time or attention to give to a full-length novel, but still I crave a solid plot, believable characters and strong emotions. First Impression satisfied my every need and then some.

Damon is a rock star who doesn’t really care about the rumors floating around about him as long as people buy his music. Though he’s accustomed to playing at stadiums, he enjoys the intimacy of small club shows that allows him to more easily connect with his fans.

When he takes a young, eager fan backstage, Damon gets just a little more than he expected.

This 7-page story really hit the spot.

Download for free here or on Smashwords.

[Kelly (Maybedog)]

I didn't like the main character, he was kind of a jerk. I also prefer more romance and the sex was so so. But the writing was good, the characterization was good too. I think I just didn't like the scenario and the story was too short to build anything up enough for me. I definitely will read another of hers.

[Amanda]

I liked what I read, but it seemed more like an excerpt than a story. Anyone know if there's a longer version of this for sale or coming soon?

[L-D]

This wasn't a bad story, but it was more of a blurb or a scene than a story. It was just too short and didn't have a conclusive ending.

[Kendra T]

Story was too short. It felt more of a chapter eather than a story. Wish there was more.

[Tam]

Super shot interlude between a rock star and a fan (trying to start his own band) after a show. Only 4 pages, so it is what it is, but I could see there being more to the two and making a longer story.

[Jay]

Super quick read.

Dear Sara,

I hope you have a FULL length book with the same theme as First Impression. :)

[Gbook]

Way too short! I really want a full length version. I hope it'll happen. ;D

[Charnel]

it's like reading the first chapter of a book. where's the rest of it??

[Rose]

Too short! This could have been an awesome book.

[Kimberly Be]

I really really loved this story... till the end, which ended far to abruptly for my tastes, and left me feeling cheated and teased.

[Kate Aaron]

bit short, would have been better being a little bit longer

[Lily]

Nice story but it feels more like an excerpt than a story. Too short!

[Lillian Francis]

Short free read.

[Mata Mcgee]

Fast.....

[Serena]

My Rating System:
* couldn't finish, ** wouldn't recommend, *** would recommend, **** would read again, ***** have read again

[Dopey Dixbritneyalice]

loved it...although it was short.

[JM E]

I don't get it!!! A rockstar GAY!

[BAS]

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