In the second installment of the Diary of a Nympho series, Kelly Haven lets you into yet another one of her steamy diary entries from when she was young. Nothing is held back, or censored, as she gets a package of her own one day while home from school. Can you say, Special Delivery? Find out just what's inside, and be prepared to sweat!
Kelly Haven is the founder and CEO of Sweet Nothings. Erotic fiction so hot it'll melt your Kindle. She's a confessed nymphomaniac, chocoholic, and loves a cold beer after a sweaty day of fun.
Kelly Haven, Special Delivery (Sweet Nothings Press, 2011)
What possessed me to read another Kelly Haven short story after the monstrosity that was Taboo: Mommy Knows Best (cf. review 22Dec11)? I can't actually answer that question, other than to say it popped up as a free Kindle short. This one isn't quite (okay, isn't nearly) as bad, though it's still par for the free-Kindle-erotica course as far as things like characterization, mundane description, etc. etc. (all of which are, of course, nonexistent). But here Haven uses a first-person voice, and for some reason, unlike in the other book (perhaps because the author is passing this off as her own diary?), the narrator actually has something that vaguely resembles a personality. Not a fully-formed one, by any means, but it's better than nothing. **
This one actually just left me saying Eeeewwww. I didnt find it the least bit entertaining, the characters were flat and just seemed to be there so that the author had an excuse to write about sex. there was no chemistry, no build up. This book was an unsatisfying quicky.
I didn't read the first installment of this series, not sure I want to either. Short and to the point, I wouldn't claim this is a great piece but it passes the time. Kind of.
Painfully cliche and poorly written, I couldn't even finish this painfully unsexy quickie. "Diary of a Nympho: Special Delivery" is an all-around predictable delivery of the banal kind!
Very much a porn story!!! And the fact that the girl was 18 is a little un-tasteful in my opinion!!! I should have read the description before I downloaded it :-(