Test Pilot is a SHORT STORY approximately 4300 words long or about 18-24 printed pages.
Space was a dangerous place and the new technology being developed needed to be thoroughly tested before others benefited. Members of the Skull Squadron performed those tests, often losing their lives in the process. Captain Gregg Johnson was the best the Skull Squadron had to offer. Experimental drugs, which made him faster and more responsive, ran through his veins while he listened to the details of his next assignment. He was given an exotic new suit with stars floating through the material while at his side rested his trusty hand cannon. XOXO 13 was the designation for an experimental spaceship Gregg named Hugs and Kisses 13. When a tiny thing goes wrong in space, it becomes a very large thing. Gregg pushes the forbidden red button to escape the certain crash he is headed to.
John H. Carroll was the youngest of seven children and was born in Atlanta, Georgia in 1970 where he was kept in a dresser drawer with the clean socks. Luckily, he wasn’t kept with the dirty socks or else he might have grown up to become slightly warped.
As a child, John spent most of his time wandering through the Mojave Desert in an attempt to avoid people. He would stare at the sky, imagining what it would be like to explore different worlds. One of his favorite memories is watching his dad build the fuselage of Evel Kneivel’s skycycle in their garage. One of his least favorite moments was watching that skycycle fall into the Snake River. (Not his dad’s fault and he has documentation to prove it, so nyah)
As a teenager, John spent most of his time driving wherever he could in an attempt to avoid people. He would stare at the road, imagining what it would be like to explore different worlds. He was the captain of the chess team, lettered in golf and band while in high school, and wasn’t beaten up anywhere near as much as one might imagine.
As an adult, John spends most of his time gazing at a computer screen in an attempt to avoid people. He stares at the monitor for hours, imagining what it would be like to explore different worlds. Occasionally, he looks around to see what’s happening on planet Earth.
Quite frankly, it frightens him. He’s just going to do his best to write as many books as he can before aliens disintegrate humanity for being so irritating.
Emo bunny minions surround John at most times. He is their imaginary friend and they look to him for guidance. At one point, they took over the world. No one noticed because they left everything exactly as it was. They gave the world back after a week because it was depressing.
The Ryallon Series is his most popular endeavor into the field of writing. His Stories for Demented Children have lightened the hearts of many strange children and adults. He writes in the evenings and weekends whenever possible.
I appreciated the author using "whatever. Not my job." to skip technology explanations irrelevant to a short story. Tom Clancy would have produced an entire novel just by getting into such details. But I didn't like this one so much. I was left wondering what happened between the climatic incident and the end. To use a common theme from this story, if I had written this... Too complicated. Not my job. Whatever.
Glad it was free from Amazon. Made it worth what I paid for it anyway.
It's a great short story of you like sci-fi. It's well written and flows nicely. The only reason I didn't give it five stars was because of the editing, too many misspellings and jumbled sentences.
This was a decent short story. I have read a few by John Carroll and some are definatly better than others. This is a fun escape story. I know when I was a kid I used to wonder what it would be like in space. This is about a test pilot who flys experimental space crafts and his recent test. Not much else to say about this one, other than it was fun to read.