Oh, Heather Graham...what have they done to you? Did you sit in a meeting, after the success of the first book, in this series, and listen to some asshole in a suit tell you how to make your series more marketable? Did he say, more ghosts--ghosts are in right now? Did he say, more romance--romance is big? Did he say, let's dumb it down a bit--people are stupid?
If he did say those things, you seem to have taken them to heart because this book is an insult to the one that preceded it. I gave that one 4 stars and couldn't wait to read this one. And then this one was just so...terrible.
Where to begin? In book one, there are ghosts. They talk. They help the protagonists, but it's in a creepy, kind of vague way. In this book, ghosts are characters. They have scenes with live characters that go on endlessly and have full conversations with them. These ghosts can sense when a person is in trouble and try to help them, but don't know who the killer is that the team is chasing. It's ridiculous. It cheapens everything. This crack FBI team that Graham formed investigates, but unlike in book 1 where they solve the case, in this one, it takes a ghost pointing them in the right direction to figure it out. Graham is completely over-reliant on ghosts in this book. There are too many of them. They speak WAY too much. They know WAY too little. It's just stupid. It's insulting to readers. It truly is.
And look, I like a little romance with my thrillers. I am, in no way, anti-romance. But this book is so sappy that it might as have left out the FBI team. If I want to read a romance novel, I'll go find one. I want to read a thriller with a supernatural bent and some romantic intrigue--like the first book in this series. THAT was awesome. This is crap.
These characters, who I admired so much in the first book, become so sappy in this one. And apparently, the ability to speak to ghosts isn't so special because everyone in this book is doing it. The characters--the team--I enjoyed so much in book one are largely ignored in this book. One team member is spotlighted and the rest fall into the deep shadows. I kept wondering why they were even there? They were characters in book 1. They are props in this one. Most of them don't even show up until the book is more than halfway done--and they left from the same place as characters who get there early do. Why? Because there's no need for them.
This book is tainted. It's foul. It's taken a good writer, who had a good concept and created an interesting world and characters and turned them all into fodder for Stephanie Meyer fans. I was shocked at how something that started so well, could be turned into such crap, so quickly. Its just terrible. It's so affected. The outside influence on this book is readily apparent to it's great detriment. I thought I had found a fun, interesting new series by a writer who I was excited to read, but this is terrible. I could not have been more disappointed.
And the worst part is that I don't see a way back from it. The precedent is set. Even if she does dial back the sappiness of the romance and involve the whole team and make the investigation work real again, she's now set the tone for these ghost characters who sit down and have a conversation with you and tell you all you'd ever need to know. There needed to be rules in this world that Graham created. Ghosts had to be bound by rules, they had to be limited in their power to see and speak and communicate or it's going to get very corny when the ghosts just never happen to see whodunit every single time. It's going to get awfully corny when the murder victim never sticks around and tells the team--"Hey, Colonel Mustard killed me, in the Billiards Room, with a candle stick."
This book plays to an insipid audience who accept what they are given. It plays to an audience who wants a little thriller and action with their romance novels--not the other way around. Because if you think about this book too much, it all unravels. If you care about the plot, you're fucked. The plot of this book exists only to play out the romances. Apparently that sells books. This series seems to have done well. It's growing in popularity. I guess there is something to be gained from selling out and listening to the marketing team. My respect is not one of them.
I could not decline to recommend a book more vociferously than I do this one. If you took my recommendation to read the first one, I apologize. I led you into this mess. I shouldn't have. But who could have seen such a drastic turn coming? Don't read it. Pretend the first book was a stand alone.