This won the Goldline Press Chap. Contest. As an actual object, it's really well done. So, kudos to Gold Line and O'Neill.
As a collection of poems, it strikes me as a bit front-loaded--the latter poems didn't hold my attention as much as the earlier ones. Still, it's a lovely chap w/ a lot to like. I esp. enjoy this one, particularly the last half--
It Was a Tenuous Beginning, But it Happened
I wanted to be a drag queen circa 1940,
in a gown I forgot to steam, found dancing
in Paris, enjoying notoriety
among the small and the wild. You wanted
a backyard, a place to decorate,
thick netting beneath us.
But I promised you I wouldn't lose my patience,
so now that you're mine, why would I
let you go? It was a tenuous beginning,
but it happened. And now we draw up
silent lists of things we love and hate; under
the table conversations get us in trouble.
Hip bones like brackets I don't believe.
Closure will be possible.
Hip bones like brackets, I don't believe
closure will be possible.