Read Like Stereo Instructions
The book was devoid of all but the minimalistic of human emotions. This means that the three characters only acted in a causal way, one to the other. As a reader, I had no inkling of how they felt about each other, outside of their given roles: computer expert, strong man, and interfacer between the two. This book read like a manual. The characters were always discovering something, escaping something, eating something, etc.
Lastly, the chapters were not well thought out. They went on interminably...25, 35, 30 minutes. The intermission between chapters seemed forced, as if there was no reason for the break.