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Tit for Tat (A Bisexual Erotic Short)
TIT FOR TAT is a best-selling sizzling erotic short story from, Delilah Fawkes, author of The Billionaire's Beck and Call Series.
Sara has always been a good girl, up until the two most notorious guys on campus ask her and her friend "Will you kiss for us?" The guys want to go tit for tat. If the girls perform for them, they'll give them the show of a lifetime. Can Sara muster the courage to play their seductive game?
This 3000 word story is for ADULTS ONLY! Bi-curiosity, f/f, m/m, voyeurism. May be too hot to handle! Are you ready to go tit for tat?
*2nd edition re-edited thanks to a reviewer's feedback. Thank you!
Sara has always been a good girl, up until the two most notorious guys on campus ask her and her friend "Will you kiss for us?" The guys want to go tit for tat. If the girls perform for them, they'll give them the show of a lifetime. Can Sara muster the courage to play their seductive game?
This 3000 word story is for ADULTS ONLY! Bi-curiosity, f/f, m/m, voyeurism. May be too hot to handle! Are you ready to go tit for tat?
*2nd edition re-edited thanks to a reviewer's feedback. Thank you!
12 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 5, 2011
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About the author
Delilah Fawkes
192 books447 followersDelilah Fawkes is a best-selling erotica author specializing in red hot alpha male romance and taboo erotic tales. When she’s not writing dirty stories, she’s a psychic reader under her real name, Fiachna Rose, and is a physical host for the Goddess Freya. Since Freya’s the Goddess of love, beauty, magic, and sex, Delilah feels that this is pretty on-brand, spiritually-speaking.
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Displaying 1 - 21 of 21 reviews
October 21, 2011
A scene with f/f and m/m mutual masturbation and some oral. This was a freebie. It's a college 'firsts' series. The excerpts include a professor spanking his female student and two male students showering together. I wouldn't mind reading more. Total hot, sex porn to page. No need for plot. Total yum factor of young boys and girls having fun in college.
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July 11, 2011Interest: Synopsis
Title Thoughts: It fits extremely well.
Cover Thoughts: I love it! It's definitely an attention grabber and fits this short story well.
WARNINGS: The synopsis tells you.
If this is a taste of what Fawkes can do, I can not wait to read her other short stories and a full fledged novel when she writes one. I like that it's set in college and will probably go hunt down more books set while the character is at college. I haven't read but a few and would love to read more.
Fawkes caught my attention from the first few sentences and she held it through out. I liked that Sara was going out on a limb than what she would normally do. Every now and then, I try to do something I wouldn't normally do, although it's not sex related. I thought it was interesting how they were best friends and after this, looked at each other differently. With the ending, I'm hoping there will be more.
Addict's Last Words: Tit for Tat is a teasing taste of what is to come from Fawkes.
To Buy or To Borrow: I enjoyed it so it's worth a buy from me.
Title Thoughts: It fits extremely well.
Cover Thoughts: I love it! It's definitely an attention grabber and fits this short story well.
WARNINGS: The synopsis tells you.
If this is a taste of what Fawkes can do, I can not wait to read her other short stories and a full fledged novel when she writes one. I like that it's set in college and will probably go hunt down more books set while the character is at college. I haven't read but a few and would love to read more.
Fawkes caught my attention from the first few sentences and she held it through out. I liked that Sara was going out on a limb than what she would normally do. Every now and then, I try to do something I wouldn't normally do, although it's not sex related. I thought it was interesting how they were best friends and after this, looked at each other differently. With the ending, I'm hoping there will be more.
Addict's Last Words: Tit for Tat is a teasing taste of what is to come from Fawkes.
To Buy or To Borrow: I enjoyed it so it's worth a buy from me.
July 13, 2011
3 Stars 'cause it is sooooo short!
This was a freebie, that's also a quickie! Scott & Jamie decide to play a little truth or dare with Kim & Sara...a little I'll show you mine if you show me yours...and what starts out as showing turns into something more...
Recommend if you are in the mood for a little m/m, f/f quickie sex action!
This was a freebie, that's also a quickie! Scott & Jamie decide to play a little truth or dare with Kim & Sara...a little I'll show you mine if you show me yours...and what starts out as showing turns into something more...
Recommend if you are in the mood for a little m/m, f/f quickie sex action!
July 28, 2011
Quick...that's what it was. Very quick, but hot. Though the scene involved four people, and the men were together while the women were together, you instantly knew that the emotion was between Jamie and Sara.
It may have been hot but it was pretty hot.
It may have been hot but it was pretty hot.
December 13, 2012
This is really a SHORT story....no plot but lots of hot sex...from page 1 to the last.....two men and two women....perhaps if it had been longer I might have liked it more.
I LOVED the cover.
I LOVED the cover.
September 20, 2025
I didn’t read this book. Clicked it by mistake
July 9, 2011
A foursome, two guys and two girls, head into a room and prompt each other to get busy on their partners. If you two do this, we'll do that. Great title, good story premise. The sex scene writing is handled skillfully and readers looking for something quick will find this a dirty little read. The alluring cover art suggests it might be more about FF than MM but without spoiling the story it's more evenly split.
On the critical side, I found myself hoping there would be a little more character and story setup. Perhaps another 20-30% words on the setup. I was somewhat surprised when at 49% the story was over. I knew it was a short story going in so not whining about story length (the author also advertises the number of words in the description which is great, thank you) but the fact that the book contains 51% excerpts/teasers for her other books and only 49% story was different (not necessarily in a bad way, keep reading). On the plus side, the excerpts for the other books by the author are also erotica and look interesting, so readers aren't just getting ads, they're getting additional content.
Formatting: I wish there would have been indents or spaces for new sentences in the Kindle version as everything was left aligned. I've come across a few other books like this and this throws me out of the story too much. The editing, however, was great. I didn't spot any typos, misspelled words or other grammar issues.
In summary, I give the formatting 2 stars (if indents on new paragraphs are added this is easily upgraded, making the overall 4 stars), story 3 stars and the writing 4 stars. For those who are looking for a fast, spicy read, Tit for Tat is worth checking out.
On the critical side, I found myself hoping there would be a little more character and story setup. Perhaps another 20-30% words on the setup. I was somewhat surprised when at 49% the story was over. I knew it was a short story going in so not whining about story length (the author also advertises the number of words in the description which is great, thank you) but the fact that the book contains 51% excerpts/teasers for her other books and only 49% story was different (not necessarily in a bad way, keep reading). On the plus side, the excerpts for the other books by the author are also erotica and look interesting, so readers aren't just getting ads, they're getting additional content.
Formatting: I wish there would have been indents or spaces for new sentences in the Kindle version as everything was left aligned. I've come across a few other books like this and this throws me out of the story too much. The editing, however, was great. I didn't spot any typos, misspelled words or other grammar issues.
In summary, I give the formatting 2 stars (if indents on new paragraphs are added this is easily upgraded, making the overall 4 stars), story 3 stars and the writing 4 stars. For those who are looking for a fast, spicy read, Tit for Tat is worth checking out.
December 3, 2011
A Pages of Desire review
This is a delightful little short story, and it is the perfect starting place for someone who has never read a f/f or m/m story.
I love the premise and title of this, I find that it makes it a little more fun. The cover suggests that it is more f/f but I can assure that it is evenly split between m/m and f/f. I will give you fair warning on this though. Do not go into this look for a fantastic story, background or character development. This is basically a quick and dirty read, where the sex regins supreme. I did wish there were more to it, maybe a little more toward the set-up but these erotic shorts tend to be...extremely short.
The sex scene is wonderfully written and totally yummy, doesn't disappoint...except maybe that there isn't more of them. The characters are basically the typical college kids experimenting but I did enjoy the chemistry between Sara and her best friend, and how it changes.
This the perfect short spicy little read for those looking for a quick break.
This is a delightful little short story, and it is the perfect starting place for someone who has never read a f/f or m/m story.
I love the premise and title of this, I find that it makes it a little more fun. The cover suggests that it is more f/f but I can assure that it is evenly split between m/m and f/f. I will give you fair warning on this though. Do not go into this look for a fantastic story, background or character development. This is basically a quick and dirty read, where the sex regins supreme. I did wish there were more to it, maybe a little more toward the set-up but these erotic shorts tend to be...extremely short.
The sex scene is wonderfully written and totally yummy, doesn't disappoint...except maybe that there isn't more of them. The characters are basically the typical college kids experimenting but I did enjoy the chemistry between Sara and her best friend, and how it changes.
This the perfect short spicy little read for those looking for a quick break.
January 2, 2013
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It was sort of like reading a sneak peek into a longer book. It sure as hell was
sexy and well written. Did I mention freaking hot! I’m impressed. I want to read more by this author and can’t wait to pick up another book by Delilah Fawkes.
It was sort of like reading a sneak peek into a longer book. It sure as hell was
sexy and well written. Did I mention freaking hot! I’m impressed. I want to read more by this author and can’t wait to pick up another book by Delilah Fawkes.
October 15, 2011
It wasn't horrible, just too short. It ended way before I expected it to. As others have mentioned, most of what you get for your Kindle is excerpts from other stories. I would have been really mad if I would have paid for this.
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July 10, 2011For being a short story I give this a Meh.
May 5, 2017
Hot, short f/f & m/m story.
July 19, 2011
I <3 F/F and M/M and this was perfect hotness of bi girls and bi boys. Yummy.
July 23, 2011
HOT foursome
July 24, 2011
It was a good short sexy read
February 2, 2013
I want mooooore!!!
August 27, 2013
My kick off read for #doinitdirty 2.0 quick but fun.
November 1, 2014
This shorty is smoking hot. It's only the one scene which seems to be a fast one, but it's a scene chock full of fantasy.
March 11, 2015
This was such a hot little book. I wish there had been more!
December 3, 2011
This is straight out porn. Not that I mind but it is an ok story.
July 22, 2011
Well at least It was free.
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