I find myself having the same problems with this novel as I had with the first two. It's slow-paced, there's not much skipping of time and the whole novel consists of a few scenes over a very short time-span. I like my novels to cover more time and have more substance, shortening some scenes and drawing the good ones out, but not so long that readers lose their attention. As soon as I opened the book I was ready to skim and scan and actually flip pages to get to the part where Siena comes in, because the author gave that part away on the back of the book, which shouldn't have happened. Because of that and the really slow start to the novel, it was like 20+ pages maybe of Elijah walking into a trap, thinking how foolish he was to walk into the trap, despairing that he had got himself into that situation and leaving his loved ones unprotected, succumbing to the injury, and I kept waiting and waiting for her to get there. It was boring to say the least.
I did make myself read every word though, and things picked up with Siena, who I didn't really like for Elijah in the previous novel. But I found myself liking her and considering this the most enjoyable novel of the series so far because of her. I really disliked Bella and Legna because they were weak babies who got on my nerves and just turned helpless as soon as they got with their men; it was really pathetic. In contrast the queen was strong and smart and independent, all traits that I admire in the female lead. I really didn't expect such a strong character in this series, thinking they'd all be dumb virgins given to the men who needed help and protection every 2 seconds, who cried like babies and just annoyed the crap out of me. That was why Siena was so refreshing, because she was aggressive and wanted power instead of letting Elijah take it. Their chemistry was really interesting and enjoyable to read, how she sensed his feelings for her, his protective feelings for her and his intentions to avoid her to protect her, and it was really nice to read. I hated they slept together so soon, but I did like their bond and the way Elijah wanted so badly to be on good terms with her when that time came that soul mates had to mate. And the sex scenes happened and I was thrust immediately into the past novels where the sex was just as boring then as it was now. I was dumbfounded then that I could be reading a romance novel and yet be so unaffected it was like I wasn't reading about sex at all. I'll have to remember not to come to these novels when I'm really in the mood for a hot, steamy romance, because I won't get it. It's mild to say the least, lukewarm at best.
Some authors just aren't cut out for romance novels, and I think all romance novels should really write to impress with the romance, because that's why we're reading romance novels, I am at least! The style of writing is really long-winded, with lonngggg paragraphs full of words, hardly any conversations, and even some of the conversations are like this, with the same person saying so much they have to break it up into several long paragraphs that really test a person's attention span and make them just want to skip right over it. I might as well have been reading a schoolbook for all the feeling I got from the sex. And this one just confused me, Idk if that happened in the others but there were quite a few times I had no idea what was happening, what they were actually doing to each other because of the wording. Their feelings were described rather than the actions, and that really ruined it further. When the sex isn't good in a romance then it really just isn't that good to read. It's all about the wording and the descriptions and the positions and what they say and how they do it and everything, and in here all of it was off. You don't use big words in a romance novel, especially during the love scenes otherwise my mind checks out and I feel like I'm reading for school rather than pleasure and reading for school sucks.
This read like a chemistry or biology book, what with words like biomass and biochemistry and physiology and so many other words like this that just made my brain think a little too much. It felt like I was having to understand concepts I just didn't have the capacity to learn, and it was over my head, their way of doing some things.
Siena resisting Elijah was one of the best parts in the novel, because it showed her strength as an independent woman, she didn't shape up to have a brain-ful of mush just because she found her mate; she was determined to remain single for her people's benefit and that was admirable. It was also nice that they both suffered being away from each other. Gideon found a solution by telling Siena she could offer for him to be her consort, not the king, that way she wouldn't share her reign. Elijah accepted the armband where he was in the states and traveled back to her, and they were married, just like that. It was a quick ceremony, and I was surprised they were getting married with so little preparation and so little pomp. I didn't think they were ready to just be married like that, but I guess since they'd already had sex it didn't really matter. The ceremony with Anya and Syreena and some more of her people, dressed her, tying things on her dress down her front, or something, then having Elijah take a dagger and cut them, cutting her dress open, and then the ladies laying her on the bed and covering her naked body with flower petals, was just strange to me. It's another strange custom in these, like drinking exotic animal milk that I just won't come to understand.
After that the novel stayed pretty much flat. All of the old characters were in the forefront with Elijah and Siena, and I guess I liked that they weren't forgotten like a lot of series do, but I feel like Elijah and Siena needed more time together to just talk or have some casual moments. Instead they were either having sex or seeing their people. There were a couple of fights, Gideon meeting up with an old lover, Ruth from the first novel, I was disgusted to learn. He'd slept with her once and she had a crush on him. I hate when authors make these new developments surface about characters whose novels are over, it makes me change the way I felt about them and I don't like have to rewrite the past. It was gross to say the least and not something you want to learn when his wife Legna is pregnant.
Gideon dies, Legna and her unborn child is in danger too because he put her to sleep. He comes back to life, Legna is fine, the baby is fine, Elijah is fine, even Siena who gets burned is fine. A minor threat that wasn't very threatening to me. And Bella gets to display her powers which are still ridiculous to me by taking people's powers from them. Anyway, they go after Ruth and her daughter Mary, and discover a bunch of old books about all the Nightwalkers, which wasn't that interesting to me. Ruth kills her daughter accidentally while trying to kill Elijah, and Ruth escapes, to resurface in the next book, and probably the next, until she's in the last book in the series because she is the only threat the author can come up with. It was getting old and I was heartily sick of even seeing the name Ruth much less have her come in the novel and try to kill the characters. The old tried and not quite so true plot device of bringing the same enemy back time and time again. They need a new threat, anything at all.
There is humor and the characters all have a sense of humor so those moments are pleasant to read. The group is generally pleasant and fun to read about, but the big words, articulate, intelligent way of speaking, running on about things, and just being too long-winded and wordy, and the repetition of things that have been said over and over is what kills this entire series.
A few things nagged at me throughout the book. #1 was that Siena never told Elijah the significance of the collar. He took it off in the beginning, and she was shocked because it was made by magic and could only come off in two ways, getting your head chopped off or your mate removing it. He didn't even know what it meant or what he'd done, and she never tells him. I know he knew they were mates without that sign, but I think he should've been told so he would at the very least know her culture and why she had been shocked. Another thing was their love got old really quick. There's only so many times you can read about someone licking your neck over your carotid artery and all that before you're just desperate for something more. They kept doing the same things over and over. They'd jump at each other, their bodies trying to like burrow into the others, and I was so sick of it! I need something new, but never got it. It was the same dry, boring, lukewarm lovemaking I've ever read and I just couldn't stand it. Then at the end they mention children, like wayyy after the fact. They said they didn’t want children right away, especially Elijah, yet they didn’t practice safe sex if their kind even have that, so how do they know she isn’t pregnant already? It's hard to believe she wouldn't already be pregnant the way they went at it, so saying no children now is kind of stupid when you're having sex like that. And it wasn't established if two different species could even reproduce, so that was another thing left up in the air. That'll be established in another book I guess, bringing these two into some other character's novel. I kind of have a problem with the past characters being so much in the present novels, cuz it was kind of like their stories were over yet they were demanding time when the main characters didn't have enough for themselves. I really liked Noah and the hybrid woman, the one Siena had sent over, being together. They play chess together and they seem good for each other, so I want them to get together and will be disappointed if they don't. Damien, the vampire kind, and Syreena, Siena's sister with two-different colored hair and eyes, were interesting and I'd like to read about them, but it's going to have be a while before I get back in this series. I need to forget how boring and dry it is before I attempt to read another one.