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One child murdered, another missing. Potentially lethal small town secrets revealed. Dealing with parenting, a mother's love, and trusting one's faith.

Nine years ago, Molly Tanner witnessed a young girl's abduction in the busy city of Philadelphia, shifting her occasional clairvoyance into overdrive. Two days later, the girl's body was found, and Molly's life fell apart. Consumed by guilt for not acting upon her visions, and on the brink of losing her family, Molly escaped the torturous reminders in the city, fleeing to the safety of the close-knit rural community of Boyds, Maryland. Molly's life is back on track, her son has begun college, and she and her husband have finally rekindled their relationship. Their fresh start is shattered when a seven-year-old girl disappears from a local park near Molly's home. Unable to turn her back on another child and troubled by memories of the past, Molly sets out to find her, jeopardizing the marriage she'd fought so hard to hold together. While unearthing clues and struggling to decipher her visions, Molly discovers another side of Boyds, where the residents--and the land itself--hold potentially lethal secrets, and exposes another side of her husband, one that threatens to tear them apart.

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Profile Image for Miss Kim.
535 reviews141 followers
December 19, 2011
This is my reading experience with ‘Chasing Amanda’

10% - This is an interesting premise.

25% - I’m really into this…. *chomping popcorn*

50% - Ignoring the world around me….hmmmm…well this is interesting... there are a few people that are in on the bad stuff.

75% - Annoyance is starting to set in. I want to finish it tonight. I have to know! Wait...suddenly there are ghosts thrown in the mix. huh.

90% - WHAT? Are serious? The end makes no sense. All these extra people are not needed….and end up having NOTHING to do with the story.

100% - WHAT THE F??? I want to throw this piece of shit against the wall, but it’s on my kindle and I cannot to that to My Precious. I still don't get who took Tracy. Wasn't it the pastor? Who are the dead people in the water? What does her son have to do with anything!!?

NOT worth the 99 cents. *HMPH*
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2 reviews
December 17, 2011
I have mixed feelings about this book. I honestly thought that this was written by a teenager in high school. As I finished the last page I thought, that wasn't too bad for high school level. Next thing I know, I'm looking at a picture of a 40-something-year-old woman. And here I find out it's won awards...? I am completely confused. Did I read a different version of the book than everyone else?

PROS:
Plot: This book is definitely a page turner. Melissa Foster is quite good at creating a mystery. And it was the only, ONLY, thing that kept me reading.


CONS:
Characters:
I couldn't help disliking Molly. Her character just didn't ring true to me. The cast of supporting characters wasn't that great either. They don't act like real people in my opinion. Molly's moods are so all over the place that I kind of got the impression that she is bipolar.
If there is one word to describe all of these characters, it is MELODRAMATIC.

Dialogue:
One of the biggest hurdles that writers face, is giving characters their own voice. Melissa Foster hasn't even come close to jumping that hurdle. In fact, she's not even on the running track yet. Every character talks exactly the same. The dialogue is either bland or packed with so much "flavor" that it turns your stomach.

Writing:
The writing in this book is downright atrocious. When it comes to "tell vs show," Foster is without a doubt a "teller." In that, she directly /tells/ us what the characters are feeling, instead of /showing/ us through their actions. Instead of simply saying, "Molly was annoyed" a billion times, it is much more effective to show us her annoyance with a sigh or an eye roll. Molly has no mannerisms, she simply has states of being. I think this is the biggest reason why I disliked her character so much.
There is a lot of filler content in this book. The never ending pointless descriptions made me put it down more than once. The professionalism of her writing is on par with Stephanie Meyers'. Who, in my opinion, is one of the worst published writers to emerge in the past few decades.

Overall, the book was okay. It would have been a good first draft, and whoever decided to publish it at this level should be ashamed.
In a way, I'm glad I read it. Now I see more clearly what I do wrong in my own writing.

2.5 stars
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1,085 reviews101 followers
July 13, 2011
Molly's life was turned upside down when she witnessed the abduction of Amanda, but didn't recognize it as an abduction. In an effort to try to save her life and marriage, she moved her family to the small town of Boyds. Everything seems to be getting better until a little girl goes missing. Molly feels compelled to help find her, even if it means destroying the peace she has finally found. Can she find Tracey before she loses everything she loves?

I enjoyed the storyline, but didn't like Molly. I found her selfish, unrealistic and just plain annoying. I have tried to figure out why I disliked her so much, but I can't pinpoint any one thing. In the first few chapters, I found myself sympathizing and siding with her husband more than her, and I just never got over that.

Since Molly's character is such a big focus in the book, I found it hard to get into the rest of the story. I did find myself interested in how the kidnapper was. There were hints here and there, and I did figure it out about halfway through the book. This didn't detract from the story as I was still trying to figure out more of the back story.

Overall, this was an interesting storyline with lots of secrets to be revealed. I really wanted to love the book, but I couldn't connect with, or even like, the main character, which definitely affected my opinion. This is a book I would recommend as I am sure I am in the minority regarding Molly.
1,393 reviews16 followers
November 14, 2011
Again, a 99 cent deal. I think I have to stop with these!

I really liked the original premise of this book, and think it would have been a great way to delve into some really deep and interesting psychological moves. The main character witnessed an abduction 10 years before, though she didn't realize it as it happened. When she found out that the girl she saw being put into a car was later murdered by the man she saw, she deals with incredible guilt and a wish to atone. Then, when a girl goes missing in her town it brings up all the old emotional problems and she wants to help find the girl.

This would have been enough, I think, for an interesting story. Instead, the author brings in all of these implausible and poorly explained things, like the main character being a psychic - and her son all of a sudden is too. The twist, which I won't give away was pretty easy to spot part way through the book, but there are so many intertwining stories that it puts you off your game for a while. I think there were too many stories going on, and then they were all randomly explained at the end of the book in a neat two pages.

The premise, and the secrets, and all of the small town stuff that went on could have made for a fantastic story - but this just wasn't. Too bad.
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Author 199 books612 followers
September 4, 2011
Intriguing, suspenseful, emotional and fulfilling. That is what this book was to me.

Author Melissa Foster took a subject that is intense in nature alone and made it into an emotional intriguing story from start to finish. The plot line of this book was intricate and carried many twists. Normally I can figure out the "who done it" pretty quickly, but Ms. Foster kept me guessing on this one. Although as I look back on it, I wonder how I didn't see it. She did a great job hiding it.

This story is written very well and kept me intrigued page to page. Her use of the "knowing" making the storyline touch the paranormal slightly and bringing about a whole different view on a criminal matter.

I am not one to get emotional during a story, but this one was written to the point that I found myself with tears in my eyes and a tightness in my chest.

This is the first book I have read by Ms. Foster and I am looking forward to reading Megan's way next!
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4,809 reviews143 followers
December 29, 2011
Oh my good Lord, this book dragged on and was way over the top dramatic. If I didn't have to read this book for a challenge, I may or may not have given up on it. There were points where I would lose serious interest in the book and move onto other books and times when I would zone out while reading it.
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Author 57 books148 followers
May 30, 2011
Chasing Amanda
Author: Melissa Foster
Reviewed by Fran Lewis

Observations and noticing small details and remembering them can often make all the difference in the world when an investigation is ensuing or reporting the news. But, how often do we discount the sounds of a child, the screams of a temper tantrum as trying to get someone’s attention because they did not get what they want or just a child who throws tantrums. Reliving and revisiting events can be the difference between solving cases or not. But, when Molly Tanner witnesses the abduction of a young child and fails to heed her own warnings and visions her life crumbles when the little girl’s body is found two days later. Living in Philadelphia seemed like torture as she faced the demons and reminders of her own self imposed guilt. Moving or running to another place would create at least a temporary haven for her and her husband to rekindle their marriage and refocus on their life together. So, they moved to Boyds, Maryland hoping to start anew.
Molly is clairvoyant. She has visions and is often capable of seeing things that most cannot. Reflecting on this murder from nine years ago, recalling many incidents with her young son before he went off to college Molly takes a hard look at her life in the present. What would motivate someone to kidnap, torment and confine a seven-year-old child? Twisted and demented, imposing rituals and demanding she recite prayers and follow her orders or endure her wrath. Terrifying to say the least.

Molly cannot wrap herself around the fact that Amanda’s death was not her fault. Enveloped in self-imposed guild she returns to the woods, hears a cry and immediately thinks and hopes its Tracey. Enlisting help and joining in the search does not find what she hoped for namely the missing child. 

Cole tries to reason with her but Molly needs more. Visions that come to light of a cavern, shovels and trees cause her to find someone that might know more. For now, Tracey’s cries fall on deaf ears. Reliving the experience with Amanda before realizing her fate, she plays the scene over and over again in her mind leading her to delve into the disappearance of Kate Plummer twenty years before. The information she unlocks enlightens her in more ways than one. Leading her to Officer Brown she learns that Kate’s body was never found, the man accused of taking or killing her the brother of the Pastor and the reason he was beaten to death sends chills down her spine and much more. 

Rodney Lett was misunderstood not only by his family but those he encountered in the Boyds. Speaking with Pastor Lett she uncovers that he too had a sixth sense and often predicted events before they happened. But, his family did not consider him clairvoyant. His parents never understood his rants and raves and the end result was tragic.

Added into the mix is Pastor Lett and her secret that is behind the closed doors of Perkinson House. Who does she have locked up and why? Hannah, Molly’s close friend has a secret that she is hiding too? Who does she have that no one is supposed to know? Who is Charlie? Just who took Tracey and when will all the dots connect?

Delving even further would definitely put a strain on her relationship with Cole and her perception of some of her neighbors too. How will all three abductions link together and how many lives will be shattered and destroyed before a kidnapper is revealed? Just who remains to be seen as I continue with my review of Melissa Foster’s novel Chasing Amanda.
Characters that are unique and different whose personalities shine through on each page. One little girl names Tracey whose inner fears, torments and terrors you feel, hear and understand throughout the novel. A seven-year-old child who was really confused and did not understand the truths behind why she was taken. Thinking that Mummy just wanted to safe her from the toxins living outside was Tracey going to be brainwashed if she ever made it home. Was she going to do the same thing when she got older and answer the call when sent for she would be with those that called her.

Pastor Lett has a secret that would change the course of her life and surprise those living in the Boyds. What or who was hidden away in the Perkinson House and what would happen if the town found out? A simple note would change it all. Molly goes into the woods, the knowing takes over and what happens you will not believe. When all is said and done and the captor is finally revealed just whom it turns out to be you won’t see coming and won’t believe. Kate, Tracey and Amanda all victims all taken.

Each member of this tightly knit group is guilty of something and has lived with an inner turmoil that needs to be released. Just how many secrets, lies, betrayals and murders have been committed? Who took Tracey and why? What will Tracey’s fate be and will she ever live a normal life if returned to her mother and father?

Forgiveness is not something that is easy to bestow on someone who has hurt and deceived you. Children are often resilient but some are too naïve to see the truth in front of them nor understand the reactions of adults in many situations.

When Molly is in danger and thinks she has finally found Tracey, just who helps her you won’t believe. Will Cole ever not doubt) doubt her visions? Will they ever bond again and will this torn community ever repair the many rips, tears and holes that have severed their ties and become one unit again? Author Melissa Foster has given the reader much pause for thought in this novel of friendship, loyalty, redemption, hope and understanding. Characters that are vividly described and one little girl at the center whose voice rings out loud and clear throughout the novel and hopefully are finally heard. One woman named Molly who would never give up or forgive herself if she did not try and find Tracey and bring her home.

Once again author Melissa Foster brings to light so many important issues but the most important is child abduction and the responsibility of parents to protect and watch their children. She describes a town filled with secrets and hidden lies. She unveils situations that many would never forgive. This is one book that every parent should read. Parents need to watch their children and teach them never to go with strangers. Parents need to watch their children in the playground, at home, in your backyards and definitely in malls. Parents should never allow their child to go to the restrooms alone. As America must learn to always be on Red Alert and remember 9/11, every parent needs to be on their own Red Alert so that their child never becomes an Amber Alert.

Fran Lewis: reviewer






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145 reviews9 followers
May 10, 2011
I was very impressed with Megan's Way as it was Foster's first book. She has a way of drawing you into the world of her story instantly. Chasing Amanda, her newest release, captivated me just as quickly as Megan's Way.

Chasing Amanda covers a subject that is every parent's nightmare: Your child being abducted, never to be seen again. Molly Tanner witnesses an abduction of a young girl 9 years prior to the story taking place. Her life is forever changed as you can imagine after the little girl's body is found. Molly has a gift of clairvoyance which she did not rely on at the time. She is haunted and tormented by what she has witnessed so her family moves to a more rural area of Maryland to escape the big city in Pennsylvania.

Life seems to be normal again for Molly, her husband, and her own child. Her son goes away to college, she settles into her community comfortably, and running becomes her comfort. Then the worse thing could happen: a little girl goes missing in this community. Molly is thrown back into the past and begins obsessing over the hunt for this little girl. This time she HAS to do something, anything to find this little girl. Her gift of seeing takes over and she swears to herself she will follow her instincts this time.

The plot of this story is pretty complex and Melissa untangles this story from several points of view. We see the world through Molly's eyes, the eyes of Tracy (the little girl), the abductor, just to name a few. The story had me hooked and shocked by page 40! The characters are well written. You almost feel like you are in their minds, seeing the story through their eyes.

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Author 30 books50 followers
December 6, 2012
So many people have already written plot descriptions about this book, so I won’t bore you with that. I will share my impressions of the book, though.

1) I read this book MONTHS ago, and it’s still inside my head…and that’s a good thing. Really effective fiction (in my view) changes the reader in some way and gets them thinking—and thinking, and thinking, and thinking… That’s what Chasing Amanda did for me, and I love it!
2) It’s a really, really good mystery. I was convinced I knew who the kidnapper was—in the beginning. Then I didn’t know. And then, toward the end of the book, I thought I knew again…but, it turns out, I was wrong about that, too! Predictable? No. Not in my book. Excellent! It kept me guessing right up until the end, but it didn’t leave me feeling cheated--like something had been kept from me—like so many Agatha Christie books have in the past. And I’m a big fan of Agatha Christie! Also, I didn’t notice ANY loose ends, as is so often a problem in many novels—not just mysteries.
3) I went to bed reading it (when I was getting toward the end of the story), but I woke up just a few hours later (at 1 AM) just to finish the thing. I couldn’t stand not knowing the answers to all the questions. So, while it didn’t keep me up reading late into the night, it did WAKE me up in the middle of the night.

Melissa Foster is a fabulous storyteller, and she’s just an all around great person (not that I’ve ever met her personally—I’ve just interacted with her on Facebook). For the price, you can’t beat this read. If you’re looking for something good to read, DON’T PASS THIS UP!
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32 reviews7 followers
July 28, 2011
Molly Tanner has a wonderful life…now! She has a lovely husband who she adores, a son off to college with a bright future and she lives in a close-knit community in a great area…now. But things were different for Molly nine years ago. When a young child went missing in Philadelphia, Molly had visions she did not act upon and the child was found murdered. Guilt ridden, her family moved to Boyds Maryland and things got better.
Now, a seven-year-old girl has disappeared and Molly cannot ignore it. Not for her life—not for her husband—not for anything. She goes against everything to decipher her visions and seek the truth behind this tragedy. But Molly finds that the people—and the land—in Boyds hold some secrets she could never have guessed. She also finds there is another side to her husband that could cost her marriage.
This story is told from several viewpoints which make it even more interesting and gives it a twisted thrill that I have not seen before, but still flows well and reads superbly. If you are one of those readers who try to figure out ‘whodunit’, please read Chasing Amanda…it will have you pulling your hair out trying to pin down the culprit, but you never will until the very end. This is a well-written, well thought-out thriller with a kick-butt ending and it will definitely keep you on the edge. Melissa Foster is a writer to watch and Chasing Amanda is THE book for thriller lovers.
I’m giving Chasing Amanda a 5 spider rating and recommending to all thriller readers. Don’t miss this one.
DJ Weaver
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Author 12 books73 followers
August 12, 2012
I can't imagine the guilt Molly must have felt when she failed to recognise that an abduction was taking place before her eyes. Ten years or so later, Molly is still chasing Amanda, and refuses to turn a blind eye when a local child, Tracey goes missing. Neither the police or her husband are thrilled when Molly starts doing her own investigation. While I understood Molly's frustration with her husband's lack of support, I did understand where he was coming from. Molly discovers a necklace that possibly belongs to Tracey and doesn't turn it over to the police. No wonder her husband is furious with her; she's hiding evidence and is only making herself look more and more like a suspect.

On the plus side, I was drawn into the mystery straight away and had to keep reading to find out who the abductor was, and I was surprised at who it turned out to be, thinking I had it all figured out early on. How wrong I was. But I didn't like the extra surprise/character thrown in at the end to explain the dodgy actions of some of the townsfolk.

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Author 2 books1,116 followers
October 23, 2011
... terrific suspense/paranormal thriller by melissa foster, would highly recommend to anyone that enjoys a well constructed novel with characters that are feel just like the folks down the street.... parts of the novel were a little redundant.... I truly like how melissa ran the two main threads of the story simultaneously - the main characters search for the missing girl , and the missing girl's desparate attempts to survive her incarceration.... the husband of the main character was quite annoying in his lack of understanding of his wife's abilities, but this did create an added "mountain" for the heroine to climb in her pursuit of the missing child Chasing Amanda by Melissa Foster
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422 reviews
August 2, 2011
“Chasing Amanda”by Melissa Foster

It is now eight years ago since Molly witnessed the abduction of a little girl in a Walmart parking lot. Molly has had the hardest time getting over this traumatic situation, as she felt she could have done more to help this little girl. Molly, her husband Cole, and her son, Erik, decided to move away from Philadelphia, the town where this occurred eight years ago, to a new town, called Boyd, for a fresh start for Molly. Here they are making a new life with new people, a new home, and new surroundings. Molly wasn’t running away from what happened, but it was a part of her and of the families healing, as it had affected them, as well, with Molly’s distress.
A local Pastor, Pastor Lett, has also helped Molly work through the traumatic situation Molly witnessed. Pastor Lett called Molly’s recovery process, ‘cleansing the chaos from her mind’. Molly could live with that, and her visits were getting less and less with her. Molly was making progress. However, Molly still had visions. Molly called them “The Knowing”. These visions Molly had were not happening very often at the moment, thankfully
Every morning Molly goes for a run through the woods. This one morning she had a vision of a little girl named Tracey being abducted. When Molly returned from her run, she found out it was true, and “The Knowing” was back. The visions were back.
This book takes us through all of the search efforts to find Tracey. No one could find her, and Molly continued having “The Knowing” haunting her. She kept getting visions of Tracey over and over as to what was happening to her, but couldn’t quite make the details out clear enough. Molly was being hard on herself about seeing the abduction back in Philadelphia again, and made a pact with herself this time she was going to try to help more with this abduction of Tracey. This time she was not going to keep so quiet about what she saw and knew.
The visions kept coming to her. She couldn’t make them out clear enough yet to be able to tell exactly what and where Tracey might be.
Molly did eventually go to the police and told them a little bit of what her capabilities were. She was laughed at by some, but taken more seriously by one of the Officers.
This story twists and turns and goes in every different direction than what you might expect it to go through. I thought I knew who the abductor was, and how the entire story plays out. I was completely fooled and shocked as the story unfolded and all the answers came out.
Melissa Foster’s masterful writing talent weaves a story that pulls you in and keeps you reading right to the end. You can’t ‘just’ put her books down because you want to know how everything unfolds. This book ‘IS’ a “Can’t Miss” read!
Melissa Foster’s other book she has written, “Megan’s Way” is being made into a movie at this moment. I can’t see why this book has not been chosen to be made into a movie as well. Melissa Foster is an author to watch. Her masterful writing abilities result in amazing stories. I look forward to reading more of what she writes. I can’t wait to read her next book
I received this book for “FREE” from the Author, Melissa Foster, in exchange to read this book and write a review about it. It is NOT required for my review I write to be either positive or negative, but, “of my own opinion.” I was NOT provided with “ANY” monies to accept this book, “NOR” to read it, NOR were “ANY” monies given to me to write the review for this book. All that was ‘expected’ of me was to enjoy the pure pleasure of reading it. Again, the opinions expressed for and about this book are ‘of my own opinion’. I am disclosing this information in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255, http://www.access.gpo.gov/nara/cfr/wa... Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.

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Author 9 books43 followers
January 2, 2012
I have to admit when I began to read this story I had high expectations. The author had received many favorable reviews, awards, and was heavily marketing the book through various social media. I don’t recall whether I actually purchased the book or got it free through a promotion but because it was a fellow twitter friend and author, I committed myself, without telling the author, to reviewing it when I finished. I am a big believer in supporting other writers and this is one way I try to show my support. Reviews are a vital part of that support but when a book doesn’t work for you, how do you find the words to kindly put that? By the time I was halfway finished with the book, I was so disappointed I didn’t know what to say in a review. By the time I finished it, I was left with a feeling of disappointment so strong it saddened me that such a great story had fallen so short of its full potential. It took reading other reviews that said essentially the same things I had thought of that made me realize I too, needed to share my thoughts, for better or for worse. My grandmother always taught me “If you have nothing nice to say, it’s best to say nothing at all.” Sorry, Grandma, I’m going to have to disagree with you there.

There is little doubt that the author has creativity. The story’s premise drew me in immediately. Molly lives a quiet life – a typical mother, wife, and friend until one ordinary day she witnesses a little girl being loaded into a vehicle, screaming. It isn’t until a few days later when she realizes the little girl had been kidnapped then murdered and she did nothing to stop it. Eventually Molly and the family move to a small rural town in an effort to leave the past and its painful memories behind, only to have it follow, putting everything they’ve rebuilt together at risk. Molly has to not only find herself again, but has to find the strength to stand up for who she now is, which is drastically different from who she was and at the strong risk of losing her marriage and her sanity, which she fought so hard to keep.

The story premise itself is a powerful one, with which any mother could identify. Unfortunately, this book is in desperate need of some editorial assistance. There are areas throughout the book which are very confusing to the reader, enormous sections of unnecessary descriptions that I admit I skipped over often, and an excessive amount of internal monologue of largely dramatic inner musings and fears for the lead character. In addition, the author spends almost as much time “telling” as any other aspect of the book – every thought and emotion is told rather than shown through dialogue or actions by the characters. Possibly the worst area however is the dialogue, which in places, is downright embarrassing and I cringed anytime Molly and her husband began arguing. Her husband was downright hateful with almost no redeeming qualities whatsoever, to the point where I wondered how the character could possibly survive being married to this man (and whether any of this was personal experience for the author). For a time I even thought maybe the husband was responsible for the kidnapping because he was so vehemently opposed to her getting involved.

It’s obvious to this reader that the author has a great deal of potential but after having read a portion of Megan’s Way and all of Chasing Amanda, I suggest a consultation with a solid editor, writing mentor, a writing program or all of the above. Write by Night could possibly do a great deal to help as well, they’ve certainly been helping me with my work. Paying an editor to help this story and any others in the future is a must. With revision and tightening, this story could really be improved and stand a shot at being a true award winning bestseller. Or maybe it’s just not a good fit for me. Stephanie Meyer has certainly done well and I couldn’t read more than a few pages of her books.
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417 reviews331 followers
August 19, 2011
Without cracking open a page, I knew "Chasing Amanda" was going to be a great book. I had recently read Melissa Foster's "Megan's Way" and was so wrapped up in her writing style, that I knew she wouldn't disappoint. She didn't, in fact, I found it difficult to decide which book I loved more!


"Chasing Amanda" is a book about regret, redemption, "gifts", the balancing of family and doing what's right, and so much more. Melissa is a master storyteller who can lead us masterfully from the horrors of a child's abduction to the resolution of another's with the finesse of a writer whose work is far beyond her years. She will have you drawn in like a lamb and have your emotions twisting inside of you before you know what's hit you!


Characterization is key in this novel and it is achieved to such a fine point that each person is "living" and breathing in our minds. My favorite, of course, is Molly who has to live with seeing and not helping with a child's abduction. Molly's paranormal gift of "seeing and knowing" help her in her journey to understand many things, but it also makes some things in life more complex. As we are drawn into the complexities, and we're given different perspectives through the stories of different people that Melissa sets up, we struggle to sort out who the real villain is!


Ms Foster's ability to keep the ending a secret from the reader is a lot of the powerfulness of her novel. The suspense will kill you! In a good way... One of the fascinating elements of the novel is Molly's relationship to the small town she finds herself in. We can understand this small town mentality...the secretive ways that so many townspeople hold dear...and the barriers to newcomers they put up. To live with the resistance of these people lends a tension to the story that works.


Melissa is at the top of her game in writing this suspense thriller. It's great fun to read, engrossing and exciting with many characters that will grab you and claim your attention. The element of not knowing who the "bad guy" is until Molly finds out in the end, is wonderful because it keeps us working on the mystery.


There are lots of women mystery/suspense writers, not so many with the element of paranormal...and not so many who come close to writing as well as Melissa Foster. "Chasing Amanda" has already won several awards for best women's novel, suspense/thriller, paranormal. You better check it out, soon!


5 stars for a great book and an author with a great future!


Deborah/TheBookishDame

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Author 4 books257 followers
July 26, 2011
After reading Chasing Amanda I had to ask Melissa Foster if she was a fan of any paranormal shows because the main character, Molly Tanner, and the tone of the overall story reminded me of the hit television show Medium. I've been tossing around whether to mention that or not because I don't want readers to think it is a spin off of sorts. Chasing Amanda definitely has it own original voice, characters, and plot. However, for me the comparison to Medium is a bonus and a compliment because I love these types of shows and books. The main character is persistent, but not overly confident and despite doubt from others, she embraces her intuition and connection to the universe. Whether this is spiritual or not, it's 'some thing' that can't be ignored. Also, the guilt of a previous inaction drives Molly Tanner, which makes her susceptible and well, human. A past misstep or what she may deem as a terrible mistake is the catalyst for her future determination. Lastly, I thought it was important that the female character ultimately trusts herself even when those closest to her waver. Often we tend to second-guess the person we should listen to the most, our self.

Lately, I've noticed a trend in writing, redundancy. This may be a stylistic approach or develops from feedback received through beta readers and editors, but it is something I've noted in several 2011 releases. The reiteration of details can appeal to or annoy the reader. This is going to come down to personal preference. I like to think I'm a fairly astute reader, so I get edgy when details are repeated and events are over-thought and explained. In other words, you don't need to tell me the character took a step in order to move forward. I can figure that out. Although not overly obvious, and readers may appreciate the detailing in this particular story, I felt there was some redundant telling that I would have red-marked and cut out. Then again, some boobie book reviewer (like me) might type, 'wasn't really explained.' Ha, probably can't win on this one. Like I mentioned, it is a personal stylistic taste and by know means a huge deterrent.
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49 reviews5 followers
June 25, 2011
Chasing Amanda is a complex novel full of characters wearing the mask of one life and living the turmoil of another.

Molly Tanner seems to have it all. Married for many years to her husband Dr. Cole Tanner, they are still in love and extremely happy. Her son Erik has gone to college, but phones regularly and remains close to his parents. However, Molly struggles with the gift (and curse) of "the Knowing". She can see and feel things that have happened or are going to occur. Nine years prior she ignored her ability and a child named Amanda lost her life. Unable to live with the guilt, Molly's family moved to the small town of Boyd's to start fresh. Now this seemingly safe community has been rocked by the abduction of a child. Molly's past comes back to torment her and her family as she begins to have visions of the missing child. She struggles to determine what she is really seeing and what is still haunting her from the past. As we follow Molly through her race to find the child we also see the development of many other residents of Boyds who harbor their own secrets.

Chasing Amanda is told from various character viewpoints, but is never difficult to follow. Each character gradually reveals a vital part of the mystery while adding another shocking detail to their life. I was initially worried that there may be "too much" happening, but it seemed to be just right. Each character was developed so fully that I felt like I knew them personally. I routed for them and feared as I read on that a character I had grown to love was going to be guilty of a heinous crime. As each of their stories grow so does your understanding of why they have made the choices that are now ruling them.

The mystery has so many twists and turns that it was impossible to figure out who was guilty of what. Heck, for awhile I wasn't even sure what they were doing to know what they could be guilty of. It all comes together beautifully in the end, but it had me guessing the entire time. As soon as I was sure that I knew what was happening another bombshell exploded. I was hooked from page 1.
Author 130 books386 followers
July 9, 2011
Molly Tanner’s is cursed/gifted with clairvoyance, which she call Knowing. For the most part, she’s kept it hidden for fear of rejection. But her life fell apart nine years ago when she witnessed a child, Amanda, being abducted from a parking lot and didn’t question the man who said the girl was screaming because he wouldn’t buy her a doll. Molly saw in her visions what happened to Amanda, and has lived with debilitating guilt since then--to the point of almost losing her sanity. To help her, Dr. Cole Tanner moved his wife and son from Philadelphia to a small town in Maryland.

For ten years, the Tanners have been happy in their new home. Eric, the Tanner’s son is in his first year of university, and Molly is active in the new community. She feels safe and accepted until Tracey Porter disappears from a playground. Guilt from the first abduction overwhelms Molly, but she is determined that this time she will speak out in time to save the child.

As her visions surface, so does Cole’s insistence that she let the police handle the crime. Molly knows Tracey is alive because visions reveal Tracey’s fear and that she is being kept in a dark place. Molly’s search uncovers old and new crimes and old and new secrets. Does she dare risk all? And can Molly help Tracey in time to save her?

I don’t give spoilers in my review, so I can’t reveal the plot’s intricacies. This book engaged me right away and kept me turning the pages. Ms Foster kept me guessing to the end of the book, then presented several surprise twists that united all the story’s threads. I love a book that ties up all the loose ends nicely, don’t you?

CHASING AMANDA is available in print or e-book from Amazon. Please check back on Wednesday, when Melissa Foster will be a guest interviewee. In the meantime, you can learn more about her at her website, www.MelissaFoster.com
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Author 85 books190 followers
June 8, 2011
An intriguing novel with a middle-aged female protagonist, Melissa Foster’s Chasing Amanda, blends a contemporary abduction mystery with touches of the paranormal to create a tale that’s both scary and absorbing. Molly Tanner has never quite forgiven herself for not trusting her visions and saving a young girl she once saw abducted. But years have passed; she’s recovered from the depression that kept her unavailable to husband and son, and now she’s settling into that disjointed time when the nest empties and the world comes rushing in.

The world, in this novel, takes the form of another abducted child, and Molly’s having visions again. But in small-town Maryland, knowing too much just might make Molly a suspect. As she tries to balance helping and keeping safe, her husband balances disbelief with love. Both town and marriage might be falling apart. Meanwhile the child, whose thoughts are beautifully depicted in intervening chapters, is trying to come to terms with her own danger and self-image.

Identity is part self and part choice; sometimes who we are, and sometimes how we choose to react to events. In Melissa Foster’s novel, characters are drawn to recognize the truths of who they are and were, and what they’ve done, from the priest tortured by memories of her brother, to rough and ready men in a store, to the secretive woman walking in the woods. Mysteries abound and their resolution is well-timed and well-devised. Though I guessed the ending, it in no way detracted from the plot. And though I can’t relate to clairvoyance, the characters seemed very real and relatable, their story nicely plotted and truly intriguing.



Disclosure: I received a free ecopy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
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1,152 reviews24 followers
August 29, 2015
I tried to stick with it to find out who abducted Tracy, but I only made it half way through. I really couldn't stand Molly; I thought she was a horribly selfish and annoying person. Her actions are reckless, thoughtless and often make no sense.

Some of my major gripes are:
176 reviews
October 21, 2011
I thought the premise of the book was good and as a 99 cent Kindle download that didn't have too much religion in it, I figured I'd give it a shot. Would I pay more than 99 cents? No.

The basics are simple: 9 years ago, Molly Tanner saw a young girl's abduction in Philly, causing her clairvoyance to start acting up. Two days later the girl's body was found, and Molly still can't get over the guilt. In fact she feels so guilty she moves her husband and son to Boyds, Maryland. (farmland). Everything is going well until a 7-year-old girl is kidnapped and Molly starts having visions.

I liked it for about 75% of the book and then the last 25% was too confusing. The author wove too many loose ends that had to be tied up, and it just made for a heavy ending that had to be reread if you wanted to get what was going on. While the reasoning of "who took Tracey" made sense, the person/people/things/ that took Tracey did not. I wasn't even sure what was going on and had to read another review of the story to get what was going on. (Thanks goodreads).

If the story was simplified and kept to 1. someone took Tracey 2. who took Tracey? 3. why did they take Tracey? 4. what does the pastor's brother Rodney have to do with it? then it would have been a good story. But then there was Pastor Lett's secret and that just added unnecessary rubbish to the story.

Also, I ended up sympathizing more with Cole than Molly. I know Molly was the central character, but she didn't try very hard to make Cole listen/understand/help her. She came off as selfish as times as well.
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1,407 reviews72 followers
May 21, 2011
This book was captivating and very intriguing wondering if Molly would be able to solve the missing pieces. Like what happened to Rodney Letts and what secrets the minister held inside her. What made the Boyd house so secretive that no one was allowed in. What secrets Hannah held close to her chest. And who took Tracey and what happened so many years ago with Kate another kidnapped victim and did Rodney hold the secrets or was he to blame. I applaud how Molly was able to percever when she had doubts when her own daughter went missing and turned up dead. The woman who took Tracey somewhere deep down thought she was doing what she was taught. She had very much a Stockholm syndrome going on, which brought her to her own turmoil. Molly and Cole suffer their own issues wishing they could have done more for their daughter and in some ways I believe that is what made this book so captivating. Tracey has no connection to Molly but yet Molly is so determined to help her, I think it was in a way someone she could help when she felt her "knowing" failed her when she needed it the most. Rodney and Molly even have an interesting connection both being born with abilities to know what is happening to someone else. The two abilities connected together help prove that sometimes psychics know what they are doing. A great story full of so much love and admiration towards family that I can't wait to read Megan's Way.
6 reviews
January 6, 2012
This is my amazon review.
This book has failed on so many levels. Throughout the book all of the characters nodded, stood, blood rushed, jumped, sat, walked, bent, responded, spat, hissed, retrieved, limped and so it goes. Clichés abounded that made the reading boring, dull. I read the positive reviews before I purchased the book and while reading it I kept thinking "did they read the same book?" I asked unabashedly (adjective courtesy of author). It's sad that the storyline was blocked by the poor writing. The dialogue was comical as mentioned by the other reviews. The following are not direct quotes from the book, but renditions of tone: "HI, how are you?" "I'm fine, I miss you" "I'm such a terrible mother, do you forgive me?" "Of course mother, you're the best mother ever. I really, really hate that I'm away at college and I cannot cuddle with you like I used to when I was young and we sat on the couch and sipped cocoa while watching kids movies that are parental approved." "I know son, I feel the same way, but I understand that now that you are in college, you have to be there." Tedium at its best. I'll stop there. I have purchased several books based on amazon reviews and I will no longer take them into consideration when making future purchases.
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Author 20 books57 followers
February 20, 2012
Typically, I do not read books pertaining to clairvoyance or psychic capabilities - so why is it that Chasing Amanda drew me in so completely? I believe in having a sixth sense, to be sure, but feel it has to do more with having a certain feeling about a situation or something one is about to do/say, not necessarily seeing something unfolding.

Even so, for the sake of a fiction story, I was willing to read Chasing Amanda and was pleasantly surprised by the story line. The characters were rich and true to themselves, regardless of ensuing circumstances.

I couldn't have predicted the outcome. In fact, I was relieved to discover that, what I had believed to be the truth, was nowhere near the reality of the situation. In fact, there are three major (care-taking) stories unfolding, though the emphasis is placed on one - and this is in no way a spoiler because you will still be wrinkling your brow trying to figure it all out. In fact, I may read this book again, knowing what I've learned, to see how the experience is the second time around - if there were clues leading me to the real conclusion.

Melissa Foster has created another engaging read and I truly look forward to reading, Come Back to Me - her third book release - in the near future.

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451 reviews13 followers
April 15, 2011
In "Chasing Amanda" Melissa Foster guides us in helping Molly; wife, mother to a teenage son, search for a missing girl. The young girl has disappeared from their quiet, rural community; a place where things like this simply don't happen. For Molly, it's deja vu. Several years earlier, while living in Philadelphia, she witnessed a similar event. She did nothing at that time, and has been tormented by her inaction ever since.

Molly's special gift, or curse, is her clairvoyance. She can sometimes 'see' things that others cannot. In Philadelphia, she failed the little girl, whose body was found shortly after. Now, she promised herself that she would not make that mistake again. Molly persists, using her clairvoyance and sheer stubbornness in an effort to find the child. In doing so, Molly exposes her town's shameful secrets, presenting a conclusion to this story, that I never saw coming!

Melissa Foster's skill with her characters, drew me into the story immediately. The suspense that followed made this book a definite page-turner!
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17 reviews11 followers
January 8, 2012
After a quiet beginning things come to a head when we learn the details of Molly’s connection to Amanda; it comes with a kick like a donkey, and brings everything into focus. From there the pace quickens with each character bringing their, sometimes suspicious, agendas into the main plot to urge it forward.

Melissa has a convincing writing voice, empathetic toward some complex players, like Molly - plagued by the past and the supernatural, Cole - her pragmatic and unyielding partner, and Tracey - a little girl lost. Jumping between them the plot flows and builds.

The way Pastor Lett develops gives extra mystery to the story, a mystery that continues to build until a web of intrigue has sprung up around several characters, thickening the plot even more and building tense excitement.
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589 reviews79 followers
June 16, 2014
A young girl goes missing in a small town. The anguish of the parents, the attempts by the townspeople to try to find her.This is a scenario that has played itself out so many times over the years in fiction and heartbreakingly in real life.
But this mystery is so full of twists and turns a person could get whiplash trying to keep up. I was so sure I knew the culprit.The story just had to catch up with my conclusions. But then oh no, that couldn't be, could it?
This is the sort of mystery that sucks me in.I like to be kept guessing.And the small town characters with their well hidden secrets and eccentricities rounded out the story well.There were really parallel plot lines here,although you don't really see it. At least for a while.
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18 reviews
June 26, 2012
I downloaded it for free onto my Kindle. That was the appropriate price.

The plot lines move steadily, but not fast, and holds your interest. However about 2/3 into the book the author seems to get mired down in the story-web she's created. From this point on the plot gets confusing and frustrating. Just when she should be tieing up all the ends of the story lines, Melissa Foster starts throwing in ghosts, more and more characters and sappy dialogue. She leaves us with more questions than when we started the book. I didn't expect a happy ending, or even a tragic outcome ....just an inteligent wrap-up of all the plot lines and mysterious observations our author presented. What we got was a mess.
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1,275 reviews43 followers
December 23, 2011
The book was ok. There were so many things that just didn't ring true to me. The setting was a small town where everyone knows your name -- except they don't. And that small town had a Panera. The main character, Molly, just seemed to annoy me. She was so dramatic at so many points. And it didn't make sense for her to be the one person really trying to find the missing girl.

The only thing that kept me reading was that I wanted to find out if the missing girl made it back safely to her parents.
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