Nick Sanders' first novel is ambitious and clearly a love letter to tiny towns time forgot in the deep south. There's moments of poetic description of farmland, affectionate language for run-down strip malls and a reverence for the calm power of cattle. It's also about a normal guy who becomes a vampire.
It stands up alongside any other original fiction found online, with some chapters that seem to meander a bit and some that really nail it and hook you in (these are primarily the early and late chapters) with a few untied plot threads left around. It's a character driven piece, and some of the characters shine much brighter than others. Maurice's mom, for example, absolutely begs for more time on the page. And resolution with Maurice's coworker comes quite late, but delivers everything I wanted in terms of closure.
Generally I don't like modern vampire stories, but a gas station employee who's just trying to get by with his new supernatural lifestyle is a lot easier to handle than sparkling pretty-boys.
If you can read ebooks, I suggest getting a copy anywhere other than amazon so that the author actually sees more than a penny for his efforts. Here's looking forward to Nick's next book - may it be tighter, creepier, and just as focused on a guy like Maurice. He's easy to like.