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A Folly of Youth
My own folly had endangered me, my preservation I owe to the kindness, the integrity of another… IN 1808, ELIZABETH BENNET is young, curious, and in possession of an invitation to a London party which she ought not to attend. Unable to resist the temptation, Elizabeth indulges her wish to see a party of the beau monde and finds herself in a dangerous situation. She is saved from a desperate fate by Mr Darcy of Pemberley but relief is short-lived; Mr Gardiner arrives and demands satisfaction on behalf of his young niece’s honour. BOUND FOR THREE YEARS—with no intent to marry on either side—Mr Darcy and Elizabeth both resolve to do as they must to end their unwanted almost-betrothal. Mr Bennet however refuses to allow it, fearing that Elizabeth’s character will bear a permanent stain that no amount of time or money could erase. Together, Darcy and Lizzy contrive a plan to overcome her father’s Darcy will find her someone else to marry, thus relieving himself of the obligation. THE FOLLY OF THEIR YOUTH, it seems, might be set to rights after all, until feelings arise which complicate the scheme. But will they realise their true attachment before it’s too late?
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August 28, 2025
… but youth was for making mistakes. ~ Samantha Sotto
At last, a JAFF story where Florizel has a larger part than George Wickham!
“A Folly of Youth” begins during 16-year-old Elizabeth Bennet’s visit to her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner in London. Miss Cartwright, a 19-year-old relation of her Aunt, also is enjoying spending time in London, especially Hyde Park where the following scene takes place:
Another excessively high-perched curricle had come to an abrupt halt only steps away from them. A small man with flaming red hair, dressed in the ornate and excessive garb of a dandy, bounded down … with scarcely a word, the gentleman thrust a card towards Miss Cartwright, who took it without comment. With a passing glance at Elizabeth, he barked, “Bring your sister.”
A more experienced girl than Elizabeth would have suspected the invitation would not be honorable. A more prudent girl than Miss Cartwright would have known the invitation would not be respectable.
Still, Miss Cartwright misleads Mr. Gardiner and he allows them to attend with only an elderly companion as chaperon.
The mistakes we make in our youth, we pay for with the rest of our lives. ~ Chuck Palahniuk
A youthful Fitzwilliam Darcy attends the gathering without knowing the nature of the party. He encounters Miss Bennet and takes steps to protect her from some gentlemen who are not so very gentlemanly. His attention is seen by Mr. Gardiner who has learned the nature of the party and arrives at a crucial moment.
Mr. Gardiner and Mr. Bennet insist Darcy is engaged to Elizabeth, but marriage will wait until Elizabeth reaches her majority. Elizabeth is unwilling. Darcy is angry.
Darcy attempts to buy his way out of the betrothal by adding money to a dowry for Elizabeth. Mr. Bennet rejects all offers.
Sometimes a moment of clarity shines so brightly, you have no choice but to walk into the light — or hide under the rug. ~ Cathryn Louis
In London, Darcy has been attracted by Lady Cassandra Millington. Until he can escape from the unwanted betrothal, he is not free to make an offer to his new love.
Darcy’s cousins, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Viscount Saye, invite Darcy to visit Bath, where Lady Cassandra will also be residing. Saye must find a way out of his father’s bad books. The Earl insists Saye cease his idleness and find a respectable girl to marry.
Darcy finally confesses his predicament to his cousins. Saye must have his say: “... that is the advantage of being known as a taciturn, rather pokerish fellow — your jokes are rare, and therefore sure to amuse.”
The cousins make a plan: if Elizabeth Bennet agrees to marry another man, Darcy will be free to pursue Lady Cassandra.
Bingley has married Jane Bennet. They will also be in Bath with Elizabeth.
The stage is set: Darcy will introduce his single friends to Elizabeth; Saye will choose a wife; Fitzwilliam will enjoy himself as he sees fit. What could go wrong?
All men make mistakes but only wise men learn from their mistakes. ~ Winston Churchill
I enjoyed this look at a stronger Bingley who gives Darcy a well-deserved set-down and a kinder Caroline who offers friendship and understanding to Elizabeth. Georgiana, who has endured a youthful folly of her own, also seeks friendship and understanding.
Everyone’s favorite Viscount, Lord Saye, delivers repartee in his usual style. And don’t miss Florizel who must assist his master in presenting his best self to his chosen victim — uh, love interest.
All of us who are worth anything, spend our manhood in unlearning the follies, or expiating the mistakes of our youth. ~ Percy Bysshe Shelley
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
At last, a JAFF story where Florizel has a larger part than George Wickham!
“A Folly of Youth” begins during 16-year-old Elizabeth Bennet’s visit to her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner in London. Miss Cartwright, a 19-year-old relation of her Aunt, also is enjoying spending time in London, especially Hyde Park where the following scene takes place:
Another excessively high-perched curricle had come to an abrupt halt only steps away from them. A small man with flaming red hair, dressed in the ornate and excessive garb of a dandy, bounded down … with scarcely a word, the gentleman thrust a card towards Miss Cartwright, who took it without comment. With a passing glance at Elizabeth, he barked, “Bring your sister.”
A more experienced girl than Elizabeth would have suspected the invitation would not be honorable. A more prudent girl than Miss Cartwright would have known the invitation would not be respectable.
Still, Miss Cartwright misleads Mr. Gardiner and he allows them to attend with only an elderly companion as chaperon.
The mistakes we make in our youth, we pay for with the rest of our lives. ~ Chuck Palahniuk
A youthful Fitzwilliam Darcy attends the gathering without knowing the nature of the party. He encounters Miss Bennet and takes steps to protect her from some gentlemen who are not so very gentlemanly. His attention is seen by Mr. Gardiner who has learned the nature of the party and arrives at a crucial moment.
Mr. Gardiner and Mr. Bennet insist Darcy is engaged to Elizabeth, but marriage will wait until Elizabeth reaches her majority. Elizabeth is unwilling. Darcy is angry.
Darcy attempts to buy his way out of the betrothal by adding money to a dowry for Elizabeth. Mr. Bennet rejects all offers.
Sometimes a moment of clarity shines so brightly, you have no choice but to walk into the light — or hide under the rug. ~ Cathryn Louis
In London, Darcy has been attracted by Lady Cassandra Millington. Until he can escape from the unwanted betrothal, he is not free to make an offer to his new love.
Darcy’s cousins, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Viscount Saye, invite Darcy to visit Bath, where Lady Cassandra will also be residing. Saye must find a way out of his father’s bad books. The Earl insists Saye cease his idleness and find a respectable girl to marry.
Darcy finally confesses his predicament to his cousins. Saye must have his say: “... that is the advantage of being known as a taciturn, rather pokerish fellow — your jokes are rare, and therefore sure to amuse.”
The cousins make a plan: if Elizabeth Bennet agrees to marry another man, Darcy will be free to pursue Lady Cassandra.
Bingley has married Jane Bennet. They will also be in Bath with Elizabeth.
The stage is set: Darcy will introduce his single friends to Elizabeth; Saye will choose a wife; Fitzwilliam will enjoy himself as he sees fit. What could go wrong?
All men make mistakes but only wise men learn from their mistakes. ~ Winston Churchill
I enjoyed this look at a stronger Bingley who gives Darcy a well-deserved set-down and a kinder Caroline who offers friendship and understanding to Elizabeth. Georgiana, who has endured a youthful folly of her own, also seeks friendship and understanding.
Everyone’s favorite Viscount, Lord Saye, delivers repartee in his usual style. And don’t miss Florizel who must assist his master in presenting his best self to his chosen victim — uh, love interest.
All of us who are worth anything, spend our manhood in unlearning the follies, or expiating the mistakes of our youth. ~ Percy Bysshe Shelley
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 18, 2024
397 pages on my Kindle, I absolutely loved this story. Beware, though, it has its share of angst. Even knowing that a HEA was guaranteed, at times I was anxious as to how things would turn out. I have read most of this author's books and she never disappoints.
Although this story has many of our familiar characters from canon the story premise is entirely different. Wickham is mentioned just a little. A letter from Lady Catherine appears near the end. The three younger Bennet girls are not part of the action. We do have Viscount Saye who has delighted us in many stories before this one and who plays a large part herein. Colonel Fitzwilliam has a larger role in this story and continues to support and tease his cousin.
A very young Elizabeth, visiting the Gardiners in London, is persuaded to attend a ball by a young relation of her aunt. (How they were invited is an interesting and odd bit.) The ball turns out to be a Cyprian’s Ball and, well...just know that Darcy is also there and "saves" Elizabeth from a fallen future by marking her as "his" by a kiss...just as Uncle Gardiner bursts upon them.
Mr. Gardiner and then Mr. Bennet, of course, demand Darcy make things right. So it is that he and Elizabeth have an understanding, which will not be acted upon until she is of age, which is over four years in the future. As the story goes on Darcy tries to wrangle his way out of being bound to her but Bennet is having none of it. Even increasing her dowry does not persuade her father. Little does Darcy know that Elizabeth is living a life of shame, only allowed to be in her bedroom when anyone comes to call at Longbourn.
Jane and Bingley marry and Elizabeth comes to live with them. So it is that they take a trip to Bath where the main part of this story occurs. Darcy, Fitzwilliam and Saye are there also: each has their own love interest to pursue. Yes, Darcy has found someone who meets all his standards for a wife. But to cut the entanglement with Elizabeth he now offers to introduce her to men who might be found to meet her requirements for a husband.
So it is that Elizabeth meets and rejects a few. With each she and Darcy meets and discuss the pros and cons and then another man is brought to her attention. The story of Mr. Stafford and his attentions is the turning point in the story. He meets all of her requirements and seems strongly attached to her.
But, well, you know there has to be a snag (or two). Meanwhile we also read much of the other two men, Saye and Fitzwilliam and their romances. (Saye's list has to make you smile.)
I enjoyed this story and highly recommend it.
Although this story has many of our familiar characters from canon the story premise is entirely different. Wickham is mentioned just a little. A letter from Lady Catherine appears near the end. The three younger Bennet girls are not part of the action. We do have Viscount Saye who has delighted us in many stories before this one and who plays a large part herein. Colonel Fitzwilliam has a larger role in this story and continues to support and tease his cousin.
A very young Elizabeth, visiting the Gardiners in London, is persuaded to attend a ball by a young relation of her aunt. (How they were invited is an interesting and odd bit.) The ball turns out to be a Cyprian’s Ball and, well...just know that Darcy is also there and "saves" Elizabeth from a fallen future by marking her as "his" by a kiss...just as Uncle Gardiner bursts upon them.
Mr. Gardiner and then Mr. Bennet, of course, demand Darcy make things right. So it is that he and Elizabeth have an understanding, which will not be acted upon until she is of age, which is over four years in the future. As the story goes on Darcy tries to wrangle his way out of being bound to her but Bennet is having none of it. Even increasing her dowry does not persuade her father. Little does Darcy know that Elizabeth is living a life of shame, only allowed to be in her bedroom when anyone comes to call at Longbourn.
Jane and Bingley marry and Elizabeth comes to live with them. So it is that they take a trip to Bath where the main part of this story occurs. Darcy, Fitzwilliam and Saye are there also: each has their own love interest to pursue. Yes, Darcy has found someone who meets all his standards for a wife. But to cut the entanglement with Elizabeth he now offers to introduce her to men who might be found to meet her requirements for a husband.
So it is that Elizabeth meets and rejects a few. With each she and Darcy meets and discuss the pros and cons and then another man is brought to her attention. The story of Mr. Stafford and his attentions is the turning point in the story. He meets all of her requirements and seems strongly attached to her.
But, well, you know there has to be a snag (or two). Meanwhile we also read much of the other two men, Saye and Fitzwilliam and their romances. (Saye's list has to make you smile.)
I enjoyed this story and highly recommend it.
August 10, 2024
An enjoyable, entertaining and giddy read. I was sorry to reach the end.
Elizabeth got in to some hot water when she was just shy of 17. It was created both by her curiosity and by her poor decisions, but she had help getting to the worst part. Darcy however, refused to take responsibility. So a stalemate of a ‘promise but not quite betrothal’ was reached, which lasted almost 4 years.
The stage is set for Darcy to make contact with the Bennets in a move to break it, as it is time for him to marry an appropriate woman of society. Unfortunately for him, he really just jumps from hot water into a huge vat of boiling water.
This is a tale of - from enemies to let’s make a deal to friends to more, but with a whole lot of other stuff going on. With all the wonderful and colorful characters converging in Bath, it is also a fantastic ensemble cast, which tends to bring the humor - Thank you Saye!
Caroline is not annoying and Bingley is no puppy!
We have very little exposure to the Bennets and Charlotte is even more disappointing than canon.
I love that we learn how truly difficult Elizabeth’s life had been following her mishap, when Darcy does. There were hints, but the full take is only completely made known through Darcy’s ears. There was something so nuanced in the drips of information and with them we get a better understanding of Elizabeth as a 20-year-old adult and the choices she thinks she must make for herself. Even if she and the reader has a bad feeling about it.
There is no doubt that A.D. is a phenomenal writer, whether a full on angsty drama filled epic or one not quite so -like A Folly of Youth, there is absolute Joy in reading her writing and it gets me every time!
[2 small things kept niggling my brain, but they aren’t necessary for the story- Where did Gardiner’s sister-in-law get to at the ball? And how did Gardiner know to look for them?]
5* A definite reread and personally, I have already purchased the paperback!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Elizabeth got in to some hot water when she was just shy of 17. It was created both by her curiosity and by her poor decisions, but she had help getting to the worst part. Darcy however, refused to take responsibility. So a stalemate of a ‘promise but not quite betrothal’ was reached, which lasted almost 4 years.
The stage is set for Darcy to make contact with the Bennets in a move to break it, as it is time for him to marry an appropriate woman of society. Unfortunately for him, he really just jumps from hot water into a huge vat of boiling water.
This is a tale of - from enemies to let’s make a deal to friends to more, but with a whole lot of other stuff going on. With all the wonderful and colorful characters converging in Bath, it is also a fantastic ensemble cast, which tends to bring the humor - Thank you Saye!
Caroline is not annoying and Bingley is no puppy!
We have very little exposure to the Bennets and Charlotte is even more disappointing than canon.
I love that we learn how truly difficult Elizabeth’s life had been following her mishap, when Darcy does. There were hints, but the full take is only completely made known through Darcy’s ears. There was something so nuanced in the drips of information and with them we get a better understanding of Elizabeth as a 20-year-old adult and the choices she thinks she must make for herself. Even if she and the reader has a bad feeling about it.
There is no doubt that A.D. is a phenomenal writer, whether a full on angsty drama filled epic or one not quite so -like A Folly of Youth, there is absolute Joy in reading her writing and it gets me every time!
[2 small things kept niggling my brain, but they aren’t necessary for the story- Where did Gardiner’s sister-in-law get to at the ball? And how did Gardiner know to look for them?]
5* A definite reread and personally, I have already purchased the paperback!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
December 8, 2025
Another Favourite!
Elizabeth’s youthful curiosity leads her into a dangerous situation she is too naïve and inexperienced to understand. Darcy recognises the danger in which she has unwittingly placed herself and takes steps to protect her. This leads to a kiss caught by her uncle Gardiner. Bad timing, that.
Never formally engaged, even years later, Mr. Bennet will not release Darcy from doing the honourable thing; he maintains he will never marry her. Neither does Elizabeth want to marry him when she knows he thinks she is beneath him. He wants to seek a wife with a fortune and connections. The only way Mr. Bennet will release him is for Elizabeth to marry, so Darcy and Elizabeth agree that he will introduce her to potential suitors.
Off to Bath they go—Elizabeth with the now married Jane and Bingley and Miss Bingley, who is actually likeable in this story. Darcy goes with Lord Saye and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Darcy has a lady in mind to court, and Lord Matlock has given Saye an ultimatum to find a wife.
I highly approved of Mr. Bennet’s and Bingley’s strong characters, neither of whom ever give in to Darcy. So refreshing to see a resolute Bingley. I really loved his speech to Darcy.
Of course, we all love Saye, and I was highly anticipating what Ms. D’Orazio had in store to entertain us with this favourite non-canon character—who when in the company of Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam is at his bawdiest best. I was happy to see Miss Lillian Goddard included again too.
Amy D’Orazio, a favourite JAFF author, is always a must read for me, and this page-turner didn’t disappoint. It begins with a compromise, a trope I enjoy. For me, any potential rivals deem a story angsty, and both Elizabeth and Darcy potentially have at least one.
Brilliantly-written dialogue, both serious and with chatty humour, flowed throughout the story with all the characters contributing to it. The story never lags for a moment and is well edited. Another great read to add to my favourites shelf.
Highly recommend.
Mature conversations.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
October 3, 2023 - Audiobook
Elizabeth Grace’s Darcy voice is one of my favourites. Great narration all around.
Elizabeth’s youthful curiosity leads her into a dangerous situation she is too naïve and inexperienced to understand. Darcy recognises the danger in which she has unwittingly placed herself and takes steps to protect her. This leads to a kiss caught by her uncle Gardiner. Bad timing, that.
Never formally engaged, even years later, Mr. Bennet will not release Darcy from doing the honourable thing; he maintains he will never marry her. Neither does Elizabeth want to marry him when she knows he thinks she is beneath him. He wants to seek a wife with a fortune and connections. The only way Mr. Bennet will release him is for Elizabeth to marry, so Darcy and Elizabeth agree that he will introduce her to potential suitors.
Off to Bath they go—Elizabeth with the now married Jane and Bingley and Miss Bingley, who is actually likeable in this story. Darcy goes with Lord Saye and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Darcy has a lady in mind to court, and Lord Matlock has given Saye an ultimatum to find a wife.
I highly approved of Mr. Bennet’s and Bingley’s strong characters, neither of whom ever give in to Darcy. So refreshing to see a resolute Bingley. I really loved his speech to Darcy.
Of course, we all love Saye, and I was highly anticipating what Ms. D’Orazio had in store to entertain us with this favourite non-canon character—who when in the company of Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam is at his bawdiest best. I was happy to see Miss Lillian Goddard included again too.
Amy D’Orazio, a favourite JAFF author, is always a must read for me, and this page-turner didn’t disappoint. It begins with a compromise, a trope I enjoy. For me, any potential rivals deem a story angsty, and both Elizabeth and Darcy potentially have at least one.
Brilliantly-written dialogue, both serious and with chatty humour, flowed throughout the story with all the characters contributing to it. The story never lags for a moment and is well edited. Another great read to add to my favourites shelf.
Highly recommend.
Mature conversations.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
October 3, 2023 - Audiobook
Elizabeth Grace’s Darcy voice is one of my favourites. Great narration all around.
May 10, 2023
5+ stars!
Want to read
April 14, 2023Please, Lord of Time, end my suffering and make May 8 come sooner because I can't live my life properly until I read this.
August 23, 2023
“At her age, she was ready for more. More of what, she hardly knew – just more. More diversion, more interest, more life.” (quote from the book - 1808)
Elizabeth Bennet wanted to experience more of what life had to offer. But following her Aunt Gardiner’s younger sister, Miss Cartwright, to a ball, proved to be more than she could handle…for her life took a very unexpected and confining turn for the worse.
“He wondered when it was Georgiana had developed such a talent for unearthing piercing truths.” (quote from the book – 1811)
Fitzwilliam Darcy has spent three years of hiding a secret. Three years of trying to find a solution to his ‘faux’ engagement. When trying again to absolve himself of an unwanted young lady, she accidently comes upon a solution…in his mind. He will introduce to her to other men if he can convince Mr. & Mrs. Bingley to bring her to Bath as they have recently married.
When our favourite Lord Saye is pressured from his father to settle down and find a wife, we can always expect a fun-filled diversion…a box, a list and Florizel make for some hilarious outcomes. He recruits his brother, Fitzwilliam, and Darcy to come to Bath to peruse those women he has whittled down on his list.
So, in this delightful and somewhat angst-filled variation, I laughed, cried and held my breath as to how Ms. D’Orazio would bring our beloved couple together to their happily ever after. I was completely charmed!
I highly recommend this creative new novel from Ms. D’Orazio along with each and every one of her variations!
May 12, 2023
A kiss can lead to troubles
When Lizzie was 16 and Darcy about 23, Darcy tries to save a naive lizzie from ruin. He almost does but almost isn’t good enough. He refuses to marry a girl he has known for 5 minutes. Mr. Bennet and uncle Gardiner get him to sign some sort of a legal document which act as a betrothal…kind of. Lizzie is just a little ruined, but enough to be shunned in Meryton.
Years go by and Darcy still acts like a brat. But things are coming to a head. Darcy needs to marry so Georgina can come out with Darcy having this legal document embarrassing his whole family.
A complex story of lots of people needing to marry and Darcy is complicating thingd. Darcy SLOWLY begins to change himself by listening to friends and relatives but it’s a long road. Being a severe introvert, a stubborn Darcy and an arrogant young man makes Darcy’s best social skill being able to insult everyone around him.
There is a HEA but really the odds of it happening were 1 out of 100.
Good story. A tad boring just before the final ending got going.
When Lizzie was 16 and Darcy about 23, Darcy tries to save a naive lizzie from ruin. He almost does but almost isn’t good enough. He refuses to marry a girl he has known for 5 minutes. Mr. Bennet and uncle Gardiner get him to sign some sort of a legal document which act as a betrothal…kind of. Lizzie is just a little ruined, but enough to be shunned in Meryton.
Years go by and Darcy still acts like a brat. But things are coming to a head. Darcy needs to marry so Georgina can come out with Darcy having this legal document embarrassing his whole family.
A complex story of lots of people needing to marry and Darcy is complicating thingd. Darcy SLOWLY begins to change himself by listening to friends and relatives but it’s a long road. Being a severe introvert, a stubborn Darcy and an arrogant young man makes Darcy’s best social skill being able to insult everyone around him.
There is a HEA but really the odds of it happening were 1 out of 100.
Good story. A tad boring just before the final ending got going.
July 27, 2023
One naïve choice can and does change the course of one gently-bred girl’s life forcing her to take the long, painful road to lasting happiness and romance. Over the years, Amy D’Orazio has dazzled me with her intriguing story setups, plot twists, and colorful characters and A Folly of Youth was no exception.
A Folly of Youth speculates about what would happen if a couple met in London when they were young and immature fresh off some youthful mistakes. Then a little later, more mistakes out of misunderstanding and frustration when they encounter once again in Hertfordshire. But, then a parting for a longer period of time to grow in life experience and a little polish. To see something of the world and understand a bit more so the final meeting in Bath they see each other with new eyes though it takes a few encounters before old prejudices can be set aside and they slowly go from friends to more. Elizabeth was the more injured party as young women often were when at the mercy of selfish and heedless parents and societal view of a woman’s reputation compared to a man’s.
There was drama, but it was organic in keeping with their situations. To balance the drama, there is a secondary romance that was sparkling and light involving Darcy’s cousin, Lord Saye and Elizabeth’s friend, Miss Goddard. I enjoyed Darcy and Elizabeth’s hard fought slow burn romance juxtaposed with Saye’s hilarious dialogue and his romp of a romance. Darcy’s antics once he started setting Elizabeth up with eligible suitors and then not liking them was amusing, but I liked him see what a prize woman he was missing out on and coming to realize it almost too late and by then, Elizabeth had pretty much lost all patience with his pride and blindness so she was getting ready to settle. Great tension and a riveting climax as a result.
All in all, I closed this book on a sigh of satisfaction for a deeply good romance and fabulous historical setting and cast of characters and their stories around the main couple. This is based on Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice, but the readers unfamiliar with it can pick this up as a wholly original, standalone sweet historical romance and dive right in- which I recommend you do.
I rec'd a print copy via Quills and Quartos to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at Books of My Heart on July 26th.
A Folly of Youth speculates about what would happen if a couple met in London when they were young and immature fresh off some youthful mistakes. Then a little later, more mistakes out of misunderstanding and frustration when they encounter once again in Hertfordshire. But, then a parting for a longer period of time to grow in life experience and a little polish. To see something of the world and understand a bit more so the final meeting in Bath they see each other with new eyes though it takes a few encounters before old prejudices can be set aside and they slowly go from friends to more. Elizabeth was the more injured party as young women often were when at the mercy of selfish and heedless parents and societal view of a woman’s reputation compared to a man’s.
There was drama, but it was organic in keeping with their situations. To balance the drama, there is a secondary romance that was sparkling and light involving Darcy’s cousin, Lord Saye and Elizabeth’s friend, Miss Goddard. I enjoyed Darcy and Elizabeth’s hard fought slow burn romance juxtaposed with Saye’s hilarious dialogue and his romp of a romance. Darcy’s antics once he started setting Elizabeth up with eligible suitors and then not liking them was amusing, but I liked him see what a prize woman he was missing out on and coming to realize it almost too late and by then, Elizabeth had pretty much lost all patience with his pride and blindness so she was getting ready to settle. Great tension and a riveting climax as a result.
All in all, I closed this book on a sigh of satisfaction for a deeply good romance and fabulous historical setting and cast of characters and their stories around the main couple. This is based on Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice, but the readers unfamiliar with it can pick this up as a wholly original, standalone sweet historical romance and dive right in- which I recommend you do.
I rec'd a print copy via Quills and Quartos to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at Books of My Heart on July 26th.
May 12, 2023
3.5 stars
Some of Ms D’Orazio’s books, such as The Best Part of Love and A Lady’s Reputation, I reread frequently. Then there are others, like this, which although technically proficient, fail to draw me in. Saye and his box of bits of muslin were golden, of course, but the story’s main trope (having to marry Lizzy off to someone else) doesn’t stand out from the half dozen or dozen that I’ve already read.
I must give props for the reappearance, albeit offstage, of Gertie.
Some of Ms D’Orazio’s books, such as The Best Part of Love and A Lady’s Reputation, I reread frequently. Then there are others, like this, which although technically proficient, fail to draw me in. Saye and his box of bits of muslin were golden, of course, but the story’s main trope (having to marry Lizzy off to someone else) doesn’t stand out from the half dozen or dozen that I’ve already read.
I must give props for the reappearance, albeit offstage, of Gertie.
March 13, 2024
Unfortunately this work by Amy D'Orazio only gets 3,5 Stars from me. In my opinion it wasn't her best one simply because of several factors.
The book starts with a 17 year old Elizabeth being in London, visiting the Gardiners. And as it happens, she one day finds herself at a cyprian ball. Darcy thought he would save Elizabeth from all those men who are hitting on her by kissing her on the dance floor and that's when her uncle marches in. ODC's fate is sealed with kind of a contract afterwards because Darcy is dead set on not marrying her. Much later they become friends in the process of finding our heroine a husband.
So, my problems, it is stated at the beginning that Elizabeth was 17 (And 3 years without contact like stated few times) but in the middle of the novel it suddenly said she was 16 and 4 years without contact. I wondered how old she really was?
Second, I grew more and more frustrated with this Elizabeth. She was so 'meek' and only feisty around Darcy. Around this other love interest it seemed as if she had no opinion of her own, she was like Jane Bennet around this other guy.
Third, Jane Bennet (or rather Jane Bingley) why wouldn't you want to listen to your sister when she needed you? No, you keep on rattling about engagement and gowns even though Elizabeth's countenance showed clearly she wasn't ready. Definitely preferred Miss Bingley over Jane. She was a pleasant surprise.
Fourth, it just took them too long for the HEA and when they finally reached an understanding it felt rushed.
What I liked:
Lord Saye! And he even has a dog. YAY
Bingley has a backbone. You read right. A backbone and it made him more interesting.
I must say I kinda like almost every original character in this. Except E's love interest but otherwise they weren't that bad.
Oh, and Miss Darcy, such a sweet girl. LOVE HER!
Listened to the audiobook, and like with every book, Elizabeth Grace did a wonderful job! I simply love her and she's probably one of my favorites.
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The book starts with a 17 year old Elizabeth being in London, visiting the Gardiners. And as it happens, she one day finds herself at a cyprian ball. Darcy thought he would save Elizabeth from all those men who are hitting on her by kissing her on the dance floor and that's when her uncle marches in. ODC's fate is sealed with kind of a contract afterwards because Darcy is dead set on not marrying her. Much later they become friends in the process of finding our heroine a husband.
So, my problems, it is stated at the beginning that Elizabeth was 17 (And 3 years without contact like stated few times) but in the middle of the novel it suddenly said she was 16 and 4 years without contact. I wondered how old she really was?
Second, I grew more and more frustrated with this Elizabeth. She was so 'meek' and only feisty around Darcy. Around this other love interest it seemed as if she had no opinion of her own, she was like Jane Bennet around this other guy.
Third, Jane Bennet (or rather Jane Bingley) why wouldn't you want to listen to your sister when she needed you? No, you keep on rattling about engagement and gowns even though Elizabeth's countenance showed clearly she wasn't ready. Definitely preferred Miss Bingley over Jane. She was a pleasant surprise.
Fourth, it just took them too long for the HEA and when they finally reached an understanding it felt rushed.
What I liked:
Lord Saye! And he even has a dog. YAY
Bingley has a backbone. You read right. A backbone and it made him more interesting.
I must say I kinda like almost every original character in this. Except E's love interest but otherwise they weren't that bad.
Oh, and Miss Darcy, such a sweet girl. LOVE HER!
Listened to the audiobook, and like with every book, Elizabeth Grace did a wonderful job! I simply love her and she's probably one of my favorites.
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April 17, 2023
A great story with an incredible twist I how ODC meet...wonderful Lord Saye makes a histerical combat and funny as ever. Who knew Darcy playing matchmaker..was soo ssoo well let's says he's not good at it for his good...due to an incident that caused both to be promised to each other or face Ruination of breech a promise suit ...loved the twist ...well done funny sweet and also heartbreaking but as always A HAPPY EVER AFTER Loved it!!
November 11, 2023
Review also posted on my blog
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On a visit to her Uncle Gardner in London, the 16 year old Elizabeth Bennet and a friend are excited to be invited to a ball. They fib to her uncle so that they can attend.
It does not strike them as odd that the invitation is from a stranger in Hyde Park!
The ball is being held for mistresses to find new protectors, but Elizabeth is too naive to realise.
She rapidly finds herself the target of some unwanted attention.
Fitzwilliam Darcy followed his erstwhile friend, George Wickham to the ball.
He rapidly recognises what is going on and is preparing to leave when he spots Elizabeth.
The only way to deflect unwanted attention is to “claim” her for himself.
A dance and a thorough kiss do the job.
It is at this point that an apoplectic Mr Gardner rushes in to rescue Elizabeth.
Darcy is accused of compromise but refuses to marry Elizabeth. After a lot of wrangling it seems they are betrothed – sort of!
Over several years, Darcy refuses to marry Elizabeth but Mr Bennet won’t release him, even with financial compensation. (Accepting money is too close to admitting that Elizabeth was Darcy’s mistress).
As Elizabeth approaches her majority, Darcy asks Elizabeth her opinion.
She doesn’t want him, but her father persists.
Darcy and Elizabeth agree that if he can find her a decent suitor among his friends, that would be an acceptable alternative.
Elizabeth travels to Bath with her married sister Jane. Darcy is there with several family members.
Darcy spends time with Elizabeth introducing possible suitors. He discovers that he likes her and had no idea that since her mistake in London, her family have secluded her to protect the Bennet name.
While there are sad elements to the story, there are delightful episodes, particularly the irrepressible Lord Saye and his trusty Pomeranian, Florizel.
A HEA is of course guaranteed, but before that there is a shocking denouement.
Amy D'Orazio pulls yet another stunning rabbit out of the hat!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
On a visit to her Uncle Gardner in London, the 16 year old Elizabeth Bennet and a friend are excited to be invited to a ball. They fib to her uncle so that they can attend.
It does not strike them as odd that the invitation is from a stranger in Hyde Park!
The ball is being held for mistresses to find new protectors, but Elizabeth is too naive to realise.
She rapidly finds herself the target of some unwanted attention.
Fitzwilliam Darcy followed his erstwhile friend, George Wickham to the ball.
He rapidly recognises what is going on and is preparing to leave when he spots Elizabeth.
The only way to deflect unwanted attention is to “claim” her for himself.
A dance and a thorough kiss do the job.
It is at this point that an apoplectic Mr Gardner rushes in to rescue Elizabeth.
Darcy is accused of compromise but refuses to marry Elizabeth. After a lot of wrangling it seems they are betrothed – sort of!
Over several years, Darcy refuses to marry Elizabeth but Mr Bennet won’t release him, even with financial compensation. (Accepting money is too close to admitting that Elizabeth was Darcy’s mistress).
As Elizabeth approaches her majority, Darcy asks Elizabeth her opinion.
She doesn’t want him, but her father persists.
Darcy and Elizabeth agree that if he can find her a decent suitor among his friends, that would be an acceptable alternative.
Elizabeth travels to Bath with her married sister Jane. Darcy is there with several family members.
Darcy spends time with Elizabeth introducing possible suitors. He discovers that he likes her and had no idea that since her mistake in London, her family have secluded her to protect the Bennet name.
While there are sad elements to the story, there are delightful episodes, particularly the irrepressible Lord Saye and his trusty Pomeranian, Florizel.
A HEA is of course guaranteed, but before that there is a shocking denouement.
Amy D'Orazio pulls yet another stunning rabbit out of the hat!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 3, 2024
Status: Read October 29-November 2, 2024 via audible edition
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (4.5)
My Library Notes:
A Folly of Youth
by Amy D'Orazio, Elizabeth Grace (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 12 pages
Published October 2, 2023 by Quills & Quartos Publishing (first published April 10, 2023)
ASIN: B0CK3KPTGM
My own folly had endangered me, my preservation I owe to the kindness, the integrity of another....
In 1808, Elizabeth Bennet is young, curious, and in possession of an invitation to a London party which she ought not to attend. Unable to resist the temptation, Elizabeth indulges her wish to see a party of the beau monde and finds herself in a dangerous situation. She is saved from a desperate fate by Mr. Darcy of Pemberley, but relief is short-lived. Mr. Gardiner arrives and demands satisfaction on behalf of his young niece’s honor.
Bound for three years—with no intent to marry on either side—Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth both resolve to do as they must to end their unwanted almost-betrothal. Mr. Bennet, however, refuses to allow it, fearing that Elizabeth’s character will bear a permanent stain that no amount of time or money could erase. Together, Darcy and Lizzy contrive a plan to overcome her father’s reluctance: Darcy will find her someone else to marry, thus relieving himself of the obligation.
The folly of their youth, it seems, might be set to rights after all, until feelings arise which complicate the scheme. But will they realize their true attachment before it’s too late?
Listening Length: 11 hours and 9 minutes
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (4.5)
My Library Notes:
A Folly of Youth
by Amy D'Orazio, Elizabeth Grace (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 12 pages
Published October 2, 2023 by Quills & Quartos Publishing (first published April 10, 2023)
ASIN: B0CK3KPTGM
My own folly had endangered me, my preservation I owe to the kindness, the integrity of another....
In 1808, Elizabeth Bennet is young, curious, and in possession of an invitation to a London party which she ought not to attend. Unable to resist the temptation, Elizabeth indulges her wish to see a party of the beau monde and finds herself in a dangerous situation. She is saved from a desperate fate by Mr. Darcy of Pemberley, but relief is short-lived. Mr. Gardiner arrives and demands satisfaction on behalf of his young niece’s honor.
Bound for three years—with no intent to marry on either side—Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth both resolve to do as they must to end their unwanted almost-betrothal. Mr. Bennet, however, refuses to allow it, fearing that Elizabeth’s character will bear a permanent stain that no amount of time or money could erase. Together, Darcy and Lizzy contrive a plan to overcome her father’s reluctance: Darcy will find her someone else to marry, thus relieving himself of the obligation.
The folly of their youth, it seems, might be set to rights after all, until feelings arise which complicate the scheme. But will they realize their true attachment before it’s too late?
Listening Length: 11 hours and 9 minutes
June 28, 2023
D’Orazio at her best—again.
When Darcy rescues a young Elizabeth Bennet from the scandalous disaster she unwittingly wandered into, he lands himself in a scandal of a different sort. Elizabeth’s uncle demands a ‘conference’ and the following day he and Mr Bennet demand Darcy’s honor to wed Elizabeth. Betrothed or taken to court. Years pass and Mr Bennet won’t release Darcy from the contract.
While the betrothal hangs over Darcy, tying his hands in the search for a wife from his own station the situation for Elizabeth is horrible. Rumors of ruination are rampant keeping her in a socially isolated prison.
Bingley weds Jane Bennet, nearly without Darcy’s knowledge until the last moment (the usual arrogant advice to give up the ‘scheming Bennet girl’) Wow Bingley!! Bingley kicks a__, and kicks Darcy out of Netherfield. But takes Jane to Bath, upon Darcy’s suggestion, and brings Elizabeth along to find another suitor, other than Darcy.
What happens in Bath has all of D’Orazio’s brilliantly original story telling. The Boy’s Club of the three Fitzwilliam cousins has hilarity as they twit and goad each other’s attempts at finding love. I am just as invested in having Saye find and woo his love Lily in all his outrageousness again and again, as I am Darcy and Elizabeth finding their HEA. The Girl’s Club is not to be messed with and not to be missed.
The road ODC traveled to reach their HEA was heartbreaking, and heart-in-the-throat drama right up to the end followed by such sweetness in the proposal scene. I was silently crying for joy. And our dear author wrung out every emotion in the last chapter, I was left satisfied yet left pining for more of her work, like now, please.
Highly recommend.
When Darcy rescues a young Elizabeth Bennet from the scandalous disaster she unwittingly wandered into, he lands himself in a scandal of a different sort. Elizabeth’s uncle demands a ‘conference’ and the following day he and Mr Bennet demand Darcy’s honor to wed Elizabeth. Betrothed or taken to court. Years pass and Mr Bennet won’t release Darcy from the contract.
While the betrothal hangs over Darcy, tying his hands in the search for a wife from his own station the situation for Elizabeth is horrible. Rumors of ruination are rampant keeping her in a socially isolated prison.
Bingley weds Jane Bennet, nearly without Darcy’s knowledge until the last moment (the usual arrogant advice to give up the ‘scheming Bennet girl’) Wow Bingley!! Bingley kicks a__, and kicks Darcy out of Netherfield. But takes Jane to Bath, upon Darcy’s suggestion, and brings Elizabeth along to find another suitor, other than Darcy.
What happens in Bath has all of D’Orazio’s brilliantly original story telling. The Boy’s Club of the three Fitzwilliam cousins has hilarity as they twit and goad each other’s attempts at finding love. I am just as invested in having Saye find and woo his love Lily in all his outrageousness again and again, as I am Darcy and Elizabeth finding their HEA. The Girl’s Club is not to be messed with and not to be missed.
The road ODC traveled to reach their HEA was heartbreaking, and heart-in-the-throat drama right up to the end followed by such sweetness in the proposal scene. I was silently crying for joy. And our dear author wrung out every emotion in the last chapter, I was left satisfied yet left pining for more of her work, like now, please.
Highly recommend.
June 5, 2024
2024: 3 stars. I initially DNF’d this book but I tried again because I’ve come to like Amy d’Orazio’s books. I still don’t like the beginning and Im still not a fan of the fact the characters behave like modern people, and the comedy moments, especially with Saye. I liked the plot regardless and that’s why I read this book until the end, although I skipped some sections.
2023: DNF because the way the story was told was too modern for me. And the beginning… the compromising situation… well, it was so little plausible that it put me off almost immediately.
Still, there’s something interesting in this author, and I’m not giving up.
Some other readers might enjoy this book more than I did…
2023: DNF because the way the story was told was too modern for me. And the beginning… the compromising situation… well, it was so little plausible that it put me off almost immediately.
Still, there’s something interesting in this author, and I’m not giving up.
Some other readers might enjoy this book more than I did…
June 11, 2024
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In A Folly of Youth Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth meet in London when she is only 16 years old, but the circumstances they meet are not ideal. They both attend a scandalous ball in which Mr. Darcy ends up compromising Elizabeth in order to save her from a worst situation. However, as they had just met, none of them wishes to marry the other, so they enter a strange type of engagement with none of them wishing it, but both being forced to accept it.
They spend the following years without even seeing each other and the narrative starts many years later when Mr. Darcy, desiring to marry a woman of his choice, decides to join forces with Elizabeth to escape their forced engagement.
There were many aspects I loved in this book, especially the writing, which was exquisite, but I also want to stand out Elizabeth’s maturity and her character growth in this novel. I don’t like books in which Elizabeth is flawless, but I don’t like to see her as a completely irrational person moved by her hate for Mr. Darcy either. In A Folly of Youth we have the perfect balance in her characters personality, Elizabeth has learned from her past mistakes and has grown to be an intelligent, caring, and intuitive person who has her insecurities and fears but is observant, kind and able to can make mature analysis of situations and people’s behaviors.
Although the treatment Elizabeth receives from her family throughout the years seemed a bit excessive, it didn’t bother me because the book is truly centered on Elizabeth and Darcy’s relationship, and the manner through each of them coped with the situation they were in. It is clearly a character driven book and I loved it’s execution.
As always with Amy D’Orazio’s books a subplot revolves around Lord Saye, in this case, in his personal search for a wife, and even though I always love this original character, in this book I would have preferred to have the attention fully focused on Darcy and Elizabeth because their relationship was very special and the plot strong enough to flourish without additional plots.
One of the aspects I mostly loved in this book was the romantic journey that Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth took together. They start out as strangers with a common goal but also a common dislike of each other because of the situation they found themselves in, but as they work together towards their goal they start talking and sharing their souls to one another. They start realizing how the entire situation was difficult for each one of them, and that they are, in fact, perfect for each other. I loved seeing these characters go from dislike to mutual regard, and finally a passionate love. Every stage of their relationship appeared authentic and natural without cliches, and I loved it.
Summing up, A Folly of Youth is a beautifully written romance in which the main characters go trough a difficult path of self-discovery that leads them into their happily ever after together. It is character driven and centered in the path the characters need to take to discover their love for one another. I recommend it to all readers who love great romances.
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In A Folly of Youth Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth meet in London when she is only 16 years old, but the circumstances they meet are not ideal. They both attend a scandalous ball in which Mr. Darcy ends up compromising Elizabeth in order to save her from a worst situation. However, as they had just met, none of them wishes to marry the other, so they enter a strange type of engagement with none of them wishing it, but both being forced to accept it.
They spend the following years without even seeing each other and the narrative starts many years later when Mr. Darcy, desiring to marry a woman of his choice, decides to join forces with Elizabeth to escape their forced engagement.
There were many aspects I loved in this book, especially the writing, which was exquisite, but I also want to stand out Elizabeth’s maturity and her character growth in this novel. I don’t like books in which Elizabeth is flawless, but I don’t like to see her as a completely irrational person moved by her hate for Mr. Darcy either. In A Folly of Youth we have the perfect balance in her characters personality, Elizabeth has learned from her past mistakes and has grown to be an intelligent, caring, and intuitive person who has her insecurities and fears but is observant, kind and able to can make mature analysis of situations and people’s behaviors.
Although the treatment Elizabeth receives from her family throughout the years seemed a bit excessive, it didn’t bother me because the book is truly centered on Elizabeth and Darcy’s relationship, and the manner through each of them coped with the situation they were in. It is clearly a character driven book and I loved it’s execution.
As always with Amy D’Orazio’s books a subplot revolves around Lord Saye, in this case, in his personal search for a wife, and even though I always love this original character, in this book I would have preferred to have the attention fully focused on Darcy and Elizabeth because their relationship was very special and the plot strong enough to flourish without additional plots.
One of the aspects I mostly loved in this book was the romantic journey that Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth took together. They start out as strangers with a common goal but also a common dislike of each other because of the situation they found themselves in, but as they work together towards their goal they start talking and sharing their souls to one another. They start realizing how the entire situation was difficult for each one of them, and that they are, in fact, perfect for each other. I loved seeing these characters go from dislike to mutual regard, and finally a passionate love. Every stage of their relationship appeared authentic and natural without cliches, and I loved it.
Summing up, A Folly of Youth is a beautifully written romance in which the main characters go trough a difficult path of self-discovery that leads them into their happily ever after together. It is character driven and centered in the path the characters need to take to discover their love for one another. I recommend it to all readers who love great romances.
November 16, 2023
“Youth offers the promise of happiness, but life offers the realities of grief.” –Nicholas Sparks, The Rescue
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen, bawdy humor, bordering on crude, mild cursing, especially when we have Lord Saye and Richard in the scene. Just saying. Mild violence in one scene that might be a trigger for some.
>>Angst Level: slight throughout the book until the last when it ramped up to medium. I lost my breath there for a minute. Hopefully, I didn’t sustain any brain damage. Thanks, Amy.
>>Source: Own: I purchased this and gladly leave a review of my thoughts and opinions.
>>Trope: The prologue is when both Darcy and Elizabeth are younger. The thread ‘folly of youth’ is sprinkled throughout this story. You have to watch for it but it was brilliant as it made a point.
“You are only young once, but you can stay immature indefinitely.” –Ogden Nash
Darcy and Elizabeth met when they were in the wrong place at the wrong time. Or, perhaps, that was the right place at the right time. Over the next five years, we have their story and their dilemma. Sprinkled throughout the angst we have the author’s favorite character offering comedic relief. Lord Saye, heir to the Matlock earldom and elder brother of Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, was a scream. When Lord Saye waltzed into a scene, you knew something outrageous was about to happen. I love this guy. I CNPID. I had to see what would happen next. Highly recommend.
“Youth ends when egotism does; maturity begins when one lives for others.” –Hermann Hesse, Gertrude
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen, bawdy humor, bordering on crude, mild cursing, especially when we have Lord Saye and Richard in the scene. Just saying. Mild violence in one scene that might be a trigger for some.
>>Angst Level: slight throughout the book until the last when it ramped up to medium. I lost my breath there for a minute. Hopefully, I didn’t sustain any brain damage. Thanks, Amy.
>>Source: Own: I purchased this and gladly leave a review of my thoughts and opinions.
>>Trope: The prologue is when both Darcy and Elizabeth are younger. The thread ‘folly of youth’ is sprinkled throughout this story. You have to watch for it but it was brilliant as it made a point.
“You are only young once, but you can stay immature indefinitely.” –Ogden Nash
Darcy and Elizabeth met when they were in the wrong place at the wrong time. Or, perhaps, that was the right place at the right time. Over the next five years, we have their story and their dilemma. Sprinkled throughout the angst we have the author’s favorite character offering comedic relief. Lord Saye, heir to the Matlock earldom and elder brother of Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, was a scream. When Lord Saye waltzed into a scene, you knew something outrageous was about to happen. I love this guy. I CNPID. I had to see what would happen next. Highly recommend.
“Youth ends when egotism does; maturity begins when one lives for others.” –Hermann Hesse, Gertrude
May 14, 2023
Wonderful
This author is an automatic purchase for me. Always well constructed stories with a lot of heart, and clever and humorous banter. Any story which includes Lord Saye is fine by me. His character is always such a lovable fribble that, while you sometimes want to shake him, you end up smiling at his antics. When Elizabeth is sixteen and staying with aunt and uncle Gardiner in London, she's persuaded to attend a ball which, in her youthful ignorance, she doesn't realize is a scandalous party where the wealthy aristocrats go to find their next mistress or sexual conquest. Darcy is there against his will with Wickham, he sees Elizabeth is about to get into trouble, and he intervenes. Unfortunately, no good deed goes unpunished, and he inadvertently compromises her, which leads to years of a standoff between Darcy and Mr Bennett.
The story takes place in Bath, and the gist of it is that Darcy tries to find Elizabeth a husband so that he'll be free to pursue his own high born wife. As time goes on, they each begin to admire the other, and it complicates matters. While this is happening, there's a side plot involving Lord Saye and his own quest to find a wife, which is a lot of fun. Georgiana is there and figures strongly into the plot, which is nice.
I deducted a star for a couple of reasons. One is for the pall cast over the whole situation by Elizabeth's scandal and her treatment at the hands of her own family. Everyone just seems to want to be rid of responsibility for her, and it makes for a melancholy tone. The other reason is disappointment in the Gardiners. I always love aunt and uncle Gardiner, as they're much better guardians than Elizabeth's own parents. How, then, did she end up at this scandalous party, with no apparent chaperone except the sleeping companion of the other girl? The Gardiners would never have allowed this, would they? Disappointed!
However, the book is well written and well edited. The romance is lovely, and the book is entertaining. I recommend it highly.
This author is an automatic purchase for me. Always well constructed stories with a lot of heart, and clever and humorous banter. Any story which includes Lord Saye is fine by me. His character is always such a lovable fribble that, while you sometimes want to shake him, you end up smiling at his antics. When Elizabeth is sixteen and staying with aunt and uncle Gardiner in London, she's persuaded to attend a ball which, in her youthful ignorance, she doesn't realize is a scandalous party where the wealthy aristocrats go to find their next mistress or sexual conquest. Darcy is there against his will with Wickham, he sees Elizabeth is about to get into trouble, and he intervenes. Unfortunately, no good deed goes unpunished, and he inadvertently compromises her, which leads to years of a standoff between Darcy and Mr Bennett.
The story takes place in Bath, and the gist of it is that Darcy tries to find Elizabeth a husband so that he'll be free to pursue his own high born wife. As time goes on, they each begin to admire the other, and it complicates matters. While this is happening, there's a side plot involving Lord Saye and his own quest to find a wife, which is a lot of fun. Georgiana is there and figures strongly into the plot, which is nice.
I deducted a star for a couple of reasons. One is for the pall cast over the whole situation by Elizabeth's scandal and her treatment at the hands of her own family. Everyone just seems to want to be rid of responsibility for her, and it makes for a melancholy tone. The other reason is disappointment in the Gardiners. I always love aunt and uncle Gardiner, as they're much better guardians than Elizabeth's own parents. How, then, did she end up at this scandalous party, with no apparent chaperone except the sleeping companion of the other girl? The Gardiners would never have allowed this, would they? Disappointed!
However, the book is well written and well edited. The romance is lovely, and the book is entertaining. I recommend it highly.
May 16, 2023
3.5 rounded up - this is a very different take on P&P. Darcy compromises Lizzy and refuses to marry her, while her family threatens to sue him if he refuses.
The set-up probably leaves a bit to be desired. By it’s very nature, things are bad between ODC and they really have a basis for strongly disliking each other. I didn’t know if I would get through the book as the first 1/3 is tough and Darcy is a real jerk.
I enjoyed the romance when they finally came around, but I do wish there had been a bit more in the way of romance toward the end. Things wrapped up quickly without much time spent on the engagement or marriage. That’s not unusual, but I sort of wanted a better bow on things.
I think Darcy is a bit off in this variation. In canon he is very focused on duty and propriety, so his actions in the beginning seems uncharacteristic. I also felt the dialogue was too modern. There is some very frank talk from single ladies about sex and Darcy’s cousins speak almost as if it were modern day in places. This may well be deliberate choices by the author, but it’s not my preference. Stafford and his suit were also a bit off in tone and characterization IMO, but that was mostly a minor thing.
The set-up probably leaves a bit to be desired. By it’s very nature, things are bad between ODC and they really have a basis for strongly disliking each other. I didn’t know if I would get through the book as the first 1/3 is tough and Darcy is a real jerk.
I enjoyed the romance when they finally came around, but I do wish there had been a bit more in the way of romance toward the end. Things wrapped up quickly without much time spent on the engagement or marriage. That’s not unusual, but I sort of wanted a better bow on things.
I think Darcy is a bit off in this variation. In canon he is very focused on duty and propriety, so his actions in the beginning seems uncharacteristic. I also felt the dialogue was too modern. There is some very frank talk from single ladies about sex and Darcy’s cousins speak almost as if it were modern day in places. This may well be deliberate choices by the author, but it’s not my preference. Stafford and his suit were also a bit off in tone and characterization IMO, but that was mostly a minor thing.
May 14, 2023
As I had expected, this is another captivating story from Ms. D'Orazio. It started when Mr. Darcy met a lost and bewildered 17 y/o Lizzy in a scandalous ball. Things happened that tied the 2 together. Of course, Mr Darcy was tactless and stubborn and I pitied Lizzy for what she had to go through.Then they concocted a plan to escape their predicament.
This story was filled with pitiful,touching, anger-inspiring, funny and heart-warming moments. Couldn't put the book down as I keep trying to guess what will happen on the next page, what will happen to break their connection and when it was finally near the end, what could Mr. Darcy or what will happen. I was appreciative that Ms. Amy did not use traditional routes on how to end the rivalry, to achieve a happy ending for our couple. It was a memorable ending.
Highly recommend reading this P & P variation.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This story was filled with pitiful,touching, anger-inspiring, funny and heart-warming moments. Couldn't put the book down as I keep trying to guess what will happen on the next page, what will happen to break their connection and when it was finally near the end, what could Mr. Darcy or what will happen. I was appreciative that Ms. Amy did not use traditional routes on how to end the rivalry, to achieve a happy ending for our couple. It was a memorable ending.
Highly recommend reading this P & P variation.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 14, 2023
Caught in a web of their own actions, Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy fight against the ties that bind them. That is until they determine they might not be so bad. This was a great story and told beautifully.
February 7, 2025
I rated this 5 stars the first time I read it, and it still stands the second time. I love the slow burn romance between E&D. The only thing I wish is for more moments between E&D once engaged/married. But, nevertheless, the HEA it is tied up nicely.
May 10, 2023
I expected this book would be good and it was. I think it might be one of my favorites. Definitely worth way over 5 stars.
March 11, 2024
Damn you Amy, I was gonna savor this and read it over a few days but noooooo I couldn’t put it down. Lost sleep and everything.
A KU borrow turned into a click to purchase at the end.
December 28, 2023
What If Rescuing An Unknown and Unprotected Woman Strips Mr. Darcy of his Freedom?
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Years ago, Darcy and Elizabeth foolishly and naively found themselves at a party with a scandalous purpose, and were forced into an engagement neither wants. Now with Elizabeth coming of age and Mr. Darcy desiring to pursue marriage to a woman of his choosing, they both work towards extracting themselves from an unwanted and insupportable forced future together…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Both Bound by Folly: Elizabeth is too curious for her own good, and Mr. Darcy unquestionably followed George Wickham’s lead. Mistakes and misunderstandings on both sides, and now there is a price to pay. And pay it they do – Elizabeth is forced to be a recluse in her hometown and Mr. Darcy’s freedom is taken away – unless he wants to be sued! What a remarkably unique premise! I love how both Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are both at fault. And that their mistakes cost them both in similar manners.
- Mutually Disinterested and Disinclined: Furious to be forced together and each resenting the other for their predicament, both Darcy and Elizabeth fully dislike each for a large portion of this story. They are at the polar opposite of where they need to be (well…where we want them to be). So much so that Mr. Darcy is interested in pursuing another woman…! And Elizabeth has abandoned her romantic notions and is only seeking a marriage of respectability. This felt like such an interesting twist. I was riveted to see how their relationship could develop with such a disastrous beginning.
- A Circuitous and Cockeyed Journey: Speaking of… Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s romantic journey together was one of my favorite elements in this story. It had such a unique progression – it even went backwards and in circles. I appreciated how and why Darcy and Elizabeth started to think better of each other and how esteem, then admiration, and eventually ardent love fully blossomed for each. Every phase of their relationship felt authentic and natural. I enjoyed their matchmaking/alliance phase, when they confided and took comfort together, and how Darcy grew protective and Elizabeth grew compassionate. And lastly, I loved how both belatedly became aware of their feelings and the unexpected encouragement they received from others.
- New Friends and New Suitors: A lovely host of new characters to meet in this tale – Elizabeth makes friends with some progressive and independent women, and Mr. Darcy calls upon some slighter acquaintances to see if they can help him with his predicament. All characters were dynamic, refreshing, and interesting, and they capably filled any voids readers might feel from some absent characters. I loved seeing their interactions and impact on the story line.
- Saye (and Florizel 🐾): Of course! This will always be on my list, Lord Saye’s part in any story will always be loved and appreciated. In addition to his usual irreverence, immodesty, and unfiltered remarks – we see Saye falling love! This was such an excellent secondary subplot for this story. His approach and antics with pursuing a bride are equal parts hilarious and heartwarming. I loved how he expressed his feelings and how he unknowingly imparted some insight to his cousin. And I absolutely adored seeing glimpses of his relationship with Florizel!
WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER:
- A Skosh More: With the long, emotional, and circuitous journey that Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy experienced, I wouldn’t have minded some more page time with them when they finally get ‘there.’ Maybe just a chapter or two more with some swoony bits
FINAL THOUGHTS:
🤭 A diverting folly that is sure to delight readers who enjoy unpredictable and unexpected twists, well-drawn characters with depth, and multi-layered and gradually-developed relationships.
🎩 What happens when Mr. Darcy tries his hand at matchmaking? Does he do it very ill? Does every feeling revolt?
💞 Beware, Lord Saye doesn’t just steal scenes in this variation, he also steals hearts!
Austenesque Reviews
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Years ago, Darcy and Elizabeth foolishly and naively found themselves at a party with a scandalous purpose, and were forced into an engagement neither wants. Now with Elizabeth coming of age and Mr. Darcy desiring to pursue marriage to a woman of his choosing, they both work towards extracting themselves from an unwanted and insupportable forced future together…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Both Bound by Folly: Elizabeth is too curious for her own good, and Mr. Darcy unquestionably followed George Wickham’s lead. Mistakes and misunderstandings on both sides, and now there is a price to pay. And pay it they do – Elizabeth is forced to be a recluse in her hometown and Mr. Darcy’s freedom is taken away – unless he wants to be sued! What a remarkably unique premise! I love how both Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are both at fault. And that their mistakes cost them both in similar manners.
- Mutually Disinterested and Disinclined: Furious to be forced together and each resenting the other for their predicament, both Darcy and Elizabeth fully dislike each for a large portion of this story. They are at the polar opposite of where they need to be (well…where we want them to be). So much so that Mr. Darcy is interested in pursuing another woman…! And Elizabeth has abandoned her romantic notions and is only seeking a marriage of respectability. This felt like such an interesting twist. I was riveted to see how their relationship could develop with such a disastrous beginning.
- A Circuitous and Cockeyed Journey: Speaking of… Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s romantic journey together was one of my favorite elements in this story. It had such a unique progression – it even went backwards and in circles. I appreciated how and why Darcy and Elizabeth started to think better of each other and how esteem, then admiration, and eventually ardent love fully blossomed for each. Every phase of their relationship felt authentic and natural. I enjoyed their matchmaking/alliance phase, when they confided and took comfort together, and how Darcy grew protective and Elizabeth grew compassionate. And lastly, I loved how both belatedly became aware of their feelings and the unexpected encouragement they received from others.
- New Friends and New Suitors: A lovely host of new characters to meet in this tale – Elizabeth makes friends with some progressive and independent women, and Mr. Darcy calls upon some slighter acquaintances to see if they can help him with his predicament. All characters were dynamic, refreshing, and interesting, and they capably filled any voids readers might feel from some absent characters. I loved seeing their interactions and impact on the story line.
- Saye (and Florizel 🐾): Of course! This will always be on my list, Lord Saye’s part in any story will always be loved and appreciated. In addition to his usual irreverence, immodesty, and unfiltered remarks – we see Saye falling love! This was such an excellent secondary subplot for this story. His approach and antics with pursuing a bride are equal parts hilarious and heartwarming. I loved how he expressed his feelings and how he unknowingly imparted some insight to his cousin. And I absolutely adored seeing glimpses of his relationship with Florizel!
WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER:
- A Skosh More: With the long, emotional, and circuitous journey that Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy experienced, I wouldn’t have minded some more page time with them when they finally get ‘there.’ Maybe just a chapter or two more with some swoony bits
FINAL THOUGHTS:
🤭 A diverting folly that is sure to delight readers who enjoy unpredictable and unexpected twists, well-drawn characters with depth, and multi-layered and gradually-developed relationships.
🎩 What happens when Mr. Darcy tries his hand at matchmaking? Does he do it very ill? Does every feeling revolt?
💞 Beware, Lord Saye doesn’t just steal scenes in this variation, he also steals hearts!
Austenesque Reviews
May 13, 2023
An excellent twist making for an engaging read
A well structured story exploring the long term impact of one bad decision. Elizabeth aged 16 finds herself in a situation she neither planned nor understands, and a much younger Darcy attempts to help but only succeeds in making things even more complex. As a result of their combined follies both Darcy and Elizabeth find themselves in a relationship which neither of them want.
The impact on Elizabeth of this folly has been significant and her life for the subsequent 4 years has been unpleasant. The impact of any whiff of scandal is well described and the effect on Elizabeth is sensitively and sympathetically written.
Darcy is just plain frustrated. He wants to get married to a well-to-do lady of the ton but instead he is stuck in his non-engagement with Elizabeth. He is very angry with Mr Bennet and decides that the best way forward is to find an alternative husband for Elizabeth. This Darcy is not at his best and Elizabeth is not afraid to call him out. As they both let go of their anger and frustration they are better able to understand the position in which each other finds themselves.
It is from this point that friendship grows.
The supporting cast is well written with the Fitzwilliam brothers causing stress for Darcy as well as plenty of amusement and brotherly affection.
This book does not seek to hide the realties of the social disparities between men and women in the early 1800s where behaviours unacceptable for women are lauded and applauded for men. There are some excellent feisty women in this book who seek to stand their ground within these social norms and these 'sisterly' relationships are also well written.
There are a small number of editing misses but these do not impact on the reading experience. A solid 4.5*.
I received an ARC copy for an unbiased review
A well structured story exploring the long term impact of one bad decision. Elizabeth aged 16 finds herself in a situation she neither planned nor understands, and a much younger Darcy attempts to help but only succeeds in making things even more complex. As a result of their combined follies both Darcy and Elizabeth find themselves in a relationship which neither of them want.
The impact on Elizabeth of this folly has been significant and her life for the subsequent 4 years has been unpleasant. The impact of any whiff of scandal is well described and the effect on Elizabeth is sensitively and sympathetically written.
Darcy is just plain frustrated. He wants to get married to a well-to-do lady of the ton but instead he is stuck in his non-engagement with Elizabeth. He is very angry with Mr Bennet and decides that the best way forward is to find an alternative husband for Elizabeth. This Darcy is not at his best and Elizabeth is not afraid to call him out. As they both let go of their anger and frustration they are better able to understand the position in which each other finds themselves.
It is from this point that friendship grows.
The supporting cast is well written with the Fitzwilliam brothers causing stress for Darcy as well as plenty of amusement and brotherly affection.
This book does not seek to hide the realties of the social disparities between men and women in the early 1800s where behaviours unacceptable for women are lauded and applauded for men. There are some excellent feisty women in this book who seek to stand their ground within these social norms and these 'sisterly' relationships are also well written.
There are a small number of editing misses but these do not impact on the reading experience. A solid 4.5*.
I received an ARC copy for an unbiased review
May 10, 2023
A joy to read
Not the usual Lizzy, as we find Elizabeth trying to live down the consequences of a poor decision. Darcy is his usual arrogant, snobbish self but he is enmeshed in a semi-engagement and cannot seem to find a way out. Our dear couple have a lot of twists and turns in their path to true love, accompanied by Darcy's hilarious cousin Saye and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Beautifully written, laugh out loud dialogue and plenty of romantic moments. Completely entertaining!
Not the usual Lizzy, as we find Elizabeth trying to live down the consequences of a poor decision. Darcy is his usual arrogant, snobbish self but he is enmeshed in a semi-engagement and cannot seem to find a way out. Our dear couple have a lot of twists and turns in their path to true love, accompanied by Darcy's hilarious cousin Saye and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Beautifully written, laugh out loud dialogue and plenty of romantic moments. Completely entertaining!
May 22, 2023
This variation on Pride and Prejudice has a lot going for it, with an intriguing premise that differs quite a lot from the original story. I found myself caught up with the characters and their antics, the romance that develops so slowly, and lots of humor as well as serious matters, all coming together to keep up a nice pace for the reader.
I've read lots of books by this author, and I would call her a favorite at this point. Not every story of hers is a hit for me personally, but I always enjoy them and come back for more.
The story spans about 4 years. When Elizabeth Bennet is just 16 and visiting her aunt and uncle in London, she gets caught up in a little adventure. Her aunt's younger sister is staying with them as well, and she is someone young Elizabeth wants to emulate, thinking her fashionable and beautiful. When a suspicious invitation to a ball in Mayfair is handed to Miss Penelope Cartwright in Hyde Park, she sees it as an opportunity to mix with the beau monde. She wants to attend, and for Elizabeth to go with her. Elizabeth is thrown into conflict, because she knows it's probably not proper for them to attend, but she wants to please this young lady she looks up to. Penelope somehow convinces Mr. Gardiner, who is distracted by other matters, to let them go.
The ball turns out to be completely improper, and Elizabeth is only saved from utter ruin by a young Mr. Darcy. But he does so in such a way that causes her uncle and father to consider her compromised, and they demand that Darcy marry her. He refuses, but offers them money instead, which Mr. Bennet refuses. A complicated legal tangle results, which causes problems for Lizzy at home, and also prevents Darcy from marrying anyone else.
The majority of the story is about how this tangled situation resolves. Meanwhile, Darcy at first comes off as a horribly arrogant, snobbish man, even more so than I found him in the original story. I don't want to give too much away, but this is one of the cleverest plots I've read in Jane Austen variations, romantic and at times hilarious, though there are serious events as well. Highly recommended.
I've read lots of books by this author, and I would call her a favorite at this point. Not every story of hers is a hit for me personally, but I always enjoy them and come back for more.
The story spans about 4 years. When Elizabeth Bennet is just 16 and visiting her aunt and uncle in London, she gets caught up in a little adventure. Her aunt's younger sister is staying with them as well, and she is someone young Elizabeth wants to emulate, thinking her fashionable and beautiful. When a suspicious invitation to a ball in Mayfair is handed to Miss Penelope Cartwright in Hyde Park, she sees it as an opportunity to mix with the beau monde. She wants to attend, and for Elizabeth to go with her. Elizabeth is thrown into conflict, because she knows it's probably not proper for them to attend, but she wants to please this young lady she looks up to. Penelope somehow convinces Mr. Gardiner, who is distracted by other matters, to let them go.
The ball turns out to be completely improper, and Elizabeth is only saved from utter ruin by a young Mr. Darcy. But he does so in such a way that causes her uncle and father to consider her compromised, and they demand that Darcy marry her. He refuses, but offers them money instead, which Mr. Bennet refuses. A complicated legal tangle results, which causes problems for Lizzy at home, and also prevents Darcy from marrying anyone else.
The majority of the story is about how this tangled situation resolves. Meanwhile, Darcy at first comes off as a horribly arrogant, snobbish man, even more so than I found him in the original story. I don't want to give too much away, but this is one of the cleverest plots I've read in Jane Austen variations, romantic and at times hilarious, though there are serious events as well. Highly recommended.
January 18, 2024
It was that interest which you seemed to take in my welfare that induced me to love you…
A 4.5 since I do not like this Darcy, and cannot sympathise with him. It is the first time I would like to see Lizzy to end happily with someone else, although the author does provide a turn to make it less a pity at the end of the story.
This is one of another masterpiece by the author. The whole story is built with so much effort that all the characters in the plot have their own importance in the scenes. I can scarcely say that I enjoyed the ‘side stories’ so very much since they are too good and sound to be categorised as side stories.
The liveliness of every conversation throughout the story is the most fascinating feature of this book, which is already on my reread list.
Some format issues are (not sure if it is because of the ARC version): normally when scenes jump from one to another whithin the same chapter, there are often blank or dot line or a picture to separate them, some were not in the first few chapters which caused a few confusion to me when reading. And some typo.
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I really like Mr Stafford!! I believe they can be happy together if there is no Darcy and of course no violent tendency.
I also like this version of Bingley, with more backbone than in canon, who is a very charming suitor, a loving husband, and a most reliable brother-in-law.
Saye and Lilly are cute and witty as always. The banters between the pair are absolutely brilliant and amusing.
A 4.5 since I do not like this Darcy, and cannot sympathise with him. It is the first time I would like to see Lizzy to end happily with someone else, although the author does provide a turn to make it less a pity at the end of the story.
This is one of another masterpiece by the author. The whole story is built with so much effort that all the characters in the plot have their own importance in the scenes. I can scarcely say that I enjoyed the ‘side stories’ so very much since they are too good and sound to be categorised as side stories.
The liveliness of every conversation throughout the story is the most fascinating feature of this book, which is already on my reread list.
Some format issues are (not sure if it is because of the ARC version): normally when scenes jump from one to another whithin the same chapter, there are often blank or dot line or a picture to separate them, some were not in the first few chapters which caused a few confusion to me when reading. And some typo.
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I really like Mr Stafford!! I believe they can be happy together if there is no Darcy and of course no violent tendency.
I also like this version of Bingley, with more backbone than in canon, who is a very charming suitor, a loving husband, and a most reliable brother-in-law.
Saye and Lilly are cute and witty as always. The banters between the pair are absolutely brilliant and amusing.
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