i need to preface this review by saying that this will contain spoilers but i am not putting a spoiler warning on my review because the spoilers mentioned i think people need to see because going in blind to this book really fucked me up.
so here we go i guess:
my biggest issue with this big is the fact that there’s a certain something that i think should be mentioned in the preface of the book along with the 9/11 warning that just isn’t mentioned at all. this book has a rather large breast cancer scare as one of the main plot points and this story arc takes up a large chunk of the book. now i understand that this book was published a while ago when people weren’t really as big on content warnings etc. or putting resources at the front of books, but i think for something such as breast cancer (which the main character is an advocate for its awareness and improving the treatment of) needs to be mentioned especially since it’s not even hinted at in the blurb of the book! or even at the end of the book it would have been nice to include some resources etc. for breast cancer since this is one of the books main plots.
however, i also think the way that the breast cancer was included was totally out of pocket and was not done in the right way at all. this book had enough intrigue with the political plot that was going on and therefore didn’t need the breast cancer storyline involved. to me, it seemed to be used as a tool for drama and shock value, rather than a true, solid plot point which not only develops cam and blair’s relationship but also raises breast cancer awareness.
now, let’s go back to the political plot, which, in my opinion, was not fleshed out enough at all. the political plot IS the main plot of the book, it’s what’s mentioned in the blurb, it’s how the story starts, it’s there in the middle, it’s how the book finishes. however, the political plot is half-baked and doesn’t really make a lot of sense in the grand scheme of things. understandably, the author is trying to use these short snippets and paragraphs of information to keep the mystery and intrigue going but there’s not enough information at all. even at the end of the book things are just sort of chucked into the pan, scrambled together, and then thrown onto the page in the hopes that everything sort of falls together.
the one thing that the author did right was that in regard to the 9/11 plot, she doesn’t really go into much detail or try and mess with that stuff, so if you’re worried that the author is going to do it an injustice, she doesn’t. it’s not really there, it’s more sort of background noise to the whole “political” plot. the most that happens is that one of the characters is in one of the towers when they collapse but i’ll leave whether or not they survive a secret.
again, if you saw my review for the previous book in this series you’ll see that i mentioned the fact that cam and blair like to have sex a lot. this book is the exact same, in fact there’s a chance it might be worse. i get it, sex sells, but at this point, the plot and sanctity of these books is being sacrificed for sex scenes where blair/cameron says “oh god you can’t do things like that and leave me waiting” and then blair/cameron gives the other a quick orgasm before we change scenes to, guess what? ANOTHER sex scene, however this time we’re changing pace because at least it’s between two different characters. i felt like i was in a sex sandwich. the entire novel goes sex, “we need to hold a security briefing”, random 5 sentences hinting about some “plot”, sex. in a novel like this one, i feel like the most we need to see blair and cameron have sex is 3 times, once at the beginning, once in the middle maybe, and then at the end. there’s no need for it to be every other chapter. because then at what point do these books go from being thriller to being erotica with a side of thriller.
i think that the sex scenes also take away from the plot and are a significant reason as to why the plot isn’t fully fleshed out. i think if we removed the sex scenes from the book and added more depth and layers to the mystery and intrigue surrounding the plot to assassinate blair, the book would have been 10x better and would have been probably one of the best in the series. however, instead, the book just totally falls short and misses the mark.
the book itself was not a bad book, it is enjoyable and it does slot nicely into the series, however i’m struggling at this point to see how i’m getting 6 more books out of this because i’m already losing the will to live.
so after the shit storm that was this book, i’m taking a break from this series for at least a couple of books, just to calm my mind down and reset because that breast cancer storyline made me an anxious mess and i need to take my mind off of things for a while. i’m really really hoping and praying that book 5 sorts this series out because otherwise i might have to leave the series half finished and i hate to do that to a series.