this was full of random things. i remember a bed or something in the air.&then something about animals like cheetahs or w/e coming at the house. &then him painting her toenails in the end.
-I think it's ridiculous to have a strong male character do something so feminine, so stupid as painting the girls toenails. way to completely unman him, Feehan!
i didnt like the characters and i wouldnt read it again.
also, this cover is terrible. what is up with that ugly flower and what does it represent? then it has a hidden picture in it, and you're thinking ooh, it's a pic of the characters! but no, it's another pic of that flower!
-i was skimming over this book again, trying to decide if I wanted to keep it, and then I just started reading it straight through again. I realized Feehan writes in a maddening way. it's too much back and forth and scenes last forever. I feel like yelling HURRY UP!
I hate that the girl is a human, and her name even bothers me: MaryAnn. I don't like it. her or her name isn't good enough for the Carpathian world.
it consists of maryann takin forever to open the door. then repeatedly saying "it wasn't real." obviously it was, you moron. then she says "im not lifemate material." and im thinkin well, at least you know. cuz you def aren't good enough! then she says "but especially not to one of the De La Cruz brothers." and again im thinkin yeah, you aren't good enough for ANY Carpathian. but then she says-"they're far too difficult." oh, so its THEIR fault! not because you're an annoying human.
Feehan seriously needs to stop pairing humans with powerful carpathians. it isn't working. I can't stand it.they just aren't good enough. they should both be carpathians.
it's ridiculous to say that the prince would have stood by her, and his second, and all these other Carpathains, basically against Manolito. he's one of theirs, and if everyone knew maryann was his lifemate, why would anyone stand against that?
what's so annoying is that she pairs SO many of the Carpathians with humans. but then what we think is a pathetic, good-for-nothing, weak, stupid human suddenly has power. even though they've never had it before. so suddenly they're really powerful. it's too unrealistic.
she dresses up to go hiking through the jungle, then literally screams and whines about every animal in there. &oh, suddenly she can influence animals! she's a whiny baby who cries at the drop of a hat.
I think the idea of lifemates is rlly sweet. &im rlly shocked that Manolita apparently had nvr been unfaithful in his thousand years of existence. but if they're both virgins as they should be, neither character ever comes off as virgins. if the human women know nothing of Carpathians or lifemates, what are the chances they've never had sex? the whole series is unrealistic. some of the guys seem to have been with women before they met their lifemates, even though it meant nothing.&they know so much about sex. Feehan wants them to be perfect lovers. but then Manolita is apparently a virgin, and yet he seems to know everything about sex too. shoot for realism, Feehan. because your series don't add up.
she says she never slept with anyone because she hadn't loved anyone. then she says she wasn't adventurous in bed. how do you know, if you've never had sex? if Feehan wants to write about virgin characters then you have to commit. as in less talk of how sexy and luscious and hot they both are. &have them act like virgins.
also her female characters always come off as bipolar. I know the pull of lifemates is strong. but she says she doesn't wanna be with him, then touches him and rests her head on his shoulder&starts kissing him. I just can't take it. I really can't take this series. its so freakin wordy and focuses WAY too much on their many, MANY feelings. it took 64 long pgs to get maryann to manolita. I thought it would nvr happen.
her carrying her ridiculous can of pepper spray in the jungle where vampires are is just ridiculous. I really don't like her and it's not that far in the book. then she just sets down&cries. OMG. write characters that ppl will actually like.
then you have her call him a caveman and say he's old-fashioned or whatever. gee, that sounds familiar...Oh yeah! Dark Magic said the same exact words!! &im sure more of her characters said the same thing. if I see the word caveman again I'm going to scream! why is an author praised for writing a lot of books when they're all the same?
'she usually looked so calm on the outside, presented such an elegant picture, but underneath she was all fury and claws, as wild as their surroundings.' you literally just talked to her for the first time mere minutes ago. ¬hing, not once in this whole book, has showed her to be calm. &why in the world would a stupid human-who aren't right for the Carpathians-be strong enough to throw off a Carpathian? Manolita is an ancient, and she can throw him back 10 ft.
Feehan has an incredible lack of depth. yeah, she's written a lot of books, but they're all the same. this whole series the guys sound the same. the girls look the same. all 'luscious' and 'lush.' how is it that all the women &men are built the same? 'the woman was built like a woman should be, all curves and temptation.' that's insulting to ppl who aren't curvy and 'lush' like your stupid characters. that's not what makes a women, anyway.
'"look at my boots," she said, to keep from crying.' who cries over a pair of boots? you're the d.a. that wore them in the jungle.
her saying plenty of men found her fine, and that she had a good body was so not likeable. humble much?
"oh,yeah,baby,you definitely like that." that is GROSS. that is a turnoff, hearing stupid talk like that. idw hear anyone say that, much less an ancient Carpathian.
the lil side characters and side story (aka side drama) was so uninteresting and not welcome. that girl being raped &pregnant, and so dependent on her cousin. what is it with Feehan and rape victims? I don't wanna read about that in a romance book. I also dl the careers Feehan picks for her women characters. I mean, I guess its nice or whatever that Maryann is a case worker or w/e she does. but im just not interested in that.
she's supposed to be willing Luiz to live, and she's too busy looking &romanticizing about Manolito.
Feehan is capable of writing the most infuriating and irritating writing. Luiz is dying on the floor &they're sittin there lusting over each other &are literally about to do it. this whole can't be near each other without wanting to rip eachother's clothes off is annoying.
I'm not surprised at all that the word love is being thrown out ridiculously soon. stop focusing on sex and actually build a relationship &have love unfold at a natural pace.
I'm so utterly SICK of her saying "I'm not psychic. why do you think so? how could I be psychic and not know?" you ARE. so just DEAL WITH IT. how can she not realize that everything she thinks ends up happening? are you that stupid?
how is it that she, a stupid human who has no place in these books-can block out her lifemate who's Carpathian, and yet no other woman can do that, whether they're half Carpathian or full. that's impossible. &I don't like it. Savannah didn't even half that power, and she was half Carpathian, not to mention the prince's daughter.
another thing that infuriates me is the women will bring up real fears and concerns to their lifemate, and they have an answer for everything. it doesn't matter if they say they're terrified, or express their feelings that we think will surely get a reaction and break down this whole "assurance" thing from the guys. whatever they say, the guys have a comeback. it's a bunch of nonsense. after they have "mindblowing" sex even they're both apparently virgins (which is unrealistic that all these characters have great sex the first time) she says "don't you think that was just a little bit scary?" and he's like "you are safe with me." it's like they're robots, constantly spouting this lifemate junk. I feel like yelling could you just be sympathetic for a second?
she all of a sudden throws out do you mind Manolito instead of Manuel? since when the freak should his name be Manuel?
let me get this straight-all of a sudden you come out with this story of you transforming during your lil track race &having a vision of you as a baby, and now when ppl try to tell you your psychic you don't believe it? this girl is more stupid than I thought. &how the freak do you not remember any of that, or that your real parents died saving you &your grandmother rescued you, and that a couple adopted you? why is this pouring out now?
&you mean to tell me, a human jumped 150 feet and landed on her feet. oh-kay.
They sweat blood? cuz that makes sense.
He creates a deck in the air and clothes.
I can’t believe he left her to wait for Riordon knowing she would be attacked. Shouldn’t you have waited for Riordon to arrive and then leave? Duhhhh.
In the beginning when she first met Manolito her broken nail grew back and she didn’t find that weird? That’s when this character is truly delusional.
Your every thought comes to pass, with the vampires, and when you sent Manolito flying, and yet she’s like-‘was she doing that? Was it possible? But how was she doing it? what else had she done?’ Oh.my.gosh. they’re just your thoughts. You think them. &then it happens. See how that works?
“Jacques and Shea have had a son, a boy.” Wow, a son&a boy. Haha
Savannah having twins is mighty convenient. I wish her &Gregori were in here! That’s my favorite Feehan book!
So sad that Vlad and Sarantha are stuck in the shadowland! I also wish Manolito could have seen his parents there.
It’s weird to call your former prince Sir. That’s a human term. “Live large” is strange to say, too.
It sounds to talk about a wolf or jaguar inside them as a separate being. “the wolf inside her.” It is you.
Riordon puts Maryann in a flannel shirt, jeans&sneakers and you say “I know you don’t think I’m going to be wearing these.” And then calls them “rags.” And says: ‘he was far more interested in the vampire bite than her fashion problem.’ OMG. Someone plz smack this character. Of course he’s worried about the vampire bite! Which is what you should care about. Riordon says his lifemate doesn’t care about clothes &she says “I’m well aware that girl needs a serious makeover.” That was so incredibly rude &a direct insult to the man’s lifemate. I’m surprised he actually smiled at that, seeing as how she’s insulting his lifemate. He should have smacked her. Then he compliments her on saving his brother & she stars bawling like the baby she is. &then blames it on the clothes. “it’s the clothes. Change them fast.” Grow.up.
She wants to be able to manifest clothing because “there are a few lines I can’t afford.” Oh, just a few? You rich snob. How can a case worker or whatever the freak she is afford Versace and Michael Kors. I mean, she’s just a freakin counselor type person, not a super model. Him saying Manolito was rich and she could have everything she wanted is so annoying. She shouldn’t get everything she wants. That puts her in a gold digger role. &I just can’t take it.
I actually don’t want her to become Carpathian just because she’ll be able to manifest her own rich clothing. yes I hate this girl that much. Lil miss shallow &materialistic should not get her way.
I didn’t find it amusing in the slightest that Manolito or MaryAnn were completely ignoring Riordon. It’s so rude &frankly childish. We get they’re “totally in love” and were worried about each other. But you owe him thanks at least. Idk why she has ancient carpathians talk like-“hello! That’s such an insult, bro.”
She only did one thing that I found funny in the entire book. She asked wth was that noise when he closed the cave door. &then she jumped on him &pulled his hair, telling him to get out of there.
It’s sweet that he studied different cultures ¢uries’ types of sensuality for his lifemate.
“ask me for the moon, MaryAnn, and I will find a way to get it for you. But not this.” I think Gregori from Dark Magic said those exact words.
It’s so incredibly wrong that the males lock the women up. It’s actually like abuse. Gregori did it. Manolito is. Feehan is a one-hit wonder. All the books are the same. It’s maddening when the character is literally locked away, and the guy won’t let them out. Then he says “if I do not, go to my brothers and allow them to care for you.” You would seriously leave her without a lifemate?
I don’t think it’s right at all, or even makes sense, that a Carpathian drinks the blood of a wolf and then becomes one too. I don’t want that for Manolito at all.
She’s mentioned probably seven times about “wombs clenching.” You can’t keep using the same expressions.
‘he reached for his wolf, sharing it with him, wanting him to understand, wanting MaryAnn’s wolf to share that same bond.’ This is weird. &twisted.
I know jasmine went through something terrible, but I don’t like her or solange as a character. Jasmine sounds like a child, and it’s too pathetic to be likeable. &solange not being able to laugh or relax is crazy. I don’t get her deal. One minute she’s scared of men, and wants to go to the ranch. The next she’s not, and doesn’t think she can handle the ranch. This book is so back&forth.
This book could have ended much better. And preferably not on a scene where everyone was painting their nails.