So, as a lifelong Trekkie, and a Star Wars fan, and a Browncoat (and any other number of magnificent fandoms, from Harry Pottert to Battlestar Gallactica), I'm surprised I haven't picked up a book like this yet. This one comes from a $5 grab bag from my local library, and I was thrilled to get it. First time for a few things: first time I'm starting a review mid-book, and first time reading a Trek extended universe book of any kind.
DS9 was the pivotal series for me: I was a teen when it aired, and there isn't a character I don't love from the show. Sisko is my Captain (and before that, he was my Commander.) I wanted Voyager to be more than it was when it aired, and gave up on it until my mid to late twenties, when the show grew on me, and I realized I'd missed the characters. So this is very much a nostalgic pick for me.
I'm not done with the story yet, and will update this review when I do finish it; but I wanted to record my thoughts mid-way. The writing isn't stellar, to put it bluntly. But I appreciated that Jeri Taylor loved her characters enough to want to give them more life beyond her taking leave of the show. I appreciate authors who love their characters, and that is obvious here. I also enjoy seeing the back stories to many characters I loved spending time with on the show. I don't, however, as many have mentioned here, think that anyone who isn't a fan of Trek or of Voyager in particular, will enjoy this book.
From the first two chapters, it's easy to see where this story is going. I don't expect anything gargantuan in the plot. I'm reading it simply as candy, pure enjoyment of characters and a world I love, set in the Trek Universe.
But. It started something. I've found the external world of Trek fiction beyond the shows, and added a bunch of books to my reading list, including some that I'm super excited about from the DS9 perspective. So I'll also credit this book with introducing that to me.
More when I finish the book.
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So, finished today.
Voyager is a pretty good show that just got better as the seasons progressed. A lot more attention was paid to particular characters in the show early on than was paid to them later in seasons 4-7. Chakotay was probably the most obvious of these, and it's easy to see that he's one of Jeri Taylor's favorites to write. While I loved the characters the show chose to focus on, it was good to see the backgrounds of a few more neglected ones tended to here, in this book.
The premise:
Key components of Voyager's crew are stranded on an alien planet, captured and placed into a prison camp where treatment is fairly harsh. Plans to escape immediately follow. To keep morale up, characters volunteer stories of their personal backgrounds around the campfire in the evenings and how they ended up being on Janeway's crew. They eventually escape from the camp.
The good:
Tuvok's story is undoubtedly my favorite of the bunch. Vulcan history is explored in addition to Tuvok's personal journey, and it was the most profound and interesting to me of all of the stories told around the fire. Tuvok isn't Spock, and the story doesn't try to be like Spock's journey. He is stubborn, arrogant, easily irritated by humans - at least in the beginning of his life, completely devoted to Vulcan teachings and determined to become a more enlightened and logical being as he grows older. The way he decides to re-join Starfleet stems from his spiritual journey across the Vulcan desert, after having a family, and it's treated as one of life-changing significance, rather than upbraided or demeaned. I always enjoy how spiritual beliefs and journeys in Star Trek, when written well, tell a lot about the human (and non-human, in the Trek verse) experience. Trek is at its best when it delves into the way beings grow and change and explore the universe around them, whether it's through science, technology, religion, family or clashing cultures. Tuvok's story has all of these.
B'Elanna, who has always been a favorite character of mine (Barclay is my favorite character in Voyager - I know, I know, he was technically TNG first, but he was so key to Voyager's plot for the final seasons, I felt like he got some of his best episodes there. Needless to say, he isn't in this book.) next to Captain Janeway, Seven of Nine, and the Doctor, also has an enjoyable story.
The sitting around the fire and telling of stories evoked a comaraderie for the characters and a nostalgia for me that made it an easy read. It worked well. Even though I knew what would happen, plotwise, the ending felt a lot like a Voyager episode, and not unsatisfying in the least.
The bad:
The writing. It just. Isn't.
Well. I kept trying to sort out why the writing isn't as good, instead of just saying "it isn't very good", because the story and plot are fine. They're just overly simple, and fun, the way fanfiction is fun. The writing is very draft-like, in that there's a lot of changing of PoVs, causing confusion as to whose perspective we're in while in the prison camp chapters between fireside stories, and also in that it does a lot of telling about how the characters feel in the same sort of way a narrator does in a second or third grade chapter book. Which isn't to say that the narrating is at a third-grade level. It isn't. Jeri Taylor delights me with her extensive vocabulary, perfect for Trek. The type of book that uses words like "hirsute" or "osteogenic" in the narrative while making it sound natural gets my nerd vote. It's probably why I love sci-fi so much.
Or maybe it's because the book is very episodic, much like the show, which, while that works for a screenplay or a 45-minute episode, doesn't work as well in a 438-page novel. When you're in the middle or the end of a typical episode of Trek, you can sense the writers pushing things that are unbelievable into the story, like last-minute countdowns, perfectly-timed unexpected encounters, and convenient getaways or hiding when a character doesn't want to be discovered by dangerous foes. All of those things were present here, which draws attention to the author rather than to the story.
That isn't to say I didn't enjoy it. Did I mention I'm a Trekkie? I love this stuff, and for completely different reasons than I love the Vorkosigan series by Lois McMaster Bujold or the Stormlight Archives by Brandon Sanderson. I'm a sucker for the episodic.
Something had to keep me reading it like it was Christmas candy, and I think that's exactly it: the writing isn't the sort that we hold up as literary or spellbinding. It's candy. It's not chocolate cheesecake or a confectioner's masterfully created truffle.
Other problems with the book: inconsistencies.
Granted, this was written before the show ended, but the name of B'Elanna's mother, or the fact that she actually had seen her father after the age of 6, and before being stranded in the Delta Quadrant are easy to pick out, and I suppose you have to accept that with any sort of fanfiction. Right?
But putting those inconsistencies aside (and there are more), I actually found the motivations and actions of the characters to be inconsistent as well. I've already said that I liked the format of "telling stories around the fire" - it's appealing. But you will never convince me that B'Elanna would have told her story in the way she did, telling things that were private to people she'd never share them with. It isn't in her personality. Nor is it in Tuvok's personality, no matter how much the story tried to convince us it was as a "gift" toward Vorik, the other Vulcan member present in the prison camp. Maybe Tuvok would have told Vorik alone, maybe. Parts of it. But not the whole company present. Some things you keep to yourself.
Or you put into an anthology of separate chapters of the characters' lives. Which has already been suggested by more than one reviewer besides me.
After a while, you get used to the way things just suddenly resolve themselves or the most outlandish solutions appear to be the right ones - such as Seven of Nine whacking Chakotay on his Borg implant (yes, Chakotay's Borg implant, read the book, it's bizarre), smack in the face, to get it working. When something doesn't work, apply more force, as my husband would say. Humor ensues.
Hey, it's Trek. If you're not a fan of Star Trek, this one isn't for you.
I can't wait for the next one.