Untold Adventures Anthology
Untold Adventures was released June 2011 and published by Wizards of the Coast LLC. There are twelve short stories that span each of the popular Dungeons and Dragons worlds; Dark Sun, Eberron, Forgotten Realms, and the Dungeons and Dragons self-titled universe. The short stories are written by John Shirley, Alan Dean Foster, Lisa Smedman, Mike Resnick, Kay Kenyon, Sarah Zettel, Paul Park, Kevin J. Anderson, Ed Greenwood, Rosemary Jones, Jody Lynn Nye, and Jay Lake. Most of the authors are new to writing a Dungeons and Dragons based story, but there are a few veterans. After each story there is a brief biography of each author.
"Under the Plains of Rust" by John Shirley
Set in the Dungeons and Dragons universe.
Gnarl is just a simple worker at a local tavern, that happens to have dubious side profession. Because of this, he meets a cursed, dying warlock that asks for his help remove the curse. All he needs to do is recruit a dwarven artisan and his adopted ranger daughter, travel to the Elemental Chaos, brave the Plains of Rust, and unlock a secret. But there's a problem, things don't go according to plan.
Overall: 1/5
Thoughts:
"Under the Plains of Rust" is an extremely frustrating story. The characters are a mess. They have nothing going for them. They aren't remotely developed and just do things for no logical reason. They are just vapid, unlikable characters who are little more than words on the page. The story is also a fact paced, unexciting nightmare of boring. There is no suspense or build up, and things are resolved in a matter of moments. Everything about this story is boring.
"The Steel Princess" by Alan Dean Foster
This story takes place in the Dungeons and Dragons universe.
Ruhan Bijendra is on a simple mission; he must find a way to save his brother from dying. The rakshasa, a feline humanoid with backwards hands who are seen as demons, learns of a way to save him. In order to help his brother, he just has to ask for the aid of a being made of blades.
Overall: 5/5
Thoughts:
"The Steel Princess" is a great short story with a memorable and fun character. Ruhan is different and distinctive. He almost instantly liked, and that like just continued to grow. It could have been because of his odd qualities, considering what he is, but there's more to that. He's a character that you want to know and doesn't have that forced feeling to him. The story itself is simple, fun experience. The pacing is wonderful, the prose is good, and it has an interesting idea behind it. I wasn't expecting this story to end how it did, but I'm pleasantly surprised how the whole thing turned out.
"Tallfolk Tales" by Lisa Smedman
This story is set in the Forgotten Realms setting.
A man named Morndin is asked to help lead an elf though some tunnels. The man turns down the offer, but tells the elf who would be better for the job, in the most roundabout manner possible.
Overall: 5/5
Thoughts:
"Tallfolk Tales" is a fun story that's told in a uniquely different way. The interesting blend of perspectives, relaying heavily on first person but adding dashes of second, makes you feel like you actually are a part of the story. It really brings you in. The story itself is a fun, lighthearted story that can be easily liked. It's one of those stories that effortlessly pulls the reader in and makes you feel like you're a part of it.
"The Foundling" by Mike Resnick
This story takes place in the Dungeons and Dragons universe.
Charybole has just lost her daughter to a deadly creature. As a year passes, she hears crying out by a stream and discovers a young githyanki, a mortal enemy of the githzerai. Deciding that leaving the child in the wild to die isn't the right thing to do, she takes it back to her home. However, news of the child circulates and it's decided that the child must die. Unwilling to have her fellow githzerai kill the baby, she runs away with it. But the githzerai will stop at nothing to kill the child.
Overall: 4/5
Thoughts:
"The Foundling" is a good story, but has a lackluster ending. The ending wasn't terrible, but it felt too safe and left a lot of unanswered questions floating in the air. But this story does a good job in standing out from the previous ones, due to the dark tone. There is a lot of depressing and disturbing things that happen in this story, and I love these kinds of stories. Also, the relationship between Charybole and the infant is a very interesting one. It really shows that a mother's love can impact a child. This is just a very different story that really does a good job in making you remember it.
"The Forge of Xen'drik" by Kay Kenyon
This story takes place in the Eberron universe.
Ravon Kell, a former army officer of the Last War, is now a slave with no hope. The slaves are forced into making a large amount of weapons deep in the jungles of Xen'drik, where the huge forge is easily hidden. However, when Ravon learns of how the weapons will be made, he knows he must stop it.
Overall: 4/5
Thoughts:
"The Forge of Xen'drik" is a good story with some very run of the mill characters. The characters didn't really feel any different from the usual fantasy character and only two seemed to be interesting, mostly due to their pasts. Thankfully, the interactions between the characters really added a lot to the story. You can really get a feel to who the character is through these interactions, and from that you can see some of their layers. This is also a good story to introduce someone into the world of Eberron. It gives a lot of background without becoming to bogged down in it and keeps it interesting. It's not a perfect example of the world, but it will whet your appetite.
"Arena of Shadows" by Sarah Zettel
This story takes place in the Eberron universe.
Kalev Shadowfall is sent on a mission to stop a series of murders. He tries to stop the next killing from occurring, but fails. Then things go from bad to worse. Kalev's investigation of the new murder is interrupted as a woman enters and beings searching for something. But before they can find it, a creature appears with the object in its hands and escapes, leading the duo on a chase. Determined to find out what is going on, Kalev continues to investigate, but soon realizes that he is way in over is head.
Overall: 4/5
Thoughts:
"Arena of Shadows" is a good story but doesn't have the real feel of an Eberron novel. It's not a big issue, but it just has this feel of a generic setting and the only thing that makes it seem like a Eberron novel is the inclusion of a warforged. Thankfully, the characters are interesting. Kalev has a nice reveal of who he is and what he does. He's an interesting character that you really got to know during the story. Vix is another one, but she wasn't in the spotlight as much. At the end of the novel, I really wanted to read more about these characters and see them in the future. "Arena of Shadows" has a nice mystery story feel to it, while not being a complete mystery story. It gives this story something different and helps make it more enjoyable.
"Watchers at the Living Gate" by Paul Park
This story is set in the Forgotten Realms.
After nine years of visiting a ruined village and seeing a girl, Haggar thinks he's ready. For what, he doesn't know as he is transported into the Feywild. While there, he learns that he's been recruited to stop creatures from entering the world and to close up the gate the creatures are coming from.
Overall: 2/5
Thoughts:
"Watchers at the Living Gate" was a story with a lot of promise, but ends up being confusing. The story doesn't stay with the story, instead it focuses more on the background, history, and descriptions of the world. The story just suffers because of this. This is more apparent in the climax and the end. It's hard to really tell what's happening do to the mash-up of all the actions and thoughts going on all at once. It give the story a really lackluster climax. The characters were interesting because they aren't typical. Haggar isn't your typical hero, he's quiet and self-conscious. Astriana had a lot of personality, but it wasn't an expected personality. The story could have been more enjoyable if it didn't feel like a confusing mess.
"Blood Oasis" by Kevin J. Anderson
This story is set in the Dark Sun universe.
Jisanne has seen what Athas once was, before defiling magic turned it into a dying world. Unfortunately, the same magic allows her to see and be in that world, for a limited time. After being rescued by an escaped gladiator, Koram, she decides to show him what it once was like. If only they could make the change permanent.
Overall: 4/5
Thoughts:
"Blood Oasis" may leave someone new to Dark Sun in the dark, but is still a surprising story. There isn't any real exposition about the world and the terms used, causing those new to Dark Sun to be slightly confused. It's not a big problem, and only happens here and there, but it's noticeable enough to take you out of the story. But after seeing the world of Athas before it turned into a desert wasteland, makes you want to know more about what happened. It wasn't something expected and the irony of how it's accomplished is a great twist. The characters are also good. Koram is the more typical of the two, and his lack of purpose is surprisingly easy to identify with. Jisanne was just great because, while similar to Koram, she seemed more fleshed out and interesting. "Blood Oasis" is a good story, but you need to know a few things about Dark Sun before reading.
"Lord of the Darkways" by Ed Greenwood
This story is set in the Forgotten Realms universe.
Manshoon wants to control Zhentil Keep, and the only way to do that is to control the merchant powers of the city. In order to do that, he creates a spell that will kill anyone using the merchant lords hidden teleportation gates. However, his plans are soon ruined by the mighty Elminster.
Overall: 2/5
Thoughts:
"Lord of the Darkways" is a rushed, confusing mess that still is relatively straightforward and easier to follow the main plot. It's still a mess, but it's a mess you can kind of follow. The major problem with the short story is that you going to be lost in all the references and names dropped in the story. It's almost to the point of only hardcore Forgotten Realms fans would understand, and even then, it may be hard to know who's who and what's what. Also, for being the longest short story in this anthology series, it's rushed. Things happen and you don't know why or how they happen. They just happen. Thankfully, it still is kind of easy to follow, in the broadest terms possible. It's straightforward and doesn't really go into randomness that is accustomed to normal Ed Greenwood short stories. It's still a confusing mess, but one you can understand.
"Dreaming of Waterdeep" by Rosemary Jones
This story is set in the Forgotten Realms universe.
After meeting a small group of adventurers, young Gustin Bone wants to go with them. Unfortunately for young Gustin, his uncle won't let him and that causes the ten-year old to run away. After finding the adventurers, he soon realizes that he isn't prepared for what's ahead.
Overall: 5/5
Thoughts:
"Dreaming of Waterdeep" is a fun, simple story. Gustin Bone is an interesting character, he acted like a normal ten-year old, but with some maturity that younger children can have. The other characters weren't that remarkable, but they didn't need to be. They just did what they had to do, and were still fun doing it. The story wasn't very complex, but it didn't need to be. This is the kind of story that you should expect from an anthology, a short, fun experience where you come away satisfied.
"To Chaos and Back Again" by Jody Lynn Nye
This story is set in the Dungeons and Dragons universe.
After stealing a magical rock, a group of halflings were thought heroes when returning to their village. They braved countless dangers to recover it, but it turns out that the rock has powers that are what they weren't expecting. Now the same group has to go back and return the rock, facing the same dangers over again.
Overall: 3/5
Thoughts:
"To Chaos and Back Again" is a fairly enjoyable story, but doesn't feel like anything more than alright. The characters all felt the same, the only difference with them is what skills they had. Bab, the main character, was the only defining character. Unfortunately, that is only due to him being the main character. They all just felt the same. The story was still exciting though. It was fast paced, with a lot of action and things going on. Usually I would find stories like this hard to follow, but the simple premise really made everything that was going on easy to follow. But all in all, this is just an average story that doesn't really stand out.
"The Decaying Mansions of Memory" by Jay Lake
This story is set in the Dungeons and Dragons universe.
Downtrodden Horn is reminiscing about his past and everything he's been through. After going through all his memories, he recalls an event where he searches for a purpose. After visiting a lost temple and getting a quest to recover an artifact for the remaining monks there, Horn is granted something that he never expected and leaves destiny to a deck of chance.
Overall: 5/5
Thoughts:
"The Decaying Mansions of Memory" is a great story, but it's hard to really talk about it in too much detail without spoiling the fantastic story. Horn is a wonderful character and is really fleshed out because it really does focus on only him and his past. It's a character-driven story and because of this, you really start to like him. It's just a great story with an interesting character, and to say too much would spoil it.
OVERALL AVERAGED ANTHOLOGY: 4/5
Final Thoughts:
Untold Adventures has a lot of wonderful stories, but it leaves me feeling like it should have been something different or it could have had more variety. For an anthology showcasing the various Dungeons and Dragons settings, it felt more focused on just two; the Forgotten Realms and the Dungeons and Dragons settings. While the Forgotten Realms is the more well-known, it would have been nice to see an even amount of stories between Forgotten Realms, Eberron, Dark Sun, and Dungeons and Dragons. It would also have been nice to see some past setting being revisited; for example Ravenloft or even Dragonlance. Also, it's not the kind of anthology that can be recommended to new readers or those who are interested. There is a serious lack of exposition of some the races, locations, and ideas, along with how the setting are different. This is really for those who are acquainted with the worlds. I do find that a little disappointing because I almost saw this book as a way to introduce new readers into the worlds, but it really doesn't do that. Don't get me wrong, this still is a wonderful anthology book with a lot of great stories and there really is something for everyone. But it's geared more towards those familiar with the settings and worlds. It's still worth checking out, and you may yourself interested in the various settings.
Stories Worth Reading:
1) "The Steel Princess" by Alan Dean Foster
2) "Tallfolk Tales" by Lisa Smedman
3) "Dreaming of Waterdeep" by Rosemary Jones
4) "The Decaying Mansions of Memories" by Jay Lake
Stories to Avoid:
1) "Under the Plains of Rust" by John Shirley