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Annals of Alasia #1
Prince of Alasia
Prince Jaymin barely escapes when invaders overrun Alasia and murder his parents.
Forced into hiding with his young bodyguard Erik, Jaymin's life depends on maintaining his disguise. But living in hiding isn't enough for Jaymin. His people are suffering under the enemy's oppressive rule, and he is determined to defeat the invaders and reclaim his kingdom—somehow.
But any action he takes will place him in the spotlight, and Erik can only do so much to protect him from the soldiers scouring the kingdom for the missing prince. Jaymin must choose between the relative security of anonymity and the risk of standing up to the oppressors. If he does nothing, he might just survive, but what good is a prince who doesn't try to defend his kingdom?
If you enjoy the finely crafted cultures and world-building of Mistborn, Song of the Lioness, or Farseer, you'll love the land of Alasia!
Buy Prince of Alasia now to embark on a thrilling fantasy adventure today!
Forced into hiding with his young bodyguard Erik, Jaymin's life depends on maintaining his disguise. But living in hiding isn't enough for Jaymin. His people are suffering under the enemy's oppressive rule, and he is determined to defeat the invaders and reclaim his kingdom—somehow.
But any action he takes will place him in the spotlight, and Erik can only do so much to protect him from the soldiers scouring the kingdom for the missing prince. Jaymin must choose between the relative security of anonymity and the risk of standing up to the oppressors. If he does nothing, he might just survive, but what good is a prince who doesn't try to defend his kingdom?
If you enjoy the finely crafted cultures and world-building of Mistborn, Song of the Lioness, or Farseer, you'll love the land of Alasia!
Buy Prince of Alasia now to embark on a thrilling fantasy adventure today!
202 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 18, 2011
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Annie Douglass Lima
34 books174 followersAnnie Douglass Lima considers herself fortunate to have traveled in twenty different countries and lived in four of them. A fifth-grade teacher in her “other” life, she loves reading to her students and sparking their imaginations. Her books include science fiction, fantasy, YA action and adventure novels, a puppet script, poetry, a Bible verse coloring and activity book, and a cookbook. When she isn’t teaching or writing, Annie can often be found sipping spiced chai or pomegranate green tea in exotic locations, some of which exist in this world.
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June 6, 2018
Reader thoughts:
Many of my favorite stories have a kingdom at war or a prince in disguise or an evil regent (see The False Prince and Runaway Deception and Thorns of Decision and more). This book has all of that.
The good guys are good, and the bad guys are not. There are spies, but we don't have good-intentioned murderers or bully-quick-tempered heroes. It all feels organized, black and white, and I like it that way.
Jaymin is in constant danger of being recognized. This makes his story extra tense and interesting. I do think he could have hidden without going to school, but it did let him grow a lot. He kept expecting privileges, expecting people to bow to him, and they didn't. He got to see what it was like to be hungry, to be dirty, and to wait in line. His character is well done.
I love Erik! I think the one willing to put himself in danger to rescue everyone else is my favorite kind of hero. I almost wanted to read his perspective instead.
Writer thoughts: It's tricky to murder an entire castle of royals, nobles, staff, and guards, and still keep a book so lighthearted and clean. ADL succeeds because of a few points. 1, Jaymin and Erik didn't see the killing or the bodies, let alone the blood and guts. This helps keep the whole book PG. 2, the story is so focused on hope and the fact that Jaymin is NOT dead. He could have mourned his parents for 50 pages, but the book skims over that part. 3, Jaymin is on the run and has other things to focus on. 4, happy ending with war mostly avoided!
Many of my favorite stories have a kingdom at war or a prince in disguise or an evil regent (see The False Prince and Runaway Deception and Thorns of Decision and more). This book has all of that.
The good guys are good, and the bad guys are not. There are spies, but we don't have good-intentioned murderers or bully-quick-tempered heroes. It all feels organized, black and white, and I like it that way.
Jaymin is in constant danger of being recognized. This makes his story extra tense and interesting. I do think he could have hidden without going to school, but it did let him grow a lot. He kept expecting privileges, expecting people to bow to him, and they didn't. He got to see what it was like to be hungry, to be dirty, and to wait in line. His character is well done.
I love Erik! I think the one willing to put himself in danger to rescue everyone else is my favorite kind of hero. I almost wanted to read his perspective instead.
Writer thoughts: It's tricky to murder an entire castle of royals, nobles, staff, and guards, and still keep a book so lighthearted and clean. ADL succeeds because of a few points. 1, Jaymin and Erik didn't see the killing or the bodies, let alone the blood and guts. This helps keep the whole book PG. 2, the story is so focused on hope and the fact that Jaymin is NOT dead. He could have mourned his parents for 50 pages, but the book skims over that part. 3, Jaymin is on the run and has other things to focus on. 4, happy ending with war mostly avoided!
February 6, 2017
Prince of Alasia was a fun, quick MG read. I read Prince of Malorn first(I keep getting the two scrambled in my brain and want to write Malasia instead of Alasia), so there were aspects at the end that weren't a surprise (as the MC's from each book cross paths at one point, so you get the same scene just from two different viewpoints).
I loved the relationship between Erik and Jaymin. The contrast in what they were probably used to compared to what they now faced made me sympathize with their plight. The book kicked right off in the middle of a key moment, which really propelled the story forward.
A couple chapters in there's a chapter dedicated to "A day in the life" of Jaymin before things went south. That bogged things down and I think if there'd just been a summary "gosh, I really miss warmth, beds, blankets, my family, my studies, etc." instead of a whole chapter that takes us to a bland, ordinary day before everything happened that I would've understood the contrats of past/present without it slowing things down too much.
Other than that, I liked the tension, the constant feel that at any moment something could go horribly wrong. The scene at the inn where they're hiding was my favorite part. I laughed out loud twice during that part. The dialogue and actions were hilarious. Jaymin thinking "it's hard to be regal when scrunched under a counter with the cheese wheels and stench of onions" was great. The way the whole inn joined in on the act, agreeing with each other was awesome.
Jaymin making a list of all the people he wanted to thank and how he wanted to improve his kingdom really made me admire him. I think he's a great role model for kids.
I enjoyed Prince of Malorn better(YA is easier for me to connect to then MG) but I believe that a lot of kids in the age range of 8-14 would love this story. And it was fun to see what Jaymin had been up to while Korram was going through his trials.
I loved the relationship between Erik and Jaymin. The contrast in what they were probably used to compared to what they now faced made me sympathize with their plight. The book kicked right off in the middle of a key moment, which really propelled the story forward.
A couple chapters in there's a chapter dedicated to "A day in the life" of Jaymin before things went south. That bogged things down and I think if there'd just been a summary "gosh, I really miss warmth, beds, blankets, my family, my studies, etc." instead of a whole chapter that takes us to a bland, ordinary day before everything happened that I would've understood the contrats of past/present without it slowing things down too much.
Other than that, I liked the tension, the constant feel that at any moment something could go horribly wrong. The scene at the inn where they're hiding was my favorite part. I laughed out loud twice during that part. The dialogue and actions were hilarious. Jaymin thinking "it's hard to be regal when scrunched under a counter with the cheese wheels and stench of onions" was great. The way the whole inn joined in on the act, agreeing with each other was awesome.
Jaymin making a list of all the people he wanted to thank and how he wanted to improve his kingdom really made me admire him. I think he's a great role model for kids.
I enjoyed Prince of Malorn better(YA is easier for me to connect to then MG) but I believe that a lot of kids in the age range of 8-14 would love this story. And it was fun to see what Jaymin had been up to while Korram was going through his trials.
March 30, 2017
I loved the author's Krillonian Chronicles and was really excited to read some of her other books. This was a good middle-grade fantasy about a young prince and his bodyguard trying to survive the invasion of their home.
There was a good mix of suspense and action as the boys try to stay hidden in a small village. I liked Jaymin - at times he seemed older than twelve and I had a bit of trouble accepting that a twelve year old would immediately assume the throne, but it wasn't a big concern. :) I loved his friendship with Erik (who I'd love to know more about). Erik was so protective of Jaymin and completely unselfish when it came to him. I loved it.
The pace was great. It kept me flipping pages until pretty late. :) I'm anxious to read Prince of Malorn after the ending of this book!
Recommended to younger readers and to anyone who loves fantasy!
There was a good mix of suspense and action as the boys try to stay hidden in a small village. I liked Jaymin - at times he seemed older than twelve and I had a bit of trouble accepting that a twelve year old would immediately assume the throne, but it wasn't a big concern. :) I loved his friendship with Erik (who I'd love to know more about). Erik was so protective of Jaymin and completely unselfish when it came to him. I loved it.
The pace was great. It kept me flipping pages until pretty late. :) I'm anxious to read Prince of Malorn after the ending of this book!
Recommended to younger readers and to anyone who loves fantasy!
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January 9, 2012This is a wonderfully written action/adventure story. The characters, descriptions and the plot are well developed and keep the reader in suspense. The quality of writing is right up there along with well known authors such as Karen Lasky (Guardians of Ga'Hoole) and C.S. Lewis. As a first book in the series, this is a great beginning. I look forward to reading the next installation!
December 28, 2020
I enjoyed this read. It's definitely middle grade, which is good to know or else you might want a bit more depth on the grief and plot and battles...but honestly the author did a good job in creating a kingdom adventure story with fun characters (the friendship is so amazinggg) and an interesting setting and plot. I also think or hope that the next 2 books will give more depth to the short war of the book.
One question I DO have is...how in the world are Jaymin and Erik TWELVE??? Okay, the author did a wonderful job in keeping them 12 but they were also so smart...I mean, I ping ponged between laughing at their boyish antics then choking at the responsibility and knowledge they contained in that tiny husk...
So yeah, I wanted a bit more on some parts but I never felt like anything was really lacking. Though I did kind of wish Jaymin had found a bit more humility (is it right for me to criticise someone for not doing something I definitely wouldn’t have done?)
Content: very clean. I mean, a lot of death and devastation but it's not exactly on screen.
One question I DO have is...how in the world are Jaymin and Erik TWELVE??? Okay, the author did a wonderful job in keeping them 12 but they were also so smart...I mean, I ping ponged between laughing at their boyish antics then choking at the responsibility and knowledge they contained in that tiny husk...
So yeah, I wanted a bit more on some parts but I never felt like anything was really lacking. Though I did kind of wish Jaymin had found a bit more humility (is it right for me to criticise someone for not doing something I definitely wouldn’t have done?)
Content: very clean. I mean, a lot of death and devastation but it's not exactly on screen.
February 22, 2023
A pretty straightforward adventure following the young prince Jaymin as he hides from enemy invaders and struggles to cope with how his world has turned upside down. While there are brief moments of violence and themes that touch on grief or the true meaning of leadership, the story never gets too heavy—making it a great choice for kids who love to read fantasy adventures.
While I enjoyed Prince of Alasia, I never felt particularly connected to Jaymin or gripped by the plot. I think it's simply a case of personal preference, as the story seemed to be written well. I did like the friendship between Jaymin and Erik—so sweet. (Even though I had to suspend disbelief when it came to some of Erik's skills 😆).
The description of the next book sounds interesting, so I'll give it a try!
While I enjoyed Prince of Alasia, I never felt particularly connected to Jaymin or gripped by the plot. I think it's simply a case of personal preference, as the story seemed to be written well. I did like the friendship between Jaymin and Erik—so sweet. (Even though I had to suspend disbelief when it came to some of Erik's skills 😆).
The description of the next book sounds interesting, so I'll give it a try!
April 23, 2019
This is a good clean fantasy for younger readers.
January 30, 2014
I read this book and had the privilege of interviewing the author on my blog. My little review from the blog is below (as well as my intro to that blog post because the two are intertwined). You can check out the entire interview here: http://christfictionandvideogames.blo...
I may have mentioned before that I am a bit of a connoisseur of fine television. The small screen is producing some remarkable storytelling feats these days, and I love great storytelling. As a serious student of the medium, I of course frequently peruse the criticism offered by such great teleanalysts as TV Guide’s Matt Roush and HitFix’s Alan Sepinwall. Both are well respected giants in their field, and the world of television criticism would be significantly darker for their absence. Why do I bring them up? Oh, because Prince of Alasia—the novel I recently read by Annie Douglass Lima, my guest for today—frequently brought to mind a sentiment that Matt Roush frequently expresses: It’s not necessarily the premise that matters, but rather the execution.
He’s right. When it comes to quality television, execution is almost everything. Sometimes, sure, we get a wonderfully original bit of television such as Pushing Daisies or Andy Richter Controls the Universe that are a joy to watch in part because they are so delightfully unique, but even an original idea is unsustainable without great execution (for example, back when I watched Glee, I marveled at how good it could be if it had good writing and actual characters instead of cartoons who changed entirely depending on which songs they wanted them to sing).
Of course, most shows on TV are either medical, cop, or lawyer shows. But execution matters. There’s a great difference between The Wire, Chicago PD, and Brooklyn Nine-Nine, even though they’re all cop shows. Make a show about people just hanging out and you can have Seinfeld or Friends or hundreds of other shows that didn’t work nearly as well.
Where am I going with all this? Glad you asked! It just so happens that what I am doing is introducing my interview today with Annie Douglass Lima, in which we will talk about her book Prince of Alasia, the first novel in her Annals of Alasia series. So I don’t forget, let me tell you now that you can find Annie online at her blog: http://anniedouglasslima.blogspot.tw/
I am talking about execution so much because I did not feel that Prince of Alasia was a terribly original tale, and yet it is well written and there is surely joy to be found in the journey. The story is familiar, but the execution is generally very good. As always, I’ll do my best in this little mini-review and in the interview to follow to give you all the data you need to determine whether this book is one you ought to pick up or not.
The book focuses on Jaymin, the eponymous prince of Alasia, a kingdom in a different world but similar to the swords and castles of medieval Europe. It has a fantasy setting, but is not a fantasy story in the sense of having any fantastical elements such as magic or mythical creatures. This is something we discuss at length in the interview so I won’t get too much into that side of things here. But Jaymin wakes in the middle of the night when his best friend and personal bodyguard, Erik, makes him get up. It doesn’t look good: the castle is under attack by the Malornians from the next kingdom over, his parents are dead, and he will be too if they can’t get away. Alas, they’re caught right outside his bedroom door and he’s killed. It’s a really short book.
Just kidding! Jaymin escapes the palace with the help of Erik and Sir Edmund, an older and trusted advisor. The boys have to hide out in a village far from the palace and pretend to be commoners to blend in with the villagers and survive the Malornian occupation of Alasia—and, of course, if Jaymin is discovered to be the prince, he’ll surely be executed like the rest of the royal family.
Like I said, I don’t consider the plot itself to be the reason to read this. It’s pretty familiar, and even a late twist is easy to see coming. But it’s still a good read. The author does an admirable job of painting pictures with words and she injects a lot of life into the two boys at the core of the story. I recommend the book for the privilege of spending time with Jaymin and Erik, for enjoying their friendship, and for getting away into the world of Alasia. I think you’ll probably enjoy your time there.
I may have mentioned before that I am a bit of a connoisseur of fine television. The small screen is producing some remarkable storytelling feats these days, and I love great storytelling. As a serious student of the medium, I of course frequently peruse the criticism offered by such great teleanalysts as TV Guide’s Matt Roush and HitFix’s Alan Sepinwall. Both are well respected giants in their field, and the world of television criticism would be significantly darker for their absence. Why do I bring them up? Oh, because Prince of Alasia—the novel I recently read by Annie Douglass Lima, my guest for today—frequently brought to mind a sentiment that Matt Roush frequently expresses: It’s not necessarily the premise that matters, but rather the execution.
He’s right. When it comes to quality television, execution is almost everything. Sometimes, sure, we get a wonderfully original bit of television such as Pushing Daisies or Andy Richter Controls the Universe that are a joy to watch in part because they are so delightfully unique, but even an original idea is unsustainable without great execution (for example, back when I watched Glee, I marveled at how good it could be if it had good writing and actual characters instead of cartoons who changed entirely depending on which songs they wanted them to sing).
Of course, most shows on TV are either medical, cop, or lawyer shows. But execution matters. There’s a great difference between The Wire, Chicago PD, and Brooklyn Nine-Nine, even though they’re all cop shows. Make a show about people just hanging out and you can have Seinfeld or Friends or hundreds of other shows that didn’t work nearly as well.
Where am I going with all this? Glad you asked! It just so happens that what I am doing is introducing my interview today with Annie Douglass Lima, in which we will talk about her book Prince of Alasia, the first novel in her Annals of Alasia series. So I don’t forget, let me tell you now that you can find Annie online at her blog: http://anniedouglasslima.blogspot.tw/
I am talking about execution so much because I did not feel that Prince of Alasia was a terribly original tale, and yet it is well written and there is surely joy to be found in the journey. The story is familiar, but the execution is generally very good. As always, I’ll do my best in this little mini-review and in the interview to follow to give you all the data you need to determine whether this book is one you ought to pick up or not.
The book focuses on Jaymin, the eponymous prince of Alasia, a kingdom in a different world but similar to the swords and castles of medieval Europe. It has a fantasy setting, but is not a fantasy story in the sense of having any fantastical elements such as magic or mythical creatures. This is something we discuss at length in the interview so I won’t get too much into that side of things here. But Jaymin wakes in the middle of the night when his best friend and personal bodyguard, Erik, makes him get up. It doesn’t look good: the castle is under attack by the Malornians from the next kingdom over, his parents are dead, and he will be too if they can’t get away. Alas, they’re caught right outside his bedroom door and he’s killed. It’s a really short book.
Just kidding! Jaymin escapes the palace with the help of Erik and Sir Edmund, an older and trusted advisor. The boys have to hide out in a village far from the palace and pretend to be commoners to blend in with the villagers and survive the Malornian occupation of Alasia—and, of course, if Jaymin is discovered to be the prince, he’ll surely be executed like the rest of the royal family.
Like I said, I don’t consider the plot itself to be the reason to read this. It’s pretty familiar, and even a late twist is easy to see coming. But it’s still a good read. The author does an admirable job of painting pictures with words and she injects a lot of life into the two boys at the core of the story. I recommend the book for the privilege of spending time with Jaymin and Erik, for enjoying their friendship, and for getting away into the world of Alasia. I think you’ll probably enjoy your time there.
December 27, 2011
While the target audience might be adolescents, as a "mature" adult I was thoroughly engaged with the book. At the conclusion of the book, I was wanting the story to continue so look forward to future books. One of my students with a reading disability loved the book and a year later still remembered details from the story.
June 6, 2012
I can't find the right words to express how great Prince of Alasia is! The language flowed so beautifully and the plot was absolutely riveting! I could feel the emotional roller-coaster ride Jaymin went through; the anxiety and the relief he felt channeled from the paragraphs right to my bones. Totally loved it! :D
January 16, 2019
I read this story some time ago and don't know why I hadn't reviewed it - or else it's vanished!
I do enjoy this author's work and though her stories are meant to be for a younger readership, the themes are most definitely for all ages - bravery, loyalty, cruelty, power... all things we recognise.
It's very well written, enjoyable and entertaining. There are wonderful characters (both good and bad) and fabulous world-building.
Loved it.
Highly recommended.
I do enjoy this author's work and though her stories are meant to be for a younger readership, the themes are most definitely for all ages - bravery, loyalty, cruelty, power... all things we recognise.
It's very well written, enjoyable and entertaining. There are wonderful characters (both good and bad) and fabulous world-building.
Loved it.
Highly recommended.
did-not-finish
April 12, 2020Stopped about 30% in. Just decided it wasn't for me. It read like a lot of middle grade adventures I read/was read in my early teens, so that's cool!
April 8, 2021
Pretty good children's book. It is written rather simply, so it is a little basic for a more mature reader, but children from 8 to 14 should probably enjoy this immensely.
September 7, 2014
Story:
Prince of Alasia is about Prince Jaymin, whose life is turned upside down when soldiers from the neighboring kingdom of Malorn invade and kill his parents. Jaymin, with his best friend/bodyguard Erik, is forced into hiding. While living as a peasant, Jaymin learns how hard life is for his subjects, and witnesses first hand the cruelty and injustice the Malornian soldiers inflict upon the people. Prince Jaymin has to learn not only how to survive, but how to become the king Alasia needs him to be.
Even though I read the third book first I still found this story enjoyable. Annie Douglass Lima doesn't waste time in her fantasies coming up with a bunch of mystical races. Her stories focus on the people themselves and the lives they live. Jaymin's struggle to believe in himself and the loyalty of Erik make this story a must read. The life of peasantry is well written here, and the emotions of the people oppressed by their conquerors are accurately written. There were times where I was thinking in a similar fashion to the Alasians even though I knew there was more at work. Don't leave this book sitting on a shelf.
Caution:
A woman drinks alcohol. Some people might get angry at the cruelty of the Malornian soldiers. A boy mentions being beaten cruelly by a soldier. Two boys get into a fight, and some blood is mentioned. A boy fights off two soldiers. Two armies fight, but it is non-graphic.
Lessons:
When the rights of the people are oppressed by their leaders, it is the duty of the citizen to protect their freedoms. We should not be angry at those who wrong us because we don't always have the facts. Don't be afraid to stand up for your rights and freedoms. We should seek to learn as much as we can. The greatest act of love is to lay down your life for another. We may not always feel qualified to do the things we are called to do in life, but if we have faith we can do anything.
Prince of Alasia is about Prince Jaymin, whose life is turned upside down when soldiers from the neighboring kingdom of Malorn invade and kill his parents. Jaymin, with his best friend/bodyguard Erik, is forced into hiding. While living as a peasant, Jaymin learns how hard life is for his subjects, and witnesses first hand the cruelty and injustice the Malornian soldiers inflict upon the people. Prince Jaymin has to learn not only how to survive, but how to become the king Alasia needs him to be.
Even though I read the third book first I still found this story enjoyable. Annie Douglass Lima doesn't waste time in her fantasies coming up with a bunch of mystical races. Her stories focus on the people themselves and the lives they live. Jaymin's struggle to believe in himself and the loyalty of Erik make this story a must read. The life of peasantry is well written here, and the emotions of the people oppressed by their conquerors are accurately written. There were times where I was thinking in a similar fashion to the Alasians even though I knew there was more at work. Don't leave this book sitting on a shelf.
Caution:
A woman drinks alcohol. Some people might get angry at the cruelty of the Malornian soldiers. A boy mentions being beaten cruelly by a soldier. Two boys get into a fight, and some blood is mentioned. A boy fights off two soldiers. Two armies fight, but it is non-graphic.
Lessons:
When the rights of the people are oppressed by their leaders, it is the duty of the citizen to protect their freedoms. We should not be angry at those who wrong us because we don't always have the facts. Don't be afraid to stand up for your rights and freedoms. We should seek to learn as much as we can. The greatest act of love is to lay down your life for another. We may not always feel qualified to do the things we are called to do in life, but if we have faith we can do anything.
October 31, 2014
A solid and enjoyable Middle Grades read about a prince whose kingdom is overrun by their enemies, and must go into hiding until he can re-emerge to fight for his birthright. This story majors on the changes in Prince Jaymin's character as he learns what it is to be on the run, surviving and moving among the people of his kingdom like any other commoner - a situation so different from his previously priveleged life. The friendship between Jaymin and his bodyguard Erik is one of the highlights of this story.
While the book mostly moves at a good pace, there were a few slower or repetitive scenes which I felt might have been tightened up. There's a long section in which the two boys are running away from soldiers every few pages, but the story does change and pick up pace thereafter, and finishes with a fine battle for the fate of the kingdom and a couple of surprising plot twists to keep the reader on their toes.
My ten year-old daughter read this too and enjoyed it, and she chose to rate the book 4*. She also demanded that we read more stories by this author, so a father should do as he's told, right :-)? A good story with plenty of life-lessons to teach, well recommended for the age and genre.
While the book mostly moves at a good pace, there were a few slower or repetitive scenes which I felt might have been tightened up. There's a long section in which the two boys are running away from soldiers every few pages, but the story does change and pick up pace thereafter, and finishes with a fine battle for the fate of the kingdom and a couple of surprising plot twists to keep the reader on their toes.
My ten year-old daughter read this too and enjoyed it, and she chose to rate the book 4*. She also demanded that we read more stories by this author, so a father should do as he's told, right :-)? A good story with plenty of life-lessons to teach, well recommended for the age and genre.
March 1, 2015
This book would be best enjoyed by a specific audience, I think. Probably boys 10 to 12 who enjoy reading and don't need a bunch of action and violence to keep them entertained. Considering how few books actually apply to this audience (at least as far as I'm aware), it was really nice to see this story!
I really enjoyed it; the characters were endearing and brave. It was a fun idea for a prince to have to go to school in a medieval setting and pretend to be poor. And Erik was great. I wondered if he might be a bit impossible, but he's great example for any boy.
It was rather slow-paced, and I felt that some of the characters acted more foolishly than was realistic sometimes, but it was interesting.
This was totally clean and the violence was mild. If you know anyone with young boys (or girls, but particularly boys) who like a clean, fun read, definitely look this one up!
I really enjoyed it; the characters were endearing and brave. It was a fun idea for a prince to have to go to school in a medieval setting and pretend to be poor. And Erik was great. I wondered if he might be a bit impossible, but he's great example for any boy.
It was rather slow-paced, and I felt that some of the characters acted more foolishly than was realistic sometimes, but it was interesting.
This was totally clean and the violence was mild. If you know anyone with young boys (or girls, but particularly boys) who like a clean, fun read, definitely look this one up!
June 10, 2013
With beautiful wording and dialogue befitting the medieval time period, readers are taken on an adventure into the Prince of Alasia’s journey as he runs for his life! Recommended for youth and adults alike.
Want to read
December 27, 2011Annie is a friend, and this is her first novel! I can't wait to read it!
March 13, 2012
This book is awesome! i read it 2 times in a day in 1 hour!!!!!!!!
June 27, 2020
So I was getting "Leith and Keevan from The Blades of Acktar" vibes during this and that was awesome. This was such a fun little story and I don't regret snatching the ebook up!
March 12, 2012
I have nothing to say except that this book was Brilliantly written. I could not put it down!
June 1, 2022
Early one morning, 12-year-old Prince Jaymin is awoken by his best friend/bodyguard, Erik, who proceeds to lead him safely from the castle with the help of one of his father's advisors to escape the invading army that has somehow taken over the castle with little to no fighting. Though Prince Jaymin escapes, his parents do not, and now Prince Jaymin must hide in a small village, disguised as a poor boy until such time as his castle can be retaken and the invading army repelled.
But even hiding isn't easy, as the invaders have soldiers in every village and town searching for Jaymin. While Erik and Jaymin hide out in a small village, going to school during the day and trying to avoid the Malornian soldiers the rest of the time, Edmund, the former King's advisor, is trying to gain as much information as possible for when Jaymin and the surviving Alasian army retake the palace.
This book was almost non-stop action from the get-go, taking place over the course of about a month. While there is not a lot of world-building, there is enough to be able to follow the politics of what is happening. With the addition of a few twists and turns - some of which were predictable and some of which were not - the story of Jaymin's family's removal from power to Jaymin's eventual reinstatement is somewhat of a whirlwind, which fits quite well with the chaotic nature of war.
One of the things I liked the most was that Jaymin makes a mental note of every person who provides aid to him and Erik during their time in hiding, whether those people were aware of the identity of the person they were helping or not, and then he made sure to provide rewards for them that would help them in the future. As much as Jaymin is worrying about becoming king, these small things show that he will grow into a caring ruler for his small kingdom.
I look forward to reading more books set in this world. Whether they pick up where this story left off or they follow other characters, I think the kingdom of Alasia is a fascinating place and definitely want to read more about it.
But even hiding isn't easy, as the invaders have soldiers in every village and town searching for Jaymin. While Erik and Jaymin hide out in a small village, going to school during the day and trying to avoid the Malornian soldiers the rest of the time, Edmund, the former King's advisor, is trying to gain as much information as possible for when Jaymin and the surviving Alasian army retake the palace.
This book was almost non-stop action from the get-go, taking place over the course of about a month. While there is not a lot of world-building, there is enough to be able to follow the politics of what is happening. With the addition of a few twists and turns - some of which were predictable and some of which were not - the story of Jaymin's family's removal from power to Jaymin's eventual reinstatement is somewhat of a whirlwind, which fits quite well with the chaotic nature of war.
One of the things I liked the most was that Jaymin makes a mental note of every person who provides aid to him and Erik during their time in hiding, whether those people were aware of the identity of the person they were helping or not, and then he made sure to provide rewards for them that would help them in the future. As much as Jaymin is worrying about becoming king, these small things show that he will grow into a caring ruler for his small kingdom.
I look forward to reading more books set in this world. Whether they pick up where this story left off or they follow other characters, I think the kingdom of Alasia is a fascinating place and definitely want to read more about it.
August 24, 2018
For a middle-grade book, this tackled some pretty deep and serious issues and situations! Not only does Prince Jaymin have to deal with running from enemy soldiers and trying to blend in as a poor peasant boy, but he also has to struggle with the loss of his parents and the impending devastation of his kingdom at the hands of the same enemy soldiers. The burdens and responsibilities he's forced to come to grips with in this story would be a heavy load for anyone, let alone a twelve-year-old prince.
I really liked the depth to Jaymin's character and the fact that he never came off as the snooty, over-privileged prince who has to be humbled to make a good ruler, even though he did struggle with the differences in his station as a peasant. Learning to do things like wait in line or submit to disrespect was difficult, not because he was selfish and stuck-up, but because he had been raised and trained all his life to think and behave like royalty. Yes, there was some pride in the mix, but it all felt like a very natural reaction for a boy of his age.
I loved the dynamics of Jaymin's friendship with Erik . All the dangerous and unexpected twists had me on the edge of my seat numerous times, but I still laughed out loud during the scene in the inn. :D The setting was interesting and unique, with old-fashioned horses and swords mingling with semi-modern renderings of industry and education. And I thought the lessons Jaymin learned on leadership and responsibility were solid and worthwhile.
3.5 stars
Content--Jaymin struggles with the issue of lying for the sake of his disguise; fistfights and battles, but no graphic descriptions; references to deaths and a mass grave; references to drinking and a woman seen drunk; reference to swearing (no words); a man is kicked in the groin
I really liked the depth to Jaymin's character and the fact that he never came off as the snooty, over-privileged prince who has to be humbled to make a good ruler, even though he did struggle with the differences in his station as a peasant. Learning to do things like wait in line or submit to disrespect was difficult, not because he was selfish and stuck-up, but because he had been raised and trained all his life to think and behave like royalty. Yes, there was some pride in the mix, but it all felt like a very natural reaction for a boy of his age.
I loved the dynamics of Jaymin's friendship with Erik . All the dangerous and unexpected twists had me on the edge of my seat numerous times, but I still laughed out loud during the scene in the inn. :D The setting was interesting and unique, with old-fashioned horses and swords mingling with semi-modern renderings of industry and education. And I thought the lessons Jaymin learned on leadership and responsibility were solid and worthwhile.
3.5 stars
Content--Jaymin struggles with the issue of lying for the sake of his disguise; fistfights and battles, but no graphic descriptions; references to deaths and a mass grave; references to drinking and a woman seen drunk; reference to swearing (no words); a man is kicked in the groin
January 25, 2018
While the story can be engaging at times, it was quite slow. I found myself wanting to skim over several parts, including battle scenes because of the endless monotony. Maybe it felt this way to me because I bad read the companion book, Prince of Malorn, a while back and it was too redundant? Either way, the pacing could be tightened up a bit.
There were some inconsistencies that made the story uncomfortable. When they first go to Drall, they make it out to be this tiny town. Then, in a later chapter it states: will this town ever end? This statement would suggest a larger town than was originally described. Which really grates on my nerves. Which is it? Big or small? Pick one, stay with it.
Spoilers*Then there is the whole cou and the battle at the end. Regent Rampus strikes me as a smart man, so why would he take his entire army to one spot? And how did he gather them so quickly? The travel times don't seem to add up to gather soldiers spread all over the country. Even if he didn't call in all of them, there would have been troops to battle all over the country. They were in almost every town, remember. And leaving the palace unguarded seems like a rather amateur move on Rampus' part, which is contrary to the character's experience. Too easy.
*end of spoilers.
Far too many conveniences for my tastes, though they may have been trying to write to a younger audience. If so, the writing is slightly more mature than a younger audience may be used to. And while it is a cute story, I found the grammar needed another go over. Lots and lots of problems throughout, and increasing towards the end. Really needs a thorough editing.
For my clean readers:
Lots of violence, though not very descriptive. No language and no romance.
There were some inconsistencies that made the story uncomfortable. When they first go to Drall, they make it out to be this tiny town. Then, in a later chapter it states: will this town ever end? This statement would suggest a larger town than was originally described. Which really grates on my nerves. Which is it? Big or small? Pick one, stay with it.
Spoilers*Then there is the whole cou and the battle at the end. Regent Rampus strikes me as a smart man, so why would he take his entire army to one spot? And how did he gather them so quickly? The travel times don't seem to add up to gather soldiers spread all over the country. Even if he didn't call in all of them, there would have been troops to battle all over the country. They were in almost every town, remember. And leaving the palace unguarded seems like a rather amateur move on Rampus' part, which is contrary to the character's experience. Too easy.
*end of spoilers.
Far too many conveniences for my tastes, though they may have been trying to write to a younger audience. If so, the writing is slightly more mature than a younger audience may be used to. And while it is a cute story, I found the grammar needed another go over. Lots and lots of problems throughout, and increasing towards the end. Really needs a thorough editing.
For my clean readers:
Lots of violence, though not very descriptive. No language and no romance.
July 23, 2019
The residents of Almar go to sleep one night and by the next morning everyone’s life is suddenly changed for the worse. The invasion by the kingdom of Malorn was carefully orchestrated, going according to their evil plan, except there was one hitch. Young Prince Jaymin just barely makes it out of the palace as the invaders sweep in leaving a trail of blood and death. Lucky to escape with is young bodyguard, Erik, Jaymin flees to a nearby town to find a place to hide. The young prince and bodyguard’s lives depend on their ability to blend in with the common everyday folk as the
invaders tighten their grip on the kingdom of Alasia.
Young Prince Jaymin is determined to find a way to drive out the invaders and get back his kingdom. How and when will take careful planning and finding those loyal soldiers who are willing to resume the fight against the invaders. Finding allies will take time and effort. In this desperate plight to stay hidden and out of sight, the prince learns what really goes on in the average commoner’s life. This is eye opening for him and he’s determined more than ever to gain back his kingdom. The final answer comes in a most unusual way.
Annie Douglass Lima’s gift as a storyteller is a remarkable one. She has crafted a tale of lose, woe and heartache. But intertwined within the tale there are threads of hope, love and loyalty beyond all things. The Prince of Alasia is a gut level tale about the cruelty of conquest and the hope of survival. Ms. Lima has painted a picture of true heroic efforts of a young man’s will to loose everything to find a way to bring back hope to the people he has been born to rule over. Annie Douglass Lima has penned a classic tale that should be in every fantasy enthusiast’s library.
invaders tighten their grip on the kingdom of Alasia.
Young Prince Jaymin is determined to find a way to drive out the invaders and get back his kingdom. How and when will take careful planning and finding those loyal soldiers who are willing to resume the fight against the invaders. Finding allies will take time and effort. In this desperate plight to stay hidden and out of sight, the prince learns what really goes on in the average commoner’s life. This is eye opening for him and he’s determined more than ever to gain back his kingdom. The final answer comes in a most unusual way.
Annie Douglass Lima’s gift as a storyteller is a remarkable one. She has crafted a tale of lose, woe and heartache. But intertwined within the tale there are threads of hope, love and loyalty beyond all things. The Prince of Alasia is a gut level tale about the cruelty of conquest and the hope of survival. Ms. Lima has painted a picture of true heroic efforts of a young man’s will to loose everything to find a way to bring back hope to the people he has been born to rule over. Annie Douglass Lima has penned a classic tale that should be in every fantasy enthusiast’s library.
May 28, 2022
A fun book written by Annie Douglass Lima called Prince of Alasia. In the story we meet Prince Jaymin who with his bodyguard and friend Erik, only just manages to escape an attack by Malorn. As a result, he hides and lives a secluded life. But because he encounters so many bad things, he wants to make sure that he creates better living conditions for his subjects. But can he get his kingdom back or was his father the last king of the kingdom?
This was the first time I read anything by Annie Douglass Lima, but I definitely want to read more from her. Even though it was for middle grade, I was still drawn into the story. The fact that Jaymin wants to improve the living conditions of the people shows that lessons can very well be woven into a middle grade fantasy.
Definitely a must read for any middle grade fantasy fan, but can certainly be read well by adults.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy from the author and was not required to write a positive review. All opinions are my own.
This was the first time I read anything by Annie Douglass Lima, but I definitely want to read more from her. Even though it was for middle grade, I was still drawn into the story. The fact that Jaymin wants to improve the living conditions of the people shows that lessons can very well be woven into a middle grade fantasy.
Definitely a must read for any middle grade fantasy fan, but can certainly be read well by adults.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy from the author and was not required to write a positive review. All opinions are my own.
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February 11, 2022An exciting tale of a prince who loses his family and kingdom in a single night, and what it took to regain his kingdom (though sadly not his family).
I'd already read a few of the later books in this series and it was a delight to see the early years of beloved characters--especially the body guard Erik. The characters are richly detailed and true to life. The situations are at times heart pounding or heartbreaking. I especially appreciate the friendship between the prince and his friend, in serious conversations, light-hearted banter, and teamwork.
I'd already read a few of the later books in this series and it was a delight to see the early years of beloved characters--especially the body guard Erik. The characters are richly detailed and true to life. The situations are at times heart pounding or heartbreaking. I especially appreciate the friendship between the prince and his friend, in serious conversations, light-hearted banter, and teamwork.
May 10, 2020
I see that my friend Kellyn dnf'd this book saying that it is like lots of other Middle-Grade adventures. I don't remember ever reading a middle-grade adventure where the main character is a prince from the very beginning. I mean I guess there is The Prince And The Pauper, but...
I adored this book. I loved getting to know Jaymin and Erik better.
I adored this book. I loved getting to know Jaymin and Erik better.
May 31, 2014
The Prince of Alasia
is one of three books in this series written for middle grade and young adults. The books in this series are not necessarily written in chronological order since their events overlap somewhat. The other books are: In the Enemy's Service and The Prince of Malorn. According to a recent post on the author's blog, a fourth book in this group is being worked on now and may be ready for publishing by the end of this year. It will be called The King of Malorn. It seems that The Prince of Malorn is the story of Prince Korram and the events that lead up to the invasion of Alasia. While knowing this story would be helpful in understanding the end portion of
The Prince of Alasia
, the book can be read and enjoyed on its own.
Jaymin, the young Prince of Alasia, woke up to the sound of clashing swords, yelling and screams. His bodyguard and best friend, Erik, was alert instantly, ready to protect His Highness when Sir Edmend, a loyal member of the King's Counsel, burst into the room with his own bodyguard. The four slipped through the hallways, running for their lives from the enemy attackers. Entering the secret tunnel under the palace, they moved quickly away from the conflict and into the thick woods at the far end. The Prince had only to look at the grimness of Sir Edmend's face to know that his royal family had not escaped alive.
Sir Edmend took the two boys to the remote village of Drall and established living quarters with an elderly woman who had an attic room she was willing to rent to them. Prince Jaymin and Erik were to dress and act like the common village lads to blend in. There they lived as long as it was necessary to stay hidden from the Malornian soldiers.
Jaymin and Erik experienced plenty of adventures trying to avoid the enemy troops stationed in the village. They became adept at dodging around corners and into dark alleys. Eventually it became necessary for them to attend school with the other local children. To blend in, they had to act dull and slow-witted to avoid calling attention to themselves. The Prince did not like living a lie, but he had no choice.
After school hours the two friends sought refuge in the surrounding forest where they practiced their combat skills and continued their physical training. Back in the dismal attic room, they quizzed each other on geography and history and complex mathematics problems to keep their minds sharp and alert. Jaymin was getting his eyes opened to the deplorable living conditions of the poor in his kingdom. The old woman's cooking was wretched and the boys often went hungry because she too often spent the money given her by Sir Edmend on liquor instead of good food. The Prince kept all his observations in the back of his mind, just in case he returned some day to rule Alasia.
I enjoyed reading this action-packed adventure. It is just the kind of story that would appeal to middle grade young people. The author successfully creates a world with just enough historical background to make an interesting world for two young boys to live in on their own. There is a reasonable amount of conflict to keep the Prince and his protector alert but not enough evil to overshadow the atmosphere of adventure.
In addition to the creation of believable circumstances, the author writes warm three-dimensional characters with dialogue that fits the historical context yet easy for a young reader to be comfortable with. Jaymin and Erik's witty and playful interactions allow the reader to get to know the boys and feel the bond between them. I found it easy to see that their friendship would be one that would stay strong over the years ahead.
While the two blended in at school, Sir Edmend disguised himself as a common merchant and scouted the countryside for survivors of the attack. He slipped in and out of surrounding towns to gather information, locating the kingdom's armies and providing them with food and supplies. From time to time he snuck back into Drall to bring information to the Prince and check on him. But suspense turned palpable when it became obvious that the invaders knew the young ruler was still alive and had escaped the palace. The military started scouring the villages for him. The boys barely escaped an attempt to search the school they were attending. Would young Prince Jaymin survive to govern his people?
My favorite character in this book is Erik, the skilled bodyguard. By necessity, the Prince's character was fairly predictable while Erik, in contrast, sparkled with wit. He was wise but mischievous. He was always alert to danger yet a risk taker. He was intelligent but also street smart and a tough and scrappy fighter. His character was the perfect foil for the more serious and cautious Prince. I couldn't help but be drawn to him.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received a free copy of this book from Smashwords on behalf of the author. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
Jaymin, the young Prince of Alasia, woke up to the sound of clashing swords, yelling and screams. His bodyguard and best friend, Erik, was alert instantly, ready to protect His Highness when Sir Edmend, a loyal member of the King's Counsel, burst into the room with his own bodyguard. The four slipped through the hallways, running for their lives from the enemy attackers. Entering the secret tunnel under the palace, they moved quickly away from the conflict and into the thick woods at the far end. The Prince had only to look at the grimness of Sir Edmend's face to know that his royal family had not escaped alive.
Sir Edmend took the two boys to the remote village of Drall and established living quarters with an elderly woman who had an attic room she was willing to rent to them. Prince Jaymin and Erik were to dress and act like the common village lads to blend in. There they lived as long as it was necessary to stay hidden from the Malornian soldiers.
Jaymin and Erik experienced plenty of adventures trying to avoid the enemy troops stationed in the village. They became adept at dodging around corners and into dark alleys. Eventually it became necessary for them to attend school with the other local children. To blend in, they had to act dull and slow-witted to avoid calling attention to themselves. The Prince did not like living a lie, but he had no choice.
After school hours the two friends sought refuge in the surrounding forest where they practiced their combat skills and continued their physical training. Back in the dismal attic room, they quizzed each other on geography and history and complex mathematics problems to keep their minds sharp and alert. Jaymin was getting his eyes opened to the deplorable living conditions of the poor in his kingdom. The old woman's cooking was wretched and the boys often went hungry because she too often spent the money given her by Sir Edmend on liquor instead of good food. The Prince kept all his observations in the back of his mind, just in case he returned some day to rule Alasia.
I enjoyed reading this action-packed adventure. It is just the kind of story that would appeal to middle grade young people. The author successfully creates a world with just enough historical background to make an interesting world for two young boys to live in on their own. There is a reasonable amount of conflict to keep the Prince and his protector alert but not enough evil to overshadow the atmosphere of adventure.
In addition to the creation of believable circumstances, the author writes warm three-dimensional characters with dialogue that fits the historical context yet easy for a young reader to be comfortable with. Jaymin and Erik's witty and playful interactions allow the reader to get to know the boys and feel the bond between them. I found it easy to see that their friendship would be one that would stay strong over the years ahead.
While the two blended in at school, Sir Edmend disguised himself as a common merchant and scouted the countryside for survivors of the attack. He slipped in and out of surrounding towns to gather information, locating the kingdom's armies and providing them with food and supplies. From time to time he snuck back into Drall to bring information to the Prince and check on him. But suspense turned palpable when it became obvious that the invaders knew the young ruler was still alive and had escaped the palace. The military started scouring the villages for him. The boys barely escaped an attempt to search the school they were attending. Would young Prince Jaymin survive to govern his people?
My favorite character in this book is Erik, the skilled bodyguard. By necessity, the Prince's character was fairly predictable while Erik, in contrast, sparkled with wit. He was wise but mischievous. He was always alert to danger yet a risk taker. He was intelligent but also street smart and a tough and scrappy fighter. His character was the perfect foil for the more serious and cautious Prince. I couldn't help but be drawn to him.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received a free copy of this book from Smashwords on behalf of the author. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
September 13, 2023
I received this book in return for an honest review.
I have given it three stars because whilst I didn’t enjoy it, it appears to be a companion book to other books in the series. So I might have liked it had I read the other books in the series.
I have given it three stars because whilst I didn’t enjoy it, it appears to be a companion book to other books in the series. So I might have liked it had I read the other books in the series.
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