Well my quest to find contemporary f/f romance I actually enjoy continues to go nowhere. I thought this one had an interesting premise - the MCs were anonymously sexting after meeting via a queer kink app/chat room, but then one called the other… and caller ID listed her full name. When she found out, she basically panicked and cut all contact… until, of course, the two of them run into each other IRL. Some fun potential for drama there, right? Honestly if contemporary romance is your vibe, you will probably love this book.
However…. clearly it’s on me for not reading the synopsis thoroughly enough because this book has two of my biggest contemporary romance pet peeves. :(
First, I frankly should have seen the reference to Ty being a vet student who loves horses and immediately known the book would have a TON of boring scenes of them taking care of animals. I’m trying to think of a polite way to say this… I don’t care about your animal characters!! If I wanted to read long passages about people performing farm chores… well, I don’t ever want that lol. But if I did, it would only work because the author really put in the effort to make the animals fully fleshed-out characters in their own right!
Actually I think animal characters are a lot like child characters - it’s clear some authors think they are cute if they simply exist on-page. Or maybe they assume that they love EVERY child/horse/chicken/whatever so the reader will too? And there are absolutely some readers who are that way. But as someone with the pretty firm stance that much like adults, some kids/pets suck sometimes, just including them in the scene isn’t enough. They still have to be written well! (Actually I guess a comparison might be War Games by Daniel May, which I just read - not a perfect book, but there was (murder) horse content that I enjoyed, and I think the key was that the scenes with the horses, and I’m thinking especially of the one when the MC’s personal horse is born, are really resonant. The horses aren’t just there for a cute (or murdery) backdrop - they’re there because they have emotional significance to the characters and relevance to the plot.) For me, this book just didn’t have that. (Now having said that…. ironically I will say that from what I read, I DID actually enjoy the child character lol. Because she had emotional significance to the characters and relevance to the plot in every scene she was in.)
And second… so yeah it’s uptight femme realtor and chill androgynous nonbinary vet tech. I just hate this particular type of rom com dynamic. I understand it’s a classic but it’s just absolutely not my particular vibe. Idk like I think objectively? It’s written very well so far. I enjoyed the running gag about Leslie having the worst day ever, her complaining about the Jeep’s driving and then realizing it’s Ty’s Jeep is a classic awkward moment for a reason and is executed very well, and the way Leslie rose to the challenge to shimmy in that window was funny and a great, organic way to have her impress Ty and show that she’s not *always* brittle and negative.
But you know what, I felt like I read a bunch this book and then was like “okay great, the initial source of tension is resolved and I’ve about reached the limits of my tolerance for these tropes, this will get wrapped up quickly from here right?” And then saw I was only 24% in. I guess all I can say is - if you like this kind of thing, I think you will like this! However, I don’t, and I do not haha.