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When accused of witchcraft, John does the only thing he's ever done "Run"! That is, until he meets Jane, who lives in the bleak, imprisoned town of Marysvale. As their love grows, the dangers of Marysvale unfold; and for the first time in his life, John discovers there is something worth dying for. Marysvale is an action-packed story filled with monsters and tyrants, heroes and heroines.

387 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 23, 2010

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Jared Southwick

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Jared Southwick enjoys traveling and experiencing different cultures, cuisines, and associated foodborne illnesses. He once went night diving in the Pacific Ocean where, although he didn't actually see it, he's sure that a great white shark almost ate him. Jared petted an alligator in the Okefenokee Swamp, and a wild, heavily sedated black bear in her den. He explored the islands of West Africa, where his foot was attacked by a very ferocious, tiny octopus. However, he has never encountered a Brean…

He and his wife live in a quiet, friendly city, in the shadow of the Wasatch Mountains, where strange monster sightings are uncommon.

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442 reviews465 followers
March 24, 2011
Blog review.

Wow, Marysvale really surprised me. I accepted a review copy from the author thinking, yeah, that's a cool looking cover (in a Twilight sort of way)

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and I liked the blurb about monsters and heroes, why not? Wow. One of the best decisions I've made in a long time.

Told in the first person, Marysvale's protagonist, John Casey, is an easy character to adventure with. He tries to do the right thing, but that can be difficult when the victim of domestic abuse isn't cooperative or when you're betrayed or ... you get the picture. It's tough out there.

But John Casey has an advantage not too many people have, he has the ability to see into people's souls, to read them, and that's not even where the powers end. Kind of a Harry Dresden type thing.

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Because John's past is a bit hazy, he has no idea where it comes from, but as long as he keeps using it, it gets stronger and stronger.

With his abilities to hand and strong sense of right and wrong, John takes us from one harrowing escapade to the next. Running from another town he wasn't quite able to fit into, John is attacked by huge monsters and led eventually to the town of Marysvale, where the citizenry has been caged in by the monsters and the local government is anything but forgiving.

Not only is John Casey a great character, but the setting is wonderful as well. I pictured M. Night Shyamalan's The Village (only without the director's typical twists...and without his tendency to produce theatrical bombs). There were muskets, horses, monsters, ...tricorn hats, yeah, the real deal.

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Marysvale is an unexpected tale of action, adventure and lots of fun to read. I was glued to the page right from the beginning and anytime I thought Southwick wouldn't be able to keep up the great pace and narrative, it only got better.

Why Should You Read Marysvale?

If you want a quick read that's straight-forward and lots of fun, you can't go wrong with Marysvale. There are even pictures at the beginning of most chapters that really set the mood nicely, if a bit creepy at times (in a good way). Highly Recommended.

4 out of 5 Stars
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173 reviews
April 9, 2011
Jared was signing books at Costco when I walked by. Normally I don't buy books without checking ratings and reading reviews from friends, but it looked good and he assured me it was clean. I like to support clean literature, so I bit the bullet and paid the price.

Then I loaned it to my sister who was visiting/driving to Idaho and needed something to read. After a few chapters, she bought it for her Kindle.

I finished it today, and let me tell you...it was worth it! I definitely will continue the series as they come out. Full of action, suspense, and (a little) romance, it kept me interested from the get-go. I can hardly believe there are so few reviews - something I think will change in the near future.

(BTW, Amazon has 17 ratings, all 5 stars)
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54 reviews3 followers
March 15, 2022
I've had this book on my Kindle for years and finally decided to read it. First of all, I think the cover does it a huge injustice. It is VERY Twilight looking and that can turn some readers off (probably one of the reasons I put off reading it for so long). And now having finished the book, it has zero connection to the story or characters.

I enjoyed this book overall. The pacing is at times slow but also page turning. Does that make sense? The beginning is a tad slow. Then there's a lot of action and a lull and then more action.

I really liked all of the main characters: John, Sarah, Jane, and Hannah. And I like the way the author ties the present back to the past.

I enjoyed it. I wasn't enthralled though. I will probably read the next book at some point but it is not like OMG I HAVE TO READ THE REST RIGHT NOW!
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Author 11 books40 followers
April 16, 2012
Marysvale is a fun little adventure following John Casey as he stumbles upon his roots while fleeing from his hometown. While escaping the mob, he fights monsters, and gets trapped in a town being held captive by its abusive leaders. There, he finds out they have answers about a past he doesn't remember.

The story's pretty straight forward all considered & the twist at the end didn't really come across as a surprise, but I don't think it ruined anything. Most of the story's strength is in the character interactions.

John is pretty likable a guy,as far as heroes go--he's got a good mix of talents and flaws, and stands out mostly as a team-player. He works well off the other characters, who all pull their own weight. So it's less 'hero saves the day' and more 'team saves the day.' He's witty, and a little shy, so there's not much to dislike (if any).

The supporting cast is good too, Jane's strong and compliments John as a partner, as well as a love interest. They balance each other out as far as strengths & weaknesses go, so they do the teamwork thing well. Sarah's a delight as the team mother figure, and even the younger sister, Hannah, has her moments.

The villains are pretty standard 'baddies' so not much to talk about there.

My biggest issue with the book would be the ending--it just sort of drops off. On the one hand, it's clear this book goes directly into the sequel, Alyth, so you know there is more coming--but on the other it leaves the 'stand alone' a little weak. There's a lot left open with Syre (John's original hometown) & Marysvale that I wish could have at least been addressed in the epilogue (AKA "What happened to everyone after John & Crew left?" sort of questions--In particular, I wonder what happened to Thomas. I was pretty fond of that kid...).

But aside from that, it's a solid, enjoyable fantasy that's pretty tame as far as violence and language is considered. So, good stuff.
160 reviews28 followers
May 30, 2011
I found myself questioning the book during the first chapter, but I always give the books I read more than a chapter or two and I am glad I did with this book. The more I read the more information I gleaned and understanding I gained about what was happening. It really picked up and I found myself enjoying the main characters and disliking the evil ones. It brought forth a lot of emotion and I kept turning the pages to find out what would happen next. I love a book that keeps me turning the pages. The book ends well with some unanswered questions...just the right amount to keep me looking forward to the next two books in the series.

I love the strong characters in this book. John is chivalrous, kind and compassionate. Jane, Hannah and Sarah are strong women and that is refreshing. This book could lead to good discussions about good versus evil in book clubs and fighting on when it seems hopeless. I enjoyed the book.

John is a young man who has a special gift and seems to be on the run because of it. His parents are both dead and he is alone until he meets up with Sarah who takes him in. Jane and Hannah come into the book and a relationship is formed as they journey together to their destination. The journey presents many challenges both physical and emotional and is full of action. Lost memories are new loves are found.
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Author 96 books303 followers
May 31, 2012
Marysvale by Jared Southwick has a lot going on. This book wastes no time introducing you to John Casey and his problems. The wonderful part is that every time one layer is peeled back and the reader feels like they have a handle on the situation, a new wrinkle is masterfully rubbed into place.

There is a considerable amount of action, but it is couched in terrific depth. The book reads fast, but still seems to last forever (in a good way). I attribute this to the wonderful way Mr. Southwick has of pulling you into John Casey's world.

You never quite nail down a time or place, but it has a real feel of the 1600s and the New England area. This is a beginning to a series that could go on for several installments and I look forward to seeing the relationships that were born in Marysvale coming to fruition.

I will confess that the "monsters" (the Brean) kept making me picture Bigfoot, but that is simply my Pacific Northwest upbringing showing through.

Give this book a read and you will be hooked.
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Author 12 books149 followers
February 12, 2013
I've been going through my kindle and reading some of the freebies I've downloaded. Most of them don't make me feel the need to read other books by the authors, but I'm definitely looking for the book that comes after this.

This is kind of a horror novel but it's not the kind that makes me afraid to turn the lights out at night. Maybe that's because it has the rather unusual setting of colonial America. I like the characters a great deal (even if I did want to shake the hero at one point for not choosing to "play along" when he was given the chance to. Given the alternative that I thought was fairly obvious, it seemed like a no-brainer to me.) There is a second book which will continue the story, but the first book wrapped up enough of the story that I could quit here if I wanted to. I don't want to, so the follow-up is going on my TBR list.
3 reviews6 followers
October 28, 2014
I loved this book! I picked it up and couldn't put it down. The series got better each book it progressed. It's a unique idea and it leaves you wanting much more. Marysvale is well written with developed characters that I could really relate with. I will be recommending this book to everyone I know. I'm very excited to immerse myself in the works of Jared Southwick and will keep rereading these in the meantime.
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384 reviews
June 19, 2017
1st book in a series written by my friend's husband. She says he dreamed the whole story and I see it probably running as a Trilogy. At first, I thought it would be analogous but it failed to make constant parallels with any familiar story or event. I'm not even sure what period of time or place it is set. Other than a protagonist who constantly fighting demons (possibly internal struggles?) and rescuing everybody (Christ archetype?), I've yet to make a firm connection. Maybe the 3rd book will wrap it up and reveal the analogy if there is one.

There is a love story (2 in fact) and some nice twists and turns. It is a fantastical story of horrible beasts, memory lost through trauma & regained in just the right places, family, good over evil in hair-raising-slim-chance-of-winning scrapes. I t will keep you reading as fast as you can to get through the mushy dialogue and back to the clever 1st person narration that always holds clues to the mystery.

The main character, John Casey, is a toughened traveler made so by tragic events, bad temper, and by the constant flight from his many enemies. He meets 3 women who help him to overcome, to heal, to love and to conquer.
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226 reviews7 followers
May 25, 2020
I really enjoyed this little tale! It was original to me, and had a nice mix of fantasy, magic, monsters, and historical living. At first I wasn't entirely sure what was going on, as the blurb doesn't really give much away. After a few chapters, I felt I had a better handle on it, but it was like an ever evolving mystery all the way through.

Certain parts wrapped up as expected... others caught me by surprise! My favorite character has to be John's horse, Smoke. I feel like he is my spirit animal. Honestly, there wasn't enough of him for my liking, but a story based on a horse might not have the same overall effect.

I am looking forward to reading about the next adventure, in Alyth. If you're looking for a not really horror, not really historical fiction, not really adventure, not really fantasy, but all combined... you've found it!
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886 reviews1 follower
February 14, 2022
Fantasy

I loved this. It was nothing like what I expected it to be. Its a great fantasy novel that keeps you guess. I can't wait go read the next book in the series and continue on with John, Jane, Sarah and Hannah plus meet all the new characters. Would have been five stars if not for some weird formatting issues.
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September 16, 2019
Really enjoyed this book. Great plot. Hard to put down. Kept me guessing, Ending was abrupt and but unbelievable. No talk of what they would do next?? Not very realistic, but best story I've read in a while.
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477 reviews
April 4, 2021
3.5. I liked this one more than I thought I would! YA Action, romance, suspense....Lots of loose ends at the end so I feel like I need to read the next one (which was probably the point). The brean really are creepy too.
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1,576 reviews1 follower
May 29, 2017
Good book

You people should just read this book yourselves and write your own review on this novel yourself and I really enjoyed reading this book very much so.Shelley MA
146 reviews2 followers
August 28, 2019
Good read

I liked this book as it was a different premise than most. It had a fast pace, lots of secrets and a little romance.
159 reviews2 followers
September 7, 2020
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I loved this book. It was suspenseful and kept you wanting to keep reading and not stop. I will read book 2
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23 reviews
May 2, 2024
I give this book 3.5 stars. Not bad, and easy to read. Would I read it again? Maybe 🤷🏽‍♀️
8 reviews15 followers
October 6, 2013
For my full review of this series, or to read reviews of other fantasy books, check out my book review blog at flamebreeze22.blogspot.com!

Things I didn’t like about The Marysvale Trilogy:

The Marysvale Trilogy is littered with typos (“immerge” for “emerge”) and malapropisms (“bazaar” in place of “bizarre”). I’ve noticed that extremely poor editing is a pattern among ebooks (at least Kindle’s). What gives?
The plot, at times, can become a little predictable. As someone who reads a LOT of fantasy books, I am sometimes able to guess what will happen, but with these books it was easier than usual because...
These books can at times get a bit repetitive. Obviously John’s supernatural powers are going to get him into a lot of trouble with the superstitious and conservative villagers he encounters, but after several episodes in which John is accused of witchcraft, with all of the ensuing repercussions, this aspect of the story line becomes a bit stale. The trilogy really picks up steam, however, when shit hits the fan and John is left in charge of a group of refugees. From this point on predictability was not an issue for me; I was pleasantly surprised by some of the ensuing plot twists.

Things that I liked about The Marysvale Trilogy:

The first one is FREE on Kindle! Yes, you read that correctly. Marysvale is 100% free on the Kindle. I actually discovered this series because I am on the mailing list of the website ebookfling.com, which has a system that enables people with lendable ebooks to “fling” them anonymously to other users in exchange for a credit towards downloading any of the lendable ebooks listed on the site. ebookfling also has a regular email to inform members of “weekly steals” on Amazon, which are book promotions where the Kindle version of a book is available for download for FREE! This is actually how I discovered the first book in The Hunger Games series.
The Plot: The author, Jared Southwick, is not afraid to go dark. The Marysvale Trilogy has many violent scenes, although they are never unnecessarily graphic. These books also show some of the uglier sides of humanity—man’s blind hatred and fear of the unknown, disloyalty and betrayal, cronyism and nepotism, and the pursuit of power at all costs. Some of the trilogy’s themes have resonance in today’s world: government overreach, intolerance, and the dilemma concerning the boundaries between security and freedom. The Marysvale Trilogy manages to be relevant to today’s world without coming off as political or overly preachy.
The Characters: John, the main character, is not a perfect guy. John is angry (justifiably so) and sometimes broody, but is committed to helping even the people who fear and loathe him for his unnatural powers. In fact, his short temper frequently exacerbates already tense situations, but in my opinion, this is a good thing because he has a strong personality; John is actually a breath of fresh air when contrasted with his dull love-interest, Jane, whose character does not really add much to the story (fortunately, the romance in this series is incidental and Jane does not have a huge role). Jane’s little sister, Hannah, however, is probably the book’s strongest character. Hannah, a kickass sharpshooter who wants to become a general in a world in which women have few rights and even less respect, provides the book’s comic relief. Most of the book’s funniest moments come from Hannah’s policing of John and Jane’s developing relationship. Hannah has a capital-a Attitude and knows how to employ it to good use. It is worth noting that all of the series’ important female characters are strong, admirable women (even Jane).
The Final Showdown! I won’t give anything away, but the resolution of the trilogy is suspenseful and at times surprising.

So would I recommend The Marysvale Trilogy? Yes. Although these books have not placed Jared Southwick on my “favorite authors list”, all three of the Marysvale books were thoughtful and entertaining. These books are a mix of mind-magic, monsters, western-style sharpshooting, politics and the fight against oppression, and feature a strong protagonist and even stronger supporting female characters. Plus, if you have a Kindle, the first one is free, so what do you have to lose? Check it out.
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434 reviews21 followers
May 28, 2012
The town of Marysville is not a Merry place. The town is surrounded by tall hairy blood thirsty monsters called the Brean. They have six inch long black fingernails and fangs the size of daggers. The only thing keeping Marysvale from these creatures in the woods is a wall that surrounds the city. The people in town are not allowed to leave Marysvale and those that try to go to Marysvale rarley survive the trip through the woods. Things weren't always like this in Marysvale, originally the Brean we're not dangerous but something changed a few years back and the Brean started a rampage across the countryside.

One man that might hold the key to Marysvale's future is John Casey, a 22 year old man who doesn't know a lot about his past. John has the power to see into people's souls, he knows people's secrets and tries to protect his friends from evil. He also has the tendency to get himself into trouble. He's now on the run to Marysvale where he will find love, battle monsters and find out that what is within the walls of Marysvale is just as terrifying as what surrounds it.

Marysvale by Jared Southwick is a book that people of all ages will enjoy. There is some violence but it is not overly descriptive and people who like to read young adult novels will enjoy this book just as much as older readers. Marysvale is a book that works on many levels and has something for everyone.

People that are into romance will enjoy the love story between John and a woman named Jane. Horror lovers will enjoy watching John try to escape from the brean and action lovers will enjoy all the fighting scenes within the city. There is also some mystery involved as you try to figure out what happened in John's past and how much the other characters know about him.

What I enjoyed most about Marysvale is how unpredictable it is. In the beginning the author sets up who you believe are going to be the heroes and villains in the story but the main villain is quickly dealt with in the first two chapters and John takes his horse and goes on the run. At this point I wondered where this story was going as it turns from a fantasy story to a horror story as John meets the brean and has to run for his life.

Another thing I really enjoyed about Marysvale is the social commentary that is given on the people that live in Marysvale. No one can enter or leave the city and in order to have safety from the monsters outside, the people inside have given up all their personal freedoms. In the town the government holds all the wealth as the townspeople live in squalor. The townspeople fear whats outside the walls more then what is inside. I fealt Jared Southwick was giving a metaphor for how we lost some of our personal freedoms after 9/11 and he did a good job of pulling it off.

I highly recommend this book. My only two issues with it was that there were a couple of unanswered questions and some of the characters that we're introduced in the beginning we're never heard from again. Just recently though a sequel to Marysvale was released called Alyth which I'm hoping will answer all of my questions. Marysvale is an unpredictable thrill ride that will leave you anxious for the sequel.
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Author 1 book12 followers
July 21, 2016
This book was a strange and interesting read because it was set in a period akin to Colonial times here in the United States and included the paranormal. It was an eclectic mix that the author was able to blend. I really enjoyed the strange quality of the story, both in terms of John, the main character's, unusual abilities and the weird, otherworldly beasts that lingered in the dark forest. Toss in a tyrannical governor and you have an action-packed story that kept the pages turning.

From the beginning it was clear that John's special talents were both a blessing and curse for him. While it allowed him to evade trouble, his gift also made it difficult for him to turn away from situations that went against his own moral code. This combined with accusations of witchcraft often sent him from town to town. It was during this moment the pace of the book quickened and maintained a steady course. Along his journey, John's true character and memories threatened him as well as those who crossed his path. There was more to the story and I could feel his frustration at discovering the truths at a slower than desired pace.

I enjoyed the introduction of the mythical beings, the Brean, who lived within the forest. At times their presence in the story was unnerving and terrifying, which is what they were meant to be. The evil of the Brean augmented the evil of man within the story. Both made it possible for the people of Marysvale to become prisoners within their own city. The slow progression of freedoms lost became an essential part of John's past as well as the overall story. I was struck by how relevant the topic could be when applied to some of the events happening in this time period. I believe this was what the author was going for and if so, it hit the mark completely.

Overall, the book was a good read. It had a lot of action, pasts being revealed and just a hint of possible romance mixed with some lighter moments. The only thing troubling me about the book was portions of the dialogue didn't seem to fit the setting of the book. From the descriptions of everyday life, tools and clothing, it seemed the book was set in a time before many modern advances. People used muskets and swords, primarily rode horses for transport and wore clothing similar to those in Colonial times. Yet, there were moments when speaking that the characters used words that made them appear to be from more modern times. It was a little confusing but the overall plot and action were sufficient enough to keep me reading. If you enjoy something a bit out of the ordinary, then this is the book for you!
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310 reviews
July 26, 2012
This book delivers a heart-pounding rundown of events, detailing the imminent danger of every chase & pursuit, cruelty and hopelessness. Characters are forceful and possess palpable personalities. The crafty plot's more than just about power hungry officials, but also hints of the supernatural.

John Casey fleeing from the town of Syre, is pursued by cunning and vicious monsters. Barely escaping with his life, he found strangers whom he learned to trust, and vowed to help. The Wolfe sisters must get back to Marysvale for their father, but the journey is dangerous with the presence of these beastly creatures called Breans. Relying heavily on his special skills that keeps stronger the more he used it, John safely brought the sisters to Marysvale, only to face another kind of beast-- the human kind-- who would stop at nothing to amass power & control by violent & lethal means. In Marysvale, the truth of an identity he has long forgotten was also revealed, and how he is connected to the town & people of Marysvale.

It's a very good start, but the author clearly plans to have more pages to write. So many mysteries still at loose ends--- who or what is John Casey/Stone? Is there a bigger purpose for him? Are there more people with special abilities like him? Where do these Breans come from? What of Lord Wright & his forces, will he hunt John down for revenge? Will John prepare to fight or flee? Will he find friends or more opposition in the town of Alyth? I am really eager for the next book.

P.S. In case the author reads this-- you might want to check on the use of drug vs. drag. If you mean to "haul yourself or laboriously continue on with what you need to do", then the appropriate word is drag, not drug. I thought you made a typo at first, which is excusable..but the error happened three times more. There was also the misuse of the word shuttered instead of shuddered, when you mean to tremble or shake with emotion. But, hey congratulations, still! For an e-book, that's very minimal error.
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Author 8 books124 followers
May 4, 2012
Happy Friday! Today, I am reviewing an excellent book! Jared Southwick's, Marysvale, has a little something for everyone. This was one of the first books I read when I got my kindle. However, back then, I didn't have a blog, nor was I reviewing books. My book review group on Facebook chose Southwick's book to read and review this month. I was so excited because I knew it was a book I loved and it gave me the opportunity to revisit an old friend. Once again, I was enveloped in its magic.

This book is well-rounded. It hits on all the elements which make a great read. There are strong characters (male and female), suspense, action, adventure, monsters, and a touch of romance. Southwick has a gift for weaving all of these components together into a tapestry rich with bold colors and beautiful design.

This book would also be excellent for juvenile and YA readers! The addition of a fearless horse named Smoke, a touch of magic, and a spry young girl named Hannah will definitely appeal to them. Also, the monsters are not mindless killing machines. They are intelligent, which puts an exciting twist on the story and heaps on the suspense!

In the reviews of the book, some claimed the characters were too "shallow" and they couldn't connect with them. I beg to differ. In my opinion, there was not a character I didn't love - even the villains were well drawn. My only complaint is that I would like to know more about the leaders of Marysvale. A little back-history on them would be nice. However, there is a sequel, so maybe the author divulges more information in it.

I found this book very enjoyable. It held my attention from the first page and I can't wait to read the second installment titled Alyth! I give this book 5 stars! Great job, Mr. Southwick!
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2,338 reviews36 followers
April 21, 2016
I read this for book club, so probably wouldn't have picked it up on my own, although it's by a Utah author so I might have for that reason alone. It's not a bad book, was fun for a quick read, I'd like to know how the trilogy ends for curiosity's sake, but will not invest hours in reading the other two.

What I liked about the book: It has an interesting premise where the people of an area are trapped in a city by creepy, murdering monsters and have set up an aristocracy with complete power over the people. There are three strong female characters who keep their heads and are brave. The monsters are really creepy. There is slowly unfolding suspense as the main character becomes involved in the events and slowly has his memory return to find out he's a big part of the events. It is a clean novel with no language or sex.

What I disliked about the book: Fantasy novels need careful and thorough world-building to be believable and I was always wondering, Where are we exactly? Characters are referred to as Scottish, some guards speak Cockney, and Irish music is mentioned. Are we in the UK? Some reviewers mentioned colonial America. I never felt grounded. The book is written in a wooden style with horrible editing. The main characters' dialogue vacillates between an erudite and precise language to 21st century casual. I think the light-hearted modern teasing and flirting were meant to lighten the overall dark mood of the novel, but just seemed jarring and out of place so that it never felt like a real fantasy novel. Although the novel is "clean", it contains fairly dark elements, such as personal abuse, torture, human slavery, and lots of killing. I also found the extended descriptions of exact fight moves and long flights through the forest slowed the action.
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1,578 reviews49 followers
December 20, 2010
Why I read it: received review copy from the author
The Plot: We start out with our main character, John Casey, escaping from a small town. He is chased by the Brean, which are big, darkish monstery things (we never find out what they are or where they come from). He manages to get to a house on the outskirts of Marysvale. From there he travels with a couple of sisters into Marysvale. He starts to remember things from his childhood that he had forgotten. Things he had seen. And also, Marysvale is not a very good place, and once you're there it's hard to get out. This story felt a lot like hearing a story someone was telling me, rather than being immersed in a story.
The Characters: The good people in the story were suitably likable, and the villains seemed awful enough, but I just didn't really connect with anyone in the story.
The Setting: It's hard to really get a feel for the setting. Marysvale was an interesting enough place, but we really only got to hear about it from John (because the story is told in first person), and he's just arriving there. The setting feels pretty bleak, with the monsterish Brean everywhere, so it's not some place I'd want to visit anytime soon.
Who Should Read This? Those who like their fantasy a little more mysterious.
Final Thoughts: While I didn't love this story, there were some very tense and exciting moments. I'm not sure if I'll read the next book in the series or not.
Grade: C
Cover Thoughts: I think the cover is fairly generic, and I'm not sure exactly how it relates to the story, but it could be worse. :)
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5,639 reviews330 followers
May 10, 2012
“Marysvale” captivated me from Moment One. I loved the style, the writing, the poetic descriptions, the fantasy, the psychic element, the Supernatural elements, the approach to characters, the addressing of issues that have been urgent throughout the centuries and continue to be today (domestic violence, power and control vs. good governing, human greed and cupidity, despotism, and much more).

I am not generally an aficionado of High Fantasy, but this novel is so superb that I determined to immediately acquire and read the sequel. Why? I need to find out what happens next, to the characters, to the plot, to the locale. I need to know the revelation of the secrets of some of the “secondary” characters (who might turn out to be not too secondary at all, but instead more important) in this novel. I want to know, because author Jared Southwick has made me care about the outcomes for the characters. Some I want to succeed; others I want to see fail. But I must know!

I’m not going to relate any of the plot, because the novel is simply worth reading for itself, regardless of genre, sub-genre, type of setting, locale, plot, or character. Don’t take this to mean all of these elements are not important: they are, and they are excellently handled, as are a number of plot threads which have been neatly and logically intertwined. No dropped stitches in this novel. If I could, I would award Marysvale about 12 Stars. I’ve become a persistent fan of the author, which means anything he publishes, I’ll now read.
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494 reviews13 followers
July 19, 2011
John Carey hasn’t had the best life. His “gift” isn’t welcomed by a lot of people. They don’t like feeling a headache when they’re around him. But that’s what happens when he tries to sneak into their heads. He’s lived several places and, when they decide to try him for witchcraft in his current home of Syre; he takes his few belongings, his horse Smoke and leaves in the dead of night.

Passing through a forest, John and Smoke encounter what they will learn is called a Brean. Big, hairy, MEAN suckers who want nothing more than to have him for lunch. Maybe the horse as an appetizer? He is saved by a woman named Sarah who is living alone in the forest and who has been kicked out of the next town, Marysvale - and told to never return.

Sarah seems to know a lot about the Brean and has nothing good to say about Marysvale or the people who control it. A community that lives in fear. Of the Brean, certainly; of the Lord Mayor and his cronies, terror might be a better word. Sarah and John are visited by sisters Hannah and Jane who comes seeking food from Sarah. There is something familiar about Jane, but what?

Jared Southwick has written an excellent beginning to his Marysvale series. Marysvale came out earlier this year and book two, Alyth, is joining it in the Fall of 2011. These characters are in it for the long haul and Southwick plays them perfectly. I hope I get to review Alyth when it comes out. I really need to see what happens next!

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4,013 reviews96 followers
August 10, 2011
Marysvale is definitely good clean fun...in a monsters want to eat you kind of way. John Casey has no memory of his past. He only knows that he has a unique gift that many people see as evil. He can see into the souls of living things. After being accused of being a warlock, he runs and this leads him to a place where he can begin to find answers about his past. Along the way, he also finds something to live for.

Marysvale did start out a bit slow for me, but it quickly picked up the pace. I enjoyed reading it. This book has everything that a good adventure needs: mystery, damsels in distress, and monsters. I enjoyed all of the characters, especially Jane. I love a strong female lead. Jane and John's relationship is very sweet. The monsters, called the Brean, are truly creepy beings. I wouldn't want to meet one of these things walking through the woods!

While I enjoyed the book, I felt like I was left with a lot of unanswered questions in the end. I wanted to know more about the monsters and why they attack humans from the surrounding towns. As this is the first book in a series, I think it is a good foundation book, but I want more. There is a second book, Alyth, coming out soon and I look forward to reading it to get some answers.

I definitely recommend this book. I think it would be good as a YA, maybe even upper MG read.
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Author 9 books14 followers
June 21, 2012
The description of the novel on the book's page had me intrigued, which of course is the point. To be honest, the story was not at all what I expected, but I was hooked from the first page and couldn't put it down. The description does not hint at the time period of the novel, so I was a bit surprised to find it was set back in the days of cold showers and having to hunt for your own food. This did everything to enhance the novel, as I came to realize that if this story had been set in present-day, it would not have worked as well. Overall, a thrilling novel that I'm genuinely pleased to have read.

It should also be noted that the description does not speak of a sequel, which would have been good to know in advance because I don't like to be left hanging at the end of a novel. However, I look forward to reading the other works by Mr. Southwick.
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775 reviews23 followers
January 11, 2013
You know when you see a movie with a car chase scene that goes on and on and on? That's what reading MARYSVALE was like. The fighting scenes were at least 75% of the story, but the book was well written and I enjoyed it.This book is free for Kindle from Amazon.

It is the story of John Casey, age 22, who has a special ability to search people's minds. He is forced to leave the town of Syre and finds himself being chased by huge, Sasquatch type creatures called Brean. He finds help in a cabin in the woods, from a woman named Sarah, who introduces him to Jane and her younger sister Hannah. Together they ride to Marysvale, a town that is virtually impossible to leave. This feels like a medieval setting, except they have pistols and bayonets. In Marysvale John learns more about his unique talent, why the townspeople cannot leave, and why the town is so heavily guarded.


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214 reviews8 followers
January 5, 2014
When I got this, it said it was a trilogy. It was one book, I think?! I was disappointed in this book. Other reviews said it was a great read. At times the story skipped around never letting the reader know very much-confusing at times. The characters were very clear and strong. The end left me hanging. I never got answers to many important details. Would I read it again? No. Would I recommend this to anyone? No. NOW, I find that there are more books to continue the story. I hate being forced to pay more money to learn the ending. It certainly should have stated somewhere that it was more than one book ( although mine did say trilogy). So, I'll just go to the last reviews, read them and maybe learn everything that was left out.
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