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I liked this one more than I expected. It is unfortunate that at about 70% the story seemed to lose it's way.
The very beginning was a little confusing. It starts off with an older couple who are sneaking in a trysy at a ball. The woman, was not invited due to her reputation, so her lover had hauled her in through a window of a guest bedroom via a rope of sorts. Anyway, this couple decided to make a go of it on the very narrow balcony, and sadly fell to their deaths, naked and intwined when a valet accidently opened the doors of the balcony and sent them flying off. These two lovers were the father of the story's hero and the mother of the heroine.
The next chapter begins 3 years later. Hero Bram, a duke is a bit of a stick in the mud. He has been living his life in a very orderly fashin, avoiding anything adventurous, or daring, so as not to become like his father who's death left his family in scandal. The heroine, Sophie, a young french woman and daughter of the hero's father's mistress (who fell to her death) has arrived in London with her french maid, and deaf guardian for her first season..sponsored by Bram. Bram is obligated to give Sophie her first season due to a legal document made by his late father to do so.
Bram is betrothed to a very stuffy proper and well organized woman who would make an excellent dutchess. But when Sophie arrives in all her beauty and sensuality, Bram struggles with himself, and his fear of becoming like his father.
I really liked Sophies character. She was raised to "dazzle" people and to never trust men. She does not believe in love between a man and a woman. She was constanly told men don't love, they are incapable. There is only lust and desire. Love does not exist. Men only use and discard. Therefore Sopie has aquired through much work, the ability to turn the tables on men.. so to speak. She is very witty, clever, sly.. a master of her emotions, of her facial expressions and body language.
Bram is a stick in the mud for the most part. He is an honorable guy. Nevr discusses past women, or brags about past sexual exploits. He is very proper to his betroth and his betrotheds is very proper as well. Their relationship is dull and never crosses the line of impropriety.
Bram & Sophie are quite interesting. Both are pretending to be something they are not, and both are also bringing out the real person in each other. Very slowly.
We have a nice slow natural relationship, no insta love. Well Bram has some insta lust, but the controlling stick tamps it down. There is some humor, a kleptomaniac aunt, a deaf guardian, amonkey, a parrot, an aging french maid/former courtesan, and a hypochondriac cousin. All this makes for an interesting story.
So why only 3 stars?
The story started out really good, but then peetered off about 70% in. I became bored after the ILY's were said. There was an "adventure" to Sidmouths townhouse which could have either have been eliminated or spruced up.
The whole issue with the journals could have been put to better use as well.
The romance build was so slow, but the transition into love was sudden and abrupt.
I got a little more than irritated with the monkey and parrot thing, it became silly and juvenile.
There were some minor typos, more than usual but not terrible.
I was most annoyed with the heroine's ending every sentence with either "yes" or "oui'"
I was disappointed that at 81% when the H & h finally make love, that it wasn't described, only cut to them afterwards. What a gyp! Then, as if an editor told the author to spice it up, there was some sensual love scenes, but nothing more than a hair over mild. It was more dissapointing I think because here we have two sexually repressed people who are finally unleashing all their passion.. and we don't get a glimps of it.
The ending was all tidied up too fast.
In short there could have been better conflict, more excitement, more wit. But in the end it fell flat.
Overall, I still enjoyed it and the rating here is quite adequate. 3-3.5 is about right.