This is a wonderful story. Heart-warming at times, gritty and real at others. I love the conflicts presented in this drama--they give the story soul.
A very good read, and I don't care if this has a few editing issues (like I'm one to talk) but really, for a first piece of fiction this just shows how much potential Mr. Quonus has for writing engaging fiction.
I didn't really finish this book, read a bit less then half and then skipped ahead skim reading. The dialog got better gradually as the story got more depressing.