So I picked up this book as an easy read, and yes it was, but I'm not impressed. At all. This book COULD have had potential, but unfortunately it reads as if it were written by a 12 year old. I'm sorry if that seems harsh but between spelling errors and the writing style that was all I was thinking about while I read this book.
The spelling and grammar really got to me while reading this. It's actually the first time I've taken notes while reading a book. Like a lot of authors trying to get their work out there Skye obviously didn't have a editor. That's fine, I don't know how much they cost but I can imagine it's pretty pricey. Nevertheless, I think it's a authors responsibility to reread what they've written before publishing it themselves. And it wasn't that words were just misspelled, but some sentences had words missing completely, or a full stop put in before it should have and Words With Capitals That Didn't Need Them. Also, I think the ending was so rushed that Skye must have completely forgotten what she had written in the previous paragraph. Keira had TWO showers before she went to the dance and apparently wore TWO different outfits as well. She also was fully clothed and then within minutes she was pulling clothes back on. I'm not quite sure which of the two outfits she was putting back on but it still doesn't make sense. If this was reread I'm sure she would have picked up on these mistakes.
Now, the characterisation... It didn't ever feel like any of these characters were real. The way they spoke, the things they did, it just wasn't believable. For example, as they enter the dance hall the character Ben looks around and says, "It's amazing, it's gorgeous." Men don't say gorgeous! It's not in their vocabulary! They say things like, "awesome," or "sweet" or "unreal." Women say gorgeous. Also, when Ben asks Kiera to the dance he says, "You know I've always liked you." They've known each other for a few days and I think this is the second time they've spoken. There is no always about it! Always is a word used when you've known the person for years, not days!
And on the subject of knowing each other for days, what is with authors making their characters fall in love instantly. Cooper and Keira don't know the first thing about each other and yet they are quite literally willing to die for their love. Are you kidding me?! I know we all want to fantasise about love at first sight, but c'mon.
Also, for anyone looking for a vampire book, this is not the one. Vampires aren't even mentioned until the second last chapter. Kind of disappointing when it's mentioned in the blurb and title and then you find there's over 200 pages of teenage angst before you get to it. *sigh*