Legal

First Time #1

by Madison Faye

Somehow, that innocent girl next door - that girl I had no business thinking about like that, grew up. And I HAVE to have her. I've never felt this way about anyone, even in my Navy days - obsessed and crazy to the point of madness. It's like something primal; a beast inside of me that roars whenever she's near. She might be my buddy's little girl, and my next door neighbor, and damn near half my age...

But she's legal , and I'm going to be her first; I'm going to claim and breed her. I don't care what the consequences are, because I'm going to make her mine if it's the last thing I do.


This book contains a hot, dirty, single-minded and over the top alpha hero with a HEA and NO CHEATING!

**This book has been updated from it's original manuscript to improve reader enjoyment.**

Genres: Romance, Erotica, Smut, Contemporary, Novella, Spicy, New Adult

Kindle Edition

First published December 22, 2015

About the author

#1 bestselling contemporary romance author Madison Faye is the dirty alter ego of the very wholesome, very normal suburban housewife behind the stories. While she might be a wife, mom, and PTA organizer on the outside, there’s nothing but hot, steamy, and raunchy fantasies brewing right beneath the surface!

Tired of keeping them hidden inside or only having them come out in the bedroom, they’re all here in the form of some wickedly hot stories. Single-minded alpha hero, sinfully taboo relationships, and wildly over-the-top scenarios. If you love it extra dirty, extra hot, and extra naughty, this is the place for you! (Just don’t tell the other PTA members you saw her here…)

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Reviews

[Mindy Lou's Book Review]

Age gap trope.
No cheating.

[Deserie williams]

self note: hero is married in the beginning and h sees him having sex with his wife but hero is thinking of h. hmmm yeah definitely not for me. I know there is more to the story but I wouldn't be able to get Over that. just my personal preference.

[Anne E ♡ emo + OTT Hs]

The GOOD:
Good pacing/S chem/hot explicit S. Lots of intense & in-your-face sex scenes between virgin 19yo h & her dad's BFF & their next-door neighbor 39yo H. Mostly from the forbidden aspect of their secret desire /affair. h had been wanting for years while H began secretly wanting her since she turned 18 & while he was still married to his arranged-marriage wife OW. Liked that H&h didn't start flirting & smexxing until H was divorced from his cheating ex-wife OW, who H found out was preggo with OM's child. H was made to think at 1st that it was his for a few months so disappointed it wasn't his mostly because he'd always wanted to have kids & not necessarily with OW. H was never in love with his ex-wife but married her in an MOC of sorts for his job position.

Good emotional chemistry between H&h esp since most of their time together was secretive. Quick, & done by non-verbal communication (i.e., looks, touch) and from a distance (i.e., phone, text, video). Some angst from when H became distant from h & then didn't call her for the next 4 days & then she found out from her mom that H's ex-wife may be back in H's life again.

Likable chars with 19yo h a mix of some maturity & typical late-teen/young-adult impulsiveness/recklessness & acting without thinking as much of the repercussions so it was 39yo H who really carried the romance of this book with his level-headedness mixed with his alpha-dominance & sense of adventure. Loved their bareback cum-so-you-can-breed-me sex talk & their plan to have many babies. So the epilogue 1yr later with 1 baby & more bareback-breeding S was fitting & hot.

MEH or the BAD:
1-star off because didn't care for h's witnessing H & his cold wife smexxing in their backyard but she got turned-on by watching H smexxing & not so much that he was smexxing OW. Their reconciliation was a little too quick, with h only putting up a little fight & easily succumbing to H's sexual ministrations. Would've been better angst & made h look more mature if she put more of a resistance & talked to H like “Don't ever keep secret about OW from me again!” or “You really hurt me when you didn't contact me for 4 straight days because you were too busy trying to get rid of OW & didn't tell me about it.”. Writing was good as far as flow/dialogue/etc but lots of typos, which interfered with my reading flow a bit.

Sexual History:
h dated various boys in high school & college and even had some "heavy" makeout sessions. But none tempted her to give up her de-virginizing plan with H. H had many lovers before marrying his ex-wife. And then just h.

[*CJ*]

First off, if you don't like insta love/ breeding books- this ISNT for you
But if you do..
DAYUMMM
This was seriously a HOT read. The scenes- especially in the dining table and bathroom were insane ( I didn't even mind the voyeur scene).
However, there was a lot of mention of "being young" and "fertile" and "cum" and reminder of him being old with some typos- but overall it was a yummy hot read!
Total 4.5 stars for hotness, .5 taken away for grammar :)
HOT HOT HOT HOT! Choo choo train to the super breeding trope.
Safe with exceptions
4.5/5

[Alaina]

I freaking love Madison Faye but Legal was a toss up for me. It had so many cringy moments, like the MC, Chelsea, giving Jake her bathing suit bottom after they had sex. I wont dive into details about why that scene made me cringe but it did.

It didn't just stop there though, no, somehow she just kept leaving her underwear around there. Like hot damn women - keep the freaking underwear and go wash that shit.

Legal was a dual POV from Chelsea and Jake. Jake is the next door neighbor and her dad's best friend. Chelsea is the girl who dreams naughty things about her married neighbor. God sheds his light on them both because Jake ends up separating from his horrible cheating wife. Then of course these two magically end up together and having all kinds of wild and unprotected sex.

Shockingly she ends up super pregnant and they all live happily ever. If you don't understand how much sarcasm is in this review... I can't help you.

Overall, it was an okay book. It was super quick and easy to read and I was kind of happy that it was over. I ended up liking it, even with all the cringing I was doing, and I will definitely dive into book 2 of this series.

Bring on the cringe people!

[Kim]

I cringed a lot while reading this. The word “young” gets mentioned so much I think it must be going out of style, and the same goes for exclamation points!!!!!! If you want me to take it somewhat seriously then don’t use them every time somebody says a line.

It was just way too rudiculous for my taste.

[Tink Magoo is bad at reviews]

Let me start this by saying that YES this needs a good edit to correct some silly grammatical errors and there were 3 or 4 occasions were Mr Harding's date was mistakenly referred to as his wife BUT I still thought this was one steamy read , I'm serious here when I say that if Mr Harding had lived next door to me I would have forced myself upon him.

He had me all


Seriously, fuck the silly mistakes, it doesn't make this book unreadable. This was such a hot book and what's not to like - older man, forbidden, massive cock! I don't need to say more, YOU KNOW YOU WANT IT! TAKE IT YOU DIRTY GIRL

[Darlene I read WAY to many books]

This is madison old work and i gotta say i didnt really enjoy it. Kinda glad Madison changed how she writes now. So blessed for that.

Maybe the fact that Chelsea (h) saw Jake fuck his wife at the start of the book (he was married in the beginning).and got off... but Jake was thinking about Chelsea when doing his wife... So thats emotional cheating for me.. but his now wife is his ex wife because she cheated on him. So yeah.. i didnt really enjoy the book. Beside that they have wild sex. And ifk i wasnt feeling it.. i skimmed alot of the book. It was just to.. eh.. maybe if we didnt see the sex with the wife.. :/
Atleast the sex between h/H was hot.. 🤣🤣🤣

No om drama slight ow drama (ex wife) no cheating (between them), drama, sexy times, virgin gal and not a manwhore (been months since he gotten laid since he divorced his ex wife)


Slowish-insta
Older/younger couple
Tiny push away from H
Long distance
Pinning
20h/40H
Forbidden
Voyeurism
Sorta public sex
Masturbation
Hea
Epilogue

[Gi's Spot Reviews]

Review to come...

[Raine]

Too Many Errors!!!

This is the 2nd book I've read by Madison Faye and I did give the first book I read a 5 star rating. However in all good conscience I couldn't give this one the same rating even though I like this book too, but there was just toooooooooo many editing errors!!!

I'm going to continue reading her books because I think she will be one of my favorite authors similar to Jordan Silver, Alexa Riley, C.M. Steele, etc. I am just hoping she will have others read her books to edit or at the very least use the spell check of whatever application she is using to write.

******UPDATED REVIEW OF 2ND EDITION******
I re-read this book and it seems that all of the errors that I read from the first book has now been fix (yay!) and though I haven't reviewed the differences there seems to be MUCH more steamy sex in this book (or at least expanded) than there was in the first edition! I like! I like VERY much! Thank you, Madison Faye!!!

***ARC of updated/2nd edition provided by author for an honest review***

[Nicole]

ARC kindly provided by the author in exchange for an honest review

A naughty yet very enjoyable and a little bit taboo always makes my day!!! Once again the author created a hot/mouth drooling story, where our heroine is young/innocent and have a crush for her older neighbor for years now as an adult and he is single she takes an opportunity and gives in her attraction for him.



Page after page my anticipation for what is going to happen or to finally happen between them was growing, their explicit scenes were very hot and primal also it had fast pace and read it without a pause.

The dialogues were also enjoyable and both characters were very lovable i liked how Chelsea became his world and devoured his mind/body and heart the whole unique slightly taboo romance story won me from the beginning i can't wait for the next beauty the author will write.

[Dianna ☾midnight reads☽]

friend: this book is not for everyone
me: sIGN ME UP

heard this is a low-key ddlg smut so yeah...

[Meg ✨]

icl this was ass

[Nicole]

This was seriously smoking hot 🔥🔥🔥 and way better than I was expecting! Madison Faye knows how to bring the spice, and whew—she did not hold back. Total insta-lust vibes with a big breeding kink running through the whole thing, so if that’s your jam, you’re gonna eat this up.

I will say that by the middle/end, it started feeling a little repetitive—like, the same phrases kept popping up—but honestly, I was too busy fanning myself to care that much 😂.

Overall, short, filthy, over-the-top fun. Sometimes, you just need a book that doesn’t take itself too seriously and delivers on the heat, and Legal nailed that.

[Astraycat]

If you like to read older H breed younger h, go for it.

[🅙𝔲𝔩𝔷]

Wow this book was fan yourself hot. If you are looking for a quick hot Insta love kinda read this is the book for you.

There were a few annoying bits like the constant mention of the age and how innocent her body parts were etc. That got a tad annoying. The part with his ex wife was weird too but other than that q good short read.

[Fre06 Begum]

I am not normally a fan of these types of books but this book was hot! I actually did enjoy this minus the beginning where there was a short sex scene with the hero and his wife at the time, also def needs edits had quite a few grammar issues which was quite annoying.

[RCK *don’t be all, like, uncool*]

Nothing special just your typical smut filled book.

[CharlieB]

This is a mindless, smut-filled, unrealistic, OTT read. Filled in a hour for me. Similar to authors like Alexa Riley and C.M Steele.

[French Press Bookworm Blog]

What the heck did I just read?

Am I the only one who likes a romance story with my smut?

Legal sounded great but read like a prob film. The sweet innocent girl wasn't very. Believable and our H wasn't very alpha seeing how the h took charge most.

Really all you get in this is a bunch of sex and not enough story to even try and enjoy the characters

[Melanie]

3 stars review to follow

[Sara]

3.5 stars

[Ana M. Román]

Tiene todo lo que se espera de este tipo de libros if you know what I mean....

[Carol]

idc what others say, this was a SMOKIN' hot read ! 🤩🥵 Whew !

[Sol Belenda]

Como verán la sinopsis tiene todos los ingredientes necesarios para llamar la atención: romance prohibido, vecino de al lado y mejor amigo de la familia. Mama mia! jajajajja

Chelsea conoce al Sr. Harding desde pequeña y siempre ha sentido un gran afecto por él. Siendo niña pasaba como un amor platónico pero a medida que fue creciendo, sus sentimientos también se profundizaron.

Es así que mientras ella descubre su cuerpo y placer, presencia a su vecino teniendo sexo con su esposa. Ah sí, casi me olvido, el hombre también está casado XD Pequeño detalle no?

Bueno, ante esa escena, más allá de sentir celos también termina sintiéndose excitada por la visión de él. Digamos que ese hecho la convence aún más de que lo suyo es más que un enamoramiento pasajero.

Si bien su vida universitaria recién comienza, en su primer fin de semana largo vuelve a su casa y voilá! Quién invita a cenar a su familia? Pues el mismísimo Sr. Harding y claro, Chelsea se da cuenta que al parecer él la está viendo con otros ojos.

Cuando se da la oportunidad, Chelsea le da un bonito show erótico en su ventana y las cosas entre ellos se salen de control. La atracción los consume y se dejan caer sin tener en cuenta las posibles consecuencias para ambos.

Debo decir que por ser ella virgen, la protagonista tiene muchas agallas y no duda en buscar lo que quiere. Creo que si Chelsea no hubiera tomado la iniciativa no sé si él se hubiera animado a cruzar la línea.

Y definitivamente, las escenas hot entre ellos fueron intensas y atrevidas.

Hasta ahí las cosas positivas.

Mi única crítica en este caso sería que por momentos los diálogos y pensamientos de los personajes fueron muy repetitivos. Sobretodo en la cosa de "eyacular dentro sin ninguna protección". El sexo está bien pero de ahí a tenerlo despreocupadamente es otra cosa. Por suerte se justifica con el final feliz.

También la reacción de los padres es poco creíble, o sea, quién en su sano juicio aceptaría que su hija salga con un hombre tan mayor así tan naturalmente y encima si es su mejor amigo??? Mmmm creo que nadie, pero bueno, dado que sólo es una ficción no pasa a mayores.

[Crimson Syn]

As I stood there shyly, half in moonlight and half in shadow, I slowly hooked my fingers into the side of my tiny panties. I could see Mr. Harding’s eyes blazing as they stared at me, and as I shivered under his gaze, I slowly pulled the thin material to the side...

Madison Faye sucks you into this taboo world of sinful fantasies that just makes me devour each and every one of her books. Legal is just another deliciously dirty read to add to her repertoire. Just when I think it can’t get any better, she comes out with this sinful little tale.
Chelsea’s been dreaming of her Dad’s best friend and neighbor Mr. Harding for a few years now, but he’s forbidden. Not only is he an older man, he’s also married. When Chelsea returns from college, she’s changed; she’s more feminine and confidant in herself. When she hears about Mr. Harding’s divorce something powerful and extremely taboo comes over her and she becomes determined to have Mr. Harding as her own.
Jake Harding has been fantasizing about his best friend’s young daughter for a long time and when he finally hears she’s coming home from winter break he decides he needs to see her. A forbidden voyeur experience leads to one of the hottest moments of his life. Chelsea has given herself to him and he just can’t get enough of her. Now, if he could only tell his best friend that he’s been sleeping with his innocent daughter everything will be just fine...right?
This dirty, dirty book is filled with taboo naughtiness, and very public displays of affection. Ladies I assure you, you won’t regret getting into this naughty tale.

[Jennifer]

Chelsea is 18 and has the hots for her dad's best friend who lives next door. As she has developed into a woman, it is always Mr. Harding that plays a role in her hot fantasies. Mr. Harding (Jake) is married to a grumpy woman who he wonders if he ever loved. It's not necessarily his unhappiness that makes him take notice of Chelsea who seems to have blossomed overnight, but he does start to notice her.

When she goes off to college, Jake's wife cheats on him and they separate, leaving him single for the first time in a long while. Chelsea's break from school is certainly well-timed, as they finally give in to some of their feelings for each other.

The taboo of a much older man being with a girl that could be his daughter didn't bother me as much as Chelsea being portrayed as baby hungry. I had a hard time believing a 19 year old virgin would be that turned on by the idea of getting pregnant when her adult life had just started. There is lots of unprotected sex in this book and it leads to the obvious.

[Cheyenne]

This was one super hot story. Chelsea has a crush on her married neighbor, Jake. He just happens to be best friends with her father. He's 39 and she's 19. Once Jake separates from him wife there is no stopping these two. Jake has had his eye on the prize, Chelsea for sometime. Chelsea has been saving herself for Jake to take her virginity. And boy does he. These two sneak around hooking up together under her parents noses. What will happen when Chelsea's parents find out about Jake? Does Jake truly want Chelsea or is she just his plaything? This was a super hot and taboo book that pushes the boundaries in a good way. Did I mention it was extremely hot? It will melt the panties off you. I can't wait to get my hands on more from Madison Faye.

[Edit~A]

I love that I was his little barely legal slut, stripping and playing with myself for him like his own private porn show.

I have many mixed feelings about this book. As an adult novel, the plot itself is interesting, however, I have to admit that the language used there was so cringy. Plus all the errors that this e-book had... It needed an editor for sure. More than once the POVs were wrong, and for a second it threw you back.

However, as the author warns in the beginning of the book the book is a lot, and by A LOT I mean A LOT. There were some fantasy stuff, particularly the dinner scene, that was fun to read, and it is an entertaining fantasy, however, it is what it is, fantasy, because I do not believe that that is possible to perform.

[Jennifer McGurk Finn]

Chelsea McKenzie is 19 years old, a virgin, living in Florida and getting ready to start college in Boston when summer is over. She's crushing hard on her neighbor, Jake Harding. Jake is almost 40 years old, her Dad's best friend and he's married to a cold-hearted bitch. Jake can't stop thinking impure thoughts about his buddy's daughter and he feels terrible about it. While away at school Chelsea's Mom tells her that Jake's wife is pregnant and they are so happy. She is devastated until she's home for a visit and is told they split up because the baby wasn't Jake's. Now it's time to make her move !