Although most of the characters, even the new ones, and the theme were true to the spirit of the movie, the plot and pacing left a little to be desired. Hanoi Xan and a couple of his cronies are brought in as some of the minor villains, sure, but why bring back Lizardo slash John Worfin as the main baddie? He had his run in Across the Eighth Dimension. He lost. Let's see something new here.
The constant cutting from scene to scene needs to be signaled better, either by changing the colors or the look of the environment, or hell even a "Meanwhile, across world..." tag thrown into the panel.
In addition, the several grammatical and typographical errors and some very confusing panels gave the book a slap-dash, unpolished feel. This is especially disappointing, because the drawing is so nicely done.
Granted, as a fan of the movie I was expecting a lot out of this book, but, even if I'd not been, I think I still would have been a bit disappointed.