November Hunt is my first Jess Lourey book.
Quick recap, Tom Kicker is shot by his best friend, Clive. Tom's daughter hires Mira to investigate because she believes there is more to her father's death than a hunting accident. And, being a mystery, of course there is more.
I love quirky fun reads. I love a mystery and I love a laugh, so this seemed right up my alley.
SPOILER DISCLAIMER: I don't think I really spoil anything, but I point out a few scenes and some lines.
What I Liked:
The quirky characters - I like Peggy, Julius Metzer, Jed, Mira. I think they all add fun elements.
Snazzy comments, even if they were just thoughts - like when Mira is describing a huge furnace, "My first thougth was that the witch in Hansel and Gretel would have loved it." Love that line.
And, Chuck, I want a Chuck. I want him to think "I should double-check his belly to make sure I hadn't missed a spot."
Small town lore. I grew up in a small town in Montana, and we all have thoughts about the people who are distant - emotionally. For instance, the theory that Clive murdered his wife and children and fed them to the pigs, yeah, total small town. And I loved it.
Some truthful elements: Such as Hallie not being able to hear her father's response to Clive when they argued. Let's be honest, we just don't always get the full fight. LOVED, that Jess added this tidbit. And that she didn't use the typical, something loud obscured his words. I repeat: I really, loved this, such a small element that lends big impact of credibility.
Even the story line worked for me.
What I didn't like:
The political aspect. Maybe this is brought up in one of the prior books in this series, but to me, it read as if the author was coming through and preaching. I read to escape a lot of crud I encounter daily. Sadly, the political aspect is one that drives me nuts. I have family that are far right and some that are far left. When we gather, it's round after round of "you're brainwashed," "No, you're brainwashed." After an hour I'm banging my head on a wall in an attempt to be brain dead.
I see the series won the Lefty award, but I don't see why this has to be political.
There were many moments where I was pulled from the story. Just piddly things, but still.
Inconsistencies: Peggy's book is due in a month and a few hours later it's due in two weeks.
She tells Hallie, she's her only client. However, she had just accepted payment from Peggy so no, she's not her only client.
And the author stepping into the story:
When Mira is berating her excitement while speaking with Johnny and points out she should lose the exclamation points. No, the exclamation points are for the reader, Mira shouldn't be aware of them. She should be "I need to control my voice, if it goes up another octave I'll burst his ear drum."
Things that just don't make sense:
"I rolled my eyes, but quietly." Um, I have never heard an eye roll. I've seen them roll, but even with my good hearing, I've never heard one.
"He's getting a crown on his wisdom tooth." What dentist would do that? It's a wisdom tooth, it would cost thousands less to just yank it.
And one more peeve: The whole budgeting scene. I have no idea where the Battle Lake police department shops, but I think every police station in the nation wants that number. The department needs four Kevlar vests, four communication systems, four battery units, AND two full surveillance kits. And $3700 is going to get them all that. WOW! Either they have an in with some company or I would fear for those officers using that cheap equipment.
Now, why should I point out this piddly stuff? Because I really think Jess has a good story formula. But, I want to read one all the way through without being yanked out. Those piddly things give me a reason to go wash dishes, throw in a load of laundry, vacuum, run errands, watch TV and then, just before I fall asleep, remember, "Oh yeah, I have a book I haven't finished yet."
I like being sucked in because I can't stop turning the pages. I like debating how long I can stave off my children with snacks rather than making dinner to find out why someone is hospitalized. *NOTE: My children don't starve, I love them dearly and feed them well.