I was pleasantly surprised with “Mass Effect: Revelation”, and planned on reading the rest of the novels. In fact, I hoped to read through them all before Mass Effect 3 was released. Unfortunately, the fourth novel, “Deception”, picked up some very bad reviews (I realize it’s from a different author), and I put further Mass Effect reading on hold until a week or so ago.
OVERALL: 3.6 out of 5
“Mass Effect: Ascension” is a great science fiction adventure complete with good guys who have hearts of gold, bad guys who are lower than snakes, a couple of others who think they’re doing the right thing, a daring one-man rescue against impossible odds, and finally a well described and very professional covert strike in hostile territory (albeit, pulled off by the bad guys). At the center of all of this is a twelve-year old girl who draws all the principal characters together. She isn’t the type of “poor little girl” that readers are going to get misty-eyed about (maybe if I had an autistic child at Gillian’s level), but she definitely plays the role she needs to play.
So, again Mr. Karpyshyn delivers the goods. I understand he recently retired from BioWare (and video games in general) to focus on his novelist career. I look forward to some original worlds and ideas from him.
CHARACTERS: 3 out of 5
Kahlee Sanders was more interesting in the first book than this one. She is mostly the conscience of the other characters (who keeps making the wrong decisions and conclusions, based on a belief in the inherent goodness of people), though she gets to see some action too. She definitely has a stronger “mother instinct” in this one, particularly toward Gillian, but also to Hendel and, to lesser extent, Lemm.
Hendel Mitra is a fun, rough and tough guy I think most male readers can enjoy. This man’s force of will is more-or-less epic, and he plays the real father-figure to Gillian.
Gillian is silent, but not necessarily boring. She becomes more likeable once she gets aboard the Migrant Fleet and meets Quarians.
Paul Grayson is a drug addict, but clearly cares about his daughter. He is also a Cerberus agent of some skill and experience, probably among their best at thinking on his feet.
Pel, Paul’s “old buddy” is no Lando. This sadistic terrorist is like an evil Shaft. Evil Space Shaft.
Lemm’Shal nar Tesleya is probably my favorite character in the book. He’s Quarian, young but experienced, and is the closest thing this book ever comes to having a cowboy.
PACE: 4 out of 5
Mr. Karpyshyn seems to have a lot of talent in keeping his story moving forward, even when it has to hit the pause button a dozen times in a single chapter to explain the setting’s background or science to readers who may not be familiar with the games. Things move fast, and the book isn’t too long. The ending is a bit abrupt though.
STORY: 4 out of 5
Being familiar with the games, comics, and first book, I was real curious where this book was going. It doesn’t seem to have anything to do at all with Commander Shepard’s story (though important events between the Quarians and Cerberus that occur in this book are mentioned in Mass Effect 2), whereas the first book tied directly into the first game.
What we have here is a totally different story about people living, dying, trying to do the right thing, and others trying to make easy money against the backdrop of everything else that is going on. “Ascension” isn’t so much about the Reapers, but provides a better look at Cerberus, how it operates, and the Illusive Man in particular (who is mostly a presence in the story, rather than appearing and doing a lot of talking).
This is basically an espionage adventure set in the Mass Effect universe, with a few adults taking interest in a young girl who may (or may not) be particularly special at all.
DIALOGUE: 3 out of 5
The dialogue in this book is good. Characters never preach (except when they’re supposed to), Gillian as a twelve-year old autistic with amazing powers is written well, and everyone fits their roles perfectly. I would have liked a slightly harder, ground-glass edge to Pel though; not necessarily using street lingo, but just something harder in his verbal communications. He comes across too much like a typical middle manager when he should be an afro-wearing Cowboy Bebop bad dude. Yet I know a couple of guys who do remind me of him…
STYLE/TECHNICAL: 4 out of 5
Writing is clear and easy to understand, and the action scenes feel like action scenes (something I am realizing few authors can actually pull off). Technologies and concepts even I wasn’t immediately familiar with were explained quickly and without slowing the story down too much.
The viewpoint shifts between quite a few characters (starting out with only a couple though), but it’s usually at the chapter breaks and it’s never too hard to tell who’s eyes you’re looking through.