Summary: Heather finally gets injected with the fearless serum and is overjoyed over her newfound fearlessness, Ed starts walking without crutches after dropping them into a dumpster, Josh is in love with Heather and is worried about how the serum could affect her later, Tatiana deals with Ed suddenly stopping communication with her, Tom and Natasha work together to try and stop Loki, Tom and Natasha get thrown in a jail within Loki's mansion with Tom knowing that George betrayed him, Tatiana and Gaia overhear Loki convincing the lie of Natasha being a spy to be a truth and get outraged of being bamboozled, and after George is revealed to be working with Loki, George gets shot.
Alone could have made for a mundane read, only for the WTF-ness factors to kick in near the end where George is revealed to have tricked Tom and Gaia. The twist of good people turning out to be villains was overused enough but I think it was a complete waste of George's character and I'm still angry that it happened.
1. In the very first Gaia POV, she's already complaining about how worthless her speshul skills supposedly are. Not only have we heard this in many books up to this point, but it's completely idiotic and should have been edited out entirely. If she really doesn't see much use in her gifts, why can't she share them? Who wouldn't want to see Gaia be a combat instructor, be a private tutor, or see her taking part in afterschool Homework Help?
2. For Tatiana being the new girl in Gaia's school, how come no one has tried to make friends with her outside of Heather and Ed? And don't give me that "Because people in New York are ignorant assholes!9" excuse, I actually want to know why Tatiana hasn't gained the attention of a peer or two. You'd think some students interested in Russian culture would at least love to have a conversation with her. I know New York is extremely diverse and the kids are used to having students of all different backgrounds attend school with them, but it's still bad writing to assume no one would ever bother befriending a new student.
3. I initially thought having Gaia and Tatiana work together to prevent their parents getting married while slightly improving their's but after finishing Alone, my opinion completely changed.
4. Gaia's fearlessness actually being because of a "mysterious mutation within the womb" made my eyes roll.
5. I like how Heather claimed she was turning over a new leaf and was planning to start acting nicer yet she seems to have entirely forgotten about that by judging a taxi driver and flipping him off.
6. Cancelling Loki's bank accounts might be effective in a short term, but Loki can easily get more money through robbery or some shit and lock it all up in a large, secure safe in a location only he knows. Even without regarding money, Loki still has henchmen and gadgets to help him do whatever his subplot orders so he wouldn't be "helpless" like the story wants to claim.
7. Gaia brings up how she knows "a million cases in the history books- and the newspapers- where someone who seemed like a saint turned out to be more of a devil." Which is great, but the same thing has happened numerous times in her own life. Why couldn't she mention in-story betrayals to Tatiana right then?
8. I found it strange how Loki made a pop culture reference (To The Matrix of all things) when he doesn't normally do that.
9. It was pretty stupid how Tom easily fell for the obvious ruse of a girl masquerading as Gaia and ended up getting captured in jail as a result. Being a secret agent, he should have known better.
10. As I mentioned beforehand, I really hated what happened to George. The betrayal came from nowhere and probably served just to give the dwindling plot a half-hearted attempt at drama. Being a character I also sort of liked, I was pissed when he was killed off.
I wonder what's going to happen in the next FEARless book...?