"The Memory Book" was okay; hence, my two star rating.
If the whole of the book had been "Part 2", pages 129 - 207, I would have rated it a 4.
The beginning of "The Memory Book" tries hard but fails to deliver. As writers we're told, and trained, to allow or readers to see through the eyes of our characters to transport them into the pages of the books we write. However, for me, "Part 1" houses too much of the descriptive which causes the book to unfold slowly. My attention waned.
Also, in "Part 1" a family secret is revealed that should have caused more reactiveness than what it did. It should've rocked the boat so much that it flipped over and had the main characters on the verge of drowning! Instead, due to one main character's illness, what could have been immense was lackluster at best.
The modern day Phoebe I felt little patience for. Her troubles big and yet far from insurmountable. I had trouble identifying with why she would feel so fearful to speak the truth of her life. Her story was hers but, she hadn't been the cause; nor, did she seem the type that would carry the sins of her father forward. The biggest hurdle for her to break through was that of vunerability.
Part of the disconnect for me could be that I'm reading from the perspective of being a 40 year old woman with a wealth of life's experiences under my belt. Perhaps, a reader in their late teens/early (to mid) 20's would fare much better within the whole of this book's contents? Would find more areas of relatable concerns and be able to feel for the modern day Phoebe more so than what I found myself capable of?
As I wrote earlier, "Part 2", the story of Phoebe's Great-Aunt has my heart. It was fast-paced. I was completely drawn in. I was hoping for the same miracles as the main characters. The miracles of new starts, distance from danger, the ability to change history and outcomes from bittersweet and sad to beautiful. If all I had read in "The Memory Book" had been the story of the Great-Aunt, her brother Lewis, their father, and Jonathan I wouldn't have been able to put this book down! "Part 2" is alive with emotion and breaks my heart as it concludes.
If you've ever been witness to abuse, or the victim of it, "Part 2" will hit home for you too.
Unfortunately, the ending of "Part 2" left me with questions that the book never answers: Did Jonathan die? If not, did he still try to honor his word by removing Lewis from his father's home to care for him as his own? If so, how was it that Lewis still ended up being raised by his father?
I know "Part 2" was set in 1927; however, couldn't truth still set Lewis free if Phoebe's friends, after her death, intervened? And, if Phoebe's father was the cause of the "accident" that took her life, and even if Lewis was the only one to survive to live to tell about it, how was Phoebe's dad not thrown in jail for his drunken rage and actions?
Despite the loose ends of "Part 2's" conclusion it was well vetted. If only the whole of this book had been as thouroughly assessed as "Part 2" it would be far more than just an okay read. As it stands, the rest of "The Memory Book" layers were either too neat, too predictable, or left me wanting... Not wanting to read more but wanting all of "Part 1" and "Part 3" to be presented differently.
This is probably my harshest review to date. I suppose it's because "Part 2" made me passionate, engaged my 5 senses; I was there, within the book's pages. What a let down to not have those feelings for all of the characters, and storylines, presented from page 1 through 292.
I've been left feeling "blah" and deflated. Almost without the wherewithall to pick up another book, to go on another adventure; of course, I did say, "Almost." 😉