Warning May Contain Course language and many spoilers.
Oh and sometimes i may be just yelling at a invisible Sherrilyn Kenyon. so dont freak out :D
Now dont get me wrong i absolutly love this series, so my bashing coming out next means no disrespect to those die hard fans out there, and i know you're there.
this is very long. so if you have already read this book i encourage you to read this, but if u havent read the book yet, most of what im saying will seem like gibberish to you so, either read the book and come back, or just dont read the book. its either ignorance or arrogance, you choose.
Okay so so much to say about this book. First, this entire book was just an excuse for character developement. the conflict was never really relevant.
we spend so much time watching nick learn and grow, and no time at all finding out who or what is the problem here. near the end im not ever sure how they figured out it was the person who did it.
Which brings me to my next point. sherrilyn created a character all in the last ten pages to take the fall for the plots conflict. and you could tell the ending was rushed, like "i need to finish this book by tomarrow, so lets make someone to be the bad guy, even though were so far already into the story." that was very slopy writing there. she created this characted that was NEVER relevant to the plot, or even existed for that matter till the end, just because a scape goat was needed for the ending. at this point it would have been better if it was Stone or someone like the jock assholes was the "bad guy" so we can still identify where we have our good and bad in this story. also with the new character being possed by some evil demon set out to stir shit? where the hell did that come into this, and nick can just talk to it to in a language he never learned at the end? this brings me to my next point.
Nick thoughout this book developed the ability to learn to do things when the story calls for it. this isnt Dragon Ball Z. how can he learn to go Super Sayan Malachai in the middle of the book just because hes "Angry". that makes perfect sence. he has all this raw untaped malachi power, and learns to create magic armor that takes "years to master" in seconds because the plot calls for it. cause when i get angry i learn new skills instantly and can preform them without flaw. so when im really upset i can just fly, and do whatever the hell feels right? no this made this book extra shitty. sherrilyn if u want nick to know how to blast demons, teach him to blast demons. dont just write "with his anger, he gained the ability to blast demons". Sloppy sloppy work.
Next the plot changed soo much from where we left off in invincible. nick was supposed to learn how to control his powers and kept safe, on the contrary that didnt happen. nothing close to that really. all that went on was 1. something dangerous/bad happens 2.Nick gets hurt, and goes to hospital. 3. Nick gets better. then repeat these steps until we run out of pages. i swear if this book was a bit longer i could tell you what happen next based on this pattern that formed. it was as if sherrilyn took a basic plot, and just kept repeating it, and repeating it. all this buying time for character developemnt.
This book left too many questions than it answered. especially with some characters. why do we only get little glimpses of character developement from some characters, *cough* Adarian *cough* Grim *cough* Caleb *cough* (the list goes on). why do we never see there motivations for doing anything, just that they did it. like a child we dont get yet understand why something is the way it is, but for now we have to accept it. please explain why adarian loves cherise, just so i can sleep at night. this goes against all his other actions. like beating her around when he used to live with them, but now HE CANNOT HARM HER BECAUSE IT WOULD HURT HIM SO MUCH ON AN EMOTIONAL LEVEL. O_O when did the ruthless killer with no emotions get a heart? cause mere minutes before this he was a cold unfeeling monster who was going to murder his own son for his own selfish gains. AND GRIM!? why is he ploting in the end to hurt nick, this makes abosolutly no sence with what he was in the previous book. Previous book grim-" i must help teach and nurture this child untill he blosoms into a beautiful flower". This book grim- "i must end this childs life in the most painful and horrible was possible". is it just me or do you not see the transition too.
The ending of this book was a sad excuse for a cliffhanger. once again calling kody's loyalty into question. WE HAVE ALREADY BEEN THROUGH THIS! why would she put herself everything shes been through for him, make us fall in love with her, give the two of them a unbreakable bond of love. and now try to turn us against her? fuck off already. (not u sherry im just mad) why are you making this your cliffhanger?! we already know that she has a duty and nothing will change where shes from, or what shes supposed to do. but my gosh u made this story. dont forget the shit u put them through!
Sherrilyn kenyon, please dont make a book like this one again. if the next one is as bad as this one was, im dropping this series. not threatning you just asking you to please. PLEASE! do better next time.
But it has a silver lining, heres the some things and in the character developement i liked.
Archeron- He never changes, he remains constant thoughout the entire thing. always remaining badass, and dude props for making Adarian shit himself just by looking at you. u need a trophy. a "i made a extremly dangerous and scary man shit himself in fear, just but looking at my awesomeness" trophy.
Cherise Gautier- you see her change for a mom who only looks at you when you do bad, to someone who genuinely cares, and understands your struggles, from a emotional wreck who could possibly disown you, to a emotional wreck who sort of gets you.
Kody- Kody becomes this amazing dream girl people wait there entire lives for. shes there when you need her, always looking good, and knows what to say and do to cheer you up. as she and nick grow closer you can really see how big of a influence she will be in this series
The message of cyberbullying and suicide was very inspiring. showing how everyone is special and life is a gift to be treasured, and dont let the haters win.