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Taryn Malloy Fantasy #1
Elfbitten
Taryn Malloy is a Bright Elf, her magic lies within her blood and is fueled by sex and lust. Recovering from a horrible breakup from her long time boyfriend, Taryn is persuaded by her best friend, Roxy, to get out of bed and get on with her life. Taryn has let her magic diminish to a dangerous level and Roxy is determined to help her get over Cillian and she knows the best way to get over an elf is to get under another one. Roxy takes Taryn to a club that caters to the carnal desires of the supernatural community of their city. With elves, pixies, humans, fairies, vampires, lust, revenge and more, Taryn will recover from this breakup no matter what Roxy has to do.
111 pages, Nook
First published June 11, 2011
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January 7, 2018
short, hot read, can't wait to read the rest of the series
October 14, 2011
My Review:
If you like hot paranormal sex with sweaty, girating, grinding bodies; add in revenge sex with the ex-boyfriend while the new girlfriend watches; and a hot girl on girl fight, then you'll LOVE this hot short story. For a quick read, the depth of the characters is quite good, the story is well-written with only a couple minor errors, which were easy to overlook.
I was quite impressed with the author's imagination and detailed descriptions throughout the story. Definitely worth reading! I rate this a 3.5. It could have rated higher if the story were part of a larger novel ~ I'd love to find out if Taryn meets up with her mystery dancer again, and am intrigued to find out why might happen next. . .
If you like hot paranormal sex with sweaty, girating, grinding bodies; add in revenge sex with the ex-boyfriend while the new girlfriend watches; and a hot girl on girl fight, then you'll LOVE this hot short story. For a quick read, the depth of the characters is quite good, the story is well-written with only a couple minor errors, which were easy to overlook.
I was quite impressed with the author's imagination and detailed descriptions throughout the story. Definitely worth reading! I rate this a 3.5. It could have rated higher if the story were part of a larger novel ~ I'd love to find out if Taryn meets up with her mystery dancer again, and am intrigued to find out why might happen next. . .
January 8, 2012
Grabbed this when I saw it free on Amazon and I was pleasantly surprised, was really impressed with this author who's new to me! It was more of a novella vs a full length novella but its definitely worth a read. I'm going to be snatching up the other books by this author asap.
September 25, 2011
This was fun!! If you like a short and sexy read, with a dash of funny, then this is for you!
January 23, 2012
This was a great read! I'll absolutely be downloading the other two. Loved it!
December 29, 2018
3 star Quickie
This little novella is quite literally a quickie. It is very erotic and very short. Taryn recently was cheated on and goes to a club full of other supernatural creatures with her best friend. The club is all about dancing and sex.
This little novella is quite literally a quickie. It is very erotic and very short. Taryn recently was cheated on and goes to a club full of other supernatural creatures with her best friend. The club is all about dancing and sex.
October 16, 2020
For a quick steamy read, hell yeah. There is a slight plot to it, but honestly, no more than your average porn. Which is what this essentially is, written porn. Great for that though!
March 6, 2014
A HOT NIGHT OF ELF MAGICK
(★★½) Well, ELFBITTEN was a short, hot surprise! And thankfully, my recent bad luck with Secret Book Claus(e) picks seems to be over.
I enjoyed ELFBITTEN for what is was—a quick, one-sitting erotic story within a paranormal setting. So if you like erotic paranormals and want something more than flash erotica, give this a try while it’s free. But be forewarned: ELFBITTEN is the first of an expensive multi-part serial (see last paragraph).
Written in the first person POV, the entire story spans one night that Taryn and her best friend, Roxy, spend at a club for both paranormal beings and humans. Taryn, still recovering from the break-up with her cheating ex-boyfriend, finds—among other things ^_^—healing in the “magic raising” at the club. (TBT, the on-goings at the club reminded me of the moon heat… er, partying… in Keri Arthur’s Riley Jenson series.)
Given that ELFBITTEN is a novelette, I didn’t expect much by way of world-building and characterization. However, there was enough for me to relate to Taryn and Roxy (everyone needs a BF like her) and to chuckle in certain parts. And the little tidbits about the paranormal world definitely quirked my interest. The writing was decent enough but could have benefited from a more thorough editing/proofing (especially re: paragraph structuring) for smoother reading. I’ll admit that my hand twitched a few times for my red pen but there was enough in the storyline to compensate for it.
Again, quick and easy read but I doubt that I’ll continue with this serial or any other works by Ms. Sin for now. At the moment, I’m a little fairy-taled out. Also, there are currently 5 “books” to the Taryn Malloy Fantasy “series”, with each part priced @ $3.99 but ranging from only 26 to 49pgs (which probably includes excerpts).
Total cost = $16 for 204pgs (but pg# probably less for actual stories) = um, maybe not. (Of course, I could get #1-3 for $6.99 but can’t help but wonder how it could be listed at 208pgs.)
HEAT LEVEL: erotica (explicit language; several sex scenes; multiple partners; F/F encounters)
* My thanks, Secret Book Claus(e)—you did good! Topic/page minimum close enough and it was a nice read with a drink. ^_^
(★★½) Well, ELFBITTEN was a short, hot surprise! And thankfully, my recent bad luck with Secret Book Claus(e) picks seems to be over.
I enjoyed ELFBITTEN for what is was—a quick, one-sitting erotic story within a paranormal setting. So if you like erotic paranormals and want something more than flash erotica, give this a try while it’s free. But be forewarned: ELFBITTEN is the first of an expensive multi-part serial (see last paragraph).
Written in the first person POV, the entire story spans one night that Taryn and her best friend, Roxy, spend at a club for both paranormal beings and humans. Taryn, still recovering from the break-up with her cheating ex-boyfriend, finds—among other things ^_^—healing in the “magic raising” at the club. (TBT, the on-goings at the club reminded me of the moon heat… er, partying… in Keri Arthur’s Riley Jenson series.)
Given that ELFBITTEN is a novelette, I didn’t expect much by way of world-building and characterization. However, there was enough for me to relate to Taryn and Roxy (everyone needs a BF like her) and to chuckle in certain parts. And the little tidbits about the paranormal world definitely quirked my interest. The writing was decent enough but could have benefited from a more thorough editing/proofing (especially re: paragraph structuring) for smoother reading. I’ll admit that my hand twitched a few times for my red pen but there was enough in the storyline to compensate for it.
Again, quick and easy read but I doubt that I’ll continue with this serial or any other works by Ms. Sin for now. At the moment, I’m a little fairy-taled out. Also, there are currently 5 “books” to the Taryn Malloy Fantasy “series”, with each part priced @ $3.99 but ranging from only 26 to 49pgs (which probably includes excerpts).
Total cost = $16 for 204pgs (but pg# probably less for actual stories) = um, maybe not. (Of course, I could get #1-3 for $6.99 but can’t help but wonder how it could be listed at 208pgs.)
HEAT LEVEL: erotica (explicit language; several sex scenes; multiple partners; F/F encounters)
* My thanks, Secret Book Claus(e)—you did good! Topic/page minimum close enough and it was a nice read with a drink. ^_^
May 5, 2012
If the cover didn't already clue you in this is an erotic paranormal romance. It starts out, and stays mostly, in a club. Now this club is more of a sex club where all kinds of paranormal creatures are enjoying themselves in full view of everyone else. If you are not into detail sex scenes then I would tell you to steer clear, because its truthfully 100 pages of sex scene.
As far as erotic fiction goes, now mind you I haven't read that many, I think it was well done. The scenes flowed together well and you didn't get that feeling that the sex was pieced in. There was also an actual story line and although you didn't get the impression that the story was leading anywhere at least the characters had some depth and purpose.
I haven't decided if I will be checking out the next one yet, but if I see it pop up on sale I may just buy it.
As far as erotic fiction goes, now mind you I haven't read that many, I think it was well done. The scenes flowed together well and you didn't get that feeling that the sex was pieced in. There was also an actual story line and although you didn't get the impression that the story was leading anywhere at least the characters had some depth and purpose.
I haven't decided if I will be checking out the next one yet, but if I see it pop up on sale I may just buy it.
June 12, 2022
This is a reread. Both my rating and response has altered slightly from my Original Reveiw posted over a year and a half ago, when this was listed as a standalone story.
I've now read Elfbitten as the first book in the Taryn Malloy Fantasy series and unfortunatly, its lost a bit of its sparkle.
Yes, it is still very erotic, and there was an element of fun, but the lackluster story telling (with its wham-bam nature, and pathetic "revenge plot") stand out even more in this format, which is too short for leading into a full blown series.
All that being said, I'm still willing to give the series a chance and am currently readingbook chapter two.
I've now read Elfbitten as the first book in the Taryn Malloy Fantasy series and unfortunatly, its lost a bit of its sparkle.
Yes, it is still very erotic, and there was an element of fun, but the lackluster story telling (with its wham-bam nature, and pathetic "revenge plot") stand out even more in this format, which is too short for leading into a full blown series.
All that being said, I'm still willing to give the series a chance and am currently reading
February 19, 2024
Elfbitten is a short and steamy novella about a Bright Elf who is dragged to a club by her well-meaning BFF as she has spent six weeks moping around the house, following a break-up with her boyfriend of three years.
There is lots of 'dancing' fae-style involved with this story, plus other characters that I would love to know more about. Taryn also sees her ex at the club with his new bit of stuff, so there is some fun there too.
Basically, this novella is a short, hot, and fun read. It is the start of a new novella series that I would love to read more about. Definitely recommended by me.
* Verified Purchase - November 2012 *
Merissa
Archaeolibrarian - I Dig Good Books!
Oct 14, 2016
There is lots of 'dancing' fae-style involved with this story, plus other characters that I would love to know more about. Taryn also sees her ex at the club with his new bit of stuff, so there is some fun there too.
Basically, this novella is a short, hot, and fun read. It is the start of a new novella series that I would love to read more about. Definitely recommended by me.
* Verified Purchase - November 2012 *
Merissa
Archaeolibrarian - I Dig Good Books!
Oct 14, 2016
December 1, 2014
Elfbitten by Leila Bryce Sin
One long sex driven night in a club introduces us to Taryn Mallory and the pulsating magic of Elfs, the wickedness of vampires and the erotic bite of an Elf hunter. Whew!
Taryn was recently dumped by her cheating boyfriend and has been wasting away at home. Her best friend Roxy has had enough and literally drags Taryn to the club to get over the ex-asshat. What Taryn needs is to recharge her magic with a night of wild abandonment and boy oh boy does the club deliver it in abundance. Throw in a girl fight and a little revenge and it’s all good. On to part two Elfstuck;)
One long sex driven night in a club introduces us to Taryn Mallory and the pulsating magic of Elfs, the wickedness of vampires and the erotic bite of an Elf hunter. Whew!
Taryn was recently dumped by her cheating boyfriend and has been wasting away at home. Her best friend Roxy has had enough and literally drags Taryn to the club to get over the ex-asshat. What Taryn needs is to recharge her magic with a night of wild abandonment and boy oh boy does the club deliver it in abundance. Throw in a girl fight and a little revenge and it’s all good. On to part two Elfstuck;)
February 18, 2013
Not a bad book. I feel like I say that a lot, but that's kind of how I feel. I wasn't blown away, but it was still more than just okay.
Taryn, an elf, goes out to a club at the prompting of her friend and fellow elf Roxy a month after her cheating boyfriend dumps her. Sex recharges this group of non humans so the club scene is full of magic and sex. I loved the revenge and the sex, but I didn't see much of a plot/point to the story apart from that. I did like this book and am going to buy the next because it looks like an actual story develops in the next. I'm curious as to what else Taryn will get up to in Elfstruck. 3.5 out of 5.
Taryn, an elf, goes out to a club at the prompting of her friend and fellow elf Roxy a month after her cheating boyfriend dumps her. Sex recharges this group of non humans so the club scene is full of magic and sex. I loved the revenge and the sex, but I didn't see much of a plot/point to the story apart from that. I did like this book and am going to buy the next because it looks like an actual story develops in the next. I'm curious as to what else Taryn will get up to in Elfstruck. 3.5 out of 5.
April 14, 2012
In spite of the rather promising world-building of this urban fantasy erotic short story, there were a number of scenes that were seemingly thrown in for the hell of it. I also had some issues with how Taryn (first person POV) knew what her friend was up to even though her line of sight was obscured. I can dismiss all of these issues if not for the lack of empathy for the narrator, Taryn. The story had potential but failed in the telling.
September 22, 2012
Well first theres heart break, then theres a chick fight with a fairy in a sex nightclub. Then theres revenge for aforementioned heartbreak. Add to this lots and lots of sex and various paranormal creatures having it and toss in a Vampire for our main female character (an Elf) to have hot sex with. That pretty much sums up this novella.
For erotica, and for free, it wasnt bad. Nothing that I would rave about but it held my interest for as long as it lasted.
For erotica, and for free, it wasnt bad. Nothing that I would rave about but it held my interest for as long as it lasted.
February 12, 2013
A girl's night out to the extreme~at a magic raising sex club no less. Be warned: You'll need a warm partner or a cold shower after this one. Or batteries and a great toy might do the trick. This novella length story introduces us to an interesting world and some sexually voracious characters. I'll never look at elves the same again. Like a good porn, it's light on plot and heavy on the sex, but not in a bad way.
February 24, 2012
Hmmmm. My first erotic type book. Very descriptive, funny and interesting. Cute story line and auctally I am interested in reading the next in line. I am venturing outside what I normally read. Taryn and her BFF are a great pair. The ex-elf is a prick and gets what he deserves...very cute characters.
June 5, 2012
This is definitely a romance, if you don't like sex scenes then don't read this book... If you enjoy romance then this is the book for you. The characters were likable, and it was great for a quick read. There is not much depth to the plot, but for a short story it was good. I would give it 3.5, 4 if you love romance!
January 21, 2013
This was a freebie on Amazon if you are you looking for a nice short erotic paranormal read with Elf’s, this is a good light read.
It is well written with a cute storyline, and it is steaming HOT, HOT, HOT!
It is well written with a cute storyline, and it is steaming HOT, HOT, HOT!
July 28, 2015
A brief introduction
This is short but actually not bad.. I was worried it was going to be too graphic but it was okay. I may look into the next one as I'm a sucker for stories involving the Fae.
This is short but actually not bad.. I was worried it was going to be too graphic but it was okay. I may look into the next one as I'm a sucker for stories involving the Fae.
March 19, 2012
You want a story all about sex, then this is a story for want to read! While I had no problem with this book I am not sure if I will read the rest of this series.
November 7, 2011
Very Hot!!
October 1, 2012
A nice fast erotic read. Very much enjoyed and plan to read the trilogy and the spin off from it. Something to enjoy if you want to finish a book in a few hours or day.
May 8, 2012
Hot Erotic Short!
September 21, 2012
Reminded me of Riley Jensen's world.
February 21, 2012
Sometimes you get a little hungry for a different read... ;)
I look forward to devouring the second installment of this series.
I look forward to devouring the second installment of this series.
March 31, 2012
It would have been better if it was one a book of stories but it was really cute. I loved the hunter and the vampire.
April 26, 2012
Great book! I loved the fact that lust and sex gives power to the participants magic! Very cool twist!
May 15, 2012
Didn't realize it was an erotic book. Haha
December 31, 2015
I'm not quite sure how to rate this story.... As far as being erotica, it rates pretty high on the "hotness" scale. Story wise, however, it was just okay, although it does get bonus points for fun.
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