A Charlotte N*GGA Finessed My Love

by Shmel Carter

Falling in love is easy. Not having it forever, is a gamble that you take with your heart. When falling in love you are never guaranteed forever it’s a chance that you take with your heart while hoping for the best outcome. Destiny is torn between two men, Tobias and Pierre. She loves Tobias and she knows the feeling is mutual, but Tobias never seems to have time for Destiny. Where Tobias is lacking, Pierre comes in and picks up all his slack showing Destiny what she has been missing out on. Thinking that Destiny would never leave, Tobias became too comfortable. After realizing he may have just lost Destiny he tries to change his ways but it may be too late. Tobias is holding on to something he should have
been let go of, and Pierre has a secret that Destiny may not accept. Find out how all this drama unfolds. Will Destiny stay with Tobias or will she leave him for Pierre who has swept her off her feet?

160 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 11, 2023

Reviews

[Amber Ganaway · Rating 4 out of 5]

The heart wants what the heart wants

This was a good story. Destiny knew she have never got into a situation with someone else when she hadn’t healed from the previous relationship. I felt bad that she embarrassed Pierre like that when it could’ve been avoided. Although Tobias didn’t step out on Destiny he was still wrong on so many levels. But he loved her and he got her back. Toy was beyond delusional it was sad. It everything worked out

[Quentin Gardner · Rating 2 out of 5]

I chose to read this because it is set in my hometown (Charlotte, NC). The plot is enticing, but I feel it wasn’t executed as well as it could have been. The characters are believable, but they could’ve been more details behind them. I also felt like it was a lot of rehashing within the story as well. I understand the story jumped between multiple character’s perspectives, but some aspects didn’t need to be repeated throughout. This was a good story, it just wasn’t for me.