Rise of Empire

The Riyria Revelations #3-4

by Michael J. Sullivan

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The birth of the Nyphron Empire has brought war to Melengar. To save her kingdom, Princess Arista runs a desperate gamble when she defies her brother and hires Royce and Hadrian to perform a dangerous mission behind the enemy's lines.

Genres: Fantasy, Audiobook, Fiction, Epic Fantasy, Adventure, High Fantasy, Magic

781 pages, Paperback

First published April 8, 2010

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Reviews

[Petrik · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.25/5 stars

It’s safe to say now that with each installment, each book in the The Riyria Revelations series consistently gets better and better in quality. The second omnibus in The Riyria Revelations titled Rise of Empire consists of the third book, Nyphron Rising, and the fourth book, The Emerald Storm, of the series. Whether on the first or second read, Rise of Empire is overall a superior collection of novels compared to the previous omnibus: Theft of Swords. Similar to my Theft of Swords review, I’ll start my review by showing you another beautiful cover art of the series done right by Marc Simonetti, and also a beautiful fanart of a scene in The Emerald Storm.

“Power rises to the top like cream and dominates the weak with cruelty disguised as -- and often even believed to be -- benevolence.”

Picture: Nyphron Rising by Marc Simonetti



Picture: Drumindor by banafria



Whether it is Nyphron Rising or The Emerald Storm, the plot in the two books contained in this omnibus felt more engrossing; maybe not that significant on the second read, but it was so much more on my first read. The series built upon the events that happened in the previous books carefully. As I said, The Riyria Revelations is not an EPIC fantasy series, but in Rise of Empire, intriguing events and themes such as civil war, pirates, politics, loyalty, friendship, and love are more evident. If this is your first time reading Rise of Empire, and you have not read any of the books in The Riyria Chronicles, then this would be where you get to see Royce and Hadrian’s background revealed for the first time. The previous installments purposely withhold this information, and on my first read, I truly felt like their characters were bland in Theft of Swords. But not this time. After finding out more about their history and personality, every aspect of the series felt more immersive. It was more interesting to see how the story will develop from their POV. Although the main plot in the series so far was still predictable to me, I will say that, on my first read, I failed to predict how the overarching story of the series will be concluded, especially regarding who the Heir of Novron is. Foundations and foreshadowing—although some were so predictable—in the first four books were written incredibly well, and I hope Sullivan managed to conclude it brick by brick on the final omnibus.

“There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us.”

Sullivan expanded the world-building of Elan further, and I found his prose to be so accessible, making this a series that could be recommended with ease for newcomers to adult fantasy series. It is worth remembering, although the writing was easy to read, considering the fact that Sullivan wrote all six books in the series back to back before publishing any of them, there was no noticeable improvement in the quality of the prose. Personally, even though new information was being shed on Royce and Hadrian in this omnibus, I still had difficulty in investing myself towards Royce. The way the narrative is written tends to hide the duo's feelings, and I wish I could care about them more on my first read. Obviously, on my second read, things have changed because I've gotten attached to both of them already.

However, the narrative was still engaging and addictive to read, and I'm thoroughly impressed with the development of the main female characters in the series: Arista, Modina, and Amilia. It was stunning how much development was put into these three characters. By this stage of the series on my first read, I genuinely thought they were superiorly written characters compared to Royce, especially Arista. Her POV chapters and her character development since The Crown Conspiracy were amazing. I strongly urge you to read and witness their developments for yourself. If you are looking for a high fantasy series with great and strong female characters, rest assured you can find them here. Sullivan proved that it IS possible to write strong and admirable female characters without being physically powerful.

“Breathe the air, taste the wine, kiss the girls, and always remember that the tales of another are never as wondrous as your own.”

I remember that one of the things that made it difficult for me to care about Royce on my first read was how often Royce was mentioned as a badass for his actions in the past, but in the present timeframe, he's smart and quick without the supposed ruthlessness. It's frequently mentioned in the two books that Royce is a legend. He can kill everyone and more. I get it already; he was an amazing assassin in the past, which we don’t get to see unless we read The Riyria Chronicles first, but I wanted to see his infamous status in actions NOW. And by actions, I do not mean one or two times occurrence like in the series so far, and they happened only in a few pages.

“That’s why you shouldn’t make vows. The moment you do, fate starts conspiring to shove them down your throat.”

On the other hand, Hadrian just became more awesome. On my first read, he was definitely my favorite of the duo. He still is! For a naive and such a kind-hearted to a fault character, Hadrian proved himself to be a beast when needed, and his legend as the Tiger of Mandalin was proven in The Emerald Storm. I'm pleased by his POV chapters. Starting from learning about his background and motivations to witnessing his battle scenes and his friendship with Royce, PLUS his loyalty to his friends? It was so easy for me to care about Hadrian.

Picture: Hadrian Blackwater by Alina Fuhrmann



Rise of Empire is a step-up from Theft of Swords. On my first read, it was better in every aspect. On the second read, it gets even better. I can confirm the popular opinion that the fans stated: the series keeps getting better with each omnibus. I gave Nyphron Rising 4 stars rating the first time I read through it. On my re-read, I'm giving it a 4.5 stars rating. As for The Emerald Storm, both first and second read received a 4 stars rating. It's slightly lower because the seafaring section was too long to my liking. Now I move on to the next and final omnibus, The Heir of Novron, which proved to be my favorite omnibus in the series five years ago, and I'm sure it will always be the case.

Nyphron Rising: 4/5 stars on my first read. 4.5/5 stars on my second read.

The Emerald Storm: 4/5 stars on my first and second read.

Rise of Empire: 8/10 stars on my first read. 8.5/10 stars on my second read.

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[Katerina · Rating 5 out of 5]

Brilliant.
Brilliant plotline. Brilliant pace. Brilliant characters. Brilliant world-building. Brilliant plot twists.
Brilliant everything.
All hail Master Sullivan!

“There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us.”

The New Empire is rising. The Church uses a half-mad fake empress to unite the Realms of Men in the name of Novron. War is raging between the imperial armies and Melengar, the only Avryn kingdom that still resists, while the Nationalist rebels under the leadership of Degan Gaunt oppose the Church's strive for world domination. And a swordsman and a thief have the potential to stop their devious schemes. Or doom the world.

“You must choose between darkness and light,a nd your choice will affect many.”

You may wonder why you should read Riyria while there are so many fantasy books out there, each of them narrating a different version of the constant battle between Good and Evil. The answer is simple: Mr.Sullivan's world of fantasy is unique, beautiful, breathtaking and absolutely, undoubtedly EPIC.

Why?
-Mr.Sullivan is excellent at manipulation. You don't know who is going to betray whom, who is an ally and who is a foe, and when you think you get a clear picture, your beliefs are turned upside down. During Rise of Empire, I was deceived, cheated and in the end, I stood wide eyed and my mouth hung open because I could not come to terms with what I just read.
-As contradictory as it may sounds, surprises isn't the only weapon in Mr.Sullivan's arsenal. He left enough hints for the reader to sense an impending doom, a catastrophe that will change Hadrian and Royce's lives forever, but you can do nothing to stop it, just wait helpless and see. And that's even more painful than the plot twists.
-Royce and Hadrian. They are an unpredictable pair, some of the greatest heroes that I have ever encountered. Hadrian is noble, tired of serving the highest bidder, he searches a greater purpose in his life. Royce on the other hand, is practical and doesn't care about morality or justice. But as his walls crumble, as we get a better perspective of the way he grew up, the lack of family and a place where he belongs, my heart breaks for him. Both Hadrian and Royce are painted so vividly that I can't help but feel that I have known them my entire life.
-The female characters. I love their courage and strength and resourcefulness. Arista has turned from a spoiled princess into a fighter, a witch and a politician, a woman who takes her fate in her own hands and proves that she is no longer a damsel in distress. Thrace and Amilia are also great, but the biggest surprise for me is Gwen. Who thought that a prostitute would be a gentle, wise and caring woman, whose affection and kindness would soften the toughest thief?
-Merrick. I hate him with a loathing passion, but he is cunning and a genious villain. The way he played Riyria is both frustrating and fascinating.
-And of course there are the epic battles, the interesting secondary characters, the spells, the warnings and a whole new world full of adventures and dangers. And goblins.

Need I say more?

[Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin · Rating 5 out of 5]

I grow to love Royce & Hadrian more and more as I read the books. These two characters are just so wonderful and I feel they fit together nicely as best friends and family. ♥



Even when one is mad with the other they just get it done and get over it. =)

"You ready?" Royce asked.
"For what?"
"Turn around. Let's go back-to-back and link arms."
"You're kidding. We aren't going to do that again, are we?"
Hadrian said miserably. "I've been sitting in cold water for hours. I'll cramp."

"You know another way to get up there?" Royce asked, and Hadrian shook his head. Royce looked up. "It isn't even as high as the last time and it's narrower, so it'll be easier. Stand up and stretch a second. You'll be fine."

"What if the guard is up there with a stick to poke us with?"

"Do you want to get out of here or not?"

Hadrian took a deep breathe. "I'm still mad at you," he said, turning and linking arms back-to-back with Royce.

•••••••

"Weapons?" Hadrian asked.
"I'll check the house. You see about getting horses."
"Don't kill anyone," Hadrian mentioned.
"I'll try not to, but if I see Luret--"
"Oh yeah, kill him."

In this book they are trying to help Arista get some things done, win some people over so they can fight the bigger enemy.

Arista put on her big girl panties and got down to the nitty gritty with the boys even though she's royalty and I loved her spunk and lovely attitude through-out the book.

"Just a few questions I thought you would be able to shed some light on," Royce told him. "Why don't we talk in your study while Hadrian and Arista get out of their wet things? Is it all right if we spend the night here?"

"Certainly. I'll have dinner brought up, although you picked a bad day; the kitchen is serving meat pies." He made a grimace.

Arista stood stiffly, feeling her heart still racing. She narrowed her eyes and glared. "I hate all of you."

There are some revelations that Hadrian learns about when they all go back to his homeland. Now he feels he needs to go on his own quest but he wanted to do something like that before.

Royce has his own mind set on a different life too and it makes me happy. BUT, they better not split up and they better keep going on in other books. And then be friends and hang out forever. lol

Some people I liked died in the book but that is a given.

Either way, I just love this book. I love the camaraderie between the boys. I love the other people that are in the books. Arista, Gwen, Esrahaddon, Modina and many more. There is a whole other part of the book dedicated to Modina but I didn't want to talk too much about her for reasons. I do wonder about her and if she's something else entirely.

Anyway, I loved the book!



I'm so hoping Michael J. Sullivan doesn't kill the boys later on! I always dread moving on to the next book for that fear! AND NO ONE TELL ME IF HE DOES, unless of course he doesn't then that's okay. lol

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[Adina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Re-reading in July 2025: I stand by the review below. This time I listened to the Graphic Audio version of the novel which cots some unnecessary parts. As a result, it felt less static.

3.5*

The 2nd volume from The Riyria Revelations is better written, has better world building, the dialogue between Royce and Hadrian is still fun. The plot got a bit static in the middle but I still enjoyed reading most of it. This series is easy and fun, nothing too artistic but it warms you up inside in its best moments. It has a few flaws but all in all I can't wait to read the follow up.

I particularly enjoyed the way Arista character developed, she makes less mistakes than in the first part of the series, she becomes more complex. In general women are better developed in this volume.

[zuza_zaksiazkowane · Rating 4 out of 5]

Tom 3: 4⭐️
Tom 4: 3.5⭐️

[Robin (Bridge Four) · Rating 5 out of 5]

Re-read with some friends at Buddies Books and Baubles 7/12/19

2nd read and the book holds up mostly. The 3rd book is more of a political maneuvering plot line and while the set up is great I missed some of the action of the other books. The 4th book though is a swashbuckling adventure and the boys are back at everything they do best. I might drop this half a star to 4.5 stars, but overall great even on a second read.

Original Review:

Buddies Books & Baubles Buddy read 4/18/16.......the Royce and Hadrian bromance continues.

“There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us.”

Michael J Sullivan (MJS): Do you like adventures?

Me: Yes….I do like a tale with a good adventure or quest in it.

(MJS): Do you like a broken hero who doesn’t really want to be the hero?

Me: Of course that is one of my favorite tropes…the not so good, good guy.

(MJS): What about betrayals, double-crosses, plots and pirates?

Me: The more the better I say as long as there is revenge in the long term for the good guys.

(MJS): And three dimensional Female characters that aren’t just looking for someone to love them. How do you feel about those?

Me: Hmmm….well yes I do like them. But there is some kissing right? I mean I don’t need a lot but I love to have something to ship and a smidgen of romance to go with all the betraying, double-crossing and pirates.

(MJS): Okay, yes there are a few kisses in this. But this is in no way a kissing book.

Me: Alright this seems like it might be something I like. What about the villain, is he/she any good?

(MJS): I think you mean villain(s) plural and each is fantastic in their own way and each has his/her own motivations.

Me: This is sounding better all the time. Okay I must read this because I did love the Bromance between Royce and Hadrian in the first book. This sounds even better.

…….2 days later.

Me: Michael it was so much better. I loved what you did there with Royce and Hadrian. Sure this was more of a political book in the first half but I enjoyed the new dynamic of their team after Hadrian finds out about his secret destiny.

Also you have some great bad guys. It was hard for me to pick just one to hate since there are quite a few to pick from. Everything from just a general thugs, to a religious fanatic bent on power, to a man out for revenge against the one he thinks wronged him years ago. Well done on that front. I’m going to say that I was partial to Merrick though since he seems the most dangerous of the lot.

“You think you’re a very clever fellow, don’t you?” Saldur challenged.
“No, Your Grace,” Merrick replied. “Clever is the man who makes a fortune selling dried-up cows, explaining how it saves the farmers the trouble of getting up every morning to milk them. I’m not clever—I’m a genius.”

That you are Mr. Merrick….I knew he was clever and playing a dangerous game and he still fooled me all the way.

You didn’t go light on Thrace though did you.

(MJS): You didn’t think she’d be safe after the events of the last book did you?

Me: Well, no not exactly. But I definitely didn’t think it would start to go that bad for her either. I do love all the stuff you did to and with her character though. Just when I though I knew what was going on in her head….you proved that I didn’t know anything.

(MJS): Did you find the ship you were looking for?

Me: YES!!!! And then you know what happened. But there was just enough kissing in this to keep that girly part of my head and heart happy.

But do you want to know one of my favorite parts was????

(MJS): Of Course….was it when the two men boiled from the inside out?

Me: Oh…you do know me well and I very much enjoyed when they got what was coming to them but no it was much later. I totally loved the arena type battle that Hadrian, Royce and a few others went through. It reminded me of my time playing World Of Warcraft PvP (player vs player) arena battles. So great.

(MJS): I see you have a bloodthirsty side to go with the ‘girly parts’ of you.

Me: I enjoyed this so much….there was action, intrigue, kissing, battles and a plethora of great dialogue. Plus it seems that Merrick knows a Royce that was much different than the man he is today. I wonder what he is going to do to Merrick when they finally meet up again….I think it might get a little bloody.

(MJS): No spoilers from me.

Me: Fine…I must go. I have to read the next book because this one was so bloody good. You pleasantly surprised me with the complexity of your story Mr. Sullivan. Thanks for the talk.

[Luna. ✨ · Rating 4 out of 5]

4/5 Stars

I really enjoyed reading Rise of Empire, I definitely enjoyed it more then Theft of Swords. This book certainly picked up the pace from book one, seriously interesting things actually happened in this book. The plot was fast paced and stimulating. I believe there was a fair bit of badassery going on. I didn't even notice the weird emotionless POV much this time, like yeah it was obviously still there,
but it's more bearable because I've finally warmed up to the characters.

This still isn't my favourite 'bromance' ever, I really like Royce and Hadrian and enjoy their banter. But for me the bromance just isn't there yet, like I feel I'm missing something. ARE WE READING THE SAME BOOK?!?

Once again this book is two novels in one. This time around we get Nyphron Rising and The Emerald Storm. All stories are a continuation of each other with a connected plot, so it flows really well.
Michael J Sullivan is a fantastic writer, his books are easy to read, his a great vivid world-builder and its definitely a humorous and fun read.
I found the pacing better in this instalment then Theft of Swords, the overall storyline was once again unoriginal but good. In my opinion this book was a little more my cup tea. Theft of Swords was very "classic" fantasy, it didn't have much violence. Whereas this book Rise of Empire was a little more dark, we got to read about the darker side to Royce, Hadrian and Arista. I really enjoyed the overall vibe in this book, we witnessed a few brutal barbaric acts like floggings and the fight scenes which might I add were next level to what I saw in book one, they were fantastic, a certain fight scene was so amazing, I was on the edge of seat while reading it, while having heart palpitations, so yeah that was pretty fun. This book was also more complex then the first, it had a few major twists, aswell as castle intrigue, court politics, love and relationship secrets, *sounds of amazement* finally getting some good stuff out of Michael J Sullivan's novels. Its definitely safe to say I'm a fan of The Riyria and want more! I can't wait to finish the series.


Seriously I love Arista so much. I just low key wish I was her so I could turn people into frogs.

I didn't like Nyphron Rising as much as The Emerald Storm, only because it wasn't as action packed, other then that it was a really good book. I liked it a lot. I love Arista so was happy to have a story with her POV, as one of the main POV's. This story is set a year after the last book, and is basically about the beginning of a war. Hadrian and Royce are now both retired but go on their 'last mission' (they're always saying, every mission is their last lol). Arista sets off on a mission to save her brothers empire and takes Hadrian and Royce with her. The story was thrilling and engaging enough, I just wanted more action?! Luckily The Emerald Storm delivered me a lot of violence so I'm now a happy camper.

My favorite out of the two stories was definitely The Emerald Storm, it was so EPIC. This book is what I was waiting for, seriously thank you Michael J Sullivan for finally showing me your potential as an author, this book definitely exceeded my expectations and I loved it! Seriously, it was so bloody good. It was your typical action packed Pirate story, we follow Royce and Hadrian as they go on a journey to find an object. Of course the journey doesn't go to plan and they find themselves in a deadly location. The rumours are definitely true folks, this series gets better with each book. The twists and reveals at the end were mind blowing and IT ACTUALLY HAD AWESOME FIGHT SCENES. This was an action packed, fun, exhilarating book that I absolutely loved reading and I just need to fangirl over Hadrian, Royce & Arista. Seriously they are all awesome. I really missed Myron this story but found Hadrian's POV to be my relief this time around. I really love Hadrian now, he is so amazing, clumsy, funny, dopey and he is very badass and handsome. Definitely swoon worthy, when he withdrew his Spadone sword shit got hectic and a lot of people died(yayayayaya). But I can't chose if I like him more then Royce or not. Royce definitely had a few standout badass moments in these books and I have a new level of respect for him. "Oh, sir, you have no idea what Royce is like. I'll grant you that his association with Hadrian Blackwater has tempered him greatly. Twelve years with that idealistic dreamer have made him practically human, but I know him. I know what lurks beneath. I've seen things that make even my hardened heart shudder. Get his anger up, and you'll unleash a demon that no one can control. Believe me, he's like that and so much more. Nothing is beyond him"

I recommend this book to all fantasy lovers. Although I must say if you are looking for a blood bath or a high violence fantasy, then keep on looking this is a more humorous soft fantasy, with classic themes. Definitely a fun filled read that I'm sure most fantasy fans would love.

Nyphron Rising - 3.5/5
The Emerald Storm - 4.5/5
Total Rating - 4/5

[Anna [Bran. San. Stan] · Rating 5 out of 5]

Re-read 2023: I’m thinking this will be an annual thing for me.

Re-read 2022: I'm still in love with this series! The first of many re-reads to come!

ORIGINAL REVIEWS 2021:
Nyphron Rising
5 brilliant stars. Mr Sullivan, what are you doing to your poor readers? So many revelations that are then turned on their head and leave you questioning everything! That series title sure is aptly chosen.

This third and so far most gripping installment in the Riyria Revelations series, Nyphron Rising, focuses, as the name implies, on the growing power of the Nyphron Church and its empire and how our favorite characters, Royce Melborn, skilled ex-thief, and his partner Hadrian Blackwater, master swordsman/ex-mercenary, as well as Princess Arista, try to navigate and persist in opposition to that threat.

Even if Royce points out the matter of perspective and that there is objectively no evil, as a reader I still want the Church in their quest for power and determination to kill off our heroes to suffer horrible protracted deaths. I’m not here to be objective after all.

“There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us.”

At the heart of the book, however, is not political maneuvering – our characters are.

Of those, Royce is my favorite in this book. His questionable moral compass which usually revolves around his self-interest (which he himself would merely call practical), his impressive skills at stealth and planning, his loyalty to his friend make me love and root for him. His childhood as an orphan in Ratibor is also explored and helped humanize his darker side.

“Royce defined right and wrong by the moment. Right was what was best for him - wrong was everything else. He stole, lied, and even killed when necessary. This was his craft and he was good at it. There was no reason to apologize, no need to pause or reflect. The world was at war with him and nothing was sacred.”

Hadrian, slightly idealistic and more good-natured, has an identity crisis at first, looking for his purpose in life beyond being a fighter and spy, which to be honest seems a bit whiny. Then, when more about his past is revealed, he finds his focus and is the consummate warrior again. I sure was glad to have my beloved Hadrian back.

Princess Arista arguably undergoes the biggest character development. From making a naive decision based on proving her worth, she goes from being the princess in need of saving to being able to save herself to being able to save others - even if it all comes at a price: Having to kill and later being responsible for the deaths of others is bound to change her character.

“I‘ve never killed anyone before. … I don’t know how you do it, Royce. I just don’t know.”
“You do it by realizing that if the situation was reversed and they succeeded, they wouldn’t be crying.”

Many have complained about the previous books’ focus on male leads (which I didn’t mind really) and should be happy to note that other than featuring Arista, Nyphron Rising introduces another female character: Amilia, former scullery maid in the Empress‘s kitchen, now unlikely secretary to said Empress herself. I liked her right from the start. She also provides an insight into how the new Empress is doing. (Badly.)

Apart from political maneuvering and character development, the quest for the heir of Novron and his guardian continues. And is seemingly successful.

My biggest questions: Who the hell is the Patriarch? Is the heir who I think? Also, in Age of Empyre, in the prequel series, a god promised Persephone to look out for her offspring (i.e. the heir of Novron/Nyphron everyone is looking for) so I’m left wondering which persona he will employ and how he will end up helping the heir.

Below you will find an excerpt from Age of Empyre in which the above mentioned god tells Persephone more about her descendant’s fate. It reveals clues that will help you figure out who the heir is. If you want to figure it out based on the Riyria Revelations series alone, I recommend you skip this part. 😊

SPOILER

“I see a baby, a descendant of yours, crying in the dark. Born on a cold night in a despicable city very near here. His parents have been murdered, and he is forgotten and ignored. The woman who takes him from his dead mother’s arms will abandon him in a gutter less than a week after he takes his first breath. He has no chance of survival, and the fate of the world rests with him. […] I swear I will be there on that cold night when he cries out in the gutter. […] I will watch over that child when he faces his most difficult challenges. […] The man I speak of will not be great. He’ll be a terrible person, detestable, murderous, cruel, and untrusting.”

END OF SPOILER

The Emerald Storm
4.5 dark stars. What a storm this book is. A truly dark one. Things devolve and get more intense and serious than the previous books. And that ending? Let’s just say I’m glad I can continue with book 5 right away.

Compared to the other books, this book starts with a bang. As a result, Arista once more sets out in her own, this time without her safety net, the Riyria boys. She is becoming pretty badass herself, showing courage and initiative and some skills of her own. And I don’t think it’s too much of a spoiler to mention that she and Thrace cross paths again – which I appreciated a lot.

Meanwhile Royce and Hadrian do another job for King Alric, Arista‘s brother, which takes them to sea and to far destinations. I will say that storyline was not my favorite; I can’t even say why exactly, the setting on the ship, the plethora of characters to tell apart, the boys not being the usual masterminds? But don't let me fool you, this was still an amazing book I loved.

Although most of my most pressing questions remain essentially unanswered, more hints were dropped and I‘m pretty sure now, based also on my knowledge of Legends of the First Empire, I know who the Patriarch is. As for the heir? I’m not convinced all is what it seems… (I feel pretty certain based on the excerpt above.)

Anyway, with that ending I really need to keep on reading, cross my fingers and hope no one (else) dies.

Riyria Revelations
1. The Crown Conspiracy – updated to 4.25 stars
2. Avempartha – 4.5 stars
3. Nyphron Rising – 5 stars
4. The Emerald Storm – 4.5 stars
5. Wintertide – 5 stars
6. Percepliquis – 5 stars

[Mayim de Vries · Rating 3 out of 5]

“What do we do?”
“What we always do,” Royce replied, “only better.”

This is an omnibus edition which means that it contains two books, Nyphron Rising and The Emerald Storm. Two books in a dense series mean a whole lot of action, plot-twists, turning points and (un)expected developments. As this is essentially a story-driven tale, there is no point in even trying to give you a teaser what awaits or the essence of what is coming as it would only result in spoilers.

There are two basic ways in which you can read this novel:

For a 4 star review click here:

For the first time in years, Riyria have a respectable job and a steady income. Riyria, just to remind you consists of Royce Melborn who regards the law merely as suggestion and violence as means to all ends, and Hadrian Blackwater who breathes principles and dines on honour. The previous instalment focused on bromance between the two. This time, their friendship and, indeed, partnership will be tested by doubts and strife. This makes the dynamic between them more interesting, allows for character development and more nuanced character building. Although it does not mean that there will be no banter or action scenes so those of you who liked the duo will not be disappointed.

As the story progresses, more and more protagonists appear and are given voice. Among them, the most prominent are the members of the Melengar royal family, Alric and Arista, the ancient wizard Ezrahaddon and Thrace, upon whom the fortune smiled in a particularly ironic way together with her new companion, Amilia. Those of the readers who were not so impressed with Royce and Hadrian will perhaps be relived to hear that the other characters are given much wider margin to this extent that at times one might get the feeling that Royce and Hadrian are secondary to the main plot.

We learn more regarding the Riyria background and their personal stories, but also how their lives fit into other story-arcs and the grand tale of Novron’s heir. We get to know other political forces and get to visit other places on the vast map of this world. You will get battles, and duels, scheming and backstabbing, escapes and rescues (although admittedly some scenes will be familiar). There is also a sea gig (yay or nay? for me a nay, the only maritime story I adored was The Fox, and only because it was not defined by this setting).

While I enjoyed the book, I could not get over the feeling that the whole tale is told with a hefty dose of naivety that is not entirely thought through. On the one hand, you will have brutality and cruelty, on the other events will play out according to logic that is almost childish. Consequently, while it is a book that I’d hand to a middle grader without any qualms and with words of encouragement, I had to suspend my sarcastic reasoning more than once. If you are a super-down-to-earth reader, some things might be irritating for you. The scenes with Amilia, the simple girl who uses words like “inconveniencing” and “indisposed”, Hadrian taking over command in a military camp Mr Sullivan, “I have money”? Really!?, the antagonists so cliche in their mustache-twirling evilness or heroes going into the battle 2 days after receiving 100 lashes are good examples of those.

If you think too much about certain things, they stop adding up. Like: it is kind of unclear how humans managed to subjugate races clearly more advanced technologically and magically (elves and dwarves) and more powerful? Or you’ll start questioning the secret knights. Why didn’t they kill the heir immediately when they found him? They were trying to do so for 100 years! Why taking him captive for a change?

Additionally, while the books read fast and are a pleasant read overall, I cannot say that this prose impressed me greatly. In fact, among my notes and highlights, there was not a single sentence I underlined because I liked the sound of it. No profound reflections, no wise observations, no poetry. The writing style is succinct, at times funny in a sitcom-like way but it will not prove you with great quotes or one-liners.

The Riryia Revelations are revelational if you are looking for a smart and funny comfort read. Not too overwhelming or ambitious, not too heavy or depressing. Just short of hitting the soft spot. And you know what? It is dedicated to Goodreads members. How could you not give it a try?



For a 1 star review click here:

For the first time in years, Riyria have a respectable job and a steady income. Riyria, just to remind you consists of Royce Melborn who regards the law merely as suggestion and violence as means to all ends, and Hadrian Blackwater who breathes principles and dines on honour. Unfortunately for those who were pining for more bromance between those two, other characters are given much wider margin to this extent that at times one might get the feeling that Royce and Hadrian are secondary to the main plot.

Among those crown idiot princess Arista takes the precedence. In book three she nearly dominates the whole book and her POV is more frequent and longer than those of Royce and Hadrian combined.

The one and only reason why the books, yes both of them, are of the one-star quality, is the unbearable stupidity of princess Arista and her antics. Mind you, she was getting on my nerves before, but it has been nothing when compared with the tomfooleries that await here:

1. A princess of the crown after throwing tantrum at the prospect of a strategic marriage goes traipsing around as an ambassador in a dirty carriage and a crumpled dress.

2. A princess of the crown who throws yet another tantrum when it is pointed out that her ambassadorial missions were futile.

3. A princess of the crown where her family is barely holing the throne who undermines the fragile authority of her brother without a thought. Or two. Scratch that, that’s one thought too many.

4. A girl who in spite of points one, two and three believes herself to be “no fool”. Probably this is why she devises a plan that requires posing as a scullery maid.

5. A princess of the crown who takes her own responsibilities so seriously that she leaves the realm without telling anyone and travels with two men of questionable provenance. Unescorted, why not.

6. An appointed official taking her responsibilities so seriously that she saunters off when convenient without bothering to notify anyone. Oh, no, scratch that, she did leave a letter.

7. A female protagonist constantly comparing herself to other femaleswho are too stupid in her opinion to be interested in anything else beyond their looks, never had ridden a horse, etc. Also, a noble who supposedly has had three maids who dressed and undressed her daily until it was time to impress foreign officials during a diplomatic mission. In that case, check point 1.

8. A girl who is quite happy to admit that “she is lousy at being a woman”. Because being a woman equals with good makeup and a love for gossip. You see the problem here?

9. A girl who can steer the boat despite never sailing, invents magic spells on the go and leads men to battle before breakfast. Oh, and why don’t you fly an F16 while you’re at it, my dear?

10. A girl with penchant for instalove here and there. Just crawl on the bed, she tells her random plebeian sweethearts.

11. A girl who gets drunk when on a mission and babbles around all the stupidest things you can imagine.

12. A girl unable to manage one noisy maid and one surly bodyguard suddenly whips out a rebellion.

13. A super magician who had no problems with making one person sneeze but scoffs at battle-related specific spells, fancy that.

Yes, I could continue this list.

There is one honest paragraph about her in book 3, chapter 7. Unfortunately, it was a very brief paragraph and nothing came out of it. In both instalments Arista is more a hindrance and embarrassment than help. The very same mistakes and idiocies repeat chapter in, chapter out and rare moments of lucidity and reflection do not result in a change of action. The only thing that happens is that she evolves into a snowflake with special abilities.

OK, I get it: the book is written in a certain convention. Heroes do heroics, while villains die in a villainous way. Everybody behaves themselves accordingly, just as you expect people to behave themselves in a certain way during grandmother’s tea party. It requires specific cliches, stereotypes, and paradoxes in what is usually called a suspension of disbelief. But Arista’s idiocy takes this suspension business to a whole new level. The only saving grace is the fact that she is so stupid that indeed, it is impossible to predict what would she (not) do.

It is such a shame that such an awful character managed to spoiler the whole book. Without Arista, or with her kept firmly on the margins of the Riyria adventures, it would have been an altogether pleasant read. I still cannot decide whether the Author knows that Arista is an idiot and winks at me or whether he expects me to take her seriously.

I’d love to continue the series hoping for her brutal and untimely death, but I fear that the worst is yet to come.



My general rating is a compromise between these two.
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Other Riyria Revelations:

* Theft of Swords: The Crown of Conspiracy & Avempartha (#1-2) ★★★★☆
* Heir of Novron: Wintertide & Percepliquis (#5-6) ★��★★☆

[Samantha · Rating 4 out of 5]

These books remain a good time. There is a delightfully nostalgic mix of fantasy tropes and just enough danger that it doesn’t feel like complete plot armor for the characters, but not so much that I’m constantly stressed. I enjoy the twists and turns this takes, and the sense of familiarity without being predictable.

[Solseit · Rating 4 out of 5]

And I know I keep updating this thread today - but I felt inspired and I also made a much longer review of the series!
https://todaysdecameron.wordpress.com...
Please let me know your thoughts - and please feel free to suggest any improvements to the review style/blog/any other element!

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I am so impressed by this story - two great thieves facing a scary (because extremely clever) foe.

As you might know, this edition of the book contains two "books" of the story, hence two different plots albeit they continue the same story line (and the general underlying picture) and it is done with finesse so it feels a genuine continuation.

The strongest point of this book in my opinion are the characters, specifically Royce and Hadrian who are the Riyria thieves. They made a profession out of it and they are really good at it. One is more a ruthless and calculating mind, the other is the valiant and honorable warrior who just interact perfectly well together.
In book 3, Hadrian actually has a very dark moment, he feels lost and he is not doing enough, he feels he is just a common thief taking advantage of situations - the war - and people to make profit. That does not sit well with his conscious and this shows throughout the book. The story though leads to his biggest breakthrough yet when he discovers he is part of a much bigger story, he is the designated body guard of the heir of Novron. This is why he is so good at fighting, skills his father taught him and he developed in a great way.

Arista is one of my favorite female characters lately: She is fierce, strong, independent, educated (because she wanted a higher education) and she becomes stronger and more important than she thinks. She has some veiled romance moments, in this book - in both stories - but I think this will lead to the best moment yet, when I hope Hadrian will become her partner! Also, how cool is she, mastering the art of sorcery. Sure, she might be a little too overpowered by creating her own magic but I will leave it as she is blessed and she knows what she is doing, besides the fact that she is slowly getting to know her abilities . Also, she is spoiled but she is extremely down to earth and she will also find out what that means!

The second story just made me happy from sailing to gladiators and made me appreciate how scary the foe really is an old friend of Royce and a true villain, with a lot of brains! .

We also find new (good) characters and I loved Amilia, she is just so genuine and a great care giver. She really puts it all out and it shows. I want to have an Amilia in my life. And we also loose Esrahaddon and that was a shocking moment for me. Although it launches Arista in mission impossible mode.

Finally, I genuinely think this book is rich in violence - not grim dark but there is assassination, killings, uprising, gore description of brutality, attempted rape; so far from light topics - but Michael J. Sullivan delivery of the characters, the dialog and the descriptions just add a lighter tone to the telling which makes this book even more magnetic than already is with the cool stuff happening to the main characters! So, great work of fantasy, I would go as far as to say that anyone would love this series, it is one of those books which can be easily read and loved by every fantasy reader.

[Luffy Sempai · Rating 2 out of 5]

The Littlefingerising of Fantasy plots has now reached pox levels. I shudder to think what the landscape will look like when it will feel like the plague.

I'm sorry, but there is too much gristle in this book. It's perfect length should have been 500 pages at most. I'm not immune to the charms of an adventure on a ship, but even GoT book 5, A Dance With Dragons runs rings round this book using Tyrion's little legs.

Oh and the only death that caught me unawares was [name redacted]. The rest had Matsusaka Wagyu stamped all over them. The good bits were often worth reading, but too much is too much.

[edge of bubble · Rating 5 out of 5]

First book felt like a very long build up. Altough I enjoyed learning about the pasts of Hadrian and Royce immensely and wanted more of it, I've felt impatient time to time. I love to hate having opposing feelings*let the mud wrestling begin*. And vice versa. I adore the term vice versa. it has this making sense while not making sense thing going on with it's meaning and the actual sounding of it. sneaky



Alric still seems to be an annoying twat but Arista has come a long way. Actually, if you think about the forced journey Alric took in the Theft of Swords and Arista's journey in this book, the differences between their maturity levels are obvious. Alric was like an condescending pubescent having a temper tantrum *still is* while Arista is shedding her entitled upbringing and maturing. Especially in the second book!

Long story short, Alric sucks!



I've come to respect Arista in the end of the second book. She has become into a strong, complex and quite lovable female character. I stumbled upon this picture on pinterest as a representation of her ;



And I think it fits, especially with the darker feeling of the second book. It was grimmer than all of the books before and unpredictable .*at least for me. and that ending!!!*

"Have you ever been in love, Hadrian?”
“I’m not sure. How do you tell?”
“Love? Why, it’s like coming home.”
Hadrian considered the comment.
“What are you thinking?” Bulard asked.
Hadrian shook his head. “Nothing.”
“Yes, you were. What? You can tell me. I’m an excellent repository for secrets. I’ll likely forget, but if I don’t, well, I’m an old man in a remote
jungle. I’m sure to die before I can repeat anything.”
Hadrian smiled, then shrugged. “I was just thinking about the rain.”

If that means what I think it means I smell a couple!! luuuurve is in the air *maniacal dancing* I approve that message!!!

Oh, and that ending! I sure wasn't expecting it! Delicious! No, I mean it was sad and I had feelies that punched me in the stomach and a healthy dose of fear for the future, but the unexpectedness of it was delightful.

First book was 4 stars and the second one 5. Of course I've rounded it up, because it just was awesome!

[Orient · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great books read: 1
Hours spent cheering for the goodies:2462621
Hours spent cheering for the baddies:2462621
Monster count: a few adorable goblins.
Temples for Hadrian: O (I know, I know, I must be out of my mind :D)



“Rise of Empire” contains two books, “Nyphron Rising” and “The Emerald Storm”
I read “Theft of Swords” recently, and now after the second installment finished, I can admit for sure that this read was way more better for me than the first one. I had a slight drag problem starting “Nyphron Rising” as like during my playdate, Riyria Revelations needs some time to hook up completely. “Rise of Empire” offers an increasing sense of danger, not only for the world, but also for the characters in it and it’s great.

“Nyphron Rising”
The first book starts with significant political revolution as the balance between the political parties changes dramatically and offers war as a solution. Of course, Arista, Hadrian and Royce are entertaining like always, but the story offers some new intriguing characters, too :)

“The Emerald Storm”
The second book develops the political scheming further and even drops the famous BFF couple into the waters they haven’t tasted before. I think this helped to give more flesh to the characters and of course added new interesting ones :)

Characters. Oh my, the main ones have made a great development. Most obvious and striking change touches the new empress. A dragon slayer turned into a puppet, my heart still aches for her. Also the story of the little Cinderella, her progress was quick. Her character is definitely well written with all the flaws and innocence, like a sponge, trying to drink all the colors of life. But the thing that hooked me up and kept me interested in the story, is the great interaction between Royce and Hadrian, their friendship is great. Of course I love Arista, her progress as a leader, magician and woman is amazing. I just remember her in the first installment and I must confess, I wasn’t charmed by her in the very start and didn’t appreciate the way some characters were created in “Theft of Swords”. So it's so awesome that this installment changed my opinion. Also I’m sad that the old Witcher is dead, I liked his character, he was one of the most interesting, not sure good or bad :)

The big evil baddies in the “Rise of Empire” are interesting, too. With their gripping backstories, I loved to follow them and admired their wicked mind. The Super Mario was the most alluring and I was a bit disappointed that I couldn’t have more of him! Hope to satisfy this need later on.

Wordbuilding. “Rise of Empire”is easy and entertaining to read as long as you wait a bit for the story to take pace. The places were well described, I could imagine all the secret alleys and fascinating buildings. When comparing both installments, I feel like this one was more fleshed out, mature and better organized. There are also gripping and tasty scenes with action, scheming, great fights, moments when I caught myself thinking: no way, how the hell did you do that, Mr. Sullivan. If I had to choose which book in this installment was the best out of the two, I’d choose "The Emerald Storm". As much as I enjoyed "Nyphron Rising", I didn’t quite feel that it matched up with pace, gripping action, although they both have great revelations, interesting character development and yummy scheming.

Plots and characters make a great collaboration through all the four books I read. There are twists and turns and returning characters that keep me hooked. Riyria Revelations is working like a really well organized clock for me despite some flaws.

[Constantine · Rating 5 out of 5]

Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Genre: Fantasy

Rise of Empire consists of books three and four of the Riyria Revelations.

Nyphron Rising: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The powerful and expansionist Nyphron Empire is currently at war with the kingdom of Melengar, which is currently under siege. The remaining independent kingdoms are in danger of falling under the empire's control because of its growing influence. Against the backdrop of this political upheaval and the imminent threat of war, Princess Arista of Melengar assumes a role that is of critical importance: becoming the ambassador of her kingdom. It is necessary for her to undertake a perilous mission in order to forge alliances and garner support in order to defend against the assault of the empire.

As a result of their collaboration with Princess Arista, Royce, and Hadrian are now facing a variety of difficulties, including assassination attempts, treachery, and the constant threat of empire forces capturing them. As they make their way through the journey, they travel through treacherous terrain and into the center of political intrigue.

This was an absolutely amazing book. Some new interesting characters are introduced, like Amilia, who plays an integral part in this and the next book. Among the existing characters, Arista has become my favorite—my absolute favorite! The character development and world-building are top-notch. I think Michael J. Sullivan has done an absolutely amazing job here. I loved it from start to finish.

The Emerald Storm: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ ½
As the story progresses, Royce and Hadrian are given a new mission that requires them to investigate a mysterious and powerful weapon that has the potential to destroy entire cities. Their journey takes them aboard a huge ship known as the Emerald Storm, where they are tasked with discovering the secrets of this lethal device before it is obtained by those who should not have access to it.

Princess Arista is still dealing with her own particular set of difficulties as she works to unite the kingdoms in the face of the Nyphron Empire's impending threat. She will eventually go into danger to achieve the impossible, but will she be able to succeed in her efforts?

For me, the book that came before this one was a little bit more enjoyable. Hadrian and Royce are confined to that ship for the majority of the time, which was not my favorite thing about the situation. The perspectives of Arista and Modina were more enjoyable to me than those of the guys.

I found this volume to be incredible, and I had a great deal of pleasure in reading it. I can’t recommend it enough.

[Conor · Rating 5 out of 5]

2024 Re-read: This series absolutely held up.

4.5 Stars

Rise of Empire was a really enjoyable compilation of Nyphron Rising and The Emerald Storm, books 3 and 4 in the Riyria series. After a slow start in book 1 this series has really picked up, featuring two likeable protagonists whose characters and backstories were really fleshed out here, a great cast of supporting characters and lots of exciting adventures. This omnibus continues the trend started in book 2 in developing the depth and scope of what was initially a light-hearted fantasy adventure to great effect.

Nyphron Rising- 4.5 Stars

This was a great read, the strongest in the series so far. Our heroes from the previous books, Royce and Hadrian, make a return with all of the badass fight scenes, arduous adventures, dangerous missions and witty dialogue we’ve come to expect. However we also get some great backstory on both men as individuals as well as their partnership. Hadrian returns to the home he ran away in search of adventure when he was 14. In doing so we get some really cool insight into his relationship with his father, his character and how he became the badass swordsman we all know and love. The exploration of Royce’s backstory was perhaps even more intriguing. A scene where Royce watches a young urchin struggling to survive on the streets and thinks back to his own, similar childhood was easily one of the best scenes in the series.

We are also introduced to Amilia, a humble servant girl. But this is epic fantasy and following a maid around emptying chamber pots and cleaning floors would be a weak-ass story arc. So we need drama. Enter the Empress formerly known as Trace. After the events of the previous book ‘Modina’ became empress of the New Empire, unfortunately she also lost her mind in the process. After a series of coincidental events Amilia has to walk the tight rope of serving as her minder. If she succeeds an escape from the brutal, thankless life of a servant will be hers. If she fails she will never be heard from again. I found Modina’s intense depression to be seriously jarring given the light hearted tone of the rest of the book, however her interaction with Amilia were heartwarming and moving, especially one scene in particular towards the end where Modina gave a speech to save Amilia’s life . Amilia’s sections also provided an interesting, if somewhat predictable insight into the nature of the class system in this world.

While Amilia’s sections were enjoyable I was frustrated by a lot of this storyline. I thought the fact that Modina, the messianic saviour of humanity and (puppet) ruler of the empire, was kept in a tiny cell didn’t make sense and was only thrown in to make her sections even more depressing and the villains even more evil. I also thought that the whole rise of the new empire storyline was stupid. The church somehow managed to convince every squabbling feudal kingdom in the world to give up their kingdoms within a few months. And the legitimacy of the empire is based entirely on a figure of legend (Modina) who is never seen and whose only claim to actually being that legendary figure are the claims of one deranged priest who claims to have seen her kill a magical monster. And this was apparently enough to make a dozen warring kingdoms give up their independence and join together?

I was glad Arista got more screen time in this one although I was somewhat disappointed at how predictable her ‘spoiled princess goes on a quest and learns valuable life lessons’ bit was. Even though it was predictable I still enjoyed her sections and towards the end they became even more gripping as plotlines came together amidst scenes of violence and unexpected tragedy that hadn’t been seen in the series so far and added a darker tone and greater level of suspense than I was used to in this series. While I found him to be at times annoyingly perfect and heroic I was still shocked and bummed out by Emery’s death

The Emerald Storm- 4 Stars

While the Emerald Storm didn’t quite match the standards set by ‘Nyphron Rising’ it was still a great read. The main focus of this one was a perilous quest across the world undertaken by Royce and Hadrian. This was a really enjoyable storyline that introduced some great characters, showed us more of the world and further developed Hadrian’s backstory. For the most part the world building in this series is pretty shallow and typical of the genre and that was what we got here however it was still fun to see our heroes trek through thick jungles, bask in the opulence of mercantile city-states and explore crumbling ruins ala Indiana Jones (Hadrian really needs a lucky hat). I’m not normally a fan of naval stuff and parts of this storyline were very heavy on terminology but I still appreciated what seemed a very well-researched portrayal. Probably my favourite aspect of this storyline was the characters. The main antagonist of this storyline was a despicable fanatic priest, however we were also introduced to Wesley, possibly the best secondary character in this series to date, which is saying a lot (see below). I found Wesley to be a nuanced and brilliantly realized portrayal of an honourable man defending his principals in a place where honour is a weakness as well as a younger brother trying to match his older brother’s brilliance, not out of love of glory but out of duty. And I was seriously shocked and bummed out by his death, especially as I assumed/hoped he would go on to be a major character in this series.

On the other hand I found Arista’s storyline frustrating and boring. After being entrusted with the responsibility of leading a city in the previous book Arista decides to drop that responsibility in favour of yet another pointless adventure at the start of this book. This seemed designed to continue the ‘spoiled princess learns life lesson’ plot which is both one of the most overplayed clichés in fantasy and had already been done in the previous book. This was confounded by how stupid and selfish Arista’s reasoning for abandoning the city that loved and relied on her was. The storyline itself was slow and dull without much of note happening and was frustrating in how it interrupted the Hadrian and Royce storyline. That being said towards the end it picked up and some interesting stuff began to happen, but not enough to erase how disappointing this story was as a whole. Meanwhile Amilia’s storyline continued to be pretty interesting, further confirming Amilia as one of my favourite characters, although Modina’s appearances continued to be depressing.

The secondary characters in this series are crazy good, possibly the best I’ve ever seen in a fantasy series. Sullivan thinks up brilliant characters then has to leave them out of the next book to make room for more brilliant characters. If I had one complaint about this it would be that I want to see more of my favourite secondary characters from previous books. Prince Alric, Myron the nerdy monk, the brilliant dwarf Magnus are all great characters who I want to see more of.

Overall this was another good instalment in a really enjoyable series. While still a fun, light-hearted fantasy at heart each instalment becomes more compelling by raising the stakes for drama and tragedy, developing the world and introducing new characters. I’m really psyched to continue this series and see how it ends.

[Esme · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked the first book a lot, but this book is just phenomenal. I loved the war, the battle scenes were immerssive. I really loved Hadrian in the first book, but it was Arista that blew my mind this book. I saw someone say something about Sullivan being "naively sexist" and I can not disagree hard enough, I love the way he's written Arista. Learning about Hadrians back story was nuts, I'm just getting more attached to this odd couple friendship. I tend to gravitate towards strong friendships with two opposing personalities. it's a trope I'll never get tired of and I even married someone who's my opposite. I can not wait to start the last book. I dot actually have a copy and although I read for 6 hours today I'm debating buying the ebook because I want to keep going. fantastic and fun book!

Edit: some thoughts I made on reddit

I couldn't help but love Amilia and how sweet and patient she was with "Modina". My aunt actually works with these sorts of patients in a mental hospital and it's amazing how much abuse some of these people go through before they make it to someone who has the patience to help them the right way. Lady Constance made a bigger impression on me because of that. Forced feeding and screaming at patients isn't abnormal, unfortunately. I also love how that was repaid in the speech, which was also pretty deftly done for a mentally abused/warped young girl.

The relationship between Royce and Hadrian becomes even more interesting which I adore. One trope I truly doubt I'll ever get tired of is the opposites attract/odd couple pairing. I love with Granny and Nanny, I love it with Royce and Hadrian, and I even married my opposite to keep things interesting :)

I really love Arista in this book, I think she was developed really well.

I felt the pacing was well done, it speeds up and slows down at the right kind of intervals for me.

Since I read Age of Myth first, the way the elves are treated is sort of a mind fuck. It does make me curious about why Gwen and particularly Arista don't really care about their part elven friend. Gwen I can sort of understand given her involvement, but Arista seems to take it in stride as well.

The whole thing with Hadrians locket and visiting his home town was interesting as well. It is sort of tropey, backwater kid with a huge secret lineage - but I enjoyed it none the less.

There were a few deaths in the book that took me off guard. I guess the story seemed so light hearted I was taken aback when they kicked it.

[Niki Hawkes - The Obsessive Bookseller · Rating 4 out of 5]

[3.5 stars] I liked it better than the first book, for sure. There were some elements that really grabbed my attention and kept me interested through both books (3 & 4). 3 is my favorite installment to date, but I'm eagerly waiting to have my socks knocked off in the final volume. :)

[TS Chan · Rating 5 out of 5]

Feb 2022: Fourth time reading, and the first reread after The Legends of the First Empire.

Always so entertaining, always so comforting. I could reread this series again, and again, and again.
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Apr 2016: Second reread, with Buddies, Books & Baubles

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25 Dec 2015 (audio): Finished reread of Rise of Empire and no surprises here - another upgrade to 5-stars and onto my favourites shelf. Interspersing this reread with the latest prequel, The Death of Dulgath, highlights how well Michael developed the personalities of Hadrian and Royce at the onset of Riyria and after 12 years of friendship/partnership.

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May 2015 (ebook):
This is the 2nd omnibus comprising Book 3 and 4 of the Riyria Revelations. I have indicated in my review of the 1st omnibus that the series is showing great promise to go deeper as it progresses, and I was not disappointed at all. I don’t know how this was possible as I believe the books were all written on a stand-alone basis before the omnibus versions came about, but the 2-book bundling just seemed to work perfectly in the way the story progresses, and the titles are just so apt!

Nyphron Rising (4.25 stars)

Third book into the Riyria Revelations and the pace is picking up as the plot thickens. The characters really do start to evolve in this instalment, especially Arista. Female leads are usually not the easiest to write, and there are too many out there whom I just don’t really care for. Arista was an exception to me. She wasn’t portrayed to be overly spoilt nor too aggressive nor ridiculously innocent. Although a fairly predictable arc, I find that her progression and growth in character seemed just right given the circumstances.

Hadrian’s back story and relationship with his father was explored further as the duo ventured to his hometown. We also see glimpses of the many layers of Royce’s personality. The scene where Royce watched the a little boy struggling in the streets of Ratibor (where he grew up as an orphan) was quite heart-breaking, as was the one where he confessed to Hadrian the real reason for him holding back on Hadrian’s true identity. So yes, by now I have really warmed up to Royce while still crushing on Hadrian. Both really different characters and I love both of them for different reasons.

The introduction of another female character in the form of a scullery maid, Amilia, who was tasked to ‘look after’ the new empress Modina, formerly known as Thrace, provided the necessary yet unorthodox POV into the machinations of the New Empire.

Emerald Storm (4.5 stars)

Wow, I love how this series takes off to greater heights with each and every instalment so far. We get to see more of the world of Elan as our favourite duo travels to southern regions of Delgos and Calis on a ship for which the book is named after.

I typically do not enjoy naval settings and sailing jargons often just fly right over my head. However, as Hadrian and Royce are both portrayed as sailing rookies, the reader gets the benefit of some form of ‘education’ such that it’s a lot easier for me to breeze through these sections of the book.

We got to see Hadrian’s shadier past when we reached Calis, where he had once gained fame with his fighting skills. I have to say that since Book 1, I was literally dying to see Hadrian use the 2-handed sword on this back (which we later learnt is called a spadone, a knight’s weapon).

There is a really amazing secondary character introduced in this book, which I won’t elaborate too much about save for this quote from said character:

"My father used to say, ‘A knight draws his sword for three reasons: to defend himself, to defend the weak, and to defend his lord,’ but he always added, ‘Never defend yourself against the truth, never defend the weakness in others, and never defend a lord without honor.’ --> RESPECT!

The other set of POV came from the female characters, Arista, Modina and Amilia. I have to say that I liked every single one of them (which is very rare) – all strong characters in their own right, yet never overly so. A sense of vulnerability or insecurity still pervades and this makes them believable. Modina is getting back on her feet and Arista, oh my, this princess has truly come to her own.

As the plot progresses and the world expands, the overall tone also gets darker. While there are still some pockets of humour, there are more deaths and brutality, and of course, the omnipresent theme in most fantasy books, betrayal. In conclusion, thoroughly enjoyable and addictive, and needless to say, I've started on the next book already.

[Liam · Rating 4 out of 5]

"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us."

Four Stars:✰✰✰✰

What everybody kept telling me about these books was so completely right, and I couldn't be happier, because I absolutely loved this second volume of Riyria Revelations. They should make a "Most Improved" award for writers if only so Michael Sullivan could win the award, because where the first volume left me completely unimpressed, this book turned me into a fully committed fan of the series. I'll do my best to explain exactly what changed, and in some ways it's hard because this is actually two books in one, but the improvements I noticed definitely apply to both (although I should say up front that book three was my personal favorite so far).

"Regret was a curse without a cure, except to forget."

Characterization:

I'm bringing up characters AGAIN as the first thing worth mentioning in this volume. The characters were my favorite thing about the first two books, and yet somehow, Sullivan managed to improve on something that was already truly excellent. In terms of the main characters, Royce and Hadrian, we really got to experience them as individuals on a much deeper level - beyond just viewing them as a likeable mercenary duo. Sullivan starts to go deeper into their personal history, and we get a more personal side from each of them. In the first book, we get A LOT of banter and overall likeability between the two in the context of their relationship with each other, but this character revealed them both to be outstanding protagonists all in their own right. That added so much to this book, and is what I want and hope for in every book that I read.

A common complaint of mine when reading fantasy is the profound lack of good female characters even among some of the more popular fantasy authors today(*coughcough* BRIANMCCLELLAN *coughcough*). It was an issue I had with the first volume of this series, as well. Out of nowhere though in this book, Sullivan not only introduced my favorite character in the series so far (Amilia <3), but also took characters that were previously an annoying princess and a timid farm girl and turned them into true heroes of this story. And he did it in a way that wasn't unrealistic or far fetched, at all. I felt completely convinced by ALL of the characters in this book. Well done!

Characters gets a full five stars, without a doubt.

**EDIT: I also feel like I need to comment how good the villains of this book are. Sullivan takes us into the other side of this story, so that we experience the corruption that exists within the religious system of the church as well as some of the criminal empires. I love a good villain, and Sullivan definitely brought his A-Game in this book.

The Story & The Writing:

The writing quality in the last volume felt completely pedestrian to me. Do you ever read a book that's a debut novel, and somehow it just feels like a debut novel? That's how the first book felt. I really enjoy good writing - part of my love for reading comes from my love for just beautiful, descriptive writing. As an example, Name of the Wind by Rothfuss is an "okay" story at best - what separates it from so many other fantasy books, and the reason it is outrageously popular, is the incredible writing. Good prose can turn a scene that would otherwise be empty and hollow information into something that is beautiful, or heart-wrenching, or both.

And while Sullivan's writing still does not fit into the "great" category, for me, he made some huge improvements in this book. There were some moments that genuinely shocked me with the amount of emotion Sullivan packed into them - he really doing a good job of getting you into the head of each of the characters. And he does it in a way that makes you feel what they are feeling, whether it's joy, loss, or anything in between. This really helped me get into the story.

And the story got soooo much better. The first volume hinted at the content of this one, but never developed on it enough to get me interested, because the plot of both first books was totally mediocre. Both stories told in this volume, especially book three, were drastic improvements. I feel bad that I can't say more, as I really don't want to spoil it. But there were plenty of unexpected surprises along the way, and the more these books develop, the more I enjoy them.

My one major issue, and the reason I took off a full star, is that neither book had a very good or satisfying ending. The climax in both novels felt rushed and a little disappointing. To give an example of what I'm talking about.... if you spend a large portion of the book building anticipation for a battle that's coming, I would really like that battle to last longer than two pages and some weak explanation. Book four was a completely abrupt ending with a very boring middle. I didn't even feel like the story climaxed yet when I finished. So that was a bit of a damper.

In Conclusion:

Sincere thanks to all of the people who kept telling me to stick with these books. In spite of my issues with the endings, I literally loved both of these books. And most importantly, I had so much fun reading them . I don't think I've actually enjoyed a book like I enjoyed these in quite awhile. I can't wait to get through the final volume, and that's a very, very good omen.

"That's why you shouldn't make vows. The moment you do, fate starts conspiring to shove them down your throat."

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Spur of the moment buddy read with Niki and whoever happens to join us over at Fantasy Buddy Reads =].

[Jody · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another stellar installment in the Riyria Revelations series. I loved every chapter of this book, or should I say both books, as this is a combination of books 3 and 4. Anyway, the way Michael J. Sullivan writes just sucks you right into the world. Forget your surroundings, because you will lose all sense of reality. His descriptions of people, places, and things makes you feel like you are right there with Royce and Hadrian in the middle of the action.

Book 3, Nyphron Rising, has the dynamic duo of Royce and Hadrian back in the employ of Princess Arista of Melengar. With the empire gaining strength and the threat to Melengar growing, Arista leaves with Royce and Hadrian to seek help from the Nationalists, and their leader Degan Gaunt.

In Book 4, Emerald Storm, we have Royce and Hadrian acting as sailors to gain employment on a ship by the same name, Emerald Storm. What starts out as a mission to get information about the Empires plans, turns into more than they could have imagined.

Royce and Hadrian both have their moments were they take center stage, but Hadrian seemed to get more attention in both of these stories. We learn more about his past when he was young lad, and his travels before he and Royce teamed up to form Riyria.

Both books are fast paced with twists and turns you don’t see coming until its right in your face. Lots of new characters who help spice up the monologue with their vast personalities. But one of my favorite parts of these books is the humor. Mr. Sullivan has a talent to put a comical aspect into almost any situation. This adds a whole new level of entertainment that makes reading these books so much fun.

If you like adventure, with a side of humor, and extra fast paced action these books are for you. If not, then I believe these books are still for you by sheer entertainment level alone. You are missing out on a great read if you don’t give these books a try. As for me…I’m on to the next chapter in the Riyria Revelations.

5 stars *****

[Bradley · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is an omnibus of books 3 and 4 in the series. The third follows well on the heels of the big battles and what amounts to a civil war with the installment of a puppet on the throne, with our favorite thieves getting caught up in the travail, with the search for the rightful heir on the way in the fourth book, with plenty of hijinks on the high seas to keep things interesting.

What did I think about them?

They're pretty okay. Granted, I've read a lot of fantasy and a lot of great characters who are thieves, a lot of great wizards, a lot of great treatments of elves in wildly different circumstances, and even a lot of fantasy pirates. What makes this stand out from the rest of them?

Well, the writing is decent and consistent and the story arcs follow solidly from book to book, feeling more like a long and comfortable adventure with characters I can settle in with for the long haul. That's basically what I get out of it. It's decent. I'd give this a solid 3.5 stars if I had the option. I'll continue, too, because its good enough to keep my interest.

But in general? I do kind of wonder where or if it takes real flight or if it will blow me away.

[Deborah Obida · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Living has no value—it’s what you do with life that gives it worth.”

This book is as good as the first book. Just like the first book this book is also an omnibus of the third and fourth book (Nyphron Rising and Emerald Storm) of the Riyria Revelations.


This book has lots of actions, more magic than the first one. Amazing female characters and plot. I love the depictions of the fight scenes. A little information was given on Hadrian which contributed a lot to the plot.

“There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us.”

The world is well depicted and I praise the author for that. Each book is set in a new location and he still wows me. The Emerald Storm book 4 of the series is set on sea, 70% of the book was on sea not land, I really likes the way it was portrayed.

Power rises to the top like cream and dominates the weak with cruelty disguised as—and often even believed to be—benevolence. When it comes to people, there is no other possibility. It’s a natural occurrence, like the weather, and you can’t control either one.”

Hadrian and Royce is as crazy as ever. Hadrian is ever. There is a small character development, they both changed for the better I think.

“Is this a… stew?” she asked.
Royce laughed quietly. “He likes to call it that.”
“It’s a dish I learned from Thrace,” Hadrian explained with a reminiscent look on his face. “She’s a much better cook than I am. She did this thing with the meat that—Well, anyway, no, it’s not stew. It’s really just boiled salt pork and vegetables. You don’t get a broth, but it takes away the rancid taste of the salt and softens the meat. And it’s hot. Trust me, you’re going to love it.”

Arista is who surprised me in this book. She is so more than a princess. She is brave and courageous, she deserves to rule a kingdom mot her brother.

Some other interesting characters are Amelia, Modina and Wesley.

[Jorie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Individual Ratings:

Nyphron Rising: 4.5 Stars
Absolutely excellent.

The most intriguing plotline of this book was the peek-behind-the-curtain of the newborn Empire's inner workings. Following young scullery maid Amilia, elevated by chance to take charge of the newly appointed Empress, we're allowed to see the genesis of lies that become myths, ones that falsely bolster the claim of this imposter Empire. A force dedicated to maintaining traditional hierarchal structures, even sweet, well-meaning Amilia falls into the classism that had previously oppressed her and continues to her friends, as the system allows for no deviation. Any attempt at change could cost her her life, especially as uneducated in intrigue as she is.

This POV was spectacular, anxiety-inducing, and refreshing. Every chapter with Amilia and Thrace/Modina was a joy.

But so were all the chapters of Arista's travels with Riyria - subsequently making this entire volume golden for me. I loved the development of Arista's magic powers, as well as her bonds with Riyria, especially Hadrian. Really, the only matter keeping me from giving Nyphron Rising a full 5 Stars are dated fantasy pitfalls re: treatment of the female characters.

I love how unique the women of Riyria Revelations are, but, really, I can count them on one hand: Arista, Thrace, Amilia, Gwen. Despite their small number, they each have different goals and demonstrate their own kind of strength - none, thankfully, are considered strong for adopting the attributes/attitudes of strength traditionally prized in men (fighting prowess, violence, stoicism), but rather celebrating strength in ways typically overlooked as being "feminine".

But male characters will still say such things as, "You fight like a woman", "cry like a woman", "run like a woman", etc. Sexual violence is a threat the female characters must contend with in ways the male characters don't have to. And the status of the female characters' virginities is discussed, with special importance placed on maintaining it, while no such discussion ever comes up about any man. Not once is a man's "virtue threatened".

Overall, Nyphron Rising was excellent fantasy...but still tropey fantasy.

The Emerald Storm: 3 Stars
This was a bit of a detour from the main story, I felt. It seemed that author Michael J. Sullivan had his heart set on having a Riyria high seas adventure, and found this his last opportunity before realizing the potential of larger plotlines. While the events here are tangentially related to the series’ overarching story, not much gets accomplished for it, ultimately making this feel more like a one-off.

But here's the thing: One of my top favorite movies of all time is 1949's Down to the Sea in Ships starring Lionel Barrymore and, my bae, Richard Widmark. Despite being an animal lover, anti-animal exploitation, and a whale girl in my childhood (in the way some little girls were horse girls), this quiet movie about the whaling tradition, manhood, and progress ignites passion in me only select pieces of media can.

So reading about salty sea air, ship’s masters, raising sails, and cook's apprentices kindled that fire Down to the Sea in Ships lit in me long ago. It excited me - mostly by making me want to watch that movie for the nth time.

Any time I wasn't thinking about Down to the Sea in Ships while reading The Emerald Storm, I kept on quoting this Kano line from 1995's Mortal Kombat (because my brain is a broken loop of Richard Widmark and Trevor Goddard):

[Eon Windrunner · Rating 5 out of 5]

Proper RTC.
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Update: April 2016 read

Sometimes you worry that a series you remember as fantasy perfection on your first read will not live up to the memory of it in your mind.

With Riyria you would be correct. It is better than what you remember.

Insert elvish word for five here stars.


Original review
Really like this series. No-nonsense, fun fantasy with great characters. As soon as you're done with this one, you will want to read the next. And that's exactly what I am going to do right now.

[Celeste · Rating 5 out of 5]

Full review now posted!
Original review can be found at Booknest.

What a way to end the year!

Theft of Swords was the first book I started in 2017. Between all of the new books and authors I stumbled across and became obsessed with, the rest of Riyria somehow got lost in the mix. But I’m so happy to be ending my reading year on such a high note; the wait feels worth it.

I loved Theft of Swords because it was fun and engaging and harkened back to some of the foundations of the fantasy genre. I loved the relationship between Hadrian and Royce, and I wanted to know more about who they are and the events that formed them. In this second omnibus, I got some of the information I sought, especially regarding Hadrian. I got more bromance and more moral conflict, which made me happy. Hadrian and Royce aren’t my absolute favorite bromance, because that title will always be reserved for Scott Lynch’s Locke and Jean, but they’re definitely in my top five. I love their development in Rise of Empire, and I can’t wait to see how they further develop in Heir of Novron.

Yet again, there is a cast of secondary characters that is absolutely wonderful. The book starts with the introduction of Amilia, a maid in the castle of the new Empress. Through a series of random events, she finds herself promoted from maid to secretary of the Empress, tasked with bringing Modina out of her shell and helping form her into the Empress the Empire believes she should be. Amilia is in over her head, but she is intelligent and diligent and, most importantly, fiercely loyal to her ward.

We also meet Wesley, a midshipman aboard the Emerald Storm. Wesley is incredibly straight-laced and can often appear stuck-up, but there’s much more to him. This nobleman turned sailor is the epitome of honor, loyal and honest and fair to a fault. Though his manners may be stilted, he never backs down from making the hard decision, even when it’s not in his personal best interest.

But my absolute favorite character in this book is one we met in Theft of Swords: Princess Arista. In Theft of Swords, Arista was interesting but definitely a background character. In Rise of Empire, Arista’s character develops dramatically, taking centerstage even over Hadrian and Royce. In my opinion, she’s the character with the most richness and depth in the entire series, and I can’t wait to see how she further develops in the last omnibus of the series. I’ve read a lot of fantasy, and I have no qualms about saying that Arista Essendon is one of the best developed female characters I’ve come across in the genre.

There was one character from the first omnibus who wasn’t present in the second and who I really missed: Myron. He’s the cutest, sweetest cinnamon roll of a man I’ve ever come across, and I wish there was an entire series just about him. However, I’ve been informed by reliable sources that he’ll be more present in Heir of Novron, and I’m thrilled at the prospect of seeing him again.

Again, I hate that I waited so long (almost a year!) between reading Theft of Swords and Rise of Empire, but I have no regrets. I was able to end the year with a book that I absolutely love, and I have what I’ve been told is an amazing conclusion to look forward to as my first read of 2018. It’s been a wonderful year, full of fantastic stories and friendships founded on a mutual love of books, and I’m excited to see what the new years brings.

Happy New Year, everyone! May your 2018 be incredible, and stuffed to the brim with fabulous books!

[Nicole · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was better than the first 2 books, still had some major issues towards the end, nonetheless it was rather enjoyable. RTC.

[Nancy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Royce, Hadrian, and Arista are back and I couldn’t be happier. I love these 3 characters and enjoyed this book even more than the first. Interesting plot which isn’t too convoluted and is easy to follow. I always prefer reading books in a series back to back like this. Looking forward to seeing how this all wraps up. Hopefully the final book in the trilogy is available on Libby. 🤞🏻🤞🏻 4.5 stars rounded up.

[Książkowe Bajdurzenie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Nowe Imperium: 5⭐/5
Szmaragdowy Sztorm 4⭐/5

Gdybym tak energicznie podchodził do siłowni, jak do czytania tej serii, to już dawno byłbym kaczym Pudzianem.

[Hamad · Rating 4 out of 5]

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Theft of Swords ★★★ 1/2
Rise of Empire ★★★★ 1/4

I reviewed this book along with the third book. You can find the full review Here