Solid entertainment with unused potential that could have made it a pearl of the comedy fantasy genre.
But there are some problems:
Redundancy in dialogues, similar running gags, very many dead horse tropes.
The first person view is a mess, it could have been much better with different perspectives and funny one time use characters. Asprin has a hand for comedy, I imagine many openings and endings with secondary characters for quick laughs, all things not possible from this narrative point of view.
First, it takes far too much time to get started for the action, then the action is over without really much happening.
The humor doesn´t reach higher levels, it´s always based on scenery or superficial character traits, no deeper meaning, connotations, relation to a meta scenery. The positive aspect of this is that it is pure entertainment without any darkness.
It´s still a solid work and if it would have been the average stereotype fantasy novel I wouldn´t have criticized it so much, but there was the chance of a rare, really funny fantasy read and after the first half or something it gets a bit boring because there is no more new under the sun. It had such a great start but became repetitive and just average that it´s truly a mess.
Absolutely not sure about continuing this, it´s short, which is always fine, and all parts are solid 4 star ratings, but I don´t think that there is still much potential for development and suspense, especially because of the lack of other character perspectives. Maybe I´ll give the second part a chance, funny writing is so rare that I´ll possibly just consume it for the laughs and vivisecting the used tropes.