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Depression, societal shock, emotional shutdown, and psychological grief are popular subjects in fiction and can be written about well. When they are, it makes the reader feel spiritually cleansed and psychologically reborn. When it is not done well, the reader wishes to slap the protagonist and scream at him or her. When it is done horribly, the reader has his or her own break down and wishes to kill him or herself rather than finish one more sentence in the story. Unfortunately, Inglorious by Joanna Kavenna is one of these novels.
One of the rare good things about the novel is that Kavenna has a really good style of writing, good voice, and strong use of wit. Many passages are quite beautiful or thought provoking. For example, while Rosa is riding on a bus, the narration follows, “There was a sign pointing left, saying EQUAL PEOPLE. So that’s where they live, Rosa thought” (54). Using a sarcastic thought to a common street sign meaning something else entirely, it is easy to tell that Kavenna knows her craft of writing very well.
That being said, she obviously was not taught about the importance of plot. The novel starts off with the clichéd though catchy start of a woman named Rosa who has lost all meaning in her life. She abruptly quits her job as a journalist and walks out the door to find herself using the philosophies though the ages. Though this idea has been done many times through the history of novel writing, Kavenna sets this up nicely. Then, everything goes downhill from there. The woman loses her significant other of ten years to her best friend of just a few, she jumps from location to location, using her friends for as long as she can until they kick her out, purposefully fails job interviews, and, overall, becomes a parasite. Through these so-called trials that are more akin to malingering than actual depression, rather than finding herself in philosophies, she becomes lost in them. She does not necessarily question everything, a principal taught in many philosophies, so much as whine about everything. For example, one night at 2:00 in the morning, she calls back the man who took pity enough on her to give her a free lance job to apologize for being depressed. When he cuts her off with a very polite request that she call him back at a more reasonable hour, Rosa narrates, “He would be asleep in a second, and she counted down, thinking of him drifting into sleep, falling and now, Andreas was unconscious, she thought. Then she kicked the phone out of the socket, went to her room and whined herself to sleep” (275). He was very polite when reminding her of the hour, even telling her he would talk to her later, and she only thinks about herself. Philosophy and the art of finding oneself is essentially supposed to make one less of a self-centered jerk, but all Rosa can concentrate on is herself. She fails to grow as a character, which just adds to the monotony and pointlessness of the story.
Throughout the novel, Rosa’s sense of humor, while witty and full of symbolism and social commentary, is largely and annoyingly self-deprecating. While this at first pulls sympathy, the longer it goes on, the more it alienating it becomes. One such witty commentary is Rosa’s habit of making to-do lists, which never seem to get done, a true reflection of how depressed people tackle to-do lists. As the list rarely changes very much but is repeated in its entirety throughout the novel, it just is there to fill space in what should have been a novella or short story rather than a novel.
Another such annoyance is Rosa’s tendency to share many letters she writes to various people in the novel, many of whom we never hear about again, begging for a job. These letters, while in essence follow the professional outline, are again self-deprecating and would in no way ever gain a single person any form of employment. Again, while these may at first gain a chuckle for their dark humor, the longer it continues, the more it annoys. It is as if Kavenna took a brilliant joke and retold it too often.
In its entirety, Inglorious by Joanna Kavenna, though it has its witty moments, is not worth the effort it takes to force oneself to open it. Unless quite a prize is waiting at the finish line for the reader, it should not be bothered with by anyone unless he or she particularly enjoys self-deprecating humor, plot-less actions driven by the protagonist’s chaotic thrashing into philosophy, or novels that inspire disgust or hate by the end, of which is only slightly wrapped up in the last few pages.