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Bottom Line: A Tense Gay Romantic Suspense
G.B. Gordon returns with the second installment in the Follow the Money romantic suspense series, perfect for fans of TV’s White Collar.
Working for the FBI has always given Nick Marshall exactly what he wants in control over his distinguished career and control over his playboy image. And his notorious hookups have always given him control over his admittedly shallow relationships…until his last assignment showed him how amazing it could be to give up a little of that control. Amazing and terrifying.
Accountant Ben Coyne likes control too. Which is why waiting in vain for the gruff FBI agent to call makes Ben question his judgment and his heart. Just when it seems their intense chemistry must have been one-sided, Ben and Nick’s lives collide again, and Ben gets tangled up in the money-laundering scheme Nick’s investigating in Vancouver. And it’s crystal clear the attraction is still there, hotter than ever.
Tracking down dirty money and working to uncover a suspected mole, Nick and Ben must learn to trust each other and work together, or else watch this case—and maybe their lives—go up in flames…
Follow the Money
Book 1: By the Book
Book 2: Bottom Line
Working for the FBI has always given Nick Marshall exactly what he wants in control over his distinguished career and control over his playboy image. And his notorious hookups have always given him control over his admittedly shallow relationships…until his last assignment showed him how amazing it could be to give up a little of that control. Amazing and terrifying.
Accountant Ben Coyne likes control too. Which is why waiting in vain for the gruff FBI agent to call makes Ben question his judgment and his heart. Just when it seems their intense chemistry must have been one-sided, Ben and Nick’s lives collide again, and Ben gets tangled up in the money-laundering scheme Nick’s investigating in Vancouver. And it’s crystal clear the attraction is still there, hotter than ever.
Tracking down dirty money and working to uncover a suspected mole, Nick and Ben must learn to trust each other and work together, or else watch this case—and maybe their lives—go up in flames…
Follow the Money
Book 1: By the Book
Book 2: Bottom Line
- GenresM M RomanceRomanceLGBT
222 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 27, 2023
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G.B. Gordon
13 books94 followersG.B.Gordon worked as a packer, landscaper, waiter, and coach before going back to school to major in linguistics and, at 35, switch to less backbreaking monetary pursuits like translating, editing, and writing. Having lived in various parts of the world, Gordon is now happily ensconced in suburban Ontario with the best of all husbands.
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July 24, 2023
A bit better than the first one. I enjoyed it .
April 27, 2023
I freaking loved this.
"By the Book" was one of my favourite unexpected surprises of 2022, and I have been impatiently waiting for the sequel for over a year now: I remember reading and loving that book, and I remember being helplessly drawn to Nick, and absolutely falling for the unexpected dynamic between Nick and Ben.
In fact, I'm pretty sure that book was the first of many where I started enjoying a bit of a role reversal in my romances: Nick, the gruff, older FBI agent, discovers his subby side thanks to younger, earnest Ben, with his quietly domineering nature.
So yeah, I was so looking forward to seeing that part of their relationship explored in the sequel, and I was so looking forward to reading more of their adventures in white collar crime world. And of course, I was so, so excited to read about Nick some more, my messy, playboy disaster of a man.
I wasn't disappointed, at all. The opposite, actually:
"Bottom Line" was even more fantastic that the first book, and I managed to INHALE it in a day. I'm actually cursing myself right now because I wanted to savour it a bit more but nope. I just had to finish it: I had to discover what was happening, both in regards to the mystery at the centre of this book and between Nick and Ben as their romance slowly develops.
First of all, I adored the story: it's as complex as the one that brought Ben and Nick together in the first book, and again, who would have thought that that kind of crime world would have been so fascinating? I also loved the many side characters we get to meet again, and although Duncan and George appear much less, they still STOLE THE SHOW.
I can't wait to see them properly in the third book (*manifesting*)
And Nick and Ben? WELL, where do I start. Ben was much more my cup of tea this time around: he's still reckless, mulish and somewhat amateur-sleuth-ish, but I loved seeing him come into his own (and his baby Dom era). He's done the homework, he's much more confident and even more domineering and commanding, despite his age and his innocent blond-and-blue-eyed-looks, and whew. I loved that for him.
Nick, on the other hand, is ehm... Not very put together; but it's no surprise that messy, self-destructive disasters are my favourite kind of protagonists. He's such a complex character: assured and confident in some ways, flirty and sunshine-y, but he's also messy and reckless and a bit immature (and yes, he owns that lol), closed-off and afraid and sharp-edged.
He's got some serious baggage and a somewhat traumatic past, and seeing him struggle with his own desires and his submissive nature (versus his masculitiny and society's idea of it), was both heart-breaking and immensely satisfying.
Needless to say, I absolutely adored him: he's my favourite and although he's also very, very flawed, I was quite ready to jump into the book and protect him from the whole world.
Nick and Ben's relationship is still pretty much slow-burn, and although it's much more present here than the previous book, this installment is still more of a suspense story than a traditional romance. Regardless, their dynamic was priceless, explosive and steamy, and their chemistry is literally off the charts. G.B. Gordon has some serious writing skills.
I'm so, so so curious to see what will happen next. I'm pretty sure there's going to be a third book (I might cry otherwise), but this book ends on a very solid HFN. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Ben and Nick, but in the meantime I might just re-read book one.
I received an ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
"By the Book" was one of my favourite unexpected surprises of 2022, and I have been impatiently waiting for the sequel for over a year now: I remember reading and loving that book, and I remember being helplessly drawn to Nick, and absolutely falling for the unexpected dynamic between Nick and Ben.
In fact, I'm pretty sure that book was the first of many where I started enjoying a bit of a role reversal in my romances: Nick, the gruff, older FBI agent, discovers his subby side thanks to younger, earnest Ben, with his quietly domineering nature.
So yeah, I was so looking forward to seeing that part of their relationship explored in the sequel, and I was so looking forward to reading more of their adventures in white collar crime world. And of course, I was so, so excited to read about Nick some more, my messy, playboy disaster of a man.
I wasn't disappointed, at all. The opposite, actually:
"Bottom Line" was even more fantastic that the first book, and I managed to INHALE it in a day. I'm actually cursing myself right now because I wanted to savour it a bit more but nope. I just had to finish it: I had to discover what was happening, both in regards to the mystery at the centre of this book and between Nick and Ben as their romance slowly develops.
First of all, I adored the story: it's as complex as the one that brought Ben and Nick together in the first book, and again, who would have thought that that kind of crime world would have been so fascinating? I also loved the many side characters we get to meet again, and although Duncan and George appear much less, they still STOLE THE SHOW.
I can't wait to see them properly in the third book (*manifesting*)
And Nick and Ben? WELL, where do I start. Ben was much more my cup of tea this time around: he's still reckless, mulish and somewhat amateur-sleuth-ish, but I loved seeing him come into his own (and his baby Dom era). He's done the homework, he's much more confident and even more domineering and commanding, despite his age and his innocent blond-and-blue-eyed-looks, and whew. I loved that for him.
Nick, on the other hand, is ehm... Not very put together; but it's no surprise that messy, self-destructive disasters are my favourite kind of protagonists. He's such a complex character: assured and confident in some ways, flirty and sunshine-y, but he's also messy and reckless and a bit immature (and yes, he owns that lol), closed-off and afraid and sharp-edged.
He's got some serious baggage and a somewhat traumatic past, and seeing him struggle with his own desires and his submissive nature (versus his masculitiny and society's idea of it), was both heart-breaking and immensely satisfying.
Needless to say, I absolutely adored him: he's my favourite and although he's also very, very flawed, I was quite ready to jump into the book and protect him from the whole world.
Nick and Ben's relationship is still pretty much slow-burn, and although it's much more present here than the previous book, this installment is still more of a suspense story than a traditional romance. Regardless, their dynamic was priceless, explosive and steamy, and their chemistry is literally off the charts. G.B. Gordon has some serious writing skills.
I'm so, so so curious to see what will happen next. I'm pretty sure there's going to be a third book (I might cry otherwise), but this book ends on a very solid HFN. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Ben and Nick, but in the meantime I might just re-read book one.
I received an ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
August 4, 2023
I've given this a C at AAR.
G.B. Gordon’s Bottom Line is the sequel to 2022’s By the Book and the second in the Follow the Money series, about an FBI agent working white collar crimes and the younger forensic accountant with whom he becomes romantically involved while investigating an elaborate money laundering scheme. The story was perhaps a bit formulaic, but it was well done and I enjoyed it, although I had reservations about the romance, which, while it had plenty of chemistry was rather under-developed. Still, I was invested enough in finding out what would happen next to pick up Bottom Line – but while the plot is interesting, I can’t report any significant improvement in the romantic storyline. If anything, it’s even more sidelined than in the first book; the two leads spend hardly any page-time together and when they do one of them is almost always being shitty towards the other.
It’s been two months since Nick Marshall and Ben Coyne finally succumbed to their intense mutual attraction and spent an incredible night together. But since then? Nada. Nick has been like a bear with a sore head ever since, furious with Ben for ghosting him and furious with himself for letting it matter so much. He’s found it impossible to get back to his usual MO of casual hook-ups and is throwing himself into his work more than ever, his latest case taking him to Vancouver where he’s to co-ordinate a multi-national, multi-agency force investigating a money laundering operation stretching from Las Vegas to Melbourne with possible connections to the Triads.
Ben doesn’t understand why Nick has ghosted him ever since their night together. Surely he must remember that Ben’s phone was a casualty of the explosion that almost killed him, so he no longer has Nick’s number? Or is it because Ben was too aggressive in the bedroom? (It seems, over the past two months, that Ben has realised he’s interested in a bit of what he terms “power exchange” during sex – and he identifies Nick as a sub in denial about it. [How on earth he knows Nick is a sub, I have no idea, and it’s a really strange assumption to make about someone he’s had sex with exactly once and still doesn’t know all that well.]) Whatever the reason, Ben is hurt, but is trying hard not to dwell on it too much. He has a new job he enjoys and is doing great at, good friends… Special Agent Sex-on-Legs can take a hike.
Ben is surprised when his best friend, Corey, who has gone to Vancouver to visit his grandmother, calls to ask him if he’s still in touch with “that FBI guy.” Corey has noticed that there is more cash around the house than there should be and is worried that his grandmother has somehow become tangled up in something dodgy – he wonders if it’s the sort of thing that should raise red flags. Ben doesn’t particularly want to call Nick – even if he could – but he does still have the card given to him by Nick’s partner Duncan Reid, so he calls him instead. Reid agrees that whatever Corey’s grandmother is mixed up in sounds fishy, and ends their conversation by practically begging Ben to call Nick. Learning Nick is in Vancouver as well… Ben has never been a great believer in fate, but maybe there’s something in it after all.
The author keeps the story moving as Nick, realising someone is leaking information about the investigation, tries to hunt down the mole without attracting suspicion while continuing to run down leads and make connections. He’s seriously pissed when he gets a text from Ben to say he’s on his way to Vancouver and that Reid thought Nick would be interested in the reason why. Nick, still angry and hating (and scared by) the pull towards Ben he still feels, blows him off rudely and thinks that will be an end of it – but it isn’t. A couple of days later, Ben texts again and Nick realises that whatever Ben has stumbled into is somehow connected to his case – and he doesn’t like it. He tells Ben to stay out of it and generally behaves like a spoilt brat in a sulk; he’s dismissive, rude and talks to Ben like he’s nothing… and I would have cheered if Ben had told Nick to fuck off. Of course, that’s not what happens; instead, they head up to Nick’s room for angry!sex and are just getting down to business when Ben makes a comment about wanting to tie Nick up that sees Nick bolting from the bed and locking himself in the bathroom. This is explained as trauma resulting from an encounter, twelve years earlier, with a man who picked up guys for sex, tied them up and then killed them (Nick never actually had sex with this person, but it was a close call) – and then, after Nick has calmed down, about his being in denial over wanting to be submissive in the bedroom, because alpha male types (my words) like him don’t want… that.
Usually, a same-couple series affords more time to build the foundations of a romantic relationship (see Nicky James, C.S. Poe, Gregory Ashe etc.) but that isn’t the case here because the romance is seriously underdeveloped. For around three-quarters of the book, Nick is sniping at Ben, ignoring him and generally being a complete twat to him – it’s only after the plot has reached its climax that they finally talk properly and Nick starts thinking about the ‘L’ word. Which is rich considering he even suspected that Ben might be the one leaking information to the bad guys!
The premise of this series had a lot of potential, offering something a little different to the majority of the romantic mysteries, suspense and procedurals that are out there right now – but unfortunately, the central relationship isn’t working for me. I liked Nick a lot more in the previous book – he’s a hot mess who seems to have it all worked out (but really doesn’t) with a nice line in snark – but while his thought processes in this story are consistent with his characterisation as someone who acts like an arsehole to cover his vulnerability, he’s simply cruel a lot of the time and I lost sympathy for him. Ben, on the other hand, has grown into himself and is much more confident; he’s not afraid to call Nick out when he’s being especially dickish (such as when he dismisses Ben’s concern for Corey’s grandmother and her friends) and he does it in a very measured way that is nicely contrasted with Nick’s sometimes immature way of handling things. You’d be forgiven for forgetting that Nick is forty-one and Ben is fifteen years his junior.
In the end, the poorly executed romance (and the odd assumptions and jumps in logic) mean I didn’t enjoy Bottom Line as much as I’d hoped to. The complex plotlines are well done, the author captures the tense atmosphere of the investigation in a way that puts the reader right in the room with the characters, and the climax is exciting, but I disliked Nick so much that I couldn’t help thinking that maybe Ben would be better off without him – which is not the way I want to think about two characters who are supposed to be falling in love with each other. If there’s another book, I might read it just to get answers to the unanswered questions posed in book one (and briefly mentioned in this one) but the author is going to have to work really hard to get me to believe that Nick and Ben belong together.
This review originally appeared at All About Romance.
G.B. Gordon’s Bottom Line is the sequel to 2022’s By the Book and the second in the Follow the Money series, about an FBI agent working white collar crimes and the younger forensic accountant with whom he becomes romantically involved while investigating an elaborate money laundering scheme. The story was perhaps a bit formulaic, but it was well done and I enjoyed it, although I had reservations about the romance, which, while it had plenty of chemistry was rather under-developed. Still, I was invested enough in finding out what would happen next to pick up Bottom Line – but while the plot is interesting, I can’t report any significant improvement in the romantic storyline. If anything, it’s even more sidelined than in the first book; the two leads spend hardly any page-time together and when they do one of them is almost always being shitty towards the other.
It’s been two months since Nick Marshall and Ben Coyne finally succumbed to their intense mutual attraction and spent an incredible night together. But since then? Nada. Nick has been like a bear with a sore head ever since, furious with Ben for ghosting him and furious with himself for letting it matter so much. He’s found it impossible to get back to his usual MO of casual hook-ups and is throwing himself into his work more than ever, his latest case taking him to Vancouver where he’s to co-ordinate a multi-national, multi-agency force investigating a money laundering operation stretching from Las Vegas to Melbourne with possible connections to the Triads.
Ben doesn’t understand why Nick has ghosted him ever since their night together. Surely he must remember that Ben’s phone was a casualty of the explosion that almost killed him, so he no longer has Nick’s number? Or is it because Ben was too aggressive in the bedroom? (It seems, over the past two months, that Ben has realised he’s interested in a bit of what he terms “power exchange” during sex – and he identifies Nick as a sub in denial about it. [How on earth he knows Nick is a sub, I have no idea, and it’s a really strange assumption to make about someone he’s had sex with exactly once and still doesn’t know all that well.]) Whatever the reason, Ben is hurt, but is trying hard not to dwell on it too much. He has a new job he enjoys and is doing great at, good friends… Special Agent Sex-on-Legs can take a hike.
Ben is surprised when his best friend, Corey, who has gone to Vancouver to visit his grandmother, calls to ask him if he’s still in touch with “that FBI guy.” Corey has noticed that there is more cash around the house than there should be and is worried that his grandmother has somehow become tangled up in something dodgy – he wonders if it’s the sort of thing that should raise red flags. Ben doesn’t particularly want to call Nick – even if he could – but he does still have the card given to him by Nick’s partner Duncan Reid, so he calls him instead. Reid agrees that whatever Corey’s grandmother is mixed up in sounds fishy, and ends their conversation by practically begging Ben to call Nick. Learning Nick is in Vancouver as well… Ben has never been a great believer in fate, but maybe there’s something in it after all.
The author keeps the story moving as Nick, realising someone is leaking information about the investigation, tries to hunt down the mole without attracting suspicion while continuing to run down leads and make connections. He’s seriously pissed when he gets a text from Ben to say he’s on his way to Vancouver and that Reid thought Nick would be interested in the reason why. Nick, still angry and hating (and scared by) the pull towards Ben he still feels, blows him off rudely and thinks that will be an end of it – but it isn’t. A couple of days later, Ben texts again and Nick realises that whatever Ben has stumbled into is somehow connected to his case – and he doesn’t like it. He tells Ben to stay out of it and generally behaves like a spoilt brat in a sulk; he’s dismissive, rude and talks to Ben like he’s nothing… and I would have cheered if Ben had told Nick to fuck off. Of course, that’s not what happens; instead, they head up to Nick’s room for angry!sex and are just getting down to business when Ben makes a comment about wanting to tie Nick up that sees Nick bolting from the bed and locking himself in the bathroom. This is explained as trauma resulting from an encounter, twelve years earlier, with a man who picked up guys for sex, tied them up and then killed them (Nick never actually had sex with this person, but it was a close call) – and then, after Nick has calmed down, about his being in denial over wanting to be submissive in the bedroom, because alpha male types (my words) like him don’t want… that.
Usually, a same-couple series affords more time to build the foundations of a romantic relationship (see Nicky James, C.S. Poe, Gregory Ashe etc.) but that isn’t the case here because the romance is seriously underdeveloped. For around three-quarters of the book, Nick is sniping at Ben, ignoring him and generally being a complete twat to him – it’s only after the plot has reached its climax that they finally talk properly and Nick starts thinking about the ‘L’ word. Which is rich considering he even suspected that Ben might be the one leaking information to the bad guys!
The premise of this series had a lot of potential, offering something a little different to the majority of the romantic mysteries, suspense and procedurals that are out there right now – but unfortunately, the central relationship isn’t working for me. I liked Nick a lot more in the previous book – he’s a hot mess who seems to have it all worked out (but really doesn’t) with a nice line in snark – but while his thought processes in this story are consistent with his characterisation as someone who acts like an arsehole to cover his vulnerability, he’s simply cruel a lot of the time and I lost sympathy for him. Ben, on the other hand, has grown into himself and is much more confident; he’s not afraid to call Nick out when he’s being especially dickish (such as when he dismisses Ben’s concern for Corey’s grandmother and her friends) and he does it in a very measured way that is nicely contrasted with Nick’s sometimes immature way of handling things. You’d be forgiven for forgetting that Nick is forty-one and Ben is fifteen years his junior.
In the end, the poorly executed romance (and the odd assumptions and jumps in logic) mean I didn’t enjoy Bottom Line as much as I’d hoped to. The complex plotlines are well done, the author captures the tense atmosphere of the investigation in a way that puts the reader right in the room with the characters, and the climax is exciting, but I disliked Nick so much that I couldn’t help thinking that maybe Ben would be better off without him – which is not the way I want to think about two characters who are supposed to be falling in love with each other. If there’s another book, I might read it just to get answers to the unanswered questions posed in book one (and briefly mentioned in this one) but the author is going to have to work really hard to get me to believe that Nick and Ben belong together.
This review originally appeared at All About Romance.
May 24, 2023
Bottom Line is the second book in the Follow the Money series - funnily enough preceded by book 1 which of course in true to me fashion, I haven’t read .
I spent a little while at the start thinking who on earth are these people and took some time realising Nick’s friend George was in fact, a woman as well. So as I understand it Nick ghosted Ben, but Ben had also lost Nick’s number because some explosion happened, his phone blew up, and then he couldn’t contact Nick. Nick got all broody and stubborn about it, despite being an adult, and a filthy rich, FBI agent.
This book has a healthy dose of suspense to do with Nick’s work, but Ben involves himself through a friend, there’s still tension and angst between them and Nick’s still broody AF. It seems tricky for Nick as Ben is a bossy dominant MF in intimate settings and Nick has no insight to how this might be unsettling for him because he doesn’t want to relinquish control, making him want to GTF away from Ben. It takes Nick most of the book to work this out …. A little at odds that he’s supposed to be THE FBI man. Anyway, I enjoyed this one but it’s tricky if you haven’t read the first one, and a tad frustrating when Nick really didn’t have an idea about himself and needed to grow up a little.
Probably 3.5 stars at a pinch
I spent a little while at the start thinking who on earth are these people and took some time realising Nick’s friend George was in fact, a woman as well. So as I understand it Nick ghosted Ben, but Ben had also lost Nick’s number because some explosion happened, his phone blew up, and then he couldn’t contact Nick. Nick got all broody and stubborn about it, despite being an adult, and a filthy rich, FBI agent.
This book has a healthy dose of suspense to do with Nick’s work, but Ben involves himself through a friend, there’s still tension and angst between them and Nick’s still broody AF. It seems tricky for Nick as Ben is a bossy dominant MF in intimate settings and Nick has no insight to how this might be unsettling for him because he doesn’t want to relinquish control, making him want to GTF away from Ben. It takes Nick most of the book to work this out …. A little at odds that he’s supposed to be THE FBI man. Anyway, I enjoyed this one but it’s tricky if you haven’t read the first one, and a tad frustrating when Nick really didn’t have an idea about himself and needed to grow up a little.
Probably 3.5 stars at a pinch
July 3, 2023
Thank you to NetGalley for providing me a digital copy of this book to give my feedback.
Bottom Line is the second book in the "Follow the Money" series that follows Ben Coyne and Nick Marshall on another case. In the aftermath of the events of book one, Nick is worried and hurt that there has been radio silence on the part of Ben Coyne. However, he is sent away on an international case to bust the antagonist of the first book. Ben Coyne, also feeling hurt by Nick's avoidance, is contacted by a friend to help investigate a fraud case involving their grandmother. Both cases seem to be irrelevant to one another. But when commonalities are found, Ben and Nick are entangled in a messy web that might complicate their case and their relationship.
The story was quite a short read and it was a fun adventure! Having not read the first book, I was a bit lost at certain times. Characters, and past event in the first book, weren't introduced clearly enough. That is my fault as I walked into this book not realizing it was a sequel. That, however, had no effect in me enjoying the novel and also doesn't effect my rating of the book! I would recommend future readers to read the first novel before enjoying this book; so that they can fully enjoy the full experience.
Let's start with what I enjoyed about the book! The narrative itself was concise, linear, and easy to follow. There are some books, in the suspense/thriller genre, that jump to different scenes, that don't relate to the events prior, that can jar readers and take them out of the narrative. I never felt that way in this book. The author carefully shifts between the two point of view characters, and usually has a sentence that connect each chapter, and scene, to one another. The author's decision to limit the POVs to only Nick and Ben is very strategic, as the reader can gauge and compare each character's reaction when something happens in the other's POV. For instance, when Ben and Nick have a conversation about their relationship, their reaction to the outcome of the convo are vastly different. Ben's reaction, the POV that starts the convo, is mature and communicative, while Nick's, the POV after the convo happens, is more irate and belittling. This is a genius take as the reader can gather all the little nuances of each character.
The characterization of the characters are fun and great to explore; especially the side characters as they further the reader's understanding of the main characters. For example, Nick's friends and family offer insight on his privileged upbringing, and how his independence can be a hinderance to others and himself. These characters help establish who the main characters are and offer the reader a chance to engage in the unique dynamic each character has to offer.
The romance between the two main characters is cute and angsty at the same time. This is a hard thing to nail down, as the sudden shift between the dynamic is hard to manage, but the author does so masterfully. Nick and Ben's entire relationship conflict revolves around communication. This is further enhanced from shifting between both of their point of views, and seeing their perspective of the same situation. Even when they communicate, misunderstanding occur and the distance between them furthers. When they do overcome a conflict, the heart warming moments were delightful to read.
The discussion of consent was explored in a healthy and mature manner. The use of colors to explain levels of consent was clever.
Erotica, personally, is not my cup of tea, but the erotic scenes were well written in this story. Fans of erotic scenes will fully enjoy the steamy moments the author included!
Now, let's discuss some of the aspects that hinders this book. For starters, this books "tells" narrative instead of "showing" the story. There were MANY scenes and chapters that glossed over important plot point by simply stating that something happened. For example, in one scene, an Interpool raid was planned to happen by Nick's superior. Instead of showing the preparation, the moments leading up to the raid, and the raid itself, the author tells the reader that the raid happens and the aftermath. Because of this, the suspenseful moments, intended for these scenes, are lost. The tension of the scene comes from showing us the actions the characters are taking, what is at stake for the character/situation, and taking us along for the ride. That will build the suspense for the reader as they feel they understand what the situation means and what the character has to lose. In this book, the suspense is nonexistent, except for a few scenes near the end, because the reader will know what the outcome will be in a few sentences.
The mystery of the story is also weak at some points. The antagonist is stated pretty early in the novel, in Nick's case, and the real problem is in how they're going to arrest him. During the investigation, Nick suspects there to be a mole on his team. However, the tension in the mole plot is never really solid. The reader is briefly introduced to all of the members on Nick's team and, when the mole subplot is introduced, the reader hasn't really spent too much time with any of the "suspected" moles. To fully bring out the tension, the reader must have some time to form a connection with a majority of the members of Nick's team. So, when the mole plot is brought up, the tension of "which one of these characters is the traitor?" becomes more impactful, because we developed a connection with the characters. We form no connections with the members of Nick's team and when the mole is revealed, the outcome loses its meaning and falls flat; because the reader can guess who the mole is.
Overall, I think this books is a fun read! If you enjoy romance with a hint of mystery and thriller, you should give this book a chance!
Bottom Line is the second book in the "Follow the Money" series that follows Ben Coyne and Nick Marshall on another case. In the aftermath of the events of book one, Nick is worried and hurt that there has been radio silence on the part of Ben Coyne. However, he is sent away on an international case to bust the antagonist of the first book. Ben Coyne, also feeling hurt by Nick's avoidance, is contacted by a friend to help investigate a fraud case involving their grandmother. Both cases seem to be irrelevant to one another. But when commonalities are found, Ben and Nick are entangled in a messy web that might complicate their case and their relationship.
The story was quite a short read and it was a fun adventure! Having not read the first book, I was a bit lost at certain times. Characters, and past event in the first book, weren't introduced clearly enough. That is my fault as I walked into this book not realizing it was a sequel. That, however, had no effect in me enjoying the novel and also doesn't effect my rating of the book! I would recommend future readers to read the first novel before enjoying this book; so that they can fully enjoy the full experience.
Let's start with what I enjoyed about the book! The narrative itself was concise, linear, and easy to follow. There are some books, in the suspense/thriller genre, that jump to different scenes, that don't relate to the events prior, that can jar readers and take them out of the narrative. I never felt that way in this book. The author carefully shifts between the two point of view characters, and usually has a sentence that connect each chapter, and scene, to one another. The author's decision to limit the POVs to only Nick and Ben is very strategic, as the reader can gauge and compare each character's reaction when something happens in the other's POV. For instance, when Ben and Nick have a conversation about their relationship, their reaction to the outcome of the convo are vastly different. Ben's reaction, the POV that starts the convo, is mature and communicative, while Nick's, the POV after the convo happens, is more irate and belittling. This is a genius take as the reader can gather all the little nuances of each character.
The characterization of the characters are fun and great to explore; especially the side characters as they further the reader's understanding of the main characters. For example, Nick's friends and family offer insight on his privileged upbringing, and how his independence can be a hinderance to others and himself. These characters help establish who the main characters are and offer the reader a chance to engage in the unique dynamic each character has to offer.
The romance between the two main characters is cute and angsty at the same time. This is a hard thing to nail down, as the sudden shift between the dynamic is hard to manage, but the author does so masterfully. Nick and Ben's entire relationship conflict revolves around communication. This is further enhanced from shifting between both of their point of views, and seeing their perspective of the same situation. Even when they communicate, misunderstanding occur and the distance between them furthers. When they do overcome a conflict, the heart warming moments were delightful to read.
The discussion of consent was explored in a healthy and mature manner. The use of colors to explain levels of consent was clever.
Erotica, personally, is not my cup of tea, but the erotic scenes were well written in this story. Fans of erotic scenes will fully enjoy the steamy moments the author included!
Now, let's discuss some of the aspects that hinders this book. For starters, this books "tells" narrative instead of "showing" the story. There were MANY scenes and chapters that glossed over important plot point by simply stating that something happened. For example, in one scene, an Interpool raid was planned to happen by Nick's superior. Instead of showing the preparation, the moments leading up to the raid, and the raid itself, the author tells the reader that the raid happens and the aftermath. Because of this, the suspenseful moments, intended for these scenes, are lost. The tension of the scene comes from showing us the actions the characters are taking, what is at stake for the character/situation, and taking us along for the ride. That will build the suspense for the reader as they feel they understand what the situation means and what the character has to lose. In this book, the suspense is nonexistent, except for a few scenes near the end, because the reader will know what the outcome will be in a few sentences.
The mystery of the story is also weak at some points. The antagonist is stated pretty early in the novel, in Nick's case, and the real problem is in how they're going to arrest him. During the investigation, Nick suspects there to be a mole on his team. However, the tension in the mole plot is never really solid. The reader is briefly introduced to all of the members on Nick's team and, when the mole subplot is introduced, the reader hasn't really spent too much time with any of the "suspected" moles. To fully bring out the tension, the reader must have some time to form a connection with a majority of the members of Nick's team. So, when the mole plot is brought up, the tension of "which one of these characters is the traitor?" becomes more impactful, because we developed a connection with the characters. We form no connections with the members of Nick's team and when the mole is revealed, the outcome loses its meaning and falls flat; because the reader can guess who the mole is.
Overall, I think this books is a fun read! If you enjoy romance with a hint of mystery and thriller, you should give this book a chance!
July 2, 2023
Bottom Line by G.B. Gordon is a riveting and intoxicating blend of romance and suspense that will keep readers on the edge of their seats. With its thrilling storyline and captivating characters, this book delivers an engaging reading experience that weaves together the elements of love, danger, and intrigue.
Bottom Line is a story of two individuals drawn together against the backdrop of danger and uncertainty. Gordon skillfully develops the romantic tension between the main characters, leaving readers rooting for their connection to blossom amidst the thrilling circumstances they find themselves in. The chemistry between the protagonists is palpable, and their emotional journey is laced with passion, vulnerability, and a hint of danger that adds an extra layer of intensity to their relationship.
Gordon balances the romantic and suspenseful elements of the story. The book explores the depths of the characters' pasts, unraveling secrets and uncovering hidden truths that have the power to alter their lives forever. Gordon's ability to maintain a sense of urgency and mystery throughout the book is commendable, keeping readers guessing and eagerly turning the pages to discover what will happen next.
The descriptions of the settings are vivid and immersive, painting a vivid picture that pulls readers into the heart of the story. Whether it's the gritty streets of a bustling city or the secluded hideaways of dangerous criminals, each scene is brought to life, creating a rich and captivating backdrop for the unfolding romance and suspense.
The protagonists are multifaceted and layered, each with their own strengths, vulnerabilities, and demons to face. Gordon provides glimpses into their pasts, offering insight into their motivations and shaping their actions in the present. Supporting characters also play a vital role, adding depth and complexity to the narrative.
If there is one aspect that could have been further explored, it would be the balance between the romance and suspense elements. While the romantic connection between the main characters is beautifully depicted, there were moments where the suspense took precedence, leaving the romantic development slightly overshadowed. Striking a stronger equilibrium between the two would have heightened the overall impact of the story.
Bottom Line is a compelling and suspenseful romantic read that will keep fans of the genre captivated. Gordon's skillful storytelling, well-developed characters, and atmospheric writing style make this book appeal to those interested in gay romantic suspense. With its potent blend of romance and danger, it is a gripping tale that will leave readers eagerly awaiting more.
Bottom Line is a story of two individuals drawn together against the backdrop of danger and uncertainty. Gordon skillfully develops the romantic tension between the main characters, leaving readers rooting for their connection to blossom amidst the thrilling circumstances they find themselves in. The chemistry between the protagonists is palpable, and their emotional journey is laced with passion, vulnerability, and a hint of danger that adds an extra layer of intensity to their relationship.
Gordon balances the romantic and suspenseful elements of the story. The book explores the depths of the characters' pasts, unraveling secrets and uncovering hidden truths that have the power to alter their lives forever. Gordon's ability to maintain a sense of urgency and mystery throughout the book is commendable, keeping readers guessing and eagerly turning the pages to discover what will happen next.
The descriptions of the settings are vivid and immersive, painting a vivid picture that pulls readers into the heart of the story. Whether it's the gritty streets of a bustling city or the secluded hideaways of dangerous criminals, each scene is brought to life, creating a rich and captivating backdrop for the unfolding romance and suspense.
The protagonists are multifaceted and layered, each with their own strengths, vulnerabilities, and demons to face. Gordon provides glimpses into their pasts, offering insight into their motivations and shaping their actions in the present. Supporting characters also play a vital role, adding depth and complexity to the narrative.
If there is one aspect that could have been further explored, it would be the balance between the romance and suspense elements. While the romantic connection between the main characters is beautifully depicted, there were moments where the suspense took precedence, leaving the romantic development slightly overshadowed. Striking a stronger equilibrium between the two would have heightened the overall impact of the story.
Bottom Line is a compelling and suspenseful romantic read that will keep fans of the genre captivated. Gordon's skillful storytelling, well-developed characters, and atmospheric writing style make this book appeal to those interested in gay romantic suspense. With its potent blend of romance and danger, it is a gripping tale that will leave readers eagerly awaiting more.
June 27, 2023
I enjoyed the first, so looked forward to this one. I like forsenic accounting/fraud/white collar/financial crimes, so found this to be engaging and interesting.
I liked there was an Australian character (go Walker!)
I liked that Nick tries to play matchmaker for George (Go Katherine!)
The romance was downplayed a bit here, while Nick sorted through his own crises of kink. I liked that Ben was solid, undeterred but also not timid. (Go Ben!)
Overall, if you liked the first book, I am sure you will like this one too. Pretty sure we haven't wrapped up all the mysteries, so more to come, surely.
Thanks Netgalley and Carina Press for advanced copy. Out today!
I liked there was an Australian character (go Walker!)
I liked that Nick tries to play matchmaker for George (Go Katherine!)
The romance was downplayed a bit here, while Nick sorted through his own crises of kink. I liked that Ben was solid, undeterred but also not timid. (Go Ben!)
Overall, if you liked the first book, I am sure you will like this one too. Pretty sure we haven't wrapped up all the mysteries, so more to come, surely.
Thanks Netgalley and Carina Press for advanced copy. Out today!
June 24, 2023
Reading this without the first book is impossible, so I read the first book. This one is better than the first one but still unfortunately not what I wanted. I was expecting more thrilling action moments and this delivered action that when it was about to get thrilling switched POV so no suspense really. The wrap up of the action was also off screen and uneventful.
Ben and Nick were cute and their chemistry was good. This just lacked what I expected and was underdeveloped in many ways.
Thank You Carina Press and NetGalley for providing me a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
Ben and Nick were cute and their chemistry was good. This just lacked what I expected and was underdeveloped in many ways.
Thank You Carina Press and NetGalley for providing me a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
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June 2, 2023Romantic Suspense, International Mystery & Crime Fiction, Gay
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Follow the Money (Book #2)
Miniseries
Follow the Money (Book #2)
March 6, 2024
It did keep me reading, but I am not sure why it had to be entire separate book. Also, a good chunk of time could have been saved with some honest conversation.
March 24, 2025
I liked both books and will read the next in series when it will be published.
June 23, 2023
Nick works for the FBI. When he is sent to work on a money laundering case he runs headlong into the one night stand he’s been unable to forget. Ben has also spent an inordinate amount of time thinking about Nick. The case brings them together in the strangest ways.
Lots of angst, misunderstandings, and danger propels the story. Interesting story, well written and enjoyable. Both characters were good although Nick blew hot and cold. I’d call this a slow burn with some steam attached.
I didn’t realize this was the second in a series so I felt like I was dropped into the middle of an ongoing conversation that I just didn’t have enough knowledge to follow. A little ways in felt like I mostly caught up. I would recommend reading the books in order. I did enjoy the story.
I received an arc of this book from Netgalley.
Lots of angst, misunderstandings, and danger propels the story. Interesting story, well written and enjoyable. Both characters were good although Nick blew hot and cold. I’d call this a slow burn with some steam attached.
I didn’t realize this was the second in a series so I felt like I was dropped into the middle of an ongoing conversation that I just didn’t have enough knowledge to follow. A little ways in felt like I mostly caught up. I would recommend reading the books in order. I did enjoy the story.
I received an arc of this book from Netgalley.
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