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The Wizard of Time
Gabriel's dreams always come true. Then he dreams of drowning. That is when his adventure through time begins. Plucked from the timeline of history at the moment of his death, 13-year-old Gabriel Salvador awakens in a castle millions of years in the past. Saved because of his ability to sense the flow of time, he mourns the loss of the family who thinks he is dead as he trains to become an apprentice time mage. When a mission to stop the creation of an alternate reality fails, Gabriel is revealed as the Seventh True Mage, able to use all six forms of magic. Soon, he is hunted by three dark mages who hope to use him to rule the whole of the Primary Continuum. From the Aztec temples of 1487 to Scotland in the Middle Ages and the battlefields of Alexander the Great, Gabriel struggles to adapt to his terrifying new life and master the different magics. Can he fulfill the responsibility of being the Seventh True Mage as he joins the battle to protect the timeline of history? "If you like Harry Potter, you should love this."— Tahlia Author, Reviewer "When I started this book, I hoped for the impossible, and what I got was pure brilliance."— Elizabeth Author, Reviewer The Wizard of Time Trilogy Contains the Following The Wizard of Time (Book 1)The Sword of Unmaking (Book 2)The Edge of Eternity (Book 3)
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First published July 21, 2011
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G.L. Breedon
13 books60 followersAfter a childhood spent whizzing through the galaxy in super sleek starships and defeating treacherously evil monsters in long forgotten kingdoms, G.L. Breedon grew up to write science fiction and fantasy novels. He lives with his wife in Brooklyn, NY.
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September 2, 2011
A lot of people, me included, read to indulge their own imaginations, or to escape the realities of life! Everyone has a different idea of what constitutes escapism and that is probably why well written fantasy spans such a diverse and broad spectrum of genres and age groups. However, not all fantasy stories are actually successful in crossing ages and genres.
The reason for this is that for a fantasy to work, the story needs to hold some degree of realism. The reader needs to be able to associate with it and see themselves in it.
When it comes to fantasy I expect the impossible!
When I started this book I hoped for the impossible and what I got was pure brilliance. This story is written with incredible intelligence and crosses genres and ages groups seamlessly. It is captivating, adventurous, creative, vibrant, emotive and unpredictable. I fully believed in the fantasy, loved the plot and think the characters were just perfect.
The historical back drop to the story was excellent, and, clever word painting and research made me feel as though I was with the characters at every turn.
The technical and scientific explanations were, to my mind, plausible and brought the whole plot together in an incredibly exciting way.
This is a tale that feels real yet clearly is not. It has a story that captures enough reality to ground the tale and make it believable, yet not enough to bring me crashing back into reality. It is a tale into which I disappeared and hid from the world; where I connected with the characters yet knew their problems were not mine; where I touched their lives and felt their worlds, but still feel safe in my own.
G.L. Breedon has, in my opinion, created the perfect fantasy and I am so excited about this book and believe it has great potential.
This may be a story written for young adults but older adults who enjoy fantasy will not be disappointed.
To my mind this is a better story than any of the Harry Potter books and I have no hesitation in recommending this book to EVERYONE!
I absolutely LOVED IT!
The reason for this is that for a fantasy to work, the story needs to hold some degree of realism. The reader needs to be able to associate with it and see themselves in it.
When it comes to fantasy I expect the impossible!
When I started this book I hoped for the impossible and what I got was pure brilliance. This story is written with incredible intelligence and crosses genres and ages groups seamlessly. It is captivating, adventurous, creative, vibrant, emotive and unpredictable. I fully believed in the fantasy, loved the plot and think the characters were just perfect.
The historical back drop to the story was excellent, and, clever word painting and research made me feel as though I was with the characters at every turn.
The technical and scientific explanations were, to my mind, plausible and brought the whole plot together in an incredibly exciting way.
This is a tale that feels real yet clearly is not. It has a story that captures enough reality to ground the tale and make it believable, yet not enough to bring me crashing back into reality. It is a tale into which I disappeared and hid from the world; where I connected with the characters yet knew their problems were not mine; where I touched their lives and felt their worlds, but still feel safe in my own.
G.L. Breedon has, in my opinion, created the perfect fantasy and I am so excited about this book and believe it has great potential.
This may be a story written for young adults but older adults who enjoy fantasy will not be disappointed.
To my mind this is a better story than any of the Harry Potter books and I have no hesitation in recommending this book to EVERYONE!
I absolutely LOVED IT!
August 13, 2011
The Wizard of Time is an excellent and fascinating young adult fantasy, and is an especially great read for anyone with an enquiring mind or anyone who wants something very different. G.L. Breedon has created a unique world of time travel and alternate universes using a combination of science, history and philosophy. I urge you all to support this Indie author. I love it when I find one I can rave about.
I loved the central character, thirteen year old Gabe, because he thought about things, asked questions and worked things out for himself. He also grieved for his lost family, acted without hesitation when he needed to and questioned peoples’ motivations, which was extremely smart in the circumstances. Add to that humility and human vulnerability and you have a rich and inspiring character. The supporting characters were also very alive, as were their relationships with each other.
I especially liked how different the bad guys were to each other and how three dimensional they were. No cardboard cut outs here. Even though they were all on the same side, each one had their own ideas, desires and philosophy, some crude and obvious, others subtle and thought provoking.
The story moves along with never a dull moment and with unpredictable twists and turns. The detailed snippets of history that the author has chosen to incorporate give a richness and poignancy to the book, and the concept of a primary continuum of time with branches creating alternate realities has been extremely well thought out. I can’t find any flaws in this book.
The story has no romance, just the potential for some in further stories, and is suitable for all ages from about 8 years up. But don’t think of it as a young book, because the vision of time and the philosophical questions the story raises are very sophisticated. Adults will enjoy the concepts and younger children will enjoy the story, which is never dull. I give it 5 stars and recommend it for all fans of young adult fantasy. If you like Harry Potter, you should love this.
I loved the central character, thirteen year old Gabe, because he thought about things, asked questions and worked things out for himself. He also grieved for his lost family, acted without hesitation when he needed to and questioned peoples’ motivations, which was extremely smart in the circumstances. Add to that humility and human vulnerability and you have a rich and inspiring character. The supporting characters were also very alive, as were their relationships with each other.
I especially liked how different the bad guys were to each other and how three dimensional they were. No cardboard cut outs here. Even though they were all on the same side, each one had their own ideas, desires and philosophy, some crude and obvious, others subtle and thought provoking.
The story moves along with never a dull moment and with unpredictable twists and turns. The detailed snippets of history that the author has chosen to incorporate give a richness and poignancy to the book, and the concept of a primary continuum of time with branches creating alternate realities has been extremely well thought out. I can’t find any flaws in this book.
The story has no romance, just the potential for some in further stories, and is suitable for all ages from about 8 years up. But don’t think of it as a young book, because the vision of time and the philosophical questions the story raises are very sophisticated. Adults will enjoy the concepts and younger children will enjoy the story, which is never dull. I give it 5 stars and recommend it for all fans of young adult fantasy. If you like Harry Potter, you should love this.
April 17, 2013
DNF. I just can't do it. This story's universe is so full of holes you could fly a 747 through them. The reading level is clearing aimed at the elementary/middle school set, but the ideas involved in the story are convoluted and confusing. The characters are likable enough, but I just could care less. So this goes onto the DNF pile. Ug.
July 27, 2016
I confess, I have no idea where these terrific reviews came from. I tried very, very hard to like this book. In the very beginning, I really did like it; it sucked me right in.
And then we get to the part where Gabriel drowns...which, BTW, is pretty much immediately. As you might surmise, he discovers that he's not dead and learns about his abilities. From that moment on, the book is one massive info-dump.
I tend to be more forgiving than the average reader, I think, with detailed exposition that explains The Rules. Don't get me wrong: I like rules. I've read many books that could've used more, IMO.
Not so here, though. This is just page after page of people answering questions, introducing themselves with far, far more information than a regular person would get in an introduction, and sometimes even anticipating the main character's confusion and responding before he even formulates a question. There's so much structure that the author doesn't really have any room left to flesh out the story, and the attempts to disguise these lectures were ham-fisted and transparent.
There are other problems, too...among them the fact that the main character is grossly overpowered. Just like games aren't nearly as much fun when you essentially have no chance of losing, books aren't fun to read when you know ahead of time that when something bad happens, the MC will spontaneously develop some amazing and rare power that'll save the day. Again.
The characters aren't terrific either. We have a caricature of a bad guy, who does everything we'd expect a villain to do short of tying some chick to the railroad tracks while he twirls his mustache. The good guys have suspiciously similar voices. Even the little stuff, like when he meets a teenager and an elegant older woman and the woman mutters "whatever"...rather like a teenager would have. When we're not getting lectured at, there's a great deal of banter between the characters, and unfortunately, much of it sounds like they're talking to themselves.
It's disappointing, because the plot itself is a pretty good one. More than once I found myself hoping I could get over my aggravation, because I wanted to see how the tale ends. (That's probably why I got considerably farther in this DNF than I usually do.) The world, too, would have been very interesting had I got to experience it rather than just learn about it. Maybe it's all the more disappointing because it had so much potential, I don't know.
You know, I have read lots of YA books without prejudice. Not because they're YA, but because the stories, while perhaps a bit simpler or less literary than your standard grownup books, are entertaining. Sorry, but I'm simply not entertained by never-ending seminars on magic and bad guys. I am, however, giving this two stars. If you're an adult, I'd recommend you move on (though maybe I'm just overly critical; this book does seem to be popular). If you're planning to get it for a kid, though – like middle school or early high school – I can see why a younger reader would find plenty to like.
And then we get to the part where Gabriel drowns...which, BTW, is pretty much immediately. As you might surmise, he discovers that he's not dead and learns about his abilities. From that moment on, the book is one massive info-dump.
I tend to be more forgiving than the average reader, I think, with detailed exposition that explains The Rules. Don't get me wrong: I like rules. I've read many books that could've used more, IMO.
Not so here, though. This is just page after page of people answering questions, introducing themselves with far, far more information than a regular person would get in an introduction, and sometimes even anticipating the main character's confusion and responding before he even formulates a question. There's so much structure that the author doesn't really have any room left to flesh out the story, and the attempts to disguise these lectures were ham-fisted and transparent.
There are other problems, too...among them the fact that the main character is grossly overpowered. Just like games aren't nearly as much fun when you essentially have no chance of losing, books aren't fun to read when you know ahead of time that when something bad happens, the MC will spontaneously develop some amazing and rare power that'll save the day. Again.
The characters aren't terrific either. We have a caricature of a bad guy, who does everything we'd expect a villain to do short of tying some chick to the railroad tracks while he twirls his mustache. The good guys have suspiciously similar voices. Even the little stuff, like when he meets a teenager and an elegant older woman and the woman mutters "whatever"...rather like a teenager would have. When we're not getting lectured at, there's a great deal of banter between the characters, and unfortunately, much of it sounds like they're talking to themselves.
It's disappointing, because the plot itself is a pretty good one. More than once I found myself hoping I could get over my aggravation, because I wanted to see how the tale ends. (That's probably why I got considerably farther in this DNF than I usually do.) The world, too, would have been very interesting had I got to experience it rather than just learn about it. Maybe it's all the more disappointing because it had so much potential, I don't know.
You know, I have read lots of YA books without prejudice. Not because they're YA, but because the stories, while perhaps a bit simpler or less literary than your standard grownup books, are entertaining. Sorry, but I'm simply not entertained by never-ending seminars on magic and bad guys. I am, however, giving this two stars. If you're an adult, I'd recommend you move on (though maybe I'm just overly critical; this book does seem to be popular). If you're planning to get it for a kid, though – like middle school or early high school – I can see why a younger reader would find plenty to like.
May 3, 2012
I loved this story and I have to admit I was surprised to find it was an Indie author since it reads so professionally, as if the author had years of experience and others with years of experience to advise him.
I loved the whole idea of the story that different mages exist in the world but live way back in history fighting to keep the timeline safe. There are a few twists in there too and in fact one of the characters is labelled a baddy (or malignant, I should say) but having read the book now I am not too sure…
Can’t wait for the next in the series to find out what happens next!
I loved the whole idea of the story that different mages exist in the world but live way back in history fighting to keep the timeline safe. There are a few twists in there too and in fact one of the characters is labelled a baddy (or malignant, I should say) but having read the book now I am not too sure…
Can’t wait for the next in the series to find out what happens next!
March 16, 2018
I found the melding of time travel and magic to be immediately appealing, and the different types of magic are delineated in a way that feels familiar, but unique at the same time. Without giving too many details (in order to avoid spoilers), it also features what is basically a magical version of "The Singularity" (if you don't know what that is, I suggest looking it up -- but only after reading the book).
Like a lot of "chosen one" stories, it does suffer a little from having a protagonist who seems a bit TOO good sometimes, but the author does a great job of humanising him and throwing him into challenging situations that require him to think his way out (rather than just using his "special gifts"), so it didn't really detract from the story at all.
The bottom line though is that it's entertaining and engaging. Every time I finished a chapter, I wanted to immediately read the next one (whether real life allowed me to actually do so or not). What else could you ask for from a book?
Like a lot of "chosen one" stories, it does suffer a little from having a protagonist who seems a bit TOO good sometimes, but the author does a great job of humanising him and throwing him into challenging situations that require him to think his way out (rather than just using his "special gifts"), so it didn't really detract from the story at all.
The bottom line though is that it's entertaining and engaging. Every time I finished a chapter, I wanted to immediately read the next one (whether real life allowed me to actually do so or not). What else could you ask for from a book?
September 3, 2018
The plot of this book should be very familiar to anyone who has read any time-travel science fiction. The only way in which this book differs is that it is magic that permits time travel...not some form of technology.
We have "bad guy" time travelers who want to rule the world in all times; we have "good guy" time travelers who want to protect the timelines, and we have the oft used mysterious time blockage or dark area sometime in the future beyond which no one can time travel that frames the story in predictable ways.
Despite being familiar, the story is fairly well told and the characters adequately presented. The pace of the book is also OK.
My major problem with the book is that the main character is 15 years old...yet he thinks internally and acts externally like a person at least 21 years old...if not older. It just doesn't work for me and became somewhat of a distraction.
I'm on the fence about buying a sequel. If I get convinced that the sequel will introduce something new or has some unexpected content I probably would. If not, I won't.
We have "bad guy" time travelers who want to rule the world in all times; we have "good guy" time travelers who want to protect the timelines, and we have the oft used mysterious time blockage or dark area sometime in the future beyond which no one can time travel that frames the story in predictable ways.
Despite being familiar, the story is fairly well told and the characters adequately presented. The pace of the book is also OK.
My major problem with the book is that the main character is 15 years old...yet he thinks internally and acts externally like a person at least 21 years old...if not older. It just doesn't work for me and became somewhat of a distraction.
I'm on the fence about buying a sequel. If I get convinced that the sequel will introduce something new or has some unexpected content I probably would. If not, I won't.
October 24, 2017
I really enjoyed this book. The author blended history with a good story telling ability so that you learned about history without pain. That to me was special since I tend to get bored by reading straight history. The characters are well developed and a good mix of races, religions, ages and genders. What I really enjoyed was the examination of good (Grace) and evil (Malignancy) and how Gabriel can handle both. He is in a unique position because both sides want to use him and he must figure it out for himself. What is a bit unreal, of course it is a fantasy story written for YA, was that Gabriel is only 13 and has the reasoning of an adult. Most 13-year olds are not that mature and it would have been more believable if it took him longer to reach that level of reasoning. But it really did not take away from the story, it is just a side note. I loved the characters even one of the Malignancy Mages – not telling you who or why, you have to read for yourself.
July 20, 2019
Genre: young adult, urban-fantasy, time travel
Gabriel has been having predictive dreams his whole life. When he is 13 he predicts his death. Death is only the beginning. He learns that he is a time mage, and begins training with a team of other mages to protect the timeline from those that would seel to alter it to their own ends. Along the way he encounters powerful mages who can use all 6 types of magic, True Mages, both on the side of light, and darkness.
This is a fairly standard coming of age/wizards novel. What is unique about it is the carefully thought out time magic. I found it very interesting how the different kinds of magic worked. I also appreciated that not all of the Malignancy Mages were pure evil, some had fairly understandable motives. However, there is no way that Gabriel is 13. He does not behave/think/speak like any 13 year old I know. I would maybe buy 15.
Gabriel has been having predictive dreams his whole life. When he is 13 he predicts his death. Death is only the beginning. He learns that he is a time mage, and begins training with a team of other mages to protect the timeline from those that would seel to alter it to their own ends. Along the way he encounters powerful mages who can use all 6 types of magic, True Mages, both on the side of light, and darkness.
This is a fairly standard coming of age/wizards novel. What is unique about it is the carefully thought out time magic. I found it very interesting how the different kinds of magic worked. I also appreciated that not all of the Malignancy Mages were pure evil, some had fairly understandable motives. However, there is no way that Gabriel is 13. He does not behave/think/speak like any 13 year old I know. I would maybe buy 15.
September 2, 2019
The Wizard of Time
Gabriel Salvador had dreams that came true and he knew he was going to drown. After drowning he woke up in a time of war and magic. It was grace mages and malignancy mages. Gabriel learned magic and did well. There were six mages on both sides that controlled energy, wind, healing, stone, soul, and time. Gabriel learned so fast that he was called the seventh true mage.
Gabriel Salvador had dreams that came true and he knew he was going to drown. After drowning he woke up in a time of war and magic. It was grace mages and malignancy mages. Gabriel learned magic and did well. There were six mages on both sides that controlled energy, wind, healing, stone, soul, and time. Gabriel learned so fast that he was called the seventh true mage.
December 30, 2017
This was a fun, quick read. Entertaining and interesting page turning but nothing very deep or developmental. Characters are minimally developed in this first book of the Trilogy but may improve going forward. Fun enough to look forward to reading the next books though.
December 26, 2025
Enjoyed the storyline but I felt the main character was too mature for a 13-14 year old. I found it hard to believe his age but I kept thinking of him a 16-17 years old at least. I still like the book.
November 27, 2020
If you want to take a vacation in time ...READ THIS
May 26, 2020
I liken this to Harry Potter - possibly intended as a young adult read, but is compelling enough for me that I liked it. Had to get to the end to see how things worked out - at least for this book. Not well written or riveting as Harry Potter, but an excellent read.
July 4, 2015
This review can also be found here.
Title: The Wizard of Time
Author: G.L. Breedon
Dates Read: June 3-5, 2015
Format: Ebook (Kindle)
Pages: 296
Rating: 3.5/5
Synopsis: Gabriel Salvador is thirteen, and he has been having dreams about the future. Gabriel's dreams always come true. Especially the dream he had where he will drown, it is only a matter of time before that dream becomes reality. At the moment of his death, he is plucked from his timeline and becomes an apprentice time mage and part of an elite team of mages who are fighting the War of Time and Magic, and travel through history to do so. Throughout the story Gabriel goes to Victorian London, Aztec temples, Samos, Scotland, and battlefields of Alexander the Great, among other places as Gabriel learns about his abilities as a time mage, and joins the battle to protect the timeline.
Review:
I originally picked this up as as freebie on Amazon, and like most of the books on my TBR pile it took a bit for me to finally get to it. However, I was surprisingly pleased with what I'd found in just under 300 pages. I have always enjoyed reading fantasy/sci-fi/etc simply for the escapism that is provided by the stories spun by talented writers. I read to indulge my imagination and escape my own reality.
I wasn't entirely sure what to expect when I started this story, would I find the amount of realism that is required in fantasy stories? Could I picture myself in Gabriel's world, experiencing what Gabriel is experiencing? Can I relate to this story? Ultimately the tale that was spun was one of pure brilliance.
I easily fell in love with the characters. The fact that Breeden crossed genres only made this tale all the more interesting. The story is intelligently written and this is shown in the seamless way that his story crosses genres and age groups. I was not expecting the captivating, adventurous, vibrant, unpredictable and emotive tale that I was presented when I continued to delve into this story. The historical backdrop, the scientific explanations - everything was plausible, believable and in truth one of the best fantasies I've read in a while.
It's stories like this that once again remind me why I read young adult stories. However, even if you do not enjoy reading young adult, but still enjoy a good fantasy story then I would gladly recommend this story to you. You will definitely enjoy the trip you take with Gabriel and the other mages.
Title: The Wizard of Time
Author: G.L. Breedon
Dates Read: June 3-5, 2015
Format: Ebook (Kindle)
Pages: 296
Rating: 3.5/5
Synopsis: Gabriel Salvador is thirteen, and he has been having dreams about the future. Gabriel's dreams always come true. Especially the dream he had where he will drown, it is only a matter of time before that dream becomes reality. At the moment of his death, he is plucked from his timeline and becomes an apprentice time mage and part of an elite team of mages who are fighting the War of Time and Magic, and travel through history to do so. Throughout the story Gabriel goes to Victorian London, Aztec temples, Samos, Scotland, and battlefields of Alexander the Great, among other places as Gabriel learns about his abilities as a time mage, and joins the battle to protect the timeline.
Review:
I originally picked this up as as freebie on Amazon, and like most of the books on my TBR pile it took a bit for me to finally get to it. However, I was surprisingly pleased with what I'd found in just under 300 pages. I have always enjoyed reading fantasy/sci-fi/etc simply for the escapism that is provided by the stories spun by talented writers. I read to indulge my imagination and escape my own reality.
I wasn't entirely sure what to expect when I started this story, would I find the amount of realism that is required in fantasy stories? Could I picture myself in Gabriel's world, experiencing what Gabriel is experiencing? Can I relate to this story? Ultimately the tale that was spun was one of pure brilliance.
I easily fell in love with the characters. The fact that Breeden crossed genres only made this tale all the more interesting. The story is intelligently written and this is shown in the seamless way that his story crosses genres and age groups. I was not expecting the captivating, adventurous, vibrant, unpredictable and emotive tale that I was presented when I continued to delve into this story. The historical backdrop, the scientific explanations - everything was plausible, believable and in truth one of the best fantasies I've read in a while.
It's stories like this that once again remind me why I read young adult stories. However, even if you do not enjoy reading young adult, but still enjoy a good fantasy story then I would gladly recommend this story to you. You will definitely enjoy the trip you take with Gabriel and the other mages.
September 22, 2011
Gabriel lives a pretty normal life, if you don’t count his future visions of death. In fact, he has seen his death and knows nothing can change it. That is until the day he dies he is plucked from his timeline by Grace Mages! Suddenly he finds himself among people have incredible magic that fight to defend the Primary Time Continuum from Malignancy Mages who want to alter it.
Gabriel has been saved because he is a Time Mage. He will be taught and trained of the workings of magic by a team of six mages (one for each magic branch). Though Gabriel is very grateful to be alive, he is also extremely sad because he has to leave everything of his old life behind. Luckily he turns out to be unbelievably proficient at Time Magic, and quickly gains the trust and respect of his team. Or maybe not so lucky when they discover he is a True Mage, and not just any True Mage, but the Seventh True Mage. Able to use all six forms of magic plus both positive and negative imprinted items. The one who prophesy also calls Breaker of Time and Destroyer of Worlds. Gabriel fears his powers; he fears that by using the negative forces he might change as well. Both Grace and Malignant sides will try to use him for their greater cause, which way will Gabriel turn? Will he be strong enough to choose his own path? What if Darkness is needed in the world for there to be Light?
I found this story to be an incredible mix of fantasy and history. It’s a bit slow going with all the explanations and descriptions of historic places, but they’re all necessary since it’s a time travel story. Me being a history fan, found the description to be quite interesting and fun, however I don’t think most young readers would appreciate all those extra thousand words and the philosophical debates. I really liked the character of Gabriel, he was really smart and acted older than his years. He made some very tough decisions, even breaking the rules to save one of his team mates. Surprisingly I also liked Vicaquirao, one of the villains. He pretty much swayed me to his ‘evil’ philosophy, while still making me cheer on for the good guys. Overall it was an awesome adventure filled with an incredible magic system, wicked cool magic fights, and a wonderful three dimensional cast of heroes and villains.
*I received this book from the author for my honest review*
Gabriel has been saved because he is a Time Mage. He will be taught and trained of the workings of magic by a team of six mages (one for each magic branch). Though Gabriel is very grateful to be alive, he is also extremely sad because he has to leave everything of his old life behind. Luckily he turns out to be unbelievably proficient at Time Magic, and quickly gains the trust and respect of his team. Or maybe not so lucky when they discover he is a True Mage, and not just any True Mage, but the Seventh True Mage. Able to use all six forms of magic plus both positive and negative imprinted items. The one who prophesy also calls Breaker of Time and Destroyer of Worlds. Gabriel fears his powers; he fears that by using the negative forces he might change as well. Both Grace and Malignant sides will try to use him for their greater cause, which way will Gabriel turn? Will he be strong enough to choose his own path? What if Darkness is needed in the world for there to be Light?
I found this story to be an incredible mix of fantasy and history. It’s a bit slow going with all the explanations and descriptions of historic places, but they’re all necessary since it’s a time travel story. Me being a history fan, found the description to be quite interesting and fun, however I don’t think most young readers would appreciate all those extra thousand words and the philosophical debates. I really liked the character of Gabriel, he was really smart and acted older than his years. He made some very tough decisions, even breaking the rules to save one of his team mates. Surprisingly I also liked Vicaquirao, one of the villains. He pretty much swayed me to his ‘evil’ philosophy, while still making me cheer on for the good guys. Overall it was an awesome adventure filled with an incredible magic system, wicked cool magic fights, and a wonderful three dimensional cast of heroes and villains.
*I received this book from the author for my honest review*
February 3, 2012
The Wizard of Time is an excellent and fascinating young adult fantasy, and is an especially great read for anyone with an enquiring mind or anyone who wants something very different. G.L. Breedon has created a unique world of time travel and alternate universes using a combination of science, history and philosophy. I urge you all to support this Indie author. I love it when I find one I can rave about.
I loved the central character, thirteen year old Gabe, because he thought about things, asked questions and worked things out for himself. He also grieved for his lost family, acted without hesitation when he needed to and questioned peoples’ motivations, which was extremely smart in the circumstances. Add to that humility and human vulnerability and you have a rich and inspiring character. The supporting characters were also very alive, as were their relationships with each other.
I especially liked how different the bad guys were to each other and how three dimensional they were. No cardboard cut outs here. Even though they were all on the same side, each one had their own ideas, desires and philosophy, some crude and obvious, others subtle and thought provoking.
The story moves along with never a dull moment and with unpredictable twists and turns. The detailed snippets of history that the author has chosen to incorporate give a richness and poignancy to the book, and the concept of a primary continuum of time with branches creating alternate realities has been extremely well thought out. I can’t find any flaws in this book.
The story has no romance, just the potential for some in further stories, and is suitable for all ages from about 8 years up. But don’t think of it as a young book, because the vision of time and the philosophical questions the story raises are very sophisticated. Adults will enjoy the concepts and younger children will enjoy the story, which is never dull. I give it 5 stars and recommend it for all fans of young adult fantasy. If you like Harry Potter, you should love this.
I loved the central character, thirteen year old Gabe, because he thought about things, asked questions and worked things out for himself. He also grieved for his lost family, acted without hesitation when he needed to and questioned peoples’ motivations, which was extremely smart in the circumstances. Add to that humility and human vulnerability and you have a rich and inspiring character. The supporting characters were also very alive, as were their relationships with each other.
I especially liked how different the bad guys were to each other and how three dimensional they were. No cardboard cut outs here. Even though they were all on the same side, each one had their own ideas, desires and philosophy, some crude and obvious, others subtle and thought provoking.
The story moves along with never a dull moment and with unpredictable twists and turns. The detailed snippets of history that the author has chosen to incorporate give a richness and poignancy to the book, and the concept of a primary continuum of time with branches creating alternate realities has been extremely well thought out. I can’t find any flaws in this book.
The story has no romance, just the potential for some in further stories, and is suitable for all ages from about 8 years up. But don’t think of it as a young book, because the vision of time and the philosophical questions the story raises are very sophisticated. Adults will enjoy the concepts and younger children will enjoy the story, which is never dull. I give it 5 stars and recommend it for all fans of young adult fantasy. If you like Harry Potter, you should love this.
September 4, 2012
Thirteen-year old Gabriel Salvador knew if he had a dream where something happened to him, that thing would happen in real life. One night, Gabriel dreamed he was going to drown. He then knew he would die soon. Gabriel wakes up to find himself in a strange room and is told that his family and friends think he is dead because he drowned. He was saved from death by a Time Mage and the Mages made a copy of him to replace him in his other life, so he can’t go back no matter what. Mages are magicians or wizards that can use one of six different magics (fire, wind, heart-tree, time, earth and soul). Gabriel soon finds out he is also a Mage and he can control and travel though time. Gabriel learns that there are “Malignancy Mages” that use their magic for evil and they want to kidnap Gabriel and use his powers. Gabriel eventually learns that he is The Seventh True Mage, a person who can use all six magics. But Gabriel gets captured by an evil Mage and it looks like he can’t escape.
I really liked this story. I thought the Mages were cool and I liked learning about the different Mages. The action and the magic fights in the book were described really well and the time traveling and history (Gabriel traveled to different periods of time) were some of the really great parts of the book. I liked the story, but it isn’t for a kid my age. Although Mr. Breedon wrote the action and battle parts really well, the book didn’t have the humor mixed in to it like a lot of the action/fantasy books I read for kids my age. There was also a bunch of bad language that just didn’t need to be in there. I think the book would be good for older kids and adults who like fantasy and time travel. Gabriel was an awesome main character. He is the kind of kid-hero I do like to read about. I would like to see him in a middle-grade book!
I really liked this story. I thought the Mages were cool and I liked learning about the different Mages. The action and the magic fights in the book were described really well and the time traveling and history (Gabriel traveled to different periods of time) were some of the really great parts of the book. I liked the story, but it isn’t for a kid my age. Although Mr. Breedon wrote the action and battle parts really well, the book didn’t have the humor mixed in to it like a lot of the action/fantasy books I read for kids my age. There was also a bunch of bad language that just didn’t need to be in there. I think the book would be good for older kids and adults who like fantasy and time travel. Gabriel was an awesome main character. He is the kind of kid-hero I do like to read about. I would like to see him in a middle-grade book!
October 9, 2012
I'm a sucker for time travel stuff. The author had an original story that was tightly woven that did keep me surprised.
I appreciated the fact that he included some great segments of world history that doesn't get the attention it should in American schools. I don't think the young adults for the most part would appreciate the interrupted plot for that. It did interfere with the plot, even to me. But I'm a history guy, and I for one did enjoy that aspect.
What was more off putting was the preaching of New Age philosophy, or maybe not New Age but Recycled Hinduism. I know it's a fantasy book with magic as the main plot device. But there was a whole bunch of Hokey Pokey in there that made me feel like the author was pushing something on me.
Finally, I thought Heart-tree magic was the dumbest name for a magic power I've heard. It hearkened back to that old Captain Planet cartoon where the kids had the power of fire and wind and whatnot. But then one poor kid with the power of "heart."
"Oh, you got the sucky power. That should have gone to a girl."
"I know, but the feminist movement, you know..."
Actually Heart Tree magic was a good power to have in this book. But such a name belonged in a Rainbow Bright or Carebear episode. Not a young adult novel. I was surprised the author gave it such girly name.
The Chinese woman with the potty mouth. Killing her off was a great idea and it was a welcome relief. But the unnecessary language came back...
So as is, I liked the book ok. Mostly likeable characters, particularly the independent villain who's name I forget now. But some things were just hard to get past.
I appreciated the fact that he included some great segments of world history that doesn't get the attention it should in American schools. I don't think the young adults for the most part would appreciate the interrupted plot for that. It did interfere with the plot, even to me. But I'm a history guy, and I for one did enjoy that aspect.
What was more off putting was the preaching of New Age philosophy, or maybe not New Age but Recycled Hinduism. I know it's a fantasy book with magic as the main plot device. But there was a whole bunch of Hokey Pokey in there that made me feel like the author was pushing something on me.
Finally, I thought Heart-tree magic was the dumbest name for a magic power I've heard. It hearkened back to that old Captain Planet cartoon where the kids had the power of fire and wind and whatnot. But then one poor kid with the power of "heart."
"Oh, you got the sucky power. That should have gone to a girl."
"I know, but the feminist movement, you know..."
Actually Heart Tree magic was a good power to have in this book. But such a name belonged in a Rainbow Bright or Carebear episode. Not a young adult novel. I was surprised the author gave it such girly name.
The Chinese woman with the potty mouth. Killing her off was a great idea and it was a welcome relief. But the unnecessary language came back...
So as is, I liked the book ok. Mostly likeable characters, particularly the independent villain who's name I forget now. But some things were just hard to get past.
October 2, 2011
G.L. Breedon’s The Wizard of Time swirls magical realism throughout time and space.
The day Gabriel Salvador dies is the day he finds his place within the world. Gabriel is a Time Mage, but he’s more special than any of them realize. He and his group of mages travel throughout time to stop the evil wizards who want to destroy the Primary Continuum. When he realizes he’s a part of a prophecy, he must find balance between the light and dark, or lose himself for all time.
The Wizard of Time’s greatest strength is in its characters. Each one is a three-dimensional individual living their lives in many shades of gray. I love the camaraderie between friends. Six magics are used that are familiar but Breedon takes them to a higher level. Although the beginning starts out a bit cliché, Breedon sucked me into Gabriel’s world. The plot is sometimes a bit predictable but enjoyable. I love the history and cultures interspersed throughout. The Malignancy Mages are fantastically complicated villains. This novel explores the philosophical musings of light and dark, good and evil. The time travel scenes are awesome and well-thought out.
The Wizard of Time by G.L. Breedon is a wonderful fantasy novel geared towards young adults but a great read for all. I can’t wait to read book two.
The day Gabriel Salvador dies is the day he finds his place within the world. Gabriel is a Time Mage, but he’s more special than any of them realize. He and his group of mages travel throughout time to stop the evil wizards who want to destroy the Primary Continuum. When he realizes he’s a part of a prophecy, he must find balance between the light and dark, or lose himself for all time.
The Wizard of Time’s greatest strength is in its characters. Each one is a three-dimensional individual living their lives in many shades of gray. I love the camaraderie between friends. Six magics are used that are familiar but Breedon takes them to a higher level. Although the beginning starts out a bit cliché, Breedon sucked me into Gabriel’s world. The plot is sometimes a bit predictable but enjoyable. I love the history and cultures interspersed throughout. The Malignancy Mages are fantastically complicated villains. This novel explores the philosophical musings of light and dark, good and evil. The time travel scenes are awesome and well-thought out.
The Wizard of Time by G.L. Breedon is a wonderful fantasy novel geared towards young adults but a great read for all. I can’t wait to read book two.
January 8, 2012
LOVED THIS BOOK and everything about it! I downloaded this for free and I'm so glad I did!
The main character is smart and of sound moral judgement - he's a young man thrust into a whole new world of magic and he deals with it amazingly well. Then again, he's not really given much of a choice. All the characters in the book are endearing, but you get to know more about some more than others. Hopefully this will be remedied in the following book(s). I really like the villains (wow - how many books can make you do that?!).
The author has created a complete theory about time travel and made it real with this book. He literally deals with every aspect - how it works, all manners of details with the artifacts used, etc. I also love the history/geography included in this book. I am absolutely blown away! This book includes history, geography, magic, a ton of character diversity in background and experience, a healthy dose of HUMOR (honestly I have never highlighted before this book), and much more. If you like any of the aforementioned subjects this is definitely a MUST read.
The main character is smart and of sound moral judgement - he's a young man thrust into a whole new world of magic and he deals with it amazingly well. Then again, he's not really given much of a choice. All the characters in the book are endearing, but you get to know more about some more than others. Hopefully this will be remedied in the following book(s). I really like the villains (wow - how many books can make you do that?!).
The author has created a complete theory about time travel and made it real with this book. He literally deals with every aspect - how it works, all manners of details with the artifacts used, etc. I also love the history/geography included in this book. I am absolutely blown away! This book includes history, geography, magic, a ton of character diversity in background and experience, a healthy dose of HUMOR (honestly I have never highlighted before this book), and much more. If you like any of the aforementioned subjects this is definitely a MUST read.
October 14, 2012
For me, this book is Fantasy at its best. You have time travel, magic, history, good versus evil or rather Grace versus Malignancy, kidnap, fighting, betrayal. Absolutely brilliant.
I won't give out any details of the book as that has already been done but what I will say is that after seeing that this book was for Young Adults, I actually wasn't expecting what I got. I wrongly assumed that as the hero of the book is 13 that it would be quite basic. How completely wrong was I? This book has layer upon layer of characters, story and history that delighted from the very start. The Wizard of Time is incredibly well thought out and planned and although words like Primary Continuum and bifurcation are thrown at you time and again, these are explained in a way that is not condescending but completely logical. Who knew that when you jumped through space, it was black, and when you jumped through time, it was white!?!?
Brilliant book, definitely one to keep.
I won't give out any details of the book as that has already been done but what I will say is that after seeing that this book was for Young Adults, I actually wasn't expecting what I got. I wrongly assumed that as the hero of the book is 13 that it would be quite basic. How completely wrong was I? This book has layer upon layer of characters, story and history that delighted from the very start. The Wizard of Time is incredibly well thought out and planned and although words like Primary Continuum and bifurcation are thrown at you time and again, these are explained in a way that is not condescending but completely logical. Who knew that when you jumped through space, it was black, and when you jumped through time, it was white!?!?
Brilliant book, definitely one to keep.
"What’s the point of saving the world if all the decent people are dead at the end?"
June 19, 2013
I really wanted to like this book more than I did. I love time travel but this one seemed to read more like the authors outline notes and not as a novel. There was so much detail about the "rules" and what will happen if and when, etc. that I got bored and not really caring if it was information I needed to remember.
The characters all seemed rather interesting, however, Gabriel seemed to be the least believable. He grasped the concept of time travel unnaturally fast and ALL THE DETAILS involving each and every possible problem that could arise and somehow knows EXACTLY how to get himself out of every situation...As much as I love time travel, this aspect of it bugs me every time: people never seem all that disturbed about being suddenly able to travel through time. They accept, adapt, and live happily ever after. Gabriel never rang true to me throughout the entire book...well, at least after the bus/drowning. I get that he was strong and needed to be smart, etc. but I found him to be WAY above his mere 13 years.
The characters all seemed rather interesting, however, Gabriel seemed to be the least believable. He grasped the concept of time travel unnaturally fast and ALL THE DETAILS involving each and every possible problem that could arise and somehow knows EXACTLY how to get himself out of every situation...As much as I love time travel, this aspect of it bugs me every time: people never seem all that disturbed about being suddenly able to travel through time. They accept, adapt, and live happily ever after. Gabriel never rang true to me throughout the entire book...well, at least after the bus/drowning. I get that he was strong and needed to be smart, etc. but I found him to be WAY above his mere 13 years.
July 15, 2014
This was a wonderful surprise. I just happened across The Wizard if Time by chance. From the first few pages of the novel I was hooked. I was a little concerned with how quickly Gabriel dies, and was sure that the book would lose my attention.
I was so wrong! Each and every character was well written,
Which left be very impressed with the diversity of the characters and the period in time which were covered. In one instant you're in America in the 1980's and the next you're brought back thousands of years.
I really want to be able to give Wizard of Time five stars because I feel that the plot is deserving of it. However there were a few grammatical errors here and they're keeping me from doing so. I hope there will be a second book... I will absolutely be reading it. Well done, Breedon!
I was so wrong! Each and every character was well written,
Which left be very impressed with the diversity of the characters and the period in time which were covered. In one instant you're in America in the 1980's and the next you're brought back thousands of years.
I really want to be able to give Wizard of Time five stars because I feel that the plot is deserving of it. However there were a few grammatical errors here and they're keeping me from doing so. I hope there will be a second book... I will absolutely be reading it. Well done, Breedon!
May 8, 2012
This book throws the reader into the deep end from the beginning. It is a faced paced fantasy adventure in which a young man discovers his gifts and his destiny and undergoes training as a Mage. Don't for a moment think 'Hogwarts' though. This is training on the job. Gabriel, the young Time Mage, find himself in a war between Good and Evil Mages and he realises that each side wants to 'use' him.
I kept finding myself thinking of Ursula Le Guin's work but this seemed to me to be faster paced and in some ways a more satisfying read. It also makes the reader think about good and evil and the fact that there can be grey areas. This is a must for fans of the Fantasy genre and it is obvious that there will be more to read about this charming young man, Gabriel. I'll be there when there is!
I kept finding myself thinking of Ursula Le Guin's work but this seemed to me to be faster paced and in some ways a more satisfying read. It also makes the reader think about good and evil and the fact that there can be grey areas. This is a must for fans of the Fantasy genre and it is obvious that there will be more to read about this charming young man, Gabriel. I'll be there when there is!
July 19, 2012
Ever since Gabriel can remember he has had dreams that eventually come true, not matter what he does to change the outcome. After dying in a school bus accident, Gabriel "awakens" to learn that he has been plucked from his earth life at the time of his death to become a Time Mage, someone who can travel through time.
While training as an apprentice time mage, Gabriel and his team will travel to the Aztec Empire, time of the Romans, Greeks, and ancient Chinese. Most importantly, is Gabriel a fulfillment of prophecy? And will he be on the side of good or evil in a war between the Grace and Malevolent Wizards.
Wizard of Time is magical, suspenseful, historical and a thrilling read from cover to cover. I can't wait for the sequel to come out!
See more of my reviews at hernosestuckinsomebook.blogspot.com
While training as an apprentice time mage, Gabriel and his team will travel to the Aztec Empire, time of the Romans, Greeks, and ancient Chinese. Most importantly, is Gabriel a fulfillment of prophecy? And will he be on the side of good or evil in a war between the Grace and Malevolent Wizards.
Wizard of Time is magical, suspenseful, historical and a thrilling read from cover to cover. I can't wait for the sequel to come out!
See more of my reviews at hernosestuckinsomebook.blogspot.com
June 9, 2012
The Wizard of Time was a fantastic read. It was filled with suspense that kept you on the edge of your seat. The historical aspect of the novel wasn’t boring and was quite interesting learning about the different places that Gabriel traveled through time. I liked learning about the other mages and their background as well as their talents. I think if I had to pick a favorite character from the group I would pick Teresa she made me laughed and kind of reminded me of myself. I’m still trying to decide between which of the Malignancy Mages on who is truly evil and who isn’t. Some I have decided but others I haven’t, I shall have to see what book 2 brings to the table.
March 31, 2012
A really good book. I was a little worried with the first few chapters as I couldn't get my head around some of the technical time travelling information but once you get into the flow it all becomes clear and easy to follow.
It is such a good plot and you easily get attached to the characters. There are lots of twists and turns that keep you wanting more.
I finished this books seriously wanting the next one. Hope it is released soon- just wish I was a time mage and could travel to get the next one. :)
It is such a good plot and you easily get attached to the characters. There are lots of twists and turns that keep you wanting more.
I finished this books seriously wanting the next one. Hope it is released soon- just wish I was a time mage and could travel to get the next one. :)
January 28, 2013
A fun book to read. The book is aimed at a slightly younger audience I believe, however it still provided hours of time warping entertainment. There is a very well thought out magic design for the book which lends to it's charm. The building and destruction of worlds takes this book into what could easily be called epic battles. There is math, history, geography and science presented in small portions throughout the book that add to the story line without being a distraction. I recommend this book to anyone wanting to enjoy a little time with a Mage.
September 10, 2013
Good story. The author had great ideas and they meshed well with each other, but at the same time I felt that there were a few inconsistencies and the typos/editing mistakes were often. However, if you like time travel, battles, and fantasy, this book is probably for you. And since it is written from the perspective of a young boy there are no romantic entanglements yet, so this wouldn't be too taboo for your kids. The process the boy goes through to overcome the darkness and the description of some of the evil acts the "bad guys" do might be a little scary for some kids, though.
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