For my birthday this year, I asked my family members to give me a copy of their favorite books to read. This is my little sister’s favorite book, and though I knew it would center around God eventually and I am not a religious person, I did my best to begin reading it with an open mind.
This is one of the worst books I think I’ve ever read. Set aside the fact that I’m not religious - the writing was just lazy! Lori Wick needs to do a document search and find all her “-ly” words - “he said anxiously; she said nervously; he muttered quietly.” This is telling, not showing; good books are supposed to describe the characters and their emotions to draw us in. Not tell us “he was anxious. She was nervous.”
Combine this with the fact that the story just...never took off. It jumps everywhere and I couldn’t have cared less about the characters as I approached the halfway point of the book. They were all one dimensional and superficial. I don’t like the trope of “the girl who has it all,” who is so stunning people just can’t help themselves around her; who is good at literally everything she tries once; who doesn’t have to lift a finger; who doesn’t have to try. Everything in this girl’s life came easily to her. Even without a college degree, minimal experience, and no inside person giving her a recommendation, she somehow got a high paying job as an executive assistant-type role (or something along those lines). Because that’s...realistic.
Yet somehow, she was always in tears. Girl, what is there to be in tears about??? She was crying or close to it on every other page!
I hated Arcie. I truly did. This character was dramatic to the nth degree. She decided to leave her grandfather’s because of her cousin...what, exactly, did her cousin do that was oh-so-terrible enough to make her leave home and not reach out to her family for years? From what we’re told in the book...not much that’s outside the realm of typical teenage behavior. In addition, Arcie was dramatic in her romantic relationships, acting like she was so jaded and had been hurt badly many times. Yet...we’re shown what, three men she dated over a 10(ish) year span of time? None of whom was really all that bad? One of them wanted to have sex with her after four months of dating but wasn’t ready to talk about marriage - gasp!! Stop the presses! Yep. Sounds legit; these guys were monsters and her behavior toward men is totally justified.
Bouncing back to the religion aspect and getting on my soapbox - this book is the epitome of why I stopped going to church and have never looked back. I stopped reading after the pastor told the main characters their dead loved ones were “lost to them” if they hadn’t accepted Jesus and the cross before they died, and, after the pastor told the love interest to NEVER marry a nonbeliever, because that goes against what is taught in the Bible. Things like this are why people hate religions and think they’re cults! I get that probably makes life easier, when getting married, if your belief systems are about the same. But I know many couples who are in strong, loving relationships, where one person goes to church every Sunday and the other couldn’t care less. Don’t marry a nonbeliever? So...don’t follow your heart? Don’t take your chance at happiness? If everything is part of some big “plan of God,” and you fall in love with a nonbeliever, isn’t that also in “God’s plan?” Do church going people truly believe, given the choice, their God would rather have them be heartbroken and miserable and suffering, versus in love and with their person and figuring out a way to make it work? And what kind of a “God” would decide your loved ones who have passed away are rotting in hell, or stuck in limbo forever, if they died without believing in this supposed almighty being? Doesn’t sound very loving to me.
Rant, over. I stopped reading a little over halfway through the book, and I doubt I’ll finish it. I can’t handle the religious drivel about how awful life used to be, and then how perfect and peachy it magically becomes after the characters decide to believe in God. Like there was no way you could have possibly been happy in your life before “finding Jesus.” Please. I’d be very surprised if the ending was anything other than the main character changing everything about herself and her beliefs in order to be “acceptable” in God’s eyes to marry the love interest. Snoooooooooze.