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I received an ARC copy of Alaina Erdell’s debut novel “Fire, Water, and Rock’’ from BSB (via NetGalley) in exchange for an honest review.
So, here it is !!!
My rating : 3⭐️
The story sets in Grant County, Washington, in the amazing geographical landmark known as “Sun Lakes-Dry Falls State Park” … Damn, the landscape description was so good I ended up online looking at pictures because I wanted to see the place for myself. It’s now definitely on my bucket list !!! And I learned a lot of things about geology. I loved it, it was very interesting.
Now for the less cool parts: I’ll do my best not to be too harsh for what comes next … (since my goal is not to offend anyone, especially not a newbie author showing a real potential)
What promised to be a great read sadly ended up to be just an OK read for me. Don’t get me wrong, I liked a lot of little things in the book but aside the gorgeous settings & the MCs’ common interest in the state park (Jessica Sterling is a budding geologist here to work on her thesis & Clare DeVere’s a park ranger) but there was nothing mind-blowing in the story. What I mean is that everything was way too predictable (from the start and on all accounts you knew it was coming, there was no surprise anywhere): the “mess” with the supposed best friend, the bit of angst resulting from both MCs’ complacency regarding their personal interactions with some of the people in their lives, as well as the unfamous 80% black moment (even if in this case, it didn’t bothered me too much since from the start we knew Jessica was there for a limited time only).
I found the MCs totally immature and very hard to like. I’m definitely not keen of Jessica being (technically) a cheater … I can’t stand cheaters. I have a lot of empathy for wounded people (physically or mentally) but for cheaters, duh !!! I have none !! And this aspect of Jessica’s life made me not liking her & wishing Clare stayed away from her because she deserved much better… I felt for Clare, well, at least at first, but after a while her procrastination pissed me off even more despite it being about a friendship & that’s for purely selfish reasons she kept Lyn’s around despite knowing her bestie’s feelings for her …
If some people can go with cheaters & lazy characters without blinking an eye when human relationship are involved, they’ll probably love the book but no excuse is good enough where I’m concerned because there’s no excuse to let an unrequited love go on and on because that's cruel. And there's just NO excuse at all for cheating. If you’re not in love with your partner, break it with them, don’t keep the relationship going (even without being physically together) just because you are afraid of this or that. For those reasons, in the end, I couldn’t care any less about any of the MCs.
From my POV, choosing another secret issue than her useless BF for Jessica and having Clare fighting for real against Lyn’s unrequited love would have allowed to better flesh out the story, especially by adding more actions (so more excitement) from Clare’s professional side. All this would have transformed the book in a more solid novel, because it would have made it way more than just another average romance among so many… And in addition, I could have done without the few typos found here and there. (e.g.: if “people’s party de jour” is, indeed, based on the French language, it should be “du jour”)
OK … So … Despite my mixed feelings about “Fire, Water, and Rock”, it's the author’s debut novel, so, there’s plenty of room for improvement ... I really think Alaina Erdell is full of potential and it makes her one of the new authors I’ll keep my eyes on for future releases & I really hope I’ll click way more with her next novels …
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